RFL

Tonight, I wish to highlight and applaud one of my FanStory friends who has gone out of her way to provide me with not only great insights about the politics of this site, but has also gone out of her way to edit a short story I wrote. Her thoughts and edits were beyond helpful, and I will incorporate all those edits and other comments into my story to make it better. What this author did was way above and beyond any recommendation I made in my recent "Review of Reviews". Yet, that piece that I wrote started the correspondence and eventual agreement to read each others work from a reviewer's eye.
So tonight I wish to not only say a public thank you to Phyllis Stewart, but acknowledge her mentoring of a "newbie" as G. has identified my status here.

Phyllis Stewart: Thanks, Rona. Glad to help. I'm a retired English/Math teacher, so "marking papers" comes naturally. You don't need much red ink, so your work is a pleasure to read. :)

July 21, 2018 at 8:00PM

The fact that I won the Someone Else contest means a great deal to me. Why? Because the CEC wrote to me that my initial entry was invalid because I wrote about waking up as a golden retriever, and I was clearly told that a dog is not "someone." I may disagree with that assessment, but okay, sometimes I try to obey the rules, and am grateful for the second try.

I also saw that the Butterfly entry was not in the final vote, but guess that was for the same reason. I did think that was a lovely piece.

I couldn't decide what to do, because I had other priorities on my plate for the day. Yet, I decided to write another story, totally different. All of a sudden this idea came to me "out of the blue" about the Beaver Coat.

I said to myself, "I have to do this now while the idea is still percolating in my brain." My husband was gracious enough as he always is to cook dinner while I write. And then he read it for me before I submitted it.

I guess I am trying to make a few points here. First, I am so energized by winning this contest and knowing that other writers thought this was a promising piece.

Second, I do appreciate that I was given a second chance to submit a story that was approved by the CEC.

Third, and maybe this is most important to anyone who wants to write: When you get the idea and the inclination, you need to sit down at your computer, or with pad and pencil (I am not judging) and let your creativity flow.

So that's my message for tonight. Thank you my FanStory friends.

CD Richards: Congratulations on the contest win. I happen to agree with your assessment - if I told either of my wonderful canine companions that they are not considered "someones", I'd bet met with howls of derision. Nevertheless, as we know, teacher, the customer and the CEC is always right, so you did the right thing.

July 13, 2018 at 8:54PM

CD Richards: * are always right - my bad.

July 13, 2018 at 8:56PM

The Beaver Jacket finished first in the contest "Someone Else"

Finding One's Self finished third in the contest "Memories"

Ono, Oh, No! finished second in the contest "Hawaii getaway"

Innocence is Bliss finished second in the contest "Two Children"

Fantasy on the Fourth Floor finished first in the contest "Stuck in an elevator"

I Miss You, Poppy finished third in the contest "Father's Day contest"

Ginnygray: Congratulations Rona!

June 21, 2018 at 1:08AM

RFL: Thank you, Ginnygray!

June 21, 2018 at 7:04AM

My Tenth Year finished second in the contest "Me"

The Flight finished second in the contest "Dating romance"

My Seville Abogado finished third in the contest "First Romantic Experience"

michaelcahill: This is a gorgeous poem that really transcends this little contest. Top notch writing and an engrossing and authentic tale. Well done and congrats! :))

June 13, 2018 at 5:07PM

RFL: Thank you so much, Michael for this lovely note of congratulations. How thoughtful of you!

June 17, 2018 at 7:54AM

Holes in the Wall finished second in the contest ""My Child Would Never Do That""

Let Them Be finished third in the contest "This Is My Life!"

Damn That Train Whistle finished first in the contest "A Typical Day "

Love's Compass finished third in the contest "5-7-5"

michaelcahill: A beautiful piece, so thoughtful. Love being a compass to find one's self when lost. Most cool. Congrats. :))

May 21, 2018 at 3:31PM

RFL: Thank you so much for understanding. This was actually an ode to my husband who did not know I posted this poem until I read it to him tonight. I am so grateful that he found the compass that would lead me to where I am now. Love to all, Rona

May 21, 2018 at 9:34PM

My husband just came through the door.
He asked me about my afternoon.
I said that my computer was my companion,
Allowing me to open my heart since noon.

He asked if that was all I needed,
A technical device to fill my soul.
I said, "Oh you don't know, do you?"
I have so many friends that make me feel whole.

"Who are they?" he asked really wanting to know.
"Oh," I said, "there is Meia, apky, and Sylva too,
Not to mention jlsavell and Knighteagle, and lynette.
Then there is Sharon and Priscilla, to name a few.

So many friends, so soon, and many I can't name.
You have given me encouragement and love.
Although I may not one day for my writing win fame,
You have helped find in your communication,
A special place where all my writing lies -- a treasure trove.

Thank you all my friends and to FanStory for opening a new chapter in my life.

The Escape finished second in the contest "Emotional Dependency"

RFL: Thank you fellow (or is that politically incorrect?) reviewers for your support and encouragement. You have given me the encouragement I need to keep writing in this creative venue. I am so enjoying the freedom it allows compared to academic/professional writing.

May 18, 2018 at 12:52PM

A Contemporary Miracle finished second in the contest "Overcomer"