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Mem and Family
Mem and Family
A storm hits as a fishermen hunts for his prey.
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Dear Luna
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What say you
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Rinshikai: I want to again thank the community here on Fanstory. All of your feedback has been very helpful. And a special thanks to the committee for their feedback. I now have someone I trust who can act as the everyday reader for me, letting me know where I need to improve. |
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Rinshikai: After some feedback from the committee, I've added headers to each chapter so that readers will know who the POV character is. |
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Rinshikai: I've increased the font size for my book. I help this helps. |
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Rinshikai: From the feedback provided. I have made character lists for each chapter of Rise from the Fall. I hope it helps. |
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Rinshikai: Thank you to everyone who has taken the time to read my work. If you want to stay up to date, don't hesitate to fan me. |
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Rinshikai: Ranked 47 in novelists, feedback is definitely helping. |
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Rinshikai: I'm glad I'm able to meet my posting goal each month. I'm curious to those enjoying Rise From the Fall. Are there any characters you'd like to see in a short story? Like Goodbye, my love? |
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Rinshikai: Interesting, I got home from work, and I found out I'm rank #81 for the novelist. I didn't see that coming. |
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Rinshikai: I've gone back through some of my older chapters, and I believe that splitting the longer ones would be beneficial. |
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Rinshikai: It's nice when you get that one honest review that can help you improve in the long run. |
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Rinshikai: To those enjoying my book, chapter 6 is in the works. |
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