General Poetry posted January 15, 2022


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A Cascade poem

Before the Moon Rises

by damommy


The time when sunlight says good night
before the moon stirs from its sleep,
the light is soft, the world is calm.
 
A chance to take to rocking chair
and ponder on the day just passed,
the time when sunlight says good night.
 
The memories come home to roost
to settle in my mind and heart.
Before the moon stirs from it sleep
 
the ghosts of yesteryear come by
and linger with me only when
the light is soft, the world is calm.

 



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Cascade, a form created by Udit Bhatia, is all about receptiveness, but in a smooth cascading way like a waterfall. The poem does not have any rhyme scheme; therefore, the layout is simple. Say the first verse has three lines. Line one of verse one becomes the last line of verse two. To follow in suit, the second line of verse one becomes the last line of verse three. The third line of verse one now becomes the last line of verse four, the last stanza of the poem. See the structure example below:

a/b/c, d/e/A, f/g/B, h/i/C
To make the Cascade an even longer poem, use more lines in verse one. For example, if verse one has 6 lines, the poem must have seven stanzas so that each line of verse one is reused as a refrain in each following stanza (a cascading effect).
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