evesayshi

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: In The Dark finished second in the contest "Faith 5-7-5"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Life Is Living finished third in the contest "Mono-rhyme"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Divinity finished third in the contest "5-7-5 Ancient Greek mythology"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: In My Mirror finished third in the contest "Mirror Poem"

evesayshi: Thank you, FanStory voters, for the honor of your votes and commensurate first place status. I am more than overwhelmed...

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Lilly's Halloween finished first in the contest "Children's Halloween Poetry"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: An Ode To Winter finished third in the contest "Ode To Winter"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Our Words finished second in the contest "Nonet Contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Mirror Mine finished second in the contest "Mirror contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Summer Sights finished third in the contest "Essence poem contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Bullies finished first in the contest "Septolet Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Life finished second in the contest "Minute Poetry"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: In My Garden finished first in the contest "Living in a Garden"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: That Night finished third in the contest "100 Word Story"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: I Welcome The Night finished second in the contest "Etheree"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Sunshine finished third in the contest "Name"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: An Essence Of Reality finished third in the contest "Another love poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Came And Went finished third in the contest "Acrostic Poetry"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Believe finished second in the contest "2-4-6 poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Love's Music finished second in the contest "2-10-2 syllable contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Footprint finished third in the contest "Environmental Damage"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: My Winter finished third in the contest "5-7-5 winter poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Aging I Am finished third in the contest ""Old Lady Poem""

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Let Us Write finished first in the contest "Stacked 5-7-5 "

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: To Dreams finished first in the contest "Rhyme"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Not Always finished third in the contest "100 Word Flash Fiction"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Awakening finished third in the contest "SPIRITUAL "

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Dearest Father finished first in the contest "Dear God,"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Embracing All finished third in the contest "Etheree Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Heed finished third in the contest "1-6-1 poetry"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Welcome Spring finished third in the contest "Spring"

evesayshi: Thank you so much, FanStory Members, for your votes with this poem - very special to me, because it is my dream to one day write for children exclusively...Eve
Thank you, FanStory, for my first "entire" prize pool member dollar award. I promise to use these dollars wisely...Eve

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Puppy's Short Adventure finished first in the contest "Children's Rhyming Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: A Day Of Wonder finished third in the contest "Uplifting Poetry!"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Song Of The Nightingale finished third in the contest "Nightingale"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Rhyme Or Ruin II finished third in the contest "5-7-5 SEQUEL POETRY CONTEST"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Sea To See finished second in the contest "Bodies of Water and Stuff"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Oh, No! finished third in the contest "Just for Fun (5-7-5)"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Night To Knight finished third in the contest "Personification of Light (5-7-5)"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: To Write, Or Not To Write finished second in the contest "Write a Senryu"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: As Seasons Change finished first in the contest "Write a Nature 5-7-5"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Sea And Sky finished second in the contest "Collab:The Sea and the Sky"

evesayshi: To damommy - Forgive my delay in replying, but somehow I inadvertently deleted your comment and wouldn't want to be accused of deliberately excluding you, especially with your reference to "hateful" reviews. I am shocked you would suggest such a thing, in your comments, and I demand an apology, Yvonne, in this public forum. I am including the reviews I wrote regarding your poetry...Eve

Unthinkable
In my opinion, an outstanding ABC poem, in perfect compliance with the prompt. I found it charming in its disconcerting reflection, which would, of course, completely obliterate a favored phrase - this is an excellent read. I wish you best of luck in the contest...

That'll Do
In my opinion, a clever and charming write - though I do not read poetry with the form in mind, only how I feel as I read, and its rhythm, rhyme or free verse, which with this write, is almost flawless. I am certain the form complies with the writer's intent, but to dwell upon it would remove the pleasure of the read for me, so I rely exclusively upon the tale and sound, which as I already mentioned, is almost perfect...

Fear in a Cave
In my opinion, a stunning write in every way, regardless of its form - the beauty is in the write for me, and I appreciate the smooth flow in its rhyming rhythm and the tentative outcome of its story. I was totally absorbed by the tale, and formed my own conclusion, as recommended by the writer of this outstanding work...

I Remember
In my opinion - just beautiful - an absolutely lovely poem, with a verse to which I can personally relate. I care little about the form in the read - the beauty for me is the thought presented so warmly in perfect rhyming rhythm. Thank you for sharing...

evesayshi: First, I would like to express my innermost regard for all the writers here, one and all. This message specifically addresses those who continue to harbor resentment or actual hostility against other writers, in this instance, me, regarding reviews. This statement is long overdue. My objective in writing reviews is to state my perspective clearly, without malice, and with the intent to be helpful and encouraging. In stating my personal opinion, I can offend, but it isn't intentional, nor with harmful intent, albeit too blunt at times. I readily forgive this when it occurs to me, and it does, and I am extremely surprised when I am not afforded the same courtesy or consideration - especially from those who express spirituality in their writing, or are practicing and writing Christians. That is confusing to me. As a "Born Again" Christian, I know Our Savior and Mentor, Jesus, practiced and taught forgiveness liberally; therefore, It is absolutely incredible to me that these practicing spiritualists continue their enmity. It is not Christian....Eve

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: From The Beginning finished second in the contest "Poetry in God's Appreciation"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Asleep finished third in the contest "Love Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Lady Winter finished second in the contest "Personification of Winter"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: He Whispers finished second in the contest "God Whispers Man Appears"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Poetry finished third in the contest "Your Best Poem-Any Style"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: The Storm finished third in the contest "Use These Words"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Unity finished third in the contest "Make World Better Everyday"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Empusa finished third in the contest "Scare Me! 5-7-5"

evesayshi: Thank you so much, Fanstorians, for your acknowledgement and votes and thank you, Fanstory, for the opportunity to place with this poem and my winning member dollars, to be used wisely...Eve

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Till Tomorrow finished second in the contest "2-10-2 syllable contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: The Door finished second in the contest "A Door"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: And Again,Today finished second in the contest "Start and Ends The Same"

evesayshi: Thank you, FanStorians, for your much appreciated votes and thank you, FanStory, for your member dollars, which I can assure you will be used in the most constructive way. Thank you everyone...Eve

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Detention finished third in the contest "1-6-1 poetry"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Pardoned finished third in the contest "The Prisoner "

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: I Am Passion finished second in the contest "Personification of an Emotion poem"

evesayshi: Hello, Michael - I believe I finally understand how this is done. Besides responding here, I accessed your profile to leave a message. Thank you so much for your generous congratulations,, especially in light of your exceptional writing and philosophical ideals...Eve

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: The Soul finished second in the contest "3-5-7 Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: My Neighbor finished first in the contest "3 Words In A Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Spring Again finished first in the contest "Write a Lune"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Summer Love finished third in the contest "I Love..."

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: By The Sea finished first in the contest "Homonym poetry"

evesayshi: Thank you, FanStory Community, for your voting acknowledgement of Childhood?. I appreciate your encouragement more than I can possibly say. Thank you...Eve

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Childhood? finished third in the contest "Childhood"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Dear Father finished second in the contest "A Poem about God"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Discovery finished third in the contest "Naani Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Starburst finished third in the contest "5-7-5 Poem"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Snow finished second in the contest "Nature haiku"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Abused finished second in the contest "Emotions "

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Loving You finished third in the contest "Loop Poetry Contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: Night finished third in the contest "1-6-1 contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: There Is Light finished second in the contest "CREATION poetry contest"

FanStory wrote to evesayshi: The Ring finished second in the contest "Today this Ring Means..."

evesayshi: I am so ecstatic about the reviews I have received regarding my "The Little Tree." The Six Star ratings and "Outstanding" designations have raised my spirit to bursting, and I thank you one and all!
Thank you FanStory, for providing the recognition for this poem and this site that promotes both writing opportunity and advancement...