Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 27, 2018


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A look inside the mind of sinners

Slaves of Sin

by BermyBye50


an incessant drip continuously fallin'
an echoing sound constantly callin'
reflection of life's pining twilight
of frostbitten soul's aweary plight
accurse tempest in a teapot scorn
arrant waves abhorrently forlorn.

a blithe crepuscular spirit austere
befalls the contrite heart unaware
concentric noise of inherent desire
of irreverent fiery hailstones afire
anathemized torchlight often inure
awash in aphoric thoughts impure.

a bete noire contumacious within
eschewing temperance ere it begins
an umbra neither bound nor free
of losel sere specious flesh to be
sardonic nuance forever spurned
pious incense ephemeral burned.

a tenebrious nature trite yet vain
prodigal orgasmic turpitude bane
briefly quiescent malefic presence
of an obdurate temporal existence
dark effluvium of imminent death
an jejune conscience absent breath.

a mendacious inutile abstinent call
afore humanity's erst ill-fated fall
into darkness' ever-yawning abyss
of modernity's errant heart's remiss
willfully inveigled into going along
swept away by fantasy's fatal song.

a feckless opprobrious monument
to man's indomitable will's decent
beyond the grave's mindless sleep
the altar of never was endless deep
finite victim's of salacious greed
without a hope of which to heed.



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Both sinners and saints are one and the same - slaves of sin.

A poem inspired by Romans 3:22-23, Romans 5:12 �??�?� 

For for there is no difference... all have sinned, and come short of the glory of God, because of this, even as sin entered the world through one man, and death through sin, so also death passed to all men, inasmuch as all sinned.
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