General Poetry posted March 20, 2022


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Well, Jaws is Jaws, super film

Jaws

by Peter Mac

5-7-5 Movie Critique Contest Winner 
Shark, teeth, people, slay,
On the beach or in the bay,
Jaws hunts, looks for prey.

Law stuck, seeks more aid,
Someone who is not afraid,
Sea, fish, are his trade.

Three men, on a boat,
Daft men, brave men, all afloat,
Still, night, quite remote.

Late night, limbs all bared,
Scars are shown and stories shared,
Huge crash, now who's scared?

Noise, shouts, big shark fight,
Put that naughty fish in plight,
Shoot, kill, put things right.

Shark, teeth, people, munch.
Got it with a sucker punch.
Home now, seafood lunch.

Rate it bloody good,
Yoda says: "Watch it, you should".
"Big hit, not a dud".



Writing Prompt
Write a stacked 5-7-5 poem, which summaries a popular movie or book plot, or describes some unusual characters.

5-7-5 Movie Critique
Contest Winner


Thanks to those who pointed out that "Stacked" means it must have more than one verse. Added some more. Guess what my 2nd favourite film is...
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