Romance Poetry posted March 20, 2016 Chapters:  ...16 17 -18- 19... 


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A Challenge piece between Fastdigits and myself.

A chapter in the book A Book of Love

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by justafan




Raw
Desperate emotions
Rampant … inside me
Growing
Changing me
From within

 
Once
Bright
Loving
Chasing dreams
Of forever ….
With you
 
Forever
Changed
By you

 
Now
Envy
Has taken
Root
Envy
Of her looks
Her smile
 
Spawned
 
Jealousy
Of
The way you
Look ... at her
Hold ... her
Kiss ... her
Make love … to her
 
I’ve
Turned
Bitter
Cold
And yes
Dangerous
 
Tread … lightly
My dear

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I read a piece by "Fastdigits" and knew I wanted to do a challenge piece with him...This is a challenge based on a photo. An Ekphrastic poem ...for your pleasure :)
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