Fantasy Poetry posted March 12, 2010


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
a florette

Field of Flowers

by adewpearl


Among the flowers of the field
a world of fairies lives concealed,
though should you be one who believes,
a sprite might peek out through the leaves to be revealed.

Perhaps she'll sit astride a snail
who through lush meadows wends his trail,
or maybe you will see her sup
sweet nectar from a buttercup, Titania's ale.

But mystic lands of creatures wee
remain impossibility
for those who cast a cynic's eye
and see not magic, but a lie, in mystery.




Recognized


The florette is a poem of quatrains with a syllable count of 8/8/8/12. The rhyme scheme of each verse is AABA, but with a twist. On syllable 8 of the final, longer line, there is an internal rhyme with B.
Titania is the Queen of the fairies, dating back to the middle ages. I am using the 3 syllable pronunciation : Ti/tan/ya.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. adewpearl All rights reserved.
adewpearl has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.