Nice play on words peeked / piqued!
The wordplay is awesome. My inner (and outer) English teacher soooo wanted to react to "peeked" instead of "piqued," but those eyes stopped me dead. I love good word play.
This was very nicely done!
"Peaked" (or the proper usage in this instance), verses peeked ( for the double entendre), I get it, LOL...
Very witty and clever. Good luck!
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