Righteous Riter

I want to thank all the people who followed "My House". Thank you for your time. Thank you for your reviews. Thank you for your honest and open feedback. I've come to find that reviewers are a luxury to have because every time I feel/felt uneasy about a line or a thought, someone helped me. That let me know that I was on point but couldn't find the right words until someone reviewed and shared their suggestions and gave me the right words. No one is perfect but FanStory reviewers are helping me get better. Much love from the Riter and to God be the glory.

Selina Stambi: It was a fabulous series, RR - Tyler Perry in verse! So well done. Hallelujah - amen! :)

April 1, 2014 at 6:03PM

tbacha58: Dearest RR, you are an amazing writer, I definitely enjoyed reading your sad childhood story, but God loved you, for you to meet the right loving person, to help you forget at least a little, what you have gone through in your childhood. I am so happy, you buried your past by loving God who send His son to show us the way how to forgive, and forget past events that were extremely painful. Yes, our friends reviewer are amazing to, they help out of friendship and respect. I think like you, we are so lucky to have each other, in the good times, and in the bad times. Trust your friends at Fan Story, they will never hurt you, but the opposite, they will always he here for you. Bless you my friend, and all your family. Much love from Terry xoxoxo

April 4, 2014 at 2:37AM

WritingsByG: Just read your good review of Girly, came by to see who you are. WOW! What a man of strength. Well done taking and using what you've been blessed with to do good. I use to live in Saginaw ran the Riverfront Dental Center on Cabaret Trail South. Many good times in Saginaw. Thank you again for your review. I look forward to reading your stories. G

April 29, 2014 at 11:58AM

ArtGal: ArtGal: I don't know if I'm doing this correctly, since I just returned after more than 3 years. I want to thank you here for reading 'Blessings to Skylar', and then writing 'Help Me God' in your own words. It's so very beautiful and I can't thank you enough. The hospital feels there's a big possibility that she may be bi-polar like her dad. If so, they will have to experiment with meds to find those that may work the best. Her mood swings are more than changing hormones, but starting a new school with a lot of bullies doesn't help either. She just wants to stay home with her mom and not go back to school. But she has to return so that she doesn't have to repeat the same grade. My daughter, her mom, is just the best and has prepared her and her twin brother to know the Lord more through Bible study and prayer at home. When we find out her problem, I'll definitely let you know. God bless, and lots of love to you and your family. My husband also thanks you for such a lovely poem. . .Sharon

May 6, 2014 at 7:33PM

ArtGal: Riter, we finally have the proper diagnosis for Skylar and it's called School Refusal! You can read about this on Wikipedia, and she has all the symptoms of this, especially going from Elememtary to Middle school, and having many bullies there. The hospital is teaching her breathing excercises and coping skills, but she still doesn't want to go back to that school. She'll stay in the hospital a bit longer but then she has no choice but to go back. We'll have to face that when it happens, and we're praying that she'll be able to cope with it much better. Just wanted to let you know. I'm so glad that my poem inspired you to write for Skylar, and God be with you. Love. . .Sharon

May 8, 2014 at 6:46PM

twinklepoems: I just happened upon this tonight. Wondering how the return to school was. I'm a school psychologist but I was also a kid with school refusal after riots closed my high school. I missed a hundred days of school (but still passed). Now days kids have more options in terms of non-traditional schools.

November 29, 2014 at 5:01AM

I want to take this time to thank God for growth. There was a time when I would get offended when reviewers offered suggestions or corrections but now I understand it's all done to make me a better writer. I still have a lot of work to do because habits don't break over night. There are awesome people on this site with knowledge of writing. I thank all of you for your help and your honest opinions and feedback. Much love from the Riter. To God be the glory.

MM lives on :) : right on brother, keep on following your dream...throw in a complex thought now and then and don't worry about strict format...follow emotional flow.

March 26, 2014 at 7:07PM

ravenblack: You have always taken my suggestions into consideration and rewarded me w/some reviewing votes and I thank you for that.

March 26, 2014 at 8:57PM

Righteous Riter: Thank you Chris. I really appreciate it

March 27, 2014 at 4:06AM

Righteous Riter: ravenblack, your reviews hold a reward as well. They humble me as well as make me a better writer. God bless.

March 27, 2014 at 4:09AM

Selina Stambi: I appreciate the votes you sent my way, RR. Bless you.

April 1, 2014 at 6:04PM

I would like to take this time to thank all the reviewers who help me with my work. Helping me with my tenses present and past, the helpful suggestions and support. I appreciate you all. To God be the glory. Much love from the Riter.

rama devi: That's nice, RR. :-))

March 3, 2014 at 2:48PM

resaann: Cute wife and congrats. I'm kind of new on how all this works but I will challenge it when I have more time.

March 7, 2014 at 8:25PM

Lovinia: Thanks RR .... it's always nice to feel appreciated. Thank you for sharing so much of yourself with us. :))) xoxo Lovinia PS Love the wedding pic. You make a very cute couple. <3

March 12, 2014 at 7:06AM

I would like to thank and wish every writer on this site a Happy New Year. I'd like to thank all the people who followed and supported my work as well as those who didn't. There is much room for improvement for me. In 2014 my wish is that each writer can bless and encourage others with jewels of wisdom and love. I will continue to tell my story and I will forever give God the glory. Much love from the Riter.

kiwijenny: Thank you and the same to you......Riter. God bless...jenny

January 4, 2014 at 10:27AM

Lulube: Congrats to your #4 ranked poet. You worried before that all was for naught, well this ranking should beat down all those negative thoughts now. Way to go. lulube oops wrong section. Oh well

January 7, 2014 at 12:57PM

JM daSilva: Congratulation on the trophy! You deserve it!

January 10, 2014 at 8:59AM

MzNiki: What a beautiful picture you display for your profile!! What an outstanding looking couple. Groovy (-_-)

January 19, 2014 at 4:48AM

seaglass: You have a beautiful testimony. Seaglass

January 24, 2014 at 11:52PM

country ranch writer: so so glad things are going so good for you

January 29, 2014 at 11:35PM

resaann: I'm new to the game but I'm glad to see that GOD is still opening the minds and eyes of people, most just give up I don't know you but yet I'm still proud. GOD BLESS YOU and may life supply your every need.

February 5, 2014 at 11:44PM

darla1977: LoVe YoUr WoRk!!! You are truely gifted! God bless you & yours!

February 18, 2014 at 8:59PM

Deejharrington: Wow, thats quite a life's journey in only forty some years! Its true, if we just listen, we'll find our correct path. deb

February 23, 2014 at 8:14AM

nreve:

March 8, 2014 at 3:38PM

Congratulations the 2013 #4 Ranked Poet!

Titanx9: Congratulations, Righteous Riter for a well-deserved reward. Your abiding faith is a source of comfort for many. I hope 2014 brings even greater recognition. Dossie

January 1, 2014 at 3:25PM

Righteous Riter: Thank you so much and as always the glory is God's. Have a blessed new year.

January 1, 2014 at 4:20PM

boxergirl: congrats!

January 1, 2014 at 4:54PM

Louise Michelle: Congratulations. You worked hard for this.

January 2, 2014 at 10:06AM

Selina Stambi: Congrats, Riter. Happy New Year. Lots of blessings and joy.

January 2, 2014 at 10:31AM

Righteous Riter: Thank you so much. It's my story but it's God's glory. Much love from the Riter.

January 3, 2014 at 6:51AM

Jade Lawson : Congratulations.:D

January 3, 2014 at 10:45AM

Green Lake Girl: Congratulations on this achievement. Well deserved.

January 3, 2014 at 11:03AM

Sylvia Page: Hearty congrats and hoping that 2014 will see you climb to the top.

January 3, 2014 at 12:11PM

Sylvia Page: Hearty congrats and hoping that 2014 will see you climb to the top.

January 3, 2014 at 12:11PM

Maureen's Pen: Congrats to you:)

January 3, 2014 at 1:41PM

lancellot: Congrats on your finish.

January 4, 2014 at 3:30PM

RPSaxena: Hello Righteous Riter, CONGRATULATIONS on your grand success! Wish you many more such Achievements in time to come, Happy New Year!! ~RP.

January 5, 2014 at 12:36AM

Although it's cold and raining, I will not be complaining. Thanking God for my job.

shelley kaye: LOVE cold and rainy days! they are totally the best! send some to me, please.... ;-)

November 1, 2013 at 11:39AM

Barb Hensongispsaca: Send address...I have enough to share.

November 3, 2013 at 1:35PM

Bobby Jo: God changes everything for the better.

December 11, 2013 at 4:37PM

rouskin: Congratulations! Wishing you all a very happy and prosperous new year 2014. May this year be the luckiest year for you that brings success and helps you in reaching the zenith of your true potential.

January 1, 2014 at 2:39PM

I would like to apologize to my fans and reviewers for my delayed responses. I've been working a lot of hours and I have to be at work at seven. Thank you all for the love and support. Much love from the Riter and as always, to God be the glory.

Barb Hensongispsaca: You know you are supported,

October 20, 2013 at 12:32PM

kleck140: I read your bio and admire your courage and tenacity to take charge of your life with the blessings God sends your way. As I say to my friends and family, everyone is blessed with different gifts and once you pursue your God given gift, you will receive many God given blessings. Thanks for sharing.

October 28, 2013 at 12:33AM

Righteous Riter: You're welcome and may God bless you.

October 31, 2013 at 5:23AM

God is awesome. He will bless you in ways that you can't believe. I would like to give a special thank to Amaraherig14 for adding a banner and member pump to my most recent work "Thankful". God is Good. While outside shoveling the snow after a light snow storm, my neighbor helped me out with his snow blower but instead of stopping, I kept on working. When God bless you, don't stop, keep working! God loves you. Much love from the Riter.

Denise S: I like that

March 26, 2013 at 6:20PM

gene roush: It has been my experience that everything in life comes from a higher power. Accept and learn from it all. We are always exactly where we are meant to be it's how we use the present to gain God's presence that is important.

March 27, 2013 at 12:49PM

RedMarie33: I especially like what you wrote above about "When God bless you, don't stop, keep working!" I never thought about it that way before, but I think you're right! Blessings to you for all you've overcome & for your faith!

April 4, 2013 at 3:17AM

justmarly: Very nice. You are right. MJ

May 30, 2013 at 1:50PM

Dollie Mason: I just read your bio and I am impressed. Fanstory has many interesting people and that is what makes it so good....

June 6, 2013 at 12:49AM

Showboat: What a wonderful personal story you have. God is so good. Never leaves, never forsakes, always constant, unchanging and steady in His love for his children. Our God Reigns!

July 7, 2013 at 12:10PM

krys123: Congratulations for being one of the top 10 poets. Very impressive. You have a good one AK

July 19, 2013 at 9:34PM

Sankey: Love the wonderful stories in here seems like I have found a of like precious faith.

August 7, 2013 at 2:46AM

Sankey: oops sorry "found a friend of like precious'

August 7, 2013 at 2:48AM

Iese: I hope you become a fan of my work as well

August 28, 2013 at 1:32PM

TXANG1128: When he blesses you.. you work harder... now that's a lesson we could all use today.. BLESSINGS

September 21, 2013 at 10:26AM

ProjectBluebook : Blessings as well . . . wackydo

September 21, 2013 at 10:49PM

nreve:

October 2, 2013 at 9:09PM

Waishali Deshmukh: Impressive story. I like what you have said about blessings.

October 19, 2013 at 8:59PM

Dropped my wife off at the airport at 4:30am. Say a prayer that she reach her destination safely. Much love from the Riter and to God be the glory.

To all inspiring writers: Reviews are important within this site but don't the reviews discourage you. Some reviewers get so caught up in the mechanics that they miss the message. Real talk, everyone is not going to like what you write but keep writing. What's in your heart is way more important than what's in the mind of others. People shoot my work down all the time but I just reload with messages from the Lord. There is no such thing as a perfect poem but there is what I call a pure poem. A pure poem comes from the heart and no matter no much reviewers critique it, it's still pure. Keep writing from the heart and know that no one can do you like you do you. Glory be to God.

Joy Graham: Very nice message. Keep on writing :)

February 21, 2013 at 12:44PM

Righteous Riter: I understand exactly what you are saying and I respect that. You can tell when the reviewer is trying to do you or your work no good. Coming in I knew that my work would be under microscope just because of what I choose to write about but I'm cool with that. My work is designed to inspire and encourage others and if the Lord bless me with a chance to write a book, praise His name. One thing I will not do is let a review get me off track. Much love from the Riter.

February 21, 2013 at 1:14PM

Anisa-: Mechanics are important, too. It helps things read better. And there all types of personalities on this site, which is great, I think. People who are more mechanics driven, others more focused on the content, some on characters, logical sequence, etc. It's all helpful in the long run, as long as they're being constructive and not rude.

February 21, 2013 at 4:54PM

sadie girl: I do believe writing from the heart does come from the lord. Sometimes I write something and I go Wow! did I do that. Did that come from me. When words and thoughts flow out of me. I know without a shadow of a doubt it comes from God. I do need help with pucuation, and grammer,also sentence structuring, etc. and I'm grate ful for any feedback I get. reviewers have help me already. Thank you Lord! for leading me to this site. I'm grateful,Sadie Girl

February 22, 2013 at 2:13PM

expressions9: I think the message and the mechanics of a poem are both important. What's sad with some reviewers is when they don't agree with the content and then decide to give an offensive and negative review - so uncalled for. We are all here to share our writing and it's much more helpful to give positive or at least constructive (not destructive) feedback, or just skip. Don't be discouraged. No-one can take away the gift God has given you. Useful feedback on the mechanics will always help make us better writers, and that's a good thing. It's all good practice, just like with musical instruments so we may "play skilfully" (as David said in the psalms). I've learnt things I didn't know before since joining the site. Bless you! Keep writing. PS: Remember too that if you have any concerns you can contact the site admin (click on Contact Us - top right corner) Blessings! Christine

February 23, 2013 at 12:33AM

Joannforsberg: So agree on the feedback on mechanics. I desire, desire feedback on mechanics of writing. It is as you stated: those who criticizes the message.

February 23, 2013 at 9:01AM

Barb Hensongispsaca: I review the ones that I like and can understand. If I read them more than three times to understand, I move on. I would rather save my reviews for ones that I really like than to make statements just to make them amd I hope others do that for me. I also want real reviews and help if I need it. That is why I am here is to share and learn.

February 23, 2013 at 2:33PM

whizpurr ^-^: I like the beautiful philosophy of there being such a thing as a pure poem. I truly agree... it's the ones that come straight from the heart that contain the essence of memorable poetry.

February 25, 2013 at 4:05PM

mrsmajor: What an encouraging message you have given us..and I know exactly what you mean..Every poem I write, is intended to bring to the reader something to enjoy, yes, a part of what's in my heart. Some like my work, others do not. It is their choice, yet we can all be friends. The Love of Almighty God is a part of me, and so I will continue to give Praise to His name whenever I can, throught my words. I do my best, if the mechanics are without merit, then I have no problem with corrections..God is indeed Good, All the time.

February 27, 2013 at 7:26AM

AndrewMichael78: I am happy to hear that for you. I too was running around streets and at times had it rough. Now I am going to church and engaged to be married this summer! God if great and there is no stronger force. I always feel so strong and invulnerable like he flows in my veins. I see some similarities for you and I so God bless and I to would love to workout hard soon. I am healing up from hernia surgery. And I see you are ranked so high,that's awesome.

February 28, 2013 at 9:35PM

jgirlie152: I love your profile, you have been so honest, and after all the terrible troubles, you are in a wonderful place with the woman who helped you through the bad times. God bless you and thank you for becoming a fan. I would like to return the favor. Blessings, jgirlie

March 27, 2013 at 8:20PM

honeytree: I loved what you wrote and written from your heart and soul. Honey tree

June 10, 2013 at 10:05PM

honeytree: I loved what you wrote and written from your heart and soul. Honey tree

June 10, 2013 at 10:05PM

JMHallmark: Thank you for encouraging other Christian writers.Your words of wisdom and experience are very helpful. You are a blessing, and so is your testimony! God is so faithful! J. M. Hallmark

July 26, 2013 at 11:48PM

watergirl: So beautiful to share thoughts. There truly is a greater force than biology alone. When man or woman invites this greater dimension within, life becomes truly vibrant and miraculous. God bless all. Watergirl.

August 3, 2013 at 7:26PM

God is good all the time. All the time God is good. He lifted me up and turned my life around. He placed my feet on solid ground and I praise Him for that. Thank you Lord.

What God has for you, nothing or no man can take it away.

Praise the Lord for His has awakened me again so that I may exalt Him and touch others with the gift he blessed me with. Thank you Lord.

Barb Hensongispsaca: Right on, He is all there is. He took away my voice and gave me poetry. Some dont like what I write and for the reasons I write, but that is just me.

February 23, 2013 at 2:37PM

Thanking God for another day. I thank God for my life. I thank God for my wife. I thank God for my kids. I thank God for this house and the car He gave me. Without God, I wouldn't be or have anything. Glory be to God.

Everyday I thank God for His mercy. I thank God for His grace that kept me. Sometimes I want to complain but then I realize that someone is worse off than I am. So be thankful that you are where you are with an opportunity to get where you need to go. Glory be to God!

Sonjalee: I am so happy for you Righteous Riter that you have turned your life around. It takes a brave person to do that and I give you great praise. I just wanted to point out that there are some people who have turned their lives around with something other than God. Actually, not without God but with help from others and God. And some without God.I am really respect you and I am so happy you haave become a fan of mine. I would like to learn from you. I am facing a big change in my life with surgery that will hopefully help me be more like the old Sonjalee before she got this dreaded disease call Parkinson's disease. This month I will become bald because they shave my entire head before Deep Brain Stimulation surgey. They do this to preventt infection of the surgical area.. Me and my bald head will have to face whatever comes our way. I guess I focused on your story because my mother became very religeous. It is her life and I am happy she has God to hep her BUT, yes the big But,she upset me the other day when I was talking to her on the phone. She said something like, I want you to find peace with God before your procedure. I do not go to church often;; but I believe in God and we have our own relationship that is private. She said , she thinks it is hard for me to find peace or whatever, I do not really know what she meant, it's hard for me. Anyway, I hung up the phone and broke down in tears of fear about the brain procedure. It is Deep Brain Stimulaation and will help me be more mobile without so many medications. My point is, she was selfish because she felt that she had to tell me to turn to God. I would not mind if she had said that any other time than before this most serious,scary brain procedure. It makes a person feel like maybe I won't make it. She felt better but I felt confused and anxious. Am I gong to die or mayabe have a stroke or some other side effect???????? Hey, I am going on and on, you probably will resign as a fan and I will understand. I just want people to think before they speak. I hope you understand that I am a child of God , I just do not talk abouat it often. thanks for listening. Sonjalee

March 4, 2013 at 12:08AM

Selina Stambi: Just stopping by to say hello! John 3:16 :)

March 6, 2013 at 1:25PM

Charlene0513: Your inspirational writes bring encouragement, tenacity and an unwavering need to press on to all. To have faith in God that through Him all things are possible. For just like Sonjalee, I too am praying and believing that through an upcoming surgery I will be free of cerebral palsy. As it says in the Bible IPeter 2:24 that He went to the cross that we may receive His Salvation and by His stripes we are all healed. Also, 3John-1:2 Where God wishes that we prosper in our health even as our soul propers. I give thanksgiving to God everyday and praise Him that He has made a way for me to be more than I would ever ask for. Eph.3:20 I admire your work and the greatness you bring to the table daily, as we all should put God first place in our lives. Hallelujah!

March 7, 2013 at 12:00PM

Sonjalee: I am so happy that you have an opportunity to free yourself from CP. I will pray for you and hope all will be well. You are very brave and I know it because I am there with you. My heart goes out to you and your thoughts and feelings about God.

April 10, 2013 at 5:15AM

jerrybaldy: Your poetry is awful and if the devil tells lies as you keep telling people who oppose your narrow minded preaching then you must be him if indeed he existed.

June 21, 2013 at 7:59PM

Penguist: Great profile and awesome 'Riting'!

July 7, 2013 at 7:05PM