• Culinary Admonishment

    Culinary Admonishment

    Changes must take place
    from 3 reviews.
    General  Poetry

  • Securely Happy

    Securely Happy

    A 5-7-5-7-7 poem
    from 2 reviews.
    Romance  Poetry

  • The Proper Response

    The Proper Response

    Completely appropriate
    from 5 reviews.
    Satire  Poetry

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Mark Schardine:

I would like to thank robyn corum for her thoughtful review which led to my poem Verdict Handed Down. I appreciate how a reviewer's insight can greatly help.

May 16, 2016 at 9:07PM
    Ima L. Ami: I would like to second that! Isn't Robyn wonderful? She's helped me a lot, too. Hip hip hooray for Robyn Corum!
    May 16, 2016 at 9:27PM
    robyn corum: hey! I just saw this -- I think robyn is pretty wonderful, too! oh wait....

    no. It's true! hahahaha
    June 3, 2016 at 12:50PM

Mark Schardine:

Thank you for the many reviews of my recent poem Truly Baffling. I am very happy this work appeals to you. I needed some time to read and respond to your reviews.

November 5, 2014 at 8:33PM

Mark Schardine:

My thanks go to Gungalo, who greatly helped me with the poem Ephemeral Marvel.

September 29, 2012 at 11:08AM
    Gungalo: LOL guy. Sorry for not checking this quicker.
    March 31, 2014 at 6:04PM

Mark Schardine:

Scholars of ancient Greek, or poetry for that matter, often ponder the nature of the Muse. Who is she? What are her origins? Whom does she choose? Is she one of many?
We always find evidence of her presence: the numerous works for which we have her to thank. Though we seek to trace her steps and discover her, she always eludes us. Nothing remains for us except to appreciate what she has given.

August 11, 2012 at 7:15PM
    DIS-illusioned: Hmm! Isn't it sexist to assume that one's muse is a 'she'?
    Mine's an ever-nagging asexual/sex-less fiend from the depths of Tartarus. :)
    August 12, 2012 at 12:04PM
    Lady & Louis: Well, the Greek Muses were women, so it's descended from that idea.

    I don't have a muse. Possibly a Mews, but not a muse.
    August 12, 2012 at 4:04PM
    Mark Schardine: mews

    - noun

    1. street with dwellings converted from stables

    from dictionary.com

    Le roi de France en a besoin je suppose.
    August 23, 2012 at 6:05PM
    zeldasmith: Hi Mark, Nice to find a fellow poet only an hour north of me. My brother was a scuba diver and trainer in his younger days...it was challenging for him because he lost a leg in a motorcycle accident ay 19 years old.
    June 27, 2013 at 8:49PM

Mark Schardine:

As I expressed in some recent poems, my chemotherapy has ended successfully. I thank all of you who kept me in your thoughts and prayers during this difficult time.

July 11, 2011 at 11:15AM

Mark Schardine:

My works will undergo a change in content, because I have been diagnosed with lymphoma, a curable and treatable form of cancer. The medical staff fully expects me to recover after several months of chemotherapy.

In the hospital I already found I need to write about my experience and will soon share some poems with you.

January 22, 2011 at 12:16PM
    Jean Lutz: I've made the journey myself. Just want you to know you have my prayers and I am only a p.m. away if you need encouragement.
    January 31, 2011 at 8:23PM

Mark Schardine:

I realize I have yet to share any thoughts with the community at fanstory, and I really should thank you for the noteworthy poems available every day.

I also appreciate those who review my poems. Many of you offer insightful suggestions for improvement, and I find I write better when someone offers an idea that did not occur to me.

January 22, 2011 at 12:11PM