Spiritual Poetry posted January 31, 2014 Chapters: 2 3 -4- 5... 


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A chapter in the book To a son of God

Who ... ?

by Bicpen



I've seen him, I've seen him,
the affection of him, the attenion,
He keeps pursuading, He keeps on coming
giving his love, giving his blessing,

He's wept for me, He's bled for me
his compasion has overwelmed his heart
He's in love with me, He gave his life for me

in return I've bled Him, I've shamed Him
I've robbed Him, I've cursed Him
but I've seen Him.  I've seen Him

where did u see Him they ask?

His reflection, I've seen Him, I've seen him
so pay attention I've seen His reflection
my family have paid attention and show His reflection



 





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