Babibrn: I will take critism very well ,for without it I cannot move forward. Blessings and prosper.


Babibrn: If you do visit my page if and when I do write something please comment I take all comment negative and positive thank you for reading
    mojo78: Hey there thanks for fanning me will check out more of your work when i get round to it. have spent the last three days in bed not too good. jo* -
    mojo78: changed it to romance if you think that it is not sexy enough to be in the sex category my dream of a perfect valentine night is now romance : ) -
    Babibrn: FEEL BETTER OK ILL LEAVE YOU BE NOW. GOODNIGHT -
    mojo78: Hey there how are you, it as been a while : )* -
    Babibrn: Hey mojo how are you feeling hun? -
    Babibrn: For those who need to know.I critisize the same way.
    1)if the piece has good flow.
    2) if the piece has good verbiage.
    3) if the elements work together in the piece.this is just my opinion is there anything wrong with that please let me know. Ill be happy to give you another opinion with different WORDS.THANKS -
    mojo78: Good evening just wanted to let you know i am back : ) -