• Saving Scarlet at Salmon Bank

    Saving Scarlet at Salmon Bank

    the J-pod's plight
    from 3 reviews.
    General  Fiction

  • clepsydra

    clepsydra

    5-7-5 contest
    from 5 reviews.
    General  Poetry

  • Do You Hear Me?

    Do You Hear Me?

    A woman works things out with her best friend.
    from 2 reviews.
    General  Script

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FanStory wrote to Aiona:

Bayou Bloodhound finished first in the contest "TV Pilot "

June 13, 2017 at 12:13AM
    Kerry Robinson: Congratulations!!!! Great script
    June 13, 2017 at 10:33AM

FanStory wrote to Aiona:

Harvey Plunge finished first in the contest "Clerihew"

February 12, 2017 at 11:10AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!!
    February 12, 2017 at 4:27PM
    Selina Stambi: Congratulations, Aiona!
    February 15, 2017 at 8:36PM

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December 8, 2015 at 7:17AM

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December 3, 2015 at 3:01PM
    I am Cat: I love this song!
    December 4, 2015 at 12:52AM

Aiona:

I just now heard an advertisement with the song "Let There Be Peace On Earth" and they totally skipped the stanza with God in it. WTF?

December 3, 2015 at 2:55PM
    Aiona: To afraid to offend people? Geez. If they didn't like the verses, they should have picked a differentsong.
    December 3, 2015 at 2:56PM

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November 8, 2015 at 10:53AM

Aiona:

http://www.wnyc.org/story/helen-keller/

November 7, 2015 at 1:01PM

Aiona:

SotD: http://soundcloud.com/lymbycsystym/sets/split-stones - Generated Bodies

October 28, 2015 at 10:13AM

Aiona:

https://soundcloud.com/cma-music/youre-alive-original-mix

October 24, 2015 at 11:35PM

Aiona:

I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who's helped critique my writing. My short script "Morning Apologies" got optioned and produced..... http://www.imdb.com/title/tt5131238 Big thank you to Tomes Johnston because he encouraged me to start putting my stuff out to producers...... <3

October 22, 2015 at 1:06AM
    michaelcahill: Awesome. A film, most cool.
    October 22, 2015 at 1:41AM
    Jay Squires: I'm late jumping in with my congratulations. Sometimes it's nice to have someone at the back of the parade wearing a cute tutu, shaking pom-poms.
    November 3, 2015 at 2:20PM

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November 19, 2014 at 5:16AM

Aiona:

"It's really a lack of imagination that makes children check under the bed. Like the monsters couldn't be floating invisibly just above you?" -- Night Vale Radio

October 25, 2014 at 5:18AM

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October 10, 2014 at 4:06AM
    michaelcahill: Thank you. Very nice.
    October 10, 2014 at 9:38AM
    Aiona: She writes her own songs, as well. Since she was 8. Amazing.
    October 14, 2014 at 2:05PM

Aiona:

So I finally finished Jason and Mathilda. It changed a lot. If you want me to send you the first draft, send me a message with your email.

October 5, 2014 at 9:31PM

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September 16, 2014 at 1:25AM

Aiona:

The more I read an old friend's writing, the more I realize how outstanding she was at dialogue.

August 23, 2014 at 1:38AM

Aiona:

My friend Laura said that Tue Eng suffers from a protagonist who sometimes seems to be good, but then sometimes seems to be the bad guy. (paraphrasing). Needs clearer character arc, motivation. I need to work on that.

August 23, 2014 at 1:24AM
    Aiona: Didja hear that, Grandpa? You need more motivation. :)
    August 23, 2014 at 1:25AM

Aiona:

I'm writing. Really I am.

August 22, 2014 at 11:38PM

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August 22, 2014 at 10:24PM

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August 21, 2014 at 3:24AM
    seren james: enjoyed this, calmed my headache..
    August 21, 2014 at 9:58AM

Aiona:

Sometimes I find when I'm not writing... it's because secretly I'm afraid. It's so silly. I don't want to be afraid to write. When learning to ride a bike, one can't be afraid to fall. Well.. okay, when learning to swim, it's good to be afraid to drown. I dunno. No real good parallels there. Just write.

August 21, 2014 at 1:34AM

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August 12, 2014 at 7:19AM
    Debra White: One of my favourite tunes :)
    August 12, 2014 at 1:04PM

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August 1, 2014 at 12:21AM

Aiona:

I just noticed there's a little "word count" ticker at the bottom of the editor. Heh! :D 541 words.

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    July 29, 2014 at 7:22AM
    Aiona: Sure thing! I'll get right on it! (Grrrr.... At least it wasn't another penis enlargement ad.)
    July 29, 2014 at 10:32AM
    amanzar: Hi my name is Manzar. I am an NRI and film producer. I am looking some talented screenplay writers for Hindi film Pari. This is a love story of an Indian village. Conceptual and base story is already completed and now I am looking some one who can write a detailed screenplay. Pls let me know if you are interested, email me movie.pradhan@yahoo.com or you can also message to my Whatsaap no +97466719622 for more details
    July 31, 2014 at 9:33AM

Aiona:

"None of us can know everything; each of us knows something; and we can put the pieces together if we pool our resources and combine our skills." Henry Jenkins

July 28, 2014 at 12:59PM

Aiona:

You know how they say time heals all wounds....Do you believe that?

July 26, 2014 at 8:19AM
    adewpearl: I hate all those platitudes, like - what doesn't kill you makes you stronger and God doesn't give us more than we can handle.
    July 26, 2014 at 8:30AM
    shelley kaye: wounds are healed by time with the covering a scar tissue.... but the scar is always there....
    July 26, 2014 at 11:32AM
    shelley kaye: and of god rally doesn't give us more than we can handle.... sometimes i really wish he would not have so much faith me lol! ;-)

    July 26, 2014 at 11:33AM
    shelley kaye: *really

    (can't type today lol)

    July 26, 2014 at 11:33AM
    Aiona: @adewpearl: Yes, that one about making you stronger worries me, because that just means that something *REALLY* gruesome has to happen to kill ya! :)
    July 27, 2014 at 3:43PM
    Aiona: @Shelley Kaye: Yep, it's an awesome responsibility. :( Oyster scar tissue = pearls.
    July 27, 2014 at 3:44PM

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July 23, 2014 at 8:52PM

Aiona:

So many people I'm following are really prolific writers this month! I have 90 messages in my box! My apologies for not being able to review everyone promptly. I hope I can get caught up eventually!

July 23, 2014 at 8:51PM

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July 11, 2014 at 12:16AM

Aiona:

C-section today. So no posting this week. :D

June 30, 2014 at 5:21AM
    adewpearl: I can't wait to hear about the arrival of the baby! :-)
    June 30, 2014 at 6:42AM
    Ritsal: Exciting news! We anxiously await photos of the new member of your family.
    June 30, 2014 at 8:50AM
    Debra White: Aw! Enjoy those first sweet moments with your new baby :) I'm sure he or she will provide you with loads of inspiration for your writing.
    All the best for tomorrow :)
    June 30, 2014 at 9:45AM

Aiona:

Isn't the brain is amazing? It works 24 hours a day, from the moment we are born until the day we die, except when we are taking an exam, or when we are in love. -- Anonymous

June 23, 2014 at 2:07AM

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June 22, 2014 at 9:11AM

Aiona:

So I didn't place as a finalist in the PNWA 2014 contest, but one of my scores was 47/50. I'm pleased. Revision can only improve it.

June 22, 2014 at 9:07AM

Aiona:

"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God that such men lived." -- General Patton (Thank you, NY Mets dude....)

June 1, 2014 at 8:39AM

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May 31, 2014 at 5:17PM

Aiona:

I was going through my old tablet screencaptures, and I saw something in which a friend said he thinks "love is happiness." What do you think? (He is not a parent, by the way.)

May 11, 2014 at 8:39AM

Aiona:

Reminder to self (and anyone else who needs reminding): Back up your files.

March 30, 2014 at 9:13AM

Aiona:

"You are what you do, not what you say you will do." paraphrased from Carl Jung. GO WRITE!

March 5, 2014 at 6:45AM

Aiona:

Note to self: Write a sonnet with chocolate, fire, oil, pecan, car.

February 25, 2014 at 12:36PM

Aiona:

Note to self: fix exposition in Tue Eng-1

February 21, 2014 at 10:11PM

Aiona:

I really admire all you writers. It takes an unusual amount of guts to let everyone read all the weirdness in your head. I think anyone who writes and lets someone else read it should be PROUD of that. You are one of a very strange group of masochistic people....

February 20, 2014 at 9:01AM
    nor84: Nah. Some of us are just hams.
    February 20, 2014 at 3:23PM
    Aiona: Or both! :D
    February 21, 2014 at 5:10AM

Aiona:

Note to self: Write a poem about Zane Grey. (thanks, Nosha17!)

February 15, 2014 at 10:25AM
    jadapenn: Why are you hiding up in that tree like a leopard?? I can't see you! LOL
    February 15, 2014 at 10:30AM
    Marillion: Fighting Caravans was my favorite Zane Grey book.
    February 15, 2014 at 11:15AM
    adewpearl: My dad had a shelf full of his books
    February 15, 2014 at 11:20AM
    janalma: I think my favorite was Nevada.
    February 15, 2014 at 2:33PM

Aiona:

Note to self: fix reference to Kildare

February 11, 2014 at 8:15AM

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January 7, 2014 at 9:28AM
    shelley kaye: my daughter's graduating in june....

    January 7, 2014 at 11:25AM
    Aiona: Congratulations to her! :)
    January 10, 2014 at 8:51AM

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January 5, 2014 at 11:10PM
    Aiona: "For who could see the passage of a goddess unless she wished his mortal eyes aware?"

    -- Homer, The Odyssey
    January 6, 2014 at 10:11AM

Aiona:

"Story is about respect, not disdain, for the audience." -- Robert McKee, _Story_

January 3, 2014 at 10:04PM

Aiona:

You can't take back the words you never said. Let them out.

December 31, 2013 at 1:24PM

Aiona:

Wow, this is the most awesome movie I've seen in a long while. Made in 1930's!!!!!

December 28, 2013 at 10:25PM
    Adri7enne: Oh, you really threw my schedule out the door. But thank you for sharing a wonderful old movie. I loved it!
    December 29, 2013 at 1:05PM
    Aiona: Sorry! :) But yeah... it was so good, I couldn't stop. Then I had to Google Wendy Hiller. Amazing actress. I still can't quite get why Eliza went back to Higgins. He was such a %&@*!
    January 1, 2014 at 8:38PM

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December 24, 2013 at 11:53PM

Aiona:

Been slammed at work (the other work). So not able to write lately. Will hope to return to daily writing in January (gotta meet the PNWA contest deadline).

December 13, 2013 at 6:40AM

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December 5, 2013 at 9:54AM
    comanalbert: Congratulations for Oscar Benton and the jolt! Is it a boy?
    December 9, 2013 at 11:47AM
    Aiona: The ... what? :)
    December 28, 2013 at 7:32PM

Aiona:

Spent Monday reviewing a script for someone instead of posting. Oops!

December 3, 2013 at 3:43AM

Aiona:

Crikey. There are so many talented writers on here. I almost can't tear myself away to start writing! If I don't comment or rate you, it's because I bookmarked you for future reading. You know how they say you have to give "thoughtful reviews".... So I'm thinking.

December 1, 2013 at 8:23AM
    DIS-illusioned: "There are so many talented writers on here"
    ...'Here'?? Wake up, wake up; you're having a bad dream!
    December 1, 2013 at 2:39PM

Aiona:

Oooo... it's so frustrating to be only able to post two a day. :) So, essentially it is guaranteed I'll be on here daily until I finish posting everything. (which will probably be forever as I continually have stuff I want to write.)

November 29, 2013 at 7:14AM
    Barb Hensongispsaca: You are so right. Especially for the readers who are following books and forget from one day to the next
    November 30, 2013 at 9:18AM

Aiona:

RJ is part of my writing critique group in Bremerton, WA where I live. I keep missing critique group because of my work. So she told me about this site, and I'm utilizing it to get more critique in. Feel free to rip me apart. I'm a big girl. I can take it! :)

November 28, 2013 at 11:32AM