General Poetry posted October 24, 2021


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A 5-7-5-7-7 poem

While Seen by Others

by Mark Schardine

She found him again
and spoke to him of past words.
Her smooth hands grasped him
and he said a few soft words
as if to hide a secret.




I updated this poem with changes suggested by Gypsy Blue Rose.
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Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

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