• Knowing that the hand

    Knowing that the hand

    A naughty love song
    from 1 reviews.
    Song Lyrics  Poetry

  • Corona

    Corona

    Three definitions
    from 2 reviews.
    Commentary and Philosophy  Poetry

  • I so remember

    I so remember

    A profile thought
    from 3 reviews.
    Commentary and Philosophy  Poetry


DR DIP: I so remember once this was a writing site for poets and short story writers to share their works with those who share the passion of the written word be it in rhyming verse, non rhyming or prose plus fiction or non fiction short stories.
People made comments what they felt of each others work and would graciously say where they thought a work could be improved whetrher grammatically or poetically.
It was an enjoyavble place to visit.
Bu slowly poison tongue of political allegience and religion oozed its way into the site , especially catylized by the inauguration Of trump into the political equation
Everyone saw him as the breath of fresh air America needed.
No one bothered criticizing his track record as a bank rupt liar and charleton with a hidden agenda to better his own position in life and bring nepotism into the political occasion.
Suddenly people realized that the man liked to stretch the truth for his own benefit.
The people had the wool pulled over their collective eyes and started believing his stats of success in turning the economy and unemployment.
he does not mention the incereasing amount of homeless taking residence in the back streets and parks of California.
I so wish the economy was improving as a result of his policies.
To use the corona virus as a crutch for personal political gain is going to back fire and is outright disgusting.
The man continually is losing any respect or credibility one might have thought he had at the time of his inception.
Many now are disallusioned.
The corona virus is the great deterrent he needed to have and the more he ties to embrace optimism and light at the end of the tunnel the more he digs a deeper hole for himself then tries to justify his actions for the betterment of the people.
Next he will be stating this is the virus we had to have

just my thoughts read them while they are still up

dip
    nor84: Dip, why don't you try the political forum? I think you might like it. -


DR DIP: IMMATURITY VERSUS WISDOM OF LIFE EXPERIENCES

Some people are quick to react to another's comment without completely understanding or reading it.
Knowledge pure through experiencing life itself as agains reading in textbooks and learning by rote does not necessarily denote a learned person.
AS much as I have the deepest respect for the younger generation I sometimes wish it was reciprocated.
Just because the older generation are not always computer literate or savvy does not mean they haven't experienced life before google and Wikapedia.
Just a little bit of respect for the knowledge that older folk may impart not learnt from any text book but merely experiencing life itself.

That's all I have to say on the matter
    Adelphos Vasa: It depends on how wise that generation was. There is a world of difference between knowledge and wisdom. I am afraid your generation didn't do such a good job of either, but led us down the path to sin and death and the loss. (1950's -60's gen) -
    CD Richards: Says the generation that thinks it's fun to shoot, snort or smoke substances that turn one into psychotic zombie who is a danger to anyone who crosses their path. The generation that can't communicate without using their thumbs, and even then not in anything vaguely resembling English. The generation that thinks the only thing their parents are good for is to hand them everything on a platter. The generation that doesn't understand the meaning of the word "gender".

    Oh, and yes, what I just did is called "profiling" - stereotyping everyone of some particular demographic - in this case age. It's also known as discrimination. Sucks, doesn't it?

    Maybe when people learn to look at their own lives instead of trying to make themselves feel superior by blaming others for their inadequacies, the human race will make some progress.

    The fact that some choose to see their God as one who delights in violence, death, destruction and punishment says nothing about their non-existent buddy, but everything about themselves. -
    EveLovell: You know nothing of us, or our goals. I don't work with fools, so I won't answer you again so don't' bother wasting your angst. And what you see now with the younger generation is a result of you not doing the 'tell', screwing everything that moves and being so out to lunch on every drug, and other issues like marriage, abortion, homosexuality, that we have what we have now but we are turning it around. G-d is having his way. -
    CD Richards: I love it when you address me to say you'll no longer address me.. I'd really rather you didn't. And still you blame your woes on someone else. If what goes on inside your head is a movie, I'm glad I'm not watching it. -
    EveLovell: And you are waiting for us because you answer anything we say within seconds. Stop stalking us, old man. -
    jlsavell: wow,
    Adelphos, who taught you to be so disrespectful to another's personal profile page? Put your immature thoughts on your own page, that is the respectful thing to do, or state your malicious comment in the forum.

    Dip, you should have this removed.
    -
    nor84: YES, DR. DIP, PLEASE HAVE THIS REMOVED. IT'S LED TO NOTHING BUT UGLINESS. -
    CD Richards: If Dip wishes it to be removed, he doesn't have to ask anyone, he can delete the post from his profile. -
    Adelphos Vasa: I wasn't disrespectful, I'm just sharing another generations point of view, and I won't take it back. I believe it. And there's a comment box, so I commented. Truth is, you just didn't like what I said. -
    DR DIP: Why would I remove this?
    I am getting sick and tired of not being able to voice an opinion if people want to state there's be ever who they are its all fine by me I won't be running off squealing to Tom because someone disagrees with me.
    i think debate and opinion are healthy no matter how diverse oropposing.
    I'll give Tom a day as usual and he'll remove it. He doesn't like confrontation when it doesn't suit him.
    The problem here is profile thoughts are also the same topic thread on the forum So depending on where you respond or post gives it a completely different acceptable category.

    And I thought politics and religion were the only issue lol.

    I really don't give a rats how long one has been on this site or how short a time everyone is entitled but for stuff sake if you are going to write something make sure of your facts and above all respect everyone elses whether they are old fogies like me that have experienced life before during and after cyber technology.
    I think my thoughts were well validated and I never pointed a finger I just made an observation.
    The only thing I suggest to the newbies is before you judge or take alliances you will regret sit back and take in.
    don't just come in half cocked then sidle up to someone just because they agree with you.
    study the history of the place You all have plenty of time now to do this and then maybe before you judge another you might have a better understanding on why some people's attitudes toward others are what they are.
    Get runs on the board first put ya i phone apps and uni text books away and experienced life out of the uni lecture room.
    And while I'm at it do not tar generations that aren't yours with the same brush as if we are responsible for all the wrongs in this current why gen world who think the world owes them a living
    sure we stuffed up and in hindsight might have done a lot of things different but don't come on here with all keyboard typing fingers blaxzing as if your generation is so stuffing pure.
    You were all born with a keyboard and i phone in your hand at birth and you know how to swipe whoopy do.
    I need to stop this rant now before Tom gets the shits and deletes this.
    But before I do I am going to copy and paste this to word doc so at any time I can re post in another forum

    respectfully old fogey dr dip lol

    LIGHTEN UP!!! We have all more pressing things to worry about ATM. -
    Adelphos Vasa: Who's worried? Certainly not us. And 'yo generation was heartless on yo hits'. What a mess you left to clean up. You can dish it out, well now it's time to pay the piper. Seth Vasa. -
    Jen Vasquez: CAN I GET AN AMEN!! Well said... And many truths I read. I agree completely. I May not be well aged or old but I'm well aware.. I'm anti close minded .. and agree the youth today would not be able to function.. hold a conversation or understand real respect. Uneducated and ignorance is the sad future -


DR DIP: All one can ask around here is for consistency of the blatent hypocrisy and not pick and choose your victims.
I rest my case
    Mrs. KT: Dip,
    One man's acts of hypocrisy is another man's acts of truth. Life is all about perspective... -


DR DIP: MY PROFILE THOUGHTS

My profile thoughts are really clear
I hope we survive another year
This virus has really changed our lives
We hope and pray that one survives

So let me express in simple verse
My heartfelt feelings we now all immerse
In our lives here every day
Stay safe and well's all I can say

And think about, those we've lost
Wealth and greed have now been tossed
It's now survival of the fittest
This is now life, this acid test

So to all my friends, on this site
Let us fight together, this awful plight
We must unite and work as one
All look forward to a new rising sun

Let's hope tomorrow, brings better news
No more sorrow, more happier views
Blessed are, the aged and the weak
blessed are the heroes of whom I speak

Who thanklessly fight on each day
to find a cure to find a way
that can rid us of this terrible disease
which continually takes us to our knees

To those who are suffering financially
To those all struggling substantially
My prayers go out with all best wishes
We'll get through this, for what one misses

That beautiful rainbow after this storm
More sunny days ahead to keep us warm

dip 24/03/20






    Jesse James Doty: This is a lovely, warm, and heartfelt sentiment. Thank you.
    -


DR DIP: LATEST FROM CORONA VIRUS HEADQUARTERS:
'ALL SEX HAS NOW BEEN BANNED"
"Couples caught holding hands, kissing or touching wee wees will be severely penalised"
Been married for 36 years and can't remember when I doid any of those things last!! lol
    Gypsymooncat: I'm wondering when it'll become a crime to share a bed! Let alone "touching wee wee's" lol!

    Me and my guy don't social distance, that's for sure!! -


DR DIP: Well it finally happened.
After seven years of coming to this wonderful site and posting poems every night, I've finally written a poem/songparody that has only had one review of its two complimentary certificates.
I have a good inkling why lol.

The poem did not sit well with fifty percent of the Fanstory community obviously who are Trump supporters and the other fifty percent were too worried exposing their non allegiance or non support to those who support him.
Ah politics!.... the subject that can apparently sever friendships and cause angst on a poetry and writing site like no other haha.
Personally I thought it quite funny as a parody but each totheir own.
I suppose an apology by me as usual is required.

dip
    EveLovell:
    To thyself be true, Dip, and have a great day. -
    jlsavell: Don?t you dare apologize. For what?

    I don?t think I have seen it. Do not ever let doubt quieten your voice. -
    Gypsymooncat: Hey Doc, I've posted up some stuff that hasn't got many comments, and it wasn't political. Your lack of reviews could be what you think, but it also may be that its content isn't what people want to read. A wise friend said to me that sometimes people want to feel good after reading something; not have to think too hard or question themselves.

    As Eve said above, to thyself be true. Those who DO review your work honestly - I never seem to come across it by the way - are the sort of people you want commenting anyway, not just those after $$. I think you're a hoot! You say what you think, which I also like, so why worry about those who take offence? -
    Gypsymooncat: As a PS to my comment above, where I said "I never see to come across it by the way" I meant, I don't seem to come across your work. I certainly didn't mean that I never come across honest reviews! Just wanted to clarify that! -
    padumachitta: as we say in Canada..scr"" 'em if they can't take a joke! Seriously this site is often way to right wing for me...but there are some good hearts and people as well...most of my stuff gets only about 20% of the reads as reviews(you can check it from the classic site)...please kept writing politics...I got your back on this one.. -
    Meia (MESAYERS): I hate Trump...I think he is the third anti-Christ?.I will have a look for that work now. You are an amazing reviewer and writer, no doubt. And not all of us are hypocrites- some of us are willing to shout our views from the rooftops and don't write reviews for money! xx -


DR DIP: Mum and Dad and little Johnny and sister, Susan were sitting down for the night's dinner.
Tonight's dinner was a big surprise for them...Mum was serving up venison which they had never seen of had before.

Puzzled, little Susan pipes up and says 'Dad? What sort of meat is this?" to which Dad proudly exclaimed " Ok Susie, I will give you a hint" "It's what your mother often calls me".
At this hint, little Johnny promptly interjects before Susan has her first bite and yells.... "DON'T EAT IT SUSAN, IT'S AN ARSEHOLE!"

(Moral: Be very careful what you call your husband in front of the kids ok dear)
    Bicpen: ... what do you call a deer with no eyes ... no idea! -
    EveLovell: Love your sense of humor, so funny! Jokes are a great way of looking at ourselves, aren't they? -


DR DIP: I NOW HAVE 8 LIVES LEFT
2 days ago at was at my son's place after a massive thunderstorm passed through the area with winds up to 150 ks an hour and hail stones asbig as golf balls,
A big tree branch had landed on his roof and he asked me to come around to help him rid of it.
Little did we know it had smashed about ten roof tiles and 3 of the ridge cappings and with an impending other storm it was now vital we replace the existing broken tiles before it rained.
The roof tiles were heavily glazed terracotta in a french patten and had not been on the house long before h ebought it some 4 years ago
but he had some spares.
We had all but replaced thebroken tiles barabout three soI was confident we could replace them before it rained.
I had been warned these highly glazed tiles are very slippery when wet.
We were both about to find out!
Aaron was further down the roof and over toward the ladder below him when I first heard him scream I"MGOING I"M GOING!
I looked around to see Aaron sliding down the pitched roof which was now like walking on ice and straight over the edge It was a 12 foot drop to the concrete path below and he had nothing to grab onto as he lay on his stomach slipping down the roof like a toboggin and over the edge.
All but 10 seconds later half way between me yelling to Aaron are you ok I started sliding from the apex or ridge of the roof gaining speed on my stomach as I slid.
All I remember was me going over the edge collecting the side colourbond metal fence taking the brunt of the initial first fall off the roof with my groin doing thesplits on top of it then been spun around upside down into the fence before falling the other six foot onto the concrete below. Other than my manhood beennearly taken out I jumped up off the ground with just a few scratches
There is a moral here for everyone..never stay up on a tile roof when it starts to rain! I miraculously live to tell the story as does my son who only sustained a sprained ankle.
    damommy: Goodness! Glad you're both okay. Or relatively so. That could have ended in tragedy. -
    DR DIP: thanks Yvonne It certainly gave me a reality check

    dip -
    WryWriter: Wow! So glad you and your son were not seriously injured. Stay safe! -
    lyenochka: Oh my goodness! So glad you are okay.
    Please avoid roofs and other dangerous situations!
    -
    Barb Hensongispsaca: OMG I am so glad you are basically okay and still have your pride and ?
    It could have been so much worse. Save those other lives for surfing
    -
    royowen: I?m so glad you?re still safe Dip, God must have a plan for you. Roy -


DR DIP: As of today I will be following the rating scales and their definitions more strenuously.
I willaccept a 4 star review quite openly and never question or gribble about receiving one.
A good review with 4 stars is a good review it does not mean it a bad write.
We continually hold the bench mark at 5 or more nomatter what just to keep the peace ..Its now the accepted minimum.
The thing is what is seen in one person's eyes as just a good poem or story can be seen in anothers as excellent or acceptable and that my friends is interpretation.
Its not a matter of being ruthless or purely reciprocating its purely how a write affects the individual
Style of writeby many of our wonderful wordsmiths is now so predictable I am surely many can recognize those styles without an author's signature.
Thedash forcashattitude will never change with many but with over 800 members and some 400 active its obvious that many if not promoted to dollar status will never be read other than the two complimentary reviews.
You can deny it all day but the place is becoming a clique club for the popular and unpopular.
If one is not seen to fan as many of those 800 as possible and go on the law of averages their work will be seen by these if promoted heavily there works could belost in the backwoods forever
I am greatly in favour for that reason in increasing the complimentary certificates to at least 4.
hey this is just my point of view many will argue why change something not broken butI sincerely believe it is a change for the better. When you 'surf' the fanstory membership you would besurprised just how many wonderful wordsmiths whose work for various reasons is unpromoted are out there.
It is sad to see so many poets, purely to get page 1 and 2 exposure, actually buying member cent pumps with 'real' cash topromote their work to these pages.
This is NOT a gripe, just an observation and suggestion after spending nearly seven years coming here and STILL finding many wonderful wordsmiths hidden in the FanStory backwoods I had not realized.If one goes to the trouble to explore these backwoods one would be pleasantly surprised.
Personally I just don't have the time to spend 12hours reviewing but I love thewonderfulfriendsI have met on this site and are conversely disappoointed and saddened to see many leave or become inactive, disallusioned by the 'system'

respectfully dip
    Liz Mason: Interesting observations from a long time reviewer. I?m still trying to understand what to do and how to go about it. -


DR DIP: So here's the secret any Newbies who want tomake it on FanStory

Fan as many people as you can review for at least 12 hours a day and never show any political or religious leanings , always be very diplomatic and smile with your typing finger! lol

I have not ticked ONE box lol

dipster
    Liz Mason: Good points but I?m writing daily and making photo books online so won?t have that time. Thanks for heads up. -


DR DIP: The road to you may seem lost and now overgrown
That track once well worn, now undefined
The path of devotion that once was, now diminished
The journey back may be fraught with many obstacles
....but love will find the way

dip


DR DIP: ANOTHER YEAR OVER

Another year over, another year gone
One more sunset before a new year dawn
A brand new decade, two thousand and twenty
Hope the new one brings, good will a' plenty

A three month hiatus, a fresh new start
Time to anticipate from us, more poems from the heart
Maybe a sonnet or some non rhyming verse?
Some 5-7-5 or a Senryu at worse?

Whatever your fancy, whatever your taste
Just don't get 'antzy' and review cut and paste
Write what you want,write how you feel
WRITE IN UPPER FONT, depends on your zeal

Beauty of word is in the eye of the beholder
Whats one's person trash can be a treasure to the older
Diversity certainly IS, the spice of life
From hers or his,be it husband or wife

The power of the word is abundantly clear
Let's wish everyone, a great Fanstory new year
Keeping forging those friendships here on Fanstory
Long lasting liaisons through poem or short story

A strong, common passion to write and convey
The power of word is right here to stay
So as the old year, comes to an end
Greet the new year with an olive branch to extend

Bury each hatchet, turn over a new leaf
Loss of friendship? Go patch it, that's my belief!
Life's way too short, to hold any malice
Let's all raise our glasses, be them wine or a challis
And drink to our friendship shared on this site
and celebrate our penmanship, go out there and write!

Happy new year from down under

dip


DR DIP: Hello fellow Fanstorians

Well it's been three and and a half months since I have posted anything on this wonderful site as I had decided to dedicate my time to two of my most enjoyable passions in my life at present: my surfing and my poetry, reading it live on stage.

The introduction of my attendance to 'open mike' nights some 10 months ago at an inner city hotel in my home city of Sydney, Australia saw my dream to do my own one man show of my life through poetry only increase.

A chance opportunity in early November to having access to a beautiful 130 seat theatre at my local school of arts, in my hometown of Cronulla, Australia was just too good to knock back so with 30 or so poems and a lot of enthusiasm, I put together my own one man show , "an Audience With Dip and Friends".

To say I was not overwhelmed by the response on the night and their wonderful enthusiastic reaction and critique of the show was just so heartwarming and encouraging.

It has given me the impetus to pursue this new love of live reciting, getting to say my poems how exactly I want them to be said and to a responsive and enthusiastic audience.

To this end, I would dearly love to thank fellow Fanstorian, Jimi Savell for graciously letting me use her as a sounding board to see which poems she felt worked.
It's always good to have another set of eyes and when those eyes belong to a wonderful wordsmith such as Jimi to honestly critique, suggest and appraise it really helps one's confidence.
I sincerely Thank you Jimi.

Now for the lesson learned.

At the end of 2009 I was invited to this social site called 'Facebook' which at the time I had never heard of, to look at friend's surfing photos where you could comment if you felt warranted one.
As a joke, for some reason, I started to comment in rhyme and from that day forward I discovered my passion to write rhyming verse.

From September 2009 with my first comment on Facebook, to my last comment/post where I was quite vigorously and enthusiastically promoting my one man show by posting the event privately to all my 900 friends and 2000 followers I had on my link page "DIPTALES POEMS FROM THE HEART" posted over 4860 poems on Facebook.
It was not until May 2013 when I first joined FanStory , some 4 years after joining Facebook did I start to title and save my poems to word doc and since ALL my poems were inspired by pictures/ images or quotes and comments on Facebook, all my original drafts were on Facebook.

For some reason, Facebook saw this 65 year old pensioner (me) with a passion to write poetry on this social networking site for the last 10 years, as some sort of hacker/ troll obviously flagged by their robotic security algorithm for enthusiastically and naively promoting my one off one man show innocently to my friends on 'private message' to make sure they were aware of this late confirmation that I had secured this one night only one man show.

They told me I had contravened their promotion and standards policy and My account had been permanently disabled..NO WARNING, NO "THREE STRIKES AND YOUR OUT" policy.... just a straight out, permanent disablement of my account.
No specific explanation other than to say refer to our promotions and standards conditions policy.

I can live with being suspended for a month or so because of my ignorance and naivety for not reading the small print but to permanently disable my account and totally denying me access to the 1500 or so untitled poems I had not yet saved to word doc that are exclusively mine is both unfair and unjust.

Like how many people when joining a social network site such as Facebook actually read their small print policy when activating their account on their standards and promotions policy..give me a break!

Yeah I am totally disillusioned and bewildered
I AM NOT A BLOODY CRIMINAL!
I am just an enthusiastic rhymer with a passion to write and share my work.
That's ten years of my life just flushed down the sink in one foul security algorithm or whatever you want to call it.
Why can I not have the chance to plead my case and my innocence , be I naive and ignorant of this small print policy?

Sincerely and respectfully my fellow Fanstorians.
I post this as a hard lesson learned.

Dip
    Ms. Snyder: I am so sorry this happened to you and your IP address should have some type of locator on it Dip, you should get a hold of a copyright attorney asap so that you can have them release your work. BTW, I miss you! I am very excited that you can do this brave type of poetry reading in the first place. Especially at 65 - you go! Anyway see if Tom (founder here) might have some suggestions on what you might do - he might have some ideas on how to retrieve the information. I wish Dean were here - he would know what to do. I miss him too! I hope you can piece together what you can from the poems you have stored here. I am so sorry this happened. I will learn from it as well. But then I never post anything on social media from my originating thoughts - they are all with me and belong to me. It is only when I am ready to birth them that Fan Story gets them. I hope you are having a nice holiday and I wish you luck in the new year! Cheers, Fonda -
    jlsavell: Ahhhhh! Dip, I just saw this. I am humbled. Truly. Thank you.

    You never needed my input. Your talent shines. I watched your debut with pure delight. You are awesome, friend. -


DR DIP: I dedicate this song by Australian musician Rai thistlewaite to our dear fellow Fanstorian Dean Kuch because I can't think of one reason why you had to go

https://youtu.be/ON_jvS8b7oM


DR DIP: A wonderful FanStory writer and friend who always goes to the trouble to review my works over the years made the comment in a review to one of my posts that due to difficulties in typing any more she will only be reviewing those who have reviewed her work,

I call this'Reciprocal reviewing' and I totally understand her reasons that she will only be reviewing to conserve her writing strength as it deteriorates to those who make the effort to review here work.

Of late and I mean over the last two years especially, my time allocation to be able to dedicate with reviewing on this wonderful site has diminished greatly due to a few projects I now have going on in my life.
So I hardly review any more when coming here hence my very simple poems I write are only ever worth two cents so I totally understand there is no incentive whatsoever for anyone to review my work anyway and I totally understand this.

To that end, when other things in my life wind down, my time on Fanstory reviewing everyone who goes to the trouble still these days to review mine will lift.

So I will always understand if I am not reviewing in kind ( reciprocating) why would any one bother and especially if only worth 2 cents, to review me.

Lets face it Fanstory is a very time consuming place if you let it take over your life..and I know I have used this expression many times before over the wonderful 6 years I have been coming here but we are slaves to the system there is just no other way to say it.

To those who dedicate the time to spend reviewing hours on end and hold their great rankings kudos to you all for your dedication.

Never stop writing it is such and enjoyable and rewarding passion for many of us.

respectfully and sincerely

dip
    DR DIP: I unreservedly apologize for posting this profile thought and as it cannot be removed I can only say if this post personally offended I am sincerely sorry
    I will not be posting on profile thoughts or the forum in future

    respectfully dip -
    jlsavell: You don?t need to apologize for this post! I think we all get it , Dip.

    Fanstory takes a lot of ones time. Writing is a passion for all of us here or we wouldn?t take or steal time from the important everyday aspects of attending our lives and post and share, if we did not love the written word and being creative. However, there are limits, and we do well to prioritize, so we don?t become consumed .

    For those who can review, write, respond everyday, I can certainly appreciate their whys, just as I can appreciate those who simply cannot whys.

    Now you go take on the day. And by the way, keep posting here and even in the forum. Your voice is just as important as anyone else?s my talented friend. -


DR DIP: Can you believe it? Other than 'profile thoughts', the 'forum' has not had a single comment or new thread in over 24hrs! lol
who's going to break the silence I wonder?
    jlsavell: Yes, it is rather quiet, my friend.

    For once I would like to see a Trump supporter start a thread and post what they believe his accomplishments are and why he is soooo good for the United States -
    WryWriter: Maybe everyone got tired of being media puppets. -
    jlsavell: Or perhaps we all just have a life to attend outside of Fanstory. -
    mrsmajor: There's so much outside of Fanstory to enjoy...I do have a life... -


DR DIP: I had a message on Facebook from our wonderful scribe, Dean cook's (DEAN KUCH)daughter saying that Dean is critically ill
My heartfelt wishes go out to Dean and family at this present time and hoping for a quick recovery.

sincerely Dip
    mrsmajor: My sincere heartfelt wishes, and Prayers for Dean and his family...Victoria -
    WryWriter: Prayers for the family and Dean's speedy recovery. -


DR DIP: A BIG THANK YOU TO GOOD FRIEND KRISTEN ROSS- MONRO
Who put together this great musical version of my poem I am totally rapt

TIME ON MY HANDS

Time on my hands
Wax under my feet
Every retiree understands
This time of life's so sweet

Saltwater in my veins
Sunscreen on my face
This surfer never complains
Always knows his place

I've earned my time
I've paid my dues
Life's now sublime
It's one big cruise

I've given my life
To work and friends
Three kids, a wife
Hope it never ends

Just give me a wave
And an offshore breeze
That's all I crave
And some sunshine please!

Give me an ocean
In which to play
To follow my devotion
That'll make my day

Don't ask for much
To be a happy man
Just family and such
No big, grand plan

Life's too short
To complicate it
So hold that thought
And come celebrate it!

Come join me now
Down by the sea
Let me make this vow
It's how it will always be

dip

    LG Wolfe: Wow! This is fantastic. The poem and the singing/images. -
    jlsavell: I loved it the first time I heard it and I love it now! -


DR DIP: Someone videoed me the other night at my 'open mike' poetry night.
I have been going to a local inner city hotel in Sydney called the Louis Hotel over the last few months where you get a chance to recite live.
I cringed at first as I have never seen myself recite before but it was a lot of fun doing my poems live
It was the second one I do called
"Got to face the ugly truth" which I do in character about the vagaries of getting old.

I don't know how to upload and open it from Facebook so I just copied the URL I hope you can open it

Someone videoed me the other night at my 'open mike' poetry night.
I have been going to a local inner city hotel in Sydney called the Louis Hotel over the last few months where you get a chance to recite live.
I cringed at first as I have never seen myself recite before but it was a lot of fun doing my poems live
It was the second one I do called
"Got to face the ugly truth" which I do in character about the vagaries of getting old.

I don't know how to upload and open it from Facebook so I just copied the URL I hope you can open it.

https://www.facebook.com/mark.depena/videos/10213956218449290/?t=1
    jlsavell: I loved the video! Your talent shines and the audience had so much fun with you! I could tell. The one about the vagaries of getting old was so funny. You made the audience laugh as you were really into character!

    Fans of Dr Dip, you have to see it! You will close the video feeling great.

    Well to anyone reading this. Watch it. -
    CD Richards: Terrific stuff, Dip. Love the poems, and the delivery was wonderful. Now you've made me want to seek out a place that does open mic nights around here. I know there's at least one, just not sure where it is. Anyway, thanks for sharing. Hope to see more. -
    Ms. Snyder: I enjoyed this thoroughly! Thank you for sharing Dr. - Cheers!! -


DR DIP: MUTING is a MOOT point

There's a mut(e)iny going on
On this ship of fools
Made to walk the plank
For breaking Fanstory rules

Muffled from communication
Stymied from a few
A piss weak explanation
For this personal curfew

Ask the audience or phone a friend
Or you can go fifty/fifty
Like a quiz show you'd commend
If you want to pull a swifty

The mute button's more attractive
Confrontation's just too hard
The action so reactive
An easy solution in this regard





    CD Richards: Hey Dip,

    In my experience, if I mute somebody, or they mute me, it's most likely because I think they are a git, they believe me to be one, or most likely, there is mutual lack of admiration. Should it really bother us that such a person doesn't want our opinion?

    Someone of note once said:

    "If anyone will not welcome you or listen to your words, leave that home or town and shake the dust off your feet."

    Their advice wasn't always bad ;-) -
    Debra White: Amusing poem, Dip 😀
    I never muted anyone and wouldn?t know if anyone muted me!

    CD Richards, love the word ?git?. It isn?t used often enough! 😂 -
    JanPerry: I do so apologise for muting you. If anyone swears at me or gives me harsh or prolonged criticisms, I mute them. The reason being, I lose enthusiasm for writing and cannot think of any or new things to say. I'd given up scripts because of a lengthy critical review. This is my process. Jan Perry. -


DR DIP: MEXICAN JUMPING BEANS WERE THE BIGGEST SELLER ON THE BLACK MARKET THIS JANUARY IN MEXICO.
CLOSELY FOLLOWED BY A HUGE SALE IN LADDERS ACROSS THE COUNTRY
    Jannypan (Jan) : The first comment isn't funny--borders on racist--not you--your comment! Until you live in the US, you really don't get it. -
    DR DIP: fair enough Jan I was just trying to lighten up a very tense and contentious time in your current situation in your country. Yep I'll never get it, believe me the comment was never meant to have racist overtones whatsoever. -
    Six-Star Writer: Give me a break. Duo's comment is in NO way racist. The beans are called Mexican jumping beans because the larvae inside the beans are native to Mexico. I was born and raised in the U.S., and I am not offended by this remark. Nor were any of the Mexican-American friends I knew growing up when these beans were popular. This is simply another example of how a large portion of this country's citizens love to jump on the PC wagon when it is not necessary. -
    Six-Star Writer: Sorry, Dip. I meant Dip. It's hard to get things right when you work for a living g. -
    Six-Star Writer: Don't apologize for what you wrote, Dip. You words were okay. -
    Jannypan (Jan) : My exact words--"borders on racist." Maybe at one time referring to the items was ok. But in this day, attitudes have changed. It is no longer 'funny.'
    -
    Six-Star Writer: It is still funny, as it's nit referring to a people, but a type of larvae. But think what you want. It's a free country. I don't think it's the least bit offensive. If it were an American larvae, and people called them American jumping beans, no one would find fault with that phrase. Its no different with Mexican jumping bean. Now, if someone is using the term in reference to Mexicans who are trying to cross the U.S. American border, than it would be used offensively. If that's what what you're alluding to than I agree with you. -
    Jannypan (Jan) : Of course, that's what is being alluded to. Those people trying to jump the wall! He isn't talking about the 'real' jumping bean. -
    Dean Kuch: He already apologized for his remarks, people.
    Get over it! -
    taurist: Whatever happened to tequila with worms.. yum yum..
    -
    CD Richards: The most ironic thing in this exchange is the use of the phrase "borders on racist". Borders, indeed. -
    Six-Star Writer: Yes, "borders on racist" is a clever play on words, given given the fact that the Mexican/American border situation is so prevalent lately. -
    Six-Star Writer: Yeah, do they still put worms in tequila bottles? They don't jump, though. Because they're wearing little, steal cement shoes that the Mexican mafia put on them. Tequilla is kind of a Hudson river. -


DR DIP: ALWAYS find the the time to read poetry aloud and several times especially rhyming poetry.
It's amazing how easier it is to establish the beat and rhythm of a poem when you can hear your own voice.(no matter how cringe worthy you think your voice sounds)
It also irons out any meter and syllabic count imperfections if read how the author wants it to be read I feel.
Rhyming purists will probably disagree.
This is purely an observation not a command lol
Enjoy 2019 and keep it fun
    Mrs. KT: I totally agree!
    In fact, I believe all poetry should be read aloud...just like all plays should be seen! -
    Tootie: I totally agree with both of you. Thank you so much for sharing this. -
    moonsunrise: I so agree with you. Thanks for sharing. -


DR DIP: Just a consensus: What is everyone's opinion of removing the forum topics of POLITICS and RELIGION completely off the site so there is no possible enticement for anyone to go to them. It just seems to provoke bad and unnecessary blood on a wonderful site.
Just my opinion but as Tom says, there is always the skip button one doesn't HAVE to visit these forum topics.
    Jannypan (Jan) : IF those 2 topics were deleted, then some would find way to still include them in other threads. I have seen threads about these 2 topics in several other main topics of discussion. -
    phill doran: Noooooooooooo. They make for great reading. Troll-feeding, keyboard meltdowning Cyber-Warriors at play in the fields of the Loud. There was an old saying that if you let 10,000 monkeys type endlessly, they would eventually produce King Lear: the FS Religion and Politics Forums have graphically disproved that theory. Comedy Gold.
    Just don't go there if it upsets you... -
    DR DIP: Doesn't upset me in the slightest Phill but some people are very sensitive.
    it was just a consensus -
    nor84: I am definitely for giving those who want to discuss either politics and religion having their own forums to do so. If they do not have those forums, then they will use the forums that are available, and that's where there are arguments and objections. Been here since 2006, so I remember when there was no religious forum. -
    taurist: Agreed and opposing Opinions inspire.. just don't be hateful. -


DR DIP: LET'S MAKE 2019 A MUTE FREE YEAR! LET'S START IT WITH A CLEAN SLATE. There is a MUTE moratorium on at the moment.... everyone hand in there loaded mutes and bullets and start 2019 afresh.
Ok it was just a thought lol


DR DIP: To all my FanStory friends and foes lol. Wishing you all a Merry Christmas from down under.
Let's make 2019 a mute free year haha
dipster
    l.raven: I hope you and your family had a wonderful Christmas Waves...it's going to be the best year yet...love Linda xxoo -


DR DIP: "You cannot comment on this post"....oh how I love this when it comes up lol
    giraffmang: My personal favourite response recently is 'I copied and pasted my last review to not waste time.' -


DR DIP: AWH!! That green is vicious colour Tom! haha I'm sure we'll get used to it over the festive season lol
Have a great Christmas from all of us Fanstorians down under!
I know there are a few of us.
    Susanjohn: ...I like the Christmas lights! :-) -
    damommy: What's wrong with the green???? -
    DR DIP: its a sickly looking green Yvonne
    just my opinion -


DR DIP: "WILL YA STILL NEED ME, WILL YA STILL FEED ME...WHEN I"M ...."
    DR DIP: that's me tomorrow lol -


DR DIP: I read a book once called "don't sweat the small stuff' which basically says to not let those little things get to you in life.
I suppose it is a good attitude to take hey.
Yep, life is one big cliche'

dip


DR DIP: Man, there are some wonderful wordsmiths on this site be them short story writers or poets.
Though I don't get the time to dedicate to this site to review hardly any more I still manage to call in and read some of my favourite poets.
It would be unfair to specifically name them through fear of missing one whose writes really tickle my fancy so to speak.
but they all know I have the deepest respect for their talent as writers and even though I might not comment because of time constraints, I always try to read when I visit.
"Never lose the muse"
dip


DR DIP: I entered two blind contests the other day, one was vertical and the other Venetian, not sure when they're drawn or closed.
Blinds give you that option I suppose.
    CD Richards: You've draped yourself in glory there, Dip. -
    DR DIP: The fabric of your reply is shear genius CD -


DR DIP: I think I'm pregnant
    l.raven: LOL...what's the wife got to say??...LOL..
    what happened on that trip???...goodnight you...love my sweet friend...Linda xxoo -
    damommy: Let me be your agent. We'll be rich!!!! -
    F. Wehr3: Put down that donut, doc. You're just fat, lol. -
    flylikeaneagle: Dr. Dip, you're not pregnant. Maybe, you are getting fuller so you can hibernate for the winter. Animals store fat to keep warm. Maybe, you need another blanket. LOL! flylikeaneagle -


DR DIP: Well, If I have discovered anything in my life on this wonderful place called FanStory, it is to have a thick skin, a very insensitive ego, a sense of humour, patience and tolerance and above all the knowledge that everyone has the diversity of taste and opinion.
Always be yourself and never be backwards in saying what you think. Life is a blessing, bathe in its wonderment, embrace serendipity, be humble in praise and TRY to be accepting in critique be it ever so critical.
Like minded people tend to gravitate toward like minded people, but always keep your mind and attitude open to those so diverse or different from your own ethics,morals, ideals and beliefs.
Life is wonderful...take it in both hands and run with it and have no regrets on decisions made.

dr dip


DR DIP: Oops! We have pompous arsehole in our midst ....beware the smiling assassin.
Everyone put on your thick skin and scoop up your grain of salt.
Just an observation.
    GinnieD: I am brand new to this site and I do not know any members yet. However, I feel this comment is very inappropriate and it is offensive to me. Perhaps I made a mistake in joining what several people had told me was a pleasant community of writers to become associated with. I have never been on a writing site before and looked forward to sharing my writing with others. I was also looking for an enjoyable opportunity. But, if this is the way the members of this site are, and treat one another with this kind of disrespect, I am not sure I made the right decision in joining this site. Now, I am having serious second thoughts. -
    damommy: Ginny, this is a good place to be. The majority of members are very helpful, supportive, and respectful. As in any area of life, there are a few who like to vent their spleen on other's work. Don't let this discourage you. Hang around a while and you'll see what I mean about how nice FS is. -
    DR DIP: ginnie I do apologize. I have been coming to this wonderful site for over 5 years now and have met many wonderful wordsmiths and friends. As Yvonne has said the majority if not all the members who comment and review are always very helpful and supportive.
    Yep please don't let my little venting discourage you my comment in no way reflects me as a person please give this wonderful place a chance to meet some wonderful poets and writers you will not be disappointed in joining

    respectfully dip -
    GinnieD: Dr. Dip, in my opinion the one you should be apologizing to isn't me. It's the one you publicly disparaged with your comment. In my way of thinking, that would truly show you as a person.

    Yvonne, your remark is more inline with what I had heard about this site. Those positive comments were one of the biggest reasons I joined. -
    Brett Matthew West: Ginny, I well may be the one Dr. Dip is referring to as I am in the process of finalizing a book I have been writing for the last two years in which one of the characters is an assassin. If that be the case, I do believe I would not waste my time or breath expecting an apology from him. I would be rather sure one is not forthcoming. In any case, you appear to have a lot to offer FanStory. At least, you come across in that manner. As far as whether you stay or leave this site goes, that is of course your decision. However, as damommy said, this site does have more positive members than negative ones and I would encourage you to remain a member. -
    CD Richards: What I find interesting is that someone who, according to their own admission, hasn't been on the site long enough to know anyone, nevertheless feels confident to take someone to task over their comments. I presume you must know the backstory, or what events might have transpired to provoke Dip's comment. I don't know for certain what it was, but if it is more of what I saw recently from one particular member, I can't say I am surprised. -
    GinnieD: CD Richards, of course I do not know the backstory, nor do I care if there is one or is not. That is not my affair. And yes, I am rather confident to take someone to task when I see something I do not like. As you appear to want to take me to simply because I was brazen enough as a brand new member to speak my mind. I did not like Dr. Dip's comment and said so. I have learned in life that usually, in a situation like this, it always takes two to tango. However, I did not come on this site to get into any altercations with anyone. I have said my piece and made my decision as to whether I will remain a member or not. This kind of in-biting is not what I came on this site for. -
    GinnieD: Furthermore, didn't I read somewhere on this site that personal attacks on another member are not permitted? If Dr. Dip's comment was not a personal attack, perhaps CD Richards, you can explain to me what defines a personal attack according to the rules of this site? That information would be very much appreciated. -
    CD Richards: Perhaps a better idea would be if, before you took Dip to task, you asked him what prompted the comment. You might be surprised. Personally, i don't see that you had any cause to be "offended" by Dip's remark. However, i doubt Dip will appreciate an all-in brawl on his profile, so I'm out. -
    GinnieD: CD Richards, there will be no brawl. But, to set the record straight, what offended me was Dr. Dip referring to any member as a "pompous arsehole" regardless of the situation. Should that comment had been made about you, although I do not know you, I would still have spoken up. What is right is right. If I was the member in question you can bet I would report Dr. Dip for this comment. -
    DR DIP: With the greatest respect Brett, my comment which had no name mentioned whatsoever was certainly not directed or referring to you by any stretch of the imagination any misunderstanding we have ever had has well and truly gone.

    To be honest my comment was written rather tongue in cheek but as an observation I have seen and experienced first hand. I was going in to bat for a few actually.
    Ginny, I totally respect and understand your dislike of my comment and I dearly hope this profile thought has not deterred you from enjoying this wonderful site and the talented wordsmiths you will certainly come across.
    Let's just get on with life now I've said my observation I certainly don't want this to fester.
    It's just not worth losing fanstory friends over.
    I will ask Tom to completely remove this post and if I have any gripes I will in address them cordially and personally in future.
    We obviously haven't got off to a good start sadly.

    CD, I certainly appreciate your understanding and support.

    I have stepped away from Fanstory over recent months due to time constraints to dedicate to this site as much as I would like to.
    Not much more I can say on the matter other than apologize again to you ginny
    And hope you won't judge me on this profile thought

    respectfully dip -
    Brett Matthew West: Dr. Dip, at one time we had a fairly good relationship on FanStory. I do not know if we could ever repair that bridge or not, or if we even want to try to. Because of that, I am confidant your comment was directed at me and CD Richards remarks seemed to affirm that. The unfortunate truth is it would not have been the first one. I agree, in the best interest of peace, we should allow whatever bygones occurred between us to be forgotten. I also appreciate GinnieD for her honest comments even if she is a new member. Have to say she has spunk. I hope she will remain a member. Overall, FanStory does have a lot to offer even if we all do get aggravated with what transpires here sometimes. -
    CD Richards: Well, Dip specifically said his comment was not direct at you, Brett Matthew West, and mine certainly wasn't. Yet you choose to believe they were.

    GinnyD wasn't the target of Dip's comments, yet she chose to be offended by them.

    It is a sign of Dip's reasonableness that he is so quick to apologise, when he has no particular reason to. He was the victim of particularly nasty, unprovoked personal attacks by one other new member, his response was mild.

    It seems to me that for someone who is so desperately keen to avoid confrontation and conflict, someone sure jumped quickly into the fray. There, I know that's an extra comment, but I assume it will be disappearing soon anyway. -
    Mrs. KT: Bottom line:

    Writers, Unite!
    "Arseholes" take flight!

    :)
    -
    DR DIP: now THAT mrs K, is how I should have written it!...in rhyme of course! let's all laugh out loud now and enjoy the site again -
    Dean Kuch: I myself am a badge carrying member of the Pompous Arseholes of America and quite proud of it, heh-heh.
    C'mon, y'all...
    We've got writing to do!

    ~Dean
    -
    Susanjohn: Deano that baby video is too funny! Dip dip dip... you need a hug. Ginny, we are quite a unique writing community with lots of personalities! That's ok. :-) Some people you will agree with, others you wont. The majority here treat one another with kindness and respect. :-) Let's all get back to writing as Dean suggests. ( Dean you start with a love poem ;-) -
    Dean Kuch: Okay, Susan.
    The gauntlet has been thrown and I am up for the challenge.
    Or am I?
    A love poem, you say?
    Jumpin' jeezus on a painted palomino pony. Here goes nothin'...

    ~ Because I Love You So ~

    photo 546ff57bb3d96c6889b8b126960984ae1_zpsperh2xun.gif

    Feel my touch upon your cheek,
    find the true love that you seek,
    be strong now instead of weak?
    just know I love you so.


    All through life I?ve loved you so.
    Now, my sweet, it?s time to go.
    I?ll return one day, you know?
    because I love you so.


    Never waste one single day
    shedding tears for me, I pray.
    Live your life, but come what may--
    just know I love you so.


    Do whatever you must do
    to find a love that?s warm and true.
    I?ll be right there next to you--
    because I love you so.
    -
    Susanjohn: Ahhhh Dean!
    May the words you whisper, reach the heart that hears.
    You get a hug for writing this little heart-tugging piece! It is such a honor to read your work! Thanks Dean :-) -


DR DIP: Today is the 17th anniversary of 9/11.
Let us all take the time to reflect on such a catastrophe
That one day indelibly marked in history a shocking
example of terrorism and took it to the worst peace time human atrocity
in modern history in the western world.
it changed the lives of every American and the free and democratic nation worldwide.
Nothing said or written could bring those people back. A few thousand Innocent office workers, 300 fireman and a myriad or heartbroken love ones.
The scene was surreal.
I remember driving home on afternoon shift After hearing of the first building being hit. By the time I had gone home and woke my wife we turned on the television to a second plane hitting the other trade centre of the twin towers.
Could not believe when they came down.
It still is so surreal when you watch that footage 17 years later.

RIP To those lost in this tragedy

dip
    DR DIP: in Australia its the 11th September
    -


DR DIP: Really struggling here with 'LOL' withdrawal syndrome"...haven't said 'lol'..for hours...so proud of myself


DR DIP: What's going on with so many 'revived posts' lately?
    trimple: I revived a couple myself a short while ago. I was suffering a nasty bout of writer's blockage and I thought it might get me back to the site and get those wordy juices flowing again.

    And it has!

    :) -
    DR DIP: That's sweet Trimple. Can't recall having to revive a post but if it gives one's muse back well its got to be a good thing hey.

    Phill, I've asked many things twice on this site but don't ever remember asking that question.
    Maybe I should keep a diary of the questions I ask? lol -


DR DIP: When subtle touches indicate intent,
the mood will start to motivate the hips,
and slowly heightened senses will torment,
and moisten deeply inside tender lips.

"Sweet embrace" by Dolly

One beautiful verse


DR DIP: I have been coming here for over 5 years now. I live In Australia in Sydney so at the time of writing AEST is 1745hrs friday night
where is Fanstory headquarters situated again?
West or east coast of America.
I notice it is 3;45 am on this site that puts us 9 hrs behind but a day in front.
I cannot add new posts until 1500 hrs AEST so I assume that equates to 12 midnight in Fanstory headquarters
So what is the town in America where Fanstory headquarters is again? Just curious
    Dean Kuch: FanStory.com
    PO Box 332
    Ocean Grove, New Jersey
    07756.
    It's on the East coast, Mark.
    Eastern Daylight Time.
    It's 7:08AM at the time of this posting -
    Ideasaregems-Dawn: Apparently you insist that I must mute you to keep you from writing in the forum (or on my page) that I am "a professional victim". This time you even suggested that I write a book called The Professional Victim etc. Tom Ens is well aware of the problems I have had on this site, including PDFs that don't download properly, many pieces missing, or posting too many times, etc. I have nothing to hide, and no hidden agenda, and he's tried to be helpful.

    My common-law husband of 28 years says I should just ignore you. I say that repeatedly harassing a 66 year old woman illustrates that there is obviously something wrong with you - there's something about ME that makes you keep coming back, even though I completely ignore you, and have done for months. It's not your business, so why else would you write the same thing over and over? (You're like a little boy in grade school pulling on a girl's pigtail.)

    Putting an "lol" with what you write doesn't make it any less insulting, or any less a personal attack (which is against site rules anyway). It just makes you appear pathetically weak. I'm not the first member to have told you so either - probably just the first WOMAN. B Mathews said exactly the same thing the last time you called me a "professional victim", and he's not even someone who is on my fan list of over 500.

    So let me stress, once and for all, I am not interested in anything to do with you. I think you hide behind "lol", pretending to be this "nice guy", this "funny guy" when you're really bullying people. I'm sorry for you. -
    DR DIP: just read your little comments dawn. I feel sad that it has come to this but hey one cannot change ones opinion or assessment of another.
    The expression, professional Victim was not said in any malice but merely an expression we use in Oz for someone who seems to have such a run of bad luck. I am sorry if it offended. In future I will not be making any comment on here that can be misconstrued

    respectfully dip -


DR DIP: THE MANUFACTURER MAKES IT
THE SELLER SELLS IT
THE BUYER BUYS IT
BUT THE USER NEVER SEES IT

what is it?
    Mike Stevens: My guess makes NO fricking sense, unless it had said, 'The user never sees hair! -


DR DIP: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TODAY TO THE (stephen)KING OF HORROR..MR DEAN 'KUCHO' KUCH have a great scary day mate

dipster
    Dean Kuch: Hey...
    Thanks a million, cob!
    YOU ROCK!

    ~Deano -


DR DIP: I suppose the last few months has been a really good test on whether people read someone's poetry because they generally like it or because it has been heavily promoted and they only see the dollar value in reviewing.
I have not reviewed in recent months because I just physically haven't the time to dedicate that many hours to this wonderful site and feel fair about reviewing equally.
BUT, on saying this, on my fleeting visits these days, when I do have time to review I tend to reciprocate reviews to those that who still consistently review my humble writes be them only worth 2 cents to them and un promoted.
To those loyal fanstory friends I am forever grateful and when I get the time away from my current projects and resume to review I know who I will be reviewing first not only because I like their poetry and tend to gravitate toward reading and reviewing theirs but knowing they read ones work because they genuinely like it not because of chasing member dollars.

On saying this, let me say again, I really admire those that can find the HOURS to review and promote.... Kudos to you.

respectively and appreciatively dip


DR DIP: A HANDSHAKE THAT COULD CHANGE THE FUTURE OF WORLD PEACE?...Time will tell
    DR DIP: the main subject will be discussing the barbers they go to
    -


DR DIP: Little johnny is sitting at the dinner table with his young sister, Suzie and their Dad.
Mum has prepared dinner and tonight it is something special she has never served before.....It's venison
Suzie looks at her plate puzzled as it is served and says to Dad.
"dad what's this?"
Dad looks at Suzie and smiles and says
"Well Suzie, I'll give you a hint..."It's something your Mother calls me everyday"
Little Johnny, somewhat alarmed at this statement quickly interjects and says to Suzie....

"SUZIE! DON'T EAT IT, IT'S ARSEHOLE!"


DR DIP: "Every whisper
Of every waking hour
I'm choosing my confessions
Trying to keep an eye on you
Like a hurt lost and blinded fool, fool
Oh no, I've said too much
I set it up"

REM ... losing my religion


DR DIP: You have your reasons I've been muted
Petty reasons I've refuted
Well now that I've been executed
I still sit and wonder why

Should have been here in the clique
Guess I wasn't very quick
Suppose my wounds I have to lick
I say this with a sigh

Been on here for 5 years now
Fellow Fanstorians take a bow
Don't take me serious, don't have a cow
If your ego has been dented

Fanstory is a lot of fun
Even when you're on the run
Full of banter and a bit of pun
Not something I've resented

Love to call in when there's time
Dropping in my simple rhyme
Rhyming verse is not a crime
And have different pronunciation

So I'll continue to post right here
Just those times when I am near
But getting muted is not very clear
You've caught my fascination

Suppose we are all shapes and sizes
Sometimes we make some compromises
And rate other's work in what comprises
A truthful explanation

Keep them coming and keep them strong
Write them like you should belong
Let others tell you right from wrong
About your written creation

dip








DR DIP: In the nearly 5 years of coming to Fanstory, I have and had met many amazing people/wordsmiths who I have actually become friends with outside of Fanstory. I suppose that's what it's all about hey, meeting people with a common passion.
To those loyal fanstory friends who still go to the trouble to review my un promoted work I am very grateful
I don't post so prolifically anymore but still like to call in and read my fanstory friends' writes.
Unfortunately, I just don't have the time to review at the moment but will endeavour to get back to reviewing in due course.

Keep writing

dip
    l.raven: Hi Waves, FanStory is not a life...and a lot who finally get their books written leave...you do the important things you need to do done...I fall off and on myself...but I do love reading the posts on here...some wonderful people...you are one...and some wonderful writings...poetry...your doing fine...now keep that smile on your face...just take care...love Linda xxoo -
    DR DIP: It's a pity that we all come "slaves to the system" It got to the point where I was feeling guilty for not posting or reviewing.
    Sometimes time must be spread across all passions. -
    flylikeaneagle: Dr. Dip: We had ten inches of white powder snow on Saturday. Some of us have to shovel, do chores, and cook. Yes, I'm flying in to say hi. I've seen some robins and heard some birds sing. So...I'm inspired! flylikeaneagle -


DR DIP: Is getting muted the same as getting one's poetic balls cut off? lol
    closetpoetjester: Are you missing your poetic gonads, dip? haha now THAT is a poetic vision indeed!
    Pxx -
    DR DIP: I am a Fanstory Unich! lol
    -
    Dean Kuch: Yes.
    It's even worse when you aren't told why you were muted. -


DR DIP: To those wonderful Fanstorian friends who continue to go to the trouble of reviewing my sporadic, fleeting posts these days I really do appreciate it and I deeply apologize again that I am not reciprocating reviews in kind of your wonderful writes.
Sadly I just don't have the time at the moment to fairly put in the hours anymore on reviewing everyone equally with the thoroughness you all deserve.
After I finish my present commitments I will endeavour to make the time to everyone review again.

Sincerely Dip


DR DIP: Missing that little touch of ghoul and horror already.
Hurry back Deano


DR DIP: Tom thanks for removing my profile thought I suppose the word 'bullshit' was a bit to harsh for some sensitive egos and that might have offended I apologize..I spend for whole life doing that lol
    F. Wehr3: You do realize there are children on this site as well, don't you? -
    DR DIP: yeah I apologize you won't have to worry about that anymore -
    F. Wehr3: I doesn't offend me, and you can put whatever expletive you want in your thoughts. I would only ask that you consider it in further posts. The reason Tom removed the post would most likely be the argument between the three of you this morning. Getting personal with another member is not allowed. Just FYI. -
    DR DIP: I never saw the comments F. I was fast asleep down under and by morning it was gone.
    As I said you won't have to worry about me any more. -
    Dean Kuch: It was I who opened my big mouth, dipster.
    But, hey, last time I checked this is still a free country. -


DR DIP: It's sad but I am getting tired. I am struggling with motivation.
I have made many great friends on Fanstory and read many great poems from many talented poets. I just can't keep up with reviewing any more and get so caught behind.
I feel like I am a slave to the system sometimes.
It is a great place to store and archive my poems.
If I miss reviewing you I apologise I just have to review reciprocal reviewers. I think I'll be winding down.
Seriously I cannot see the advantage in posting two poems per night any more.
I don't chase rankings and never have.
If anyone who likes my poetry for what it is I really haven't the time to promote them anymore. and I think it totally unfair that I expect people to review my simple rhyme if I cannot return the favour.
I have been here for four and half years now and have posted over 3700 poems in that time.
I have been forever grateful for your support over this period.
I'll just see how things pan out with other things in my life.
I don't think I have actually sat with my wife at night and simply watch telly with her. I've let Fanstory become an obsession I'm afraid I cannot stay up to all hours of the morning reviewing anymore. So if I post its purely to store my poems.

love dip
    Brett Matthew West: The problem with the last sentence, "So if I post its purely to store my poems" is that once something is posted it goes to whatever fans there are. The only way they can clear the posting off their account is to review it. What happens at that point is up to the writer as far as whether they reply to the review or not. The only known way around this situation is not to post at all. -
    DR DIP: That's total bullshit Brett. If you don't want to read something irrespective if you are a fan or not you just don't bother opening it and why should you give a shit? Or am I giving you a condescending, snide comment again?
    If I want to store my poems on here I will I have paid for the privilege just mute me and that will save all your problems

    love dip -
    Dean Kuch: Don't let him get to you, Doc.
    Just ignore him.
    I do. -
    Jannypan (Jan) : Dr Dip,
    Go ahead post as you will when you have time. Don't mind what others think. Don't let them make up your mind to leave, stay, write, or not. You can go to your list of fans & mark 'stop getting notifications'. You will keep your fans just not get THEIR messages in your inbox. Everyone has their own style of writing. Don't apologize for yours. I hate to see people [fans] leave. Maybe aim for 2 posts per week. Jan -
    mrsmajor: dip, don't let anyone change you...don't let ANYONE! do that...Post when you can, and those that enjoy your work will always read what you write...be who you're always...don't leave those of us that enjoy your work...write whenever you can... Victoria -
    kiwigirl2821: Hi Mark. Look no matter where you are those of us who are your friends will know and still enjoy who you are and what you contribute.

    The other thing is I will almost guarantee you that your wife will LOVE spending a few evenings with her and not FS. You are awesome mate, don't let this kind of thing rule you. Just do what you need to do. Promise to still respect you in the morning! xx d -


DR DIP: What if there were 30 hours in a day?
Would you spend any more time reviewing on Fanstory? lol

tired dip
goodnight from 'down under' it's 2 am in the morning down here!
    flylikeaneagle: I would have more time to sleep...zzz.
    flylikeaneagle - nancy -


DR DIP: "That'll do Pig..that'll do"...from the movie, BABE


DR DIP: THERE ARE NO RULES IN POETRY...just people who want to make them!

Rebel dip
    Dean Kuch: It's always been about expressing yourself in a way that is uniquely you, hasn't it?
    That's what I thought...

    ~Deano -
    DR DIP: well I certainly THOUGHT that when I discovered the passion to write lol -
    mrsmajor: dip, I've been writing using my own voice all the time...and I enjoy it...some like what I write, and some do not...but when you change your voice to suit anyone, you have lost yourself...Hugs, -


DR DIP: OH I been muted! woopiddy do
Well executed I think I know who
Must have been something I said
That's pretty mean have you got any cred?

I've been muted for a chicken shit reason
Wasn't disputed but it wasn't too pleasin
Seems to me it's about egos so sensitive
It's hard to see if its a fanstory representative

I've been muted! Naughty old me
I'm such a nice guy, how can this be?(lol)
Plenty of fish in this FanStory sea
I'm not too selfish, my mutes are for free!
    Dean Kuch: Yeah, Dipster.
    I know exactly how you feel, mate.
    Reaper Dean photo signature_4 dean_zpsv4lktq2i.gif -
    mrsmajor: Once people allow their ego to take over, that's when we see a lot of negativity...dip, your writing is welcomed by those that appreciate you...that's all that counts...personally there a few that read my work, and I'm pleased with that...its all about their ego for some here... -
    Susanjohn: Mute you!?? and miss out on all the fun?? Their loss. -


DR DIP: To celebrate the start of the new year and the obvious rankings chase there has been an inundation of posts. Personally, I will endeavour to review everyone of you but I am sorry if I don't get to you straight away. At the moment my priorities will have to be those who go to the trouble consistently reviewing my poetry and reciprocate my reviews of their wonderful works.
To all poets and writers and newcomers in 2018 may I wish you all the best in your endeavours.
Remember it's the passion to write not the result. Never lose the passion.
If people like your writes they will follow your work even if not promoted above 2 cents.
I read people's poetry on this site because I like their style and subject matter not their promoted dollar value. I would like to think that that is the reasons others read mine too.


DR DIP: Congratulations to all top 5 trophy winners in all categories great effort. and well deserved

dip


DR DIP: HEY! fellow fanstorians and Fanstory friends I have made throughout the year Its New years eve day in Australia its 6: 30 am Sunday morning.
May I wish you all a very happy New year and wonderful and very fruitful 2018
Cya in the new Year

xxdip
    l.raven: HI Waves, it's about 6:15pm Sunday night here...and we are still waiting...and yes we made another year...A very Happy New Year to you my friend...I'm trying to post...but the grandkids are driving me crazy....LOL...so it will have to wait...LOL...time for dinner...have a wonderful evening...you and the misses...God Bless...love Linda xxoo -


DR DIP: To all out there in wonderful fanstory land Hope you have a Merry Christmas. I am so grateful for all who supported and reviewed my humble but heartfelt writes throughout the year and may 2018 bring us all much Joy as did 2018
For those that have lost loved ones throughout 2017 my heart goes out to you.

sincerely Dip
    mrsmajor: Thanks, dip, for those kind words, your work has been a pleasure for me, and I wish you all the best in 2018... -
    closetpoetjester: Hope you had a great Chrissy dip...have a great New Year and congrats on finishing in the top 10. -


DR DIP: I really hate the expression 'fluff reviews".
The fact that someone has gone to the time and trouble to review one's work is great effort within itself.
We have over 400 plus supposedly active writers on FanStory so there are a lot of posts to read.
Sometimes small poems such as haiku and 2-4-2 and 4 line poems make it hard to reach the minimum words that are allowed as a review. Obviously there are many methods and techniques used by reviewers to reach that minimum allowable word count for short writes:
Repeating/ rewriting the verse in your comments
Summarizing the read with other words meaning the same thing
Embellishing with big metaphorical words
Explain to the author what poetic techniques have been used

There is only so much one can say on poems with 3 lines
no matter how hard one tries
Please don't be offended with reviews and reviewers that might use these techniques to 'fatten' or lengthen the review.
Everyone tries very hard to give credible reviews with all works but sometimes it is hard to reach the minimum allowable limit of text.

Have a great Christmas
    Dean Kuch: If you do a bit of research there's a LOT of things you can address where haiku and many other short forms are concerned.

    You can mention how well lines one and two grammatically connect.

    You can mention the syllabic count and how Japanese "onji" and English syllables are nothing alike.

    You can address the kigo, or seasonal reference, the satori, or that 'Ah-ha!' line of enlightenment (and what it meant to you), which usually comes in the last line.

    You can discuss similar spiritual experiences in nature you've had.
    You're a surfer, right? Surely you've had a few.

    So, I respectfully agree to disgreee with you, dipster. You simply do not care for the form and choose not to do your research.
    That's fine, not everyone enjoys or understands haiku.
    Just, please, don't try to sugar coat your dislike. Phyllis Stewart certainly doesn't,
    We who write haiku can take it, heh-heh.
    photo birds - 2Ytsh-105 - normal_zpsnexhvbpq.gif
    -
    DR DIP: ooh I hit a nerve Dean and maybe I shouldn't have used haiku as an example and just stuck to other 3 line and one line poems.

    I haven't a dislike for haiku at all on the contrary I find some quite skilful as I had become more accustomed to the form
    Admittedly I am not a big fan of it on the whole just like I'm not a big fan of several other forms of poetry and yes if one has a format of tick boxes for reviewing haiku you can fill the space.
    My point was, sometimes it's hard to write a review of a very short poem to fill the minimum word requirement that was my whole point of the post.
    As for the topic of fluff reviews I was trying to reason why some may appear like that.
    I am sure you have been in a position where you were struggling to fill the required comment word count lets be honest.
    There is no need to go all defensive about the fact I mentioned haiku and yes I would admit I haven't studied the form and admit I am ignorant of the reviewing points you brought up I am sure you will not be the only one who disagrees with me about reviewing short works that is a given and I totally accept that
    Lets agree to disagree like I said just remove the sugar coating bit.
    who is Phyllis Stewart pardon my ignorance
    respectfully dip -
    Brett Matthew West: Can somebody out there in FanStory Land tell me who the very wise man was who once said something along the lines of "Zip thy lips. Misinformation can come back to haunt a person." I found this the other day online, and would like to include the quote in something I am writing, but can't remember who the person was. Of course, when you do that, one needs to also attribute the quote to its rightful owner. -
    Jannypan (Jan) : Well said. I agree, Dr D.

    With FS being an international site, one never knows the level
    of ability of the reviewers. To condemn a review & call it 'fluff' is unacceptable.

    Everyone needs to be more accepting of others' reviews. Only if they are
    attacking or written as a revenge should one be upset & take action.

    To those who desire 'perfect' reviews, it ain't gonna happen here. Not all on this site are 'professional' writers. If one desires those kind of reviews that professional writers produce, then look elsewhere--maybe your editor. Congratulations if you have an editor. If so, then maybe
    you can respect that ALL had to start somewhere--yes, even you!

    As the song goes, "Don't worry, be happy."

    -
    giraffmang: Fluff reviews do exist. They are different from supportive, positive, or padded reviews. -
    Jannypan (Jan) : Yes, I know 'fluff' reviews exist. I am speaking of those who really try.

    -
    closetpoetjester: I agree with the G...fluff is definitely way different to padding.
    Padding is bulk
    Fluff is light and airy and well...nuff said hahaha -
    DR DIP: I think you might find that wise man on google Brett or ask the question on the forum I'm sure someone will know

    Helpfully dip
    -
    Tier V. King: Yes, I believe you are all right. DIP, I do agree with you though. It does take a lot of effort to write some of these reviews. Sometimes I review for seven hours a night but it's not always easy to find something to say about some of the poetry. We must use 150 characters for each review and sometimes I find myself at a loss for words. I do believe also that we should avoid being rude. I also believe that we should stay polite and helpful.

    I usually try to find something in the post that I could relate to and then I go from there. If I cannot find something nice to say or if I can not say enough, then I just skip the post completely and move on to the next.

    When I encounter a rude reviewer or one who wants to argue, I may respond or I may not but either way I will not review their work anymore and I ask them nicely "Please do not review my work." Some of the reviews do feel like an attack and it's hard to ignore that kind of (excuse me but yes I will call it) abuse. -


DR DIP: Just to clarify when reviewing. As we are all aware there are some pretty sensitive egos on this site who don't take too kindly to unfavourable comment or suggestion about their work no matter how valid your point may be and promptly want to mute you.
Let's clarify again and I am not being condescending. Some rhyming words in different countries phonetically work depending on pronunciation and accent.
I think we all must accept this fact and appreciate different rhyming words that totally don't phonetically rhyme in another country.
Just sayin

Have a very happy Christmas all my fellow fanstorians

dip
    Brett Matthew West: Some times it is snide comments and cheap shots that create these types of issues. Every story has two sides. Both of which should be told, not just one. If you would consult Daniel's famous book believe you would discover that the word is spelled s-a-y-I-n-g. Just saying. -
    Amy Rowell: I believe comments should be nice, friendly and helpful. There is no room for rude. Someone left me a review that was so rude I felt under attack. All other comments have been very helpful. And you are correct! Words have different meaning depending where you live. -
    DR DIP: Brett with respect please read my private message -
    mrsmajor: I learned long ago, about the different spelling, syllable counts, and even meaning...can be different... and I don't think anyone should demand that any specific country's work be questioned...I have seen it, and it can often be explained if one checks the writers profile..and see where they came from...it can also add to one's own knowledge and that's always a good thing... -


DR DIP: Do you know what? I am sure a Fanstorian wishes there were more hours in the day! lol
A FanStorian's work is never done
It's so hard pleasing everyone
Forget about being number one
Just enjoy and have some fun

Post' s and reviews and posts again
critical retorts from those who complain
Sometimes you wonder is it worth the pain
On your parade there's always rain

But still we all here soldier on
knowing that the day has gone
reading works of those who've shone
A wonderful place when you feel forlorn

The life of a fanstorian is never dull
There are so many reviews to cull
Make decisions there on the whole
Trying not to be an arsehole

This is the beauty of this place
You can never be in disgrace
Critical acclaim we all will face
I'm just writing words to fill this space

dipshit


DR DIP: Can you believe it? there is only 18 days to Christmas! this year has gone so fast.




DR DIP: I really don't like 'cut and paste' reviews or replies.. just a simple 'thankyou' would mean more to me.

dip
    rama devi: I know some people think I cut and paste replies, but I actually type them out fresh each time - and mean each word each time, too. Some of use just have ways of expressing our thanks that resonate with us. Some do cut and paste, true...but on occasion there are decent reasons for doing so (health issues, or time issue - for example, if someone is a caretaking for the sick or elderly and cannot spare extra time and energy. Just some thoughts on the matter... :) -
    CD Richards: Dr Dip,

    I have read your comments, and have found them to contain words. Best of luck in the contest! -


DR DIP: 63 today! 7 years off 70! Now I feel old lol
    mrsmajor: A big Happy Birthday, dip, enjoy yourself, I'm more than 20 years older than you are, but I still look forward to getting "Older"...lol -
    MissMerri: A very happy birthday DR DIP! You are far from old. I just learned you have a book out. If there are only four left, I think it's time for a reprinting, don't you? MM -
    damommy: I don't know how I missed your birthday. I hope you had a great one.

    What do you mean old at 63? I'm 74 and I don't feel old. lol -


DR DIP: If I haven't reviewed your work lately and I am a fan of yours or you of me I have 15 days of messages to catch up on and 28 poems I missed posting
Please bear with me, I only got back from my holiday yesterday after 2 weeks


DR DIP: I am currently on a surfing holiday in the middle of the Indian Ocean where the internet is hit and miss Thus I won't be posting much at all or reviewing for 10 days

dip
    closetpoetjester: Good move dip. You need to be catching waves not words LOL
    Enjoy your break!
    P -
    robyn corum: haha! What a horrible problem to have! Have fun! -
    Poetic Friend: I was wondering where you were. Have fun, my friend! -
    Tier V. King: I think you did tell me this in one of your responses to one of my reviews. I missed you so I decided to come to your portfolio to check. I was so happy to see that you did leave this note.

    Have fun, enjoy yourself. You deserve it. We all know you will make up for lost time when you return.

    I will look forward to your pictures and poetry about your surfing adventures. Much love... -


DR DIP: I am going away for 10 days on surfing trip in the middle of the Indian ocean on a group of islands that more than likely will have no internet access. So I will not be able to post each day for 10 days or more.
For those who enjoy my posts and go to the trouble to review them, I am always grateful
xdip
    mrsmajor: We'll surely miss you, dip, but have a wonderful and safe trip...I bet you'll have many poems to post about your trip...be looking forward to your return...stay well! -
    DR DIP: thank you all I'll get to post today at least lol -


DR DIP: I don't want to flog a dead horse and I have heard all the arguments against doing this but I am going to say it again.
On a site that has over a thousand members and 435 of them being supposedly active members.
Surely in a week of reviewing there is in one's eyes, more than 6 exceptional poems.
Yeah I have heard the argument you have to be more picky with who you award your 6's to. But personally I read more than 6 exceptional poems in a week and feel guilty later in the scoring week where I cannot award a justifiable 6 and this happens consistently every week.
The argument is do those given a six deserve it.?
You have to ask the question what is your benchmark for
an'exceptional' rating in one's eyes. The vast majority of fanstorians are purely fun loving amateurs with a passion to write they are not seasoned professionals so in this light, giving a 6 star rating in the broad context of what fanstory is all about
is not overly exorbitant.
Just my opinion..what's yours?
    mrsmajor: The question becomes what works are worthy of the 6 stars...and what bothers me most is this: if a poem meets the requirements, according to the site standard shown, and more!! with meaningful thoughts, messages, and I am totally impressed with all of that...why must I be limited to just the 6 in a week if more than that number deserves such a rating....Franky, I think its a insult to the writers to have some beautiful work ignored simply because one is not allowed to rate Exceptional as often as they wish...there are some writers that use difficult forms, and do so well, with messages, themes, that are so appropriate for this day and age...and to rate 5 stars is just not enough...

    I don't know the answer, but I do feel that there is enough work presented here that does deserve the top rating, in my estimation, and who is to tell me it is not...whose opinion counts, and whose doesn't...is mine as meaningful as some others, who decides that. -
    Dean Kuch: Allow the top 25 reviewers to have ten stars
    Allow 26-50 to have seven
    Everyone else remains at six, as is.
    This not only creates incentive to be a more active reviewer, it also alleviates the lack of a sufficient amount of sixes for the top 50 reviewers.
    -
    Jannypan (Jan) : To Dean,
    Many reviewers NEVER reach the top reviewers place. So to allow them those extra stars will just keep them there since no one else will be able to attain that level over them. I know I have written decent reviews & NEVER receive many nominations--which is ok. But I see your idea as a way to keep only those already there in place with no chance of others reaching that level. Also some reviewers review for quantity rather than quality. So how would your idea stop that?
    But I do agree that more than 6 stars per reviewer is needed. -
    closetpoetjester: If more than six sixers are allowed to be awarded, it could well diminish the rating of OUTSTANDING.
    Dip, you just need to hang on to them a bit longer and be very select about who you award them to...see? NOW they're special haha
    -
    closetpoetjester: BTW If the horse was any more flogged it would be c...ah never mind LOL -
    fluffnstuff: Ya, and while we are bitching...it just infuriates me when we don't have enough words in the comment section and have to go back to say more. Does anyone else get peeved at that? How does one change or adjust these things?? Fluff -


DR DIP: FanStory and life have one thing in common... They are both one big learning curve.


DR DIP: This is just a profile thought
Before all my dreams add up to naught
Meeting others is the buzz to me
Showing others what they can't see

In your head and in your minds
Profile thoughts always reminds
Me of a place to pour out your heart
When you think your world's apart

So come on here and spread your love
Share you thoughts of what you're thinking of
We are a family with the same aspiration
To write down those thoughts with inspiration
    closetpoetjester: You are writing poetry on your profile page again dip.
    You will have Tommy doing a back flip haha
    Nothin' like stickin' it to the man LOL -


DR DIP: When talking about the old pesky foot of a rhyming verse. is it spelled 'meter' or 'metre'?
I have just read the answer in the dictionary Metre is the correct term in poetry though it can be spelled meter in America.
    Jannypan (Jan) : Of course it matters what dictionary you choose, what country you live in, & how you learned it in school. You can always add a note in your author notes about words that may cause confusion in spelling [or rhyme]. -


DR DIP: I WAS THINKING OF STANDING SIDEWAYS......but it was just another profile thought
    closetpoetjester: Well I believe it's permissable so long as nothing is sticking out too far.

    Keep it clean, I mean the nose, duh! -


DR DIP: This time that comes up on these posts represents Fanstory headquarters time in America I am in Australia and it appears you are 8 hrs ahead and a day behind on the west coast of the US where is fanstory headquarters again?
    DR DIP: actually 10 hrs ahead
    -
    DR DIP: but where is fanstory located exactly america is a pretty wide country so the longitude of stand american time is quite different from the east to the west coast. its more to do with time difference for when i'm posting or can post which is 3pm AEST (australia) relative to fanstory headquarter time which is where? -


DR DIP: TIME TO WAKE UP AND GET OUT OF BED AMERICA!
Its 1230 am in Sydney Town


DR DIP: Don't you reckon the word 'stink' has a certain smell about it?
    mrsmajor: Yep, it seems to have a special odor... -
    DR DIP: I stink you're right! -
    closetpoetjester: Nup. It's "stench" for me. Still, been with the other half a long funken time haha -


DR DIP: I would dearly love to be able to post more than 2 poems a night
but totally understand the reason Tom doesn't allow it for pesky, prolific posters that hog the fanstory airwaves lol
    Jannypan (Jan) : Who you callin' pesky, prolific posters? The posting police know where you live! -
    DR DIP: hehe I was obviously referring to myself only anyone else is just feeling guilty lol -
    nor84: So post 4. Post two before midnight Eastern, and two more after midnight. -
    DR DIP: doesn't work that way Nor
    you can only post 2 every 24 hr period
    In Australia it's 2pm AEST.
    and not a minute before
    believe me I have been posting 2 for 4 years lol
    -


DR DIP: I don't care what anyone says we need to have access to more than six sixes. We start with a new week and see many exceptional poems and we have to hold off with awarding a 6 just in case we read one that deserves it better later in the week
I would love to have a consensus whether anyone agrees.
I think my argument is a sound one.

dip
    michaelcahill: EVERYONE agrees, Dip. Convincing Tom is the rub. I think the drawback is that some of us don't review as much as others. So you end up having folks who review six poems a week, all sixes. If we had ten, then they'd review ten, all sixes.

    The best idea I've heard of was Brooke Baldwin's ... award sixes based on the number of reviews. The more you review the more sixes you get. Of course, that might cause a bunch of lame reviews. But nothings perfect, we already have people doing that to rack up fake money.

    HA! Were you looking for "yes" or "no". LOL -
    DR DIP: Michael there is no definitive solution to this I know whatever you do someone will cry unfair.
    The ratings system needs an overall because it has become a source of paranoia
    no one dares to give below a 5 because then it will just go tit for tat
    I don't really know what the solution is. As I have said before, we are slaves to the system.
    I love this site but it sucks you in and consumes you whole. There's not enough hours in the day without sacrificing other interests. -
    Mustang Patty: I'm with you, dip. As Michael says, we all are. I've had my share of 'virtual' sixes, as has everyone else.

    Who knows? Maybe, January 1st will bring something new?
    (ever hopeful)

    -
    giraffmang: Not everyone agrees. I disagree. Until the system is used properly, the change would be pointless. I've seen a lot of sixes given out for poorly formatted, badly punctuated pieces, full of spags and not meeting contest requirements. there is no quality control and people see things differently. there will always be a glut of people rewarding each other. If an accumulation thing, it means more rewards for more reviews and that will generally mean it based on volume, not quality which short of defies the purpose of being given more six stars to play around with.

    Also, where do you draw the line 10, 20, more. The issue will still be the same and the chance to manipulate things even more prevalent.

    it would better to encourage people to use the rating system properly and this would be more beneficial than increased gold.

    I, for one, don't worry about the 'tit for tat' of reviewing although I have been hit by it recently in a roundabout way, but that's the chance you take for having integrity. I can live with that. -
    michaelcahill: That's true as well, Gman. I doubt the system will ever be used properly though whatever it is. There's too diverse a group and there will always be people like you describe whether we are a large group or small. I know where to go for REAL advice or help and any serious writer here can find out quick enough. That aside, I like to be able to reward excellence even if it means others might at the same time honour mediocrity ... they already do, as you point out. :)) -
    closetpoetjester: While there's a system based on monetary reward the majority of reviews will be fluff and the star system skewed. The good poets know who they are. The crap ones quite simply don't because most are too polite to give constructive crit. I'm with G-Man...use the current system properly and don't give out your darn sixes so quick dipster.
    I'm sure most writers here appreciate the feedback more than the stars. -
    Dean Kuch: The stickler here, at least according to Gareth, is that sixes are awarded too nonchalantly for sub-par work. Is that about the gist of your argument, Gareth?

    So, if that were in fact true, it would do no good for those who review more to have more.
    Here's my proposal.
    Allow the sixes we retain at the end of the week to be rolled over into the following week. That might encourage less sixes being awarded.
    In other words if someone only awards four sixes on any given week the two they have remaining will be added to their total for the following week. They would then have eight available.
    If they use just five of those eight, the remaining three will be rolled over and they'll have nine ... and so on.

    As it is now if we don't use them we lose them.
    photo monkey-381_zpsrmbfehiu.gif
    ~Dean -
    kiwigirl2821: I rather like Dean's approach and P's too. I am stingy with my sixes but, lately the writing has been truly exceptional and I feel like I want to give out the sixes. Seems like the writing is much better than it used to be that's for sure. -


DR DIP:
I have been asked several times why I post so much. I have no agenda or reason other than I love to write everyday and I just love to share my thoughts and feelings whether it be about love and romance or my love of my hometown, the ocean or family.
I cannot always afford to promote my work past 32 cent value So I am forever grateful to those that still enjoy reading my humble works when still only 2 cents. It tells me you purely enjoy reading my words which I am forever grateful.

respectfully and sincerely Dip
    Jannypan (Jan) : Dr D,
    Write as much as you wish. You do not have to defend your actions here to anyone. I would like to see writers having more than 2 posts in a 24 hour period. -
    Amy Rowell: I especially like, Hope's Shining Light" -


DR DIP: I so want to give more than 6 sixes in the rating review week but alas there are so many wonderful poets That I run out of 6's very quickly.

What reason can there be why we can't have more to offer our fellow Fanstorians They deserve this incentive.

Just saying

dip
    nor84: for years, a five-star review was as high as you could go.. It meant the work was publishable. Now it has become a habit to give everyone five stars and they have come to mean nothing. Six stars are supposed to mean really exceptional work, and therefore they are given to only a few. If they were plentiful, then everybody would expect six stars and they would lose their value just as five stars has done. -
    DR DIP: fair enough I see your point -
    DR DIP: the rating of one's poems becomes irrelevant for that very reason. Its true a 4 star rating has everyone up in the air.
    No matter what one says no one likes to give lower than 5 stars. There was an excellent write the other day by G man on this very subject, worth a read.
    There are some wonderful talented poets on this site who don't get the recognition they deserve whose ranking for what rankings are worth is way down.
    Personally I like to read a poets work because I like it not if it is just because it might have been promoted to dollar value. Funnily dollar value is the last thing I see or look at its the poem itself whether it be a dollar or 2 cents.
    respectfully dip -


DR DIP: WHY CHANGE SOMETHING THAT WASN'T EVEN BROKEN?
There was nothing wrong with the old method to upload your photos!
Tom please explain why you even changed it.

dip
    damommy: I quite like this new way. It seems easier to me. (Sorry) 8-) -
    Barb Hensongispsaca: I am having trouble also had to keep choosing different pictures to get them to download. -


DR DIP: Thinking seriously about thinking seriously...nah the thought just went away! lol

dip
    FxstsLisa : I seriously wonder why you seriously considered thinking seriously. Seriously! -


DR DIP: Out of all the spices you can use in the recipe of life, variety is the strongest.
    giraffmang: No it's definitely Sporty... girl power... -


DR DIP: To all the wonderful people who continue to review and enjoy my simple rhymes, I am forever grateful.
To those who I continually review but never seem to find the time to reciprocate...hmmm


DR DIP: Examples of Meter in Poetry
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Meter is a unit of rhythm in poetry, the pattern of the beats. It is also called a foot. Each foot has a certain number of syllables in it, usually two or three syllables. The difference in types of meter is which syllables are accented and which are not.

Iamb Meter
Iamb meter has the first syllable unaccented and the second accented. Here are examples:

That time l of year l thou mayst l in me l behold
Shall I l com pare l thee to l a sum l mer?s day? - Shakespeare?s ?Sonnet 18"

Come live | with me | and be | my love
And we | will all | the plea|sures prove - Christopher Marlowe?s ?Come live with me and be my love?

All I could see from where I stood
Was three long mountains and a wood; - Edna St. Vincent Millay?s "Renascence"

To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells - John Keats? ?To Autumn?
Trochee Meter
Trochee meter has the first syllable accented and the second unaccented. Here are examples:

Tell me | not in l mournful l numbers
By the | shores of | Gitche | Gumee,

By the | shining | Big-Sea-|Water - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow?s ?Song of Hiawatha?

(I could) wait forever, Face a thousand lifetimes, Ponder your embraces, Just to live in your time.
Why so pale and wan, fond Lover?

Prithee why so pale?

Will, when looking well can't move her,

Looking ill prevail?

Prithee why so pale? - Sir John Suckling's "Song"

The Grizzly Bear is huge and wild;
He has devoured an infant child.

The infant child is not aware

It has been eaten by the bear. - A. E. Housman?s ?Infant Innocence?

Earth, receive an honoured guest;
William Yeats is laid to rest:

Let this Irish vessel lie

Emptied of its poetry. - W. H. Auden's "In Memory of W. B. Yeats"

Dactyl Meter
Dactyl meter has the first syllable accented and the second and third unaccented. Here are examples:

This is the forest pri meval, the murmuring pines and the hemlock - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow?s ?Evangeline?
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,

Cannon in front of them

Volley'd and thunder'd; - Alfred Lord Tennyson?s ?The Charge of the Light Brigade?

We that had Loved him so, Followed him Honoured him, - Robert Browning?s ?The Lost Leader?
Half a league, half a league
Half a league onward, - Alfred Lord Tennyson?s ?The Charge of the Light Brigade?

Just for a handful of silver he left us
Just for a riband to stick in his coat - Robert Browning's ?The Lost Leader?

Anapest Meter
Anapest meter has the first two syllables unaccented and the third syllable accented. Here are examples:

And the sound l of a voice l that is still
The Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold

And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold Lord Byron?s ?The Destruction of Sennacherib?

In the midst of the word he was trying to say,
In the midst of his laughter and glee,

He had softly and suddenly vanished away?

For the Snark was a Boojum, you see. Lewis Carroll, ?The Hunting of the Snark?

Oh, Potter, you rotter, oh, what have you done,
You?re killing off students, you think it?s good fun. - Peeves?s Song from Harry Potter

His eyes are as green as a fresh pickled toad - Harry?s valentine from Harry Potter
And the sheen| of their spears | was like stars | on the sea, - Lord Byron?s ?The Destruction of Sennacherib?
From the centre all round to the sea,
I am lord of the fowl and the brute. - Will Cowper's "Verses Supposed To Be Written By Alexander Selkirk, During His Solitary Abode In The Island Of San Fernandez"

Now you've learned a lot about the types of meter in poetry. For more examples check out


Read more at http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-meter-in-poetry.html#HkhdGwdxxUFARjx4.99


DR DIP: It's not a crime to disagree That's what makes the world go round
Differing and diverse opinions should be embraced on a site like this. Never be offended by one's opinion and interpretation especially on a site like fanstory.
It would be a pretty boring old place if we all had the same opinions , tastes and viewpoints.
It's certainly not worth losing friends over I know that much.
I hate the word used so often these days "offended"
Grows some balls and take it on the chin opinions are the spice of life.

just saying


DR DIP: I really wish that we had more 6's to give. Like how many times at the start of the week do you give out 6's for exceptional work only to find that further posts also deserve 6's but alas you have used those 6 all up. It just gives the poster the impetus to post more often. I know for a fact there are people out there who will not post any new work to Sunday morning when a new batch of 6's are available. whoa talk about keen!

dip
    Meia (MESAYERS): I would like more sixes to give too but I have never seriously thought about waiting to post my work on a sunday :) xMeia -
    Mustang Patty: You know, I still run out of stuff to read on Sunday, too.

    And, I don't wait til Sunday to post - I just put them up as I write them, -


DR DIP: Had a profile thought the other day
From the side I wanted to say
Just how much I enjoy the site
getting reviewed is such a delight

I'll always try to reciprocate
Then sit back and await my fate
Take in the suggestions and advice
Sometimes unpleasant, sometimes nice

Fanstorians are a specific breed
Flowing words is what we bleed
Up all night to the wee hours
Looking for words that one empowers

So hang in there my fanstory friends
See you tomorrow well that depends!

dip
    Kerry Robinson: That was wonderfully written, Dip
    A perfect little poem to describe us Fanstorians.:))) -
    damommy: A great poem describing our habits. I guess a lot of us are up late. It's a great place to be, is Fan Story. I've made lots of terrific friends here. -


DR DIP: I now have 100 people I have fanned so I can be prompted by message to enjoy their work when they post. I have fanned these 100 people because I genuinely like their poetry. Unfortunately and disappointingly many don't seem to be active members anymore or are simply not posting as they are not coming up as prompt messages.
I encourage everyone who have been reciprocally fanned to actively continue to post your work so we can all review and enjoy.

sincerely and respectfully

dr dip
    trimple: I have just returned to FS after taking a long 'writer's block' break only to find that half of my fans are either dead or are afk mostly :) -
    rosehill (Wendy): I am a devoted fan, yet running my own business interferes with my writing and reviewing on an "on demand" basis. I always clear my box of reviews, it just might be a week or so before I can get to them. Be patient with your stalkers and those you stalk because life often gets in the way of our love of words. -


DR DIP: You know I always try to make the effort to review everyone of those I have fanned every time they put up a new post, and I am notified of this on my messages like everyone who has fanned someone does as well.
I don't think it's too hard to once in a while to review and I don't mean every time because if one posts so prolifically it IS asking a bit much to review every one I totally understand
But on saying that those who have reciprocated and fanned me would get my notification of a new post..I would really think it fair that just once or twice they may go to the effort to review one's work in kind I don't think that too much to ask.
To that end I sincerely appreciate the support and friendship of those who consistently review my humble writes even though a lot are only 2 cent poems they still go to the trouble. You all know who you are.They don't see it as a chore we just genuinely like each other's poetry..that is why one fans each other I thought in the first place.

Not a whinge just an observation of human nature
    DR DIP: hmm sounds tasty P lol -
    Tier V. King: I agree totally DIP, sometimes it takes me all night long to read and review all of my friends and Fan's posts. It would be nice if they all did the same thing but I do realize that sometimes we all get busy in life. I'm just saying, I really get where you are coming from with the above statements. -


DR DIP: If you see me thinking from the side have you captured me in a profile thought?
    damommy: Hahahahaha. You're a nut! I always enjoy your thoughts. 8-) -


DR DIP: I have learnt a valuable lesson in reviewing...Don't review a post of someone's poetry if you have nothing nice or constructive to say.
Best leave it un reviewed.
    Sankey: AMEN have had some nonsensical reviews that way. Best move on and leave it to someone who will get some pleasure out of it. -


DR DIP: Your mind and thoughts are only limited by your imagination

dip
    Jannypan (Jan) : Your imagination is only limited by your mind and thoughts. -
    giraffmang: ... and of course the boundary of your skull, otherwise it would just ooze out everywhere and the world would be flooded with wondrous imagery and creativity - can't think of anything worse... yuck! -


DR DIP: I AM NOT LETTING FANSTORY TAKE OVER MY LIFE!!!!.....I lied! lol
    damommy: Just like the rest of us. 8-) -
    Jannypan (Jan) : If one has to write this comment, then FS already has taken over one's life. -
    DR DIP: Exactly! that's why I said I lied! haha
    -


DR DIP: What does it mean when they say "a post is revived"?
    Mustang Patty: If a post is over two years old, and you wish to promote it, you need to get a special certificate and put it back on the listings -
    closetpoetjester: Come on mate, you were a doctor once...or WERE you ? hahaha
    -


DR DIP: Thinking about having a sex change...what's it like being a woman?
    Dean Kuch: Phillippa sneaked one in on ya there, dipster... photo slathering blacky_zpsbr7nlbvg.jpg -
    DR DIP: I love it when she sneaks one in on me Dean lol -


DR DIP: A PROFILE THOUGHT

Just a profile thought is all I have
So I want to share it with you
Really don't have much to say
But all I say is true

I really enjoy these Fanstory times
Been coming here four years
Just been writing simple rhymes
things about love and tears

Met a lot of friends on here
who share a common love
It's all about the written word it's clear
Of Things you're thinking of

thanks for every comment and review
It means so much to me
This friendship between me and you
It's what poetry supposed to be

dip
    Kerry Robinson: That was absolutely beautiful, Thank you for sharing that lovely poem. ~Kerry -
    closetpoetjester: I see you been writing poetry again on your profile page dip.
    I believe that's a spankable offence LOL.
    Tom? -


DR DIP: Is a Fluff review the same as pissing in someone's pocket?

I hadn't heard of this term until recently it makes me laugh.

dip
    giraffmang: It is, without a doubt, the same thing. It's also a great saying...lol -
    DR DIP: There sure are some great sayings and cliche's in the world hey -
    closetpoetjester: Piss is heavier than fluff but they basically equate to the same...
    LOL -
    nor84: A fluff five-star review is excessive praise for mediocre writing without pointing out obvious errors or helping the writer improve his/her craft. -
    DR DIP: thanks Nor...so it IS pissing in someone's pocket lol -
    strandregs: A fluff review for two cents is appreciation.
    a fluff review for 100 cents is an insult.
    pissing in pocket for two cents
    is stupid.
    Pissing for a dollar being a wet yellow rag. Soffokles -
    DR DIP: hehe that's funny strandy.
    It's just most people get totally offended if not receiving a 5 star rating or more.
    As for reviewing 2 cent poems, the funny thing is when my messages come up a FanStory friend has a new posting I just review without even looking at the dollar value. The member cent pump is irrelevant If I have fanned a poet because I like their work I review accordingly no matter the value as I said. I am sure many on here would do the same.

    dip -


DR DIP: AH FANSTORY!!...when something totally takes over your life! lol
    damommy: It certainly does. 8-) -
    rosehill (Wendy): So, does sitting here at 4:38 am qualify as taking over? If so, then send me my club decoder ring. . . and some more coffee. -


DR DIP: Had nothing to do tonight, so I decided to go and count all my poems since coming here on May 6th 2013.
There are 35 poems per page
I have 72 pages
35x72 = 2520 poems up until today.
I knew I was prolific at 2 poems per night but I still got a shock
to all who have commented and reviewed my humble works over the last 4 years, I sincerely thank you

dip
    Selina Stambi: I'm in shock too. Oh, my goodness ... I wonder if I've posted 50 poems ... -


DR DIP: A PROFILE THOUGHT

A profile thought for all to see
I like to spread the word
This is a place for all to see
Nothing too absurd

See the fun that we have here
reviewing and suggesting
Comments on which I always adhere
Those words I am ingesting

A profile though is all it is
Something on your mind
Something that you can easily miss
If you don't seek and find

So add a thought for all to read
It's not very hard
A couple of lines to plant the seed
It's fun in this regard

dip

    closetpoetjester: Dip, you are a very naughty boy to write poetry on your profile page...
    Hasn't Thomas told you it's against the rules? LOL -
    DR DIP: well smack my arse lol

    It was a profile thought so it was relevant lol -


DR DIP: WHAT SORT OF WORLD

What sort of world are we heading for?
Is it coming to an end?
Are we on the brink of war?
I just can't comprehend

What sort of life for our kin
It really is a worry
When is peace and freedom to begin
We better bloody hurry

Trigger happy uneasy leaders
Their fingers getting itchy
The world is full of bottom feeders
With glowing egos and bitchy

Who knows what we're heading for
We need to work it out
Nuclear war, just count the score
world destruction there's no doubt

Worrying times


DR DIP: The correct usage of "You're", "Your", "There", "Their" and "They're"

Grammar is important! Capitalization is the difference between helping your Uncle Jack off a horse and helping your Uncle jack off a horse.
    strandregs: But if you don't know jack how can you hack? -
    closetpoetjester: Woman, without her man, is nothing.

    Woman, without her, man is nothing.

    I REST MY CASE -


DR DIP: In Two months time I would have been coming to FanStory for 4 years. I have learnt so much in this time from many wonderful poets who have guided, suggested, and advised me with my humble rhymes. To that I am forever grateful.
I have always written from the heart in simple verse.
Rhyming verse is not "everyone's cup of tea" but that is the beauty of this site...The diversity of taste and interpretation of poetry. I would be a boring old place if we all wrote the same way. That's the beauty of different styles. There is poetry here that caters for everyone's taste, be it love and romance political, religious philosophical, nature, humour poems and many other topics to write about.
So to those who enjoy my humble writes I deeply appreciate your loyalty to follow and review and I try hard to reciprocate.

Sincerely dip


DR DIP: FANSTORY: Where people open up their heart and minds and put them into words

dip
    RGstar: As I have told you, you write the way that suits the moment for the aspect, thought and idea whose artistic reference suits relays your theme, whether song poem or any other form with definite rules. Write from the heart and elaborate what you want to say, find its soul, and deliver your thesis or theme... all will listen for words are as diverse and as colourful as flowers in the field and no one form dominates any other, it is just a matter of choice and the flower you like to relate to , for the occasion best. Have a good day, author. -


DR DIP: TOM, why fix something that's not broken?
    FanStory: What did I do now? :) - Tom -
    DR DIP: Hahaha What didn't you do!! lol -


DR DIP: Just confirming.
If you put up a new post does this come up with "new writing on line" in private message to everyone who has fanned you and visa versa?
    Jannypan (Jan) : Yes, unless it is for a blind contest. Then no announcement is sent. -


DR DIP: "TWAS BRILLIG AND THE SLIVEY TOVES
DID GYRE AND GYMBLE IN THE WABE
ALL MIMSY WERE THE BORROGROVES
AND THE MOMERATHS OUTGRABE"

SPELL CHECK..EAT YA BLOODY HEART OUT!


DR DIP: It's no secret that poetry can find love. Finding love through words is a beautiful thing. Fanstory has brought good people together with a common love.

All the best You two

You know who you are? lol
    Unspoken94: Congratulations for One Last Kiss. -Bill -


DR DIP: OH MY GOD!!! I can't believe this! I have just won poem of the Month!! for my poem ONE LAST KISS.
Words cannot express how I feel, this means so much to me. To all my fellow nominees I thank you Your entries were all superb so I feel so humbled and honoured to receive this in your company. This is so special to me.

Thank you, Thank you for voting for this poem my fellow fanstory poets
    l.raven: CONGRATULATIONS Waves...you deserved it...I told you...it was one of your best...xxoo love Linda -
    Thal1959: I just noticed you win for this, D. Congratulations, Mazel Tov, and all that jazz! (No, I'm not Jewish.) -
    DR DIP: I dedicate this win to my Fanstory friend Luna RIP Jeni -
    Ideasaregems-Dawn: You were writing your dedication at the same time as I was writing my congratulations to you - I think she would love your sweet gesture, and be very proud. -
    ~Dovey: Congrats, Dr. D. :) -
    Dean Kuch: I was more than happy to cast my vote your way, Dip. Your unyielding dedication and prolific writing of poetry everyday to entertain us all warrants such an honor.
    Congratulations, Cobber! -
    Maureen's Pen: Congrats my dear friend, a beautiful poem well deserved.
    Big hugs.:) -
    Poetic Friend: Congratulations, Dip, my friend! I am so happy for you!!! -
    RGstar: Well done Dip, My second cogratulations to you.
    I couldn't have been happier to come second. Well done. -
    judiverse: Congratulations on your Poem of the Month honors. judiverse -
    Selina Stambi: Congratulations, Dip. That was a beautiful poem. The best you've written. Hurrah for you!! -
    DR DIP: Thankyou so much all your congrats mean a lot.
    You know I always thought there was a verse missing so I thought about the intent of the whole poem and have now added a second verse at the start . Verse two is new and I feel it completes the love story. It all makes better sense in the early part.

    sincerely and thankfully Dip -
    mrsmajor: A big Congratulations, Dip, this was a joy to read... -


FanStory wrote to DR DIP: Congratulations! One last kiss is the new Poem of the Month!
    Ric Myworld: There sure was an outstanding group of poets and entries in the field for this honor. Congratulations, on your well deserved win! -
    krys123: CONGRATS TO YOU DIP
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    ALEX -
    DR DIP: I am still over the moon!
    thankyou again and for making it "all time best as well" This means so much to me

    sincerely dip -


DR DIP: Wow I am over the moon! I have been considered for "poem of the month"with my poem 'One last kiss' with the other 9 nominees. It's the first time in the 4 years I have been coming to Fanstory I have been nominated.

The quality of the other poems is excellent I can't believe I have even been considered. It's made my week!

Thankyou fanstory
    Irish Rain: Good for you Mr. Dip!!! Whoo Hoo!!!! -
    damommy: That's great. I'm happy for you. -
    Dean Kuch: Congratulations! photo adams-family-blood-zombies-Favimcom-2900681.gif
    It was such a tight race, Doc, but you managed to pull it off!
    Congratulations, my friend, I am so very happy for you!
    ~Deano
    -


DR DIP: WHEN did the site of fanstory originate?
just curious

dip
    mrsmajor: This site was established in 2000... -
    DR DIP: Wow I didn't realize it was so early. So for 13 years it was going for before I found out about this wonderful site.
    Although I only discovered the passion to write in 2010 so I was 3 years in the wilderness lol

    dipster -


DR DIP: Does anybody else find this happening? If you put your poem in the 'family' category it reverts or defaults back to the default category of general
    damommy: Yep, it just happened to me. What's that all about? -


DR DIP: So the change of season is officially here. In Australia we go from summer to autumn (fall) In America winter to spring.

I love the way we all write of season's change when these come about.

dip
    damommy: As a child, I was fascinated with the difference in our mutual seasons. I thought when it was spring here, it was spring everywhere, and when it rained where I was, I thought the whole world had rain. Silly child. LOL -
    DR DIP: not too silly with these weird weather patterns Mom Nothing surprises me with climate change

    dip -


DR DIP: FANSTORY...Creating a community of like mindedness and passion with a common agenda...The passion to write

dip


DR DIP: Do you know that frogs have the highest mortality rate of any other animal.......There is always one that croaks every day
    evilynne: Not if they keep a jump ahead! Evi -


DR DIP: AGE IS JUST A STATE OF MIND......AND I LOVE THE STATE I'M IN!


DR DIP: Tomorrow is 'International poet's kindness day"
Be kind to your humble poet


DR DIP: "Twas brillig and the slivy toves
Did gyre and gymble in the wabe
All mimsy were the borrogroves
And the momeraths outgrabe"

Lewis Carroll

HaHA spell check has gone berserk

You grammar poet Nazis would have a ball lol


DR DIP: Tom, how many current members of FanStory are there, active or not?
    nor84: Tom doesn't always read the forum threads. If you want an answer, you can send him a PM. I know for a fact the site gets an average of 15 new members per week, so there's a bunch. Many, of course aren't active and there are people are still on the list of members who are long gone. -
    Dean Kuch: Maybe Dip doesn't wanna bother Tom with trivialities, Norma, as he realizes that Tom is a very busy man.
    Let him ask who he wants to ask. -
    DR DIP: maybe Tom gives one word answers
    like 'NO IDEA"
    I bet he could go to his computer and easily look up paid members and would no them to the last person..not that hard

    and how busy can he be except answering chicken shit questions like this hey lol -
    Badger_29: Valid query, but one that I, for one, do not expect any response to . . .
    -


DR DIP: Just want to see what time it is in America where fanstory headquarters is It's just after 6 pm in Sydney Australia on valentines day
    DR DIP: ah 2;12 am, I day behind and 8 hrs ahead

    dip -
    Jannypan (Jan) : Look at the bottom of the Forum page before you select a thread. FS time is given there. -
    DR DIP: ah I see Thankyou Jan, much appreciated -


DR DIP: Isn't it funny. I have been posting here everyday, 2 poems a day since coming to Fanstory back in May 2013.
In all that time I have never promoted my work more than two pumps past pot of gold.
Last week for the first time, I made no 1 on the front page with 73 reviews! Yes I was pretty chuffed considering I never promoted this review past 37 cents! lol
I average 10 reviews a night if I'm lucky, usually promoting one of my poems with pot of gold status.
For some strange reason this was taken up by the members and they ran with it
To that I am forever grateful.

I have now ticked my fanstory bucket list. I am a happy poet

lol

thanks everyone! dip


DR DIP: I really enjoy reading the diversity of opinion each member puts forward on many Fanstory subjects and the diverse responses.
I really think this is healthy to have varying opinions on a site that caters for so many different styles and egos in both poetry and writing.
It's great that we take the time (when available) to review each other's work.
I think it is healthy that we all have varying tastes and opinions,
"what's one person's trash is another's treasure" so to speak.
Always remember to stay true to yourself and what feels right in your heart..stay true to yourself and just accept these diversities of positive and negative reviews.
Fanstory is a great site to boost one's ego and self esteem in one review or shatter that ego and self esteem in another review.
That is the beauty of this site...diversity of taste and interpretation, what is one's goals and aspirations compared to others.
In the nearly 4 years of coming to Fanstory I have experienced many wonderful emotions and conversely disappointments, but it is all a learning curve. You never stop learning and developing and to that I am forever grateful.

dip


DR DIP: I really try and make the effort to review everyone I have fanned sometimes I am remiss but i really do try and I thank everyone who reciprocates for I thought that is what its all about reviewing and commenting on each others work thats why you fan each other so they are aware when either has posted something new. To some its one sided and they never review your work Oh well each to their own I suppose

dip
    damommy: I don't think anyone means to be rude. Some have so many fans that it takes them a while to get through all of them.

    Also, so many of us have health issues (as I do) and there are days we simply don't feel well enough.

    I don't worry too much about not being answered or reviewed. I know how every day life can get in the way.

    Rest assured that we're all glad you're here and look forward to your postings. 8-) -
    Linda Engel: Hey Dip, just a few words to let you know that I will not be renewing my membership this year. Take care and I'll catch you on Face Book. Love ya, Linda -


DR DIP: Haha from top to bottom in one foul swoop..Thanks for my 15 mins of fame! from $1.30 to 2 cents in the push of a key on the keyboard
oh well I enjoyed it while it was there.

Thanks Guys and Gals

xxdip


DR DIP: WOW I am totally rapt I have never made the front page before little lone number one be it ever so fleeting You guys pushed it for me with you wonderful reviews I sincerely thankyou
YOU ARE MY STRENGTH!!

xxdip


DR DIP: Just curious Do people read one's poetry because they genuinely like it? or that you have promoted it to 37 cents for 24hrs? lol

I hope it is the former .....that makes it all worthwhile if it is.
To all those who genuinely enjoy reading my humble simple rhyming posts I sincerely appreciate you finding the time to read and comment. It gives me the impetus to continue to write and post. Thankyou
respectfully Dip


DR DIP: NEWS FLASH! NEWSFLASH!...Star system and rankings to be eliminated plus unlimited entries each day!

In an unprecented Move Tommy boy has decided to abolish the star system and rankings and just let everyone enjoy each others poetry.
When asked "well it's only a trial period" tom said Just want to see if it actually affects the popularity of Fanstory and negates squabbling and pressure to perform.
"I want to see if everyone can just enjoy each others poetry without that pressure to promote it.
"Look I have made enough money from fanstory to retire " he added.

"And I am tired of the continual squabbling over rankings and unfair play"

If only this was true

lol dip

    damommy: You had me going for a while. I thought It had really happened. I'd hate to see the star system done away with. I was on another writing site without ratings, and it was bor-ing. -


DR DIP: THE WORLD IS SLOWLY GOING MAD!!

What future do our kids have if we are setting the example?
    Gloria ....: I guess we could change our ways, right? -
    damommy: Dr Dip, you're so right. -


DR DIP: Just want to take this opportunity to sincerely thank all my fanstory fellow poets who have "fanned" me over the last three and a half years of coming to fanstory.
My time has been very enjoyable and to all those who regular review my humble rhymes I sincerely appreciate it.

Have a great 2017 all... keep the typing finger sharp and the poem light on!
    damommy: This sounds like you might be leaving. I hope not. -
    DR DIP: haha Not at all i wouln't leave this joint if you paid me its too much fun Where else can you get egos, backstabbing, false accusations, pissing in pockets, grammar Nazis , poet Nazis and drama Queens?

    haha
    And it only cost 99dollars for 2 years of this shit lol

    seriously, I'm not going anywhere!

    though I just read my post and it sure does read like I could be leaving hey Sorry about that I'm sure some would like to see the back of me lol -
    damommy: Oh, good. No one would want to see you leave. It IS fun, but it's true what you said about the controversy. I try to stay away from it all and enjoy my friends here. 8-) -


DR DIP: FANSTORY IS SUCH A TIME WASTER!!!...I love it! lol
    damommy: You're right, and I love it, too! 8-) -


DR DIP: IT IS NOW 10 MINS AFTER MIDNIGHT IN AUSTRALIA ON THE 1ST JAN. 2017
HAPPY NEW YEAR
    damommy: Happy New Year. I wasn't aware of the such a time difference. You're way ahead of us. Does that mean I'm writing you yesterday? LOL -


DR DIP: What's the difference between a complimentary reviews have been made?

dip curious?
    Jannypan (Jan) : I believe the 2 complimentary reviews are 'freebies.' If you want more reviews, then you have to promote, right? Jan -
    DR DIP: this not all I wrote they have left out half my question -


DR DIP: Let me take this opportunity in wishing you all a very happy new year and a fruitful 2017 and may our poetry still touch an emotion
happy writing now and always

dip
    closetpoetjester: Same to you dip...may your 2017 be filled with love and good times...Pxx -
    damommy: Happy New Year. May it be the best ever.
    -


DR DIP: A TIME
A time to love, a time to live
A time to share, a time to give
A time to think about your lover
Mum, Dad, sister and brother

A time to reminisce, a time to reflect
A time to remember not to forget
Just what Christmas is all about
Not just religious for there's no doubt

Time to get into a sharing spirit
Time for forgiveness and never fear it
A time when loved ones, come together
For we are all family, never let that sever
We all have the time, we all have the love
Please take the time to heed what's above
For time together is always ours
Make it forever, for as long as love allows
A time to laugh, a time to smile
A time to savour, to reconcile
What is really, important to me
We are all in love so let us be!

dip


DR DIP: Merry Christmas everyone. I know it's Christmas and all and red is traditionally representative of Christmas BUT that RED background here on Fanstory is driving me Crazy lol

sincerely Dip
    michaelcahill: I'd like to take this opportunity and join Dip in blaming my mental state on the new colour scheme here at Fanstory. Whatever I've done ... the RED made me do it! -
    Gloria ....: I think it reveals Tom's true colours. :)) -
    TheWriteTeach: The red is driving me batty, as well. I hope it is changed back after Christmas. . . -
    Dean Kuch: Red?
    What red??
    Have I missed something?
    "Read", as in, "I READ a great book last week?"
    That kinda' red?
    Do I need a psychiatrist?
    Does anyone here know a good one they can refer me to?
    Red...blood red...REDRUM...
    **manical laughter ensues...** Heh-heh-heh-heh...! **manical laughter ends...**
    Just kidding, y'all.
    ~Dean ;) -


DR DIP: JUST LET ME TAKE THIS OPPORTUNITY TO WISH ALL MY FANSTORIANS A VERY MERRY XMAS !!
Hope Santa brings you the muse you wanted! lol

xxdip
    damommy: I wish you and yours the same. 8-) -
    Linda Engel: thanks. Merry Christmas to you, too. hugs.....
    -


DR DIP: Do you know what this whole fiasco with this one reviewer has done?
it has brought to the surface the whole farce of the ratings system. Now lets be honest.
the whole ratings system 1 to 6 described from poor, needs improvement, good, excellent, exceptional. The words describing each star rating can give a misinterpretation.

Lets face it the bench mark has been set now virtually the only stars that are used are 5 and 6 as everyone is paranoid to give as low as a good rating which is still great but carries a certain inadequate stigma with it.
lets face it we are all amateurs here following a passion and everyone wants to please and encourage .
So how do we define excellent and exceptional poetry
its so personal in taste and individual interpretation but for want of not hurting someones feelings we tend to give 5 stars
This benchmark has been well and truly set now.
How many people will not review a poem below the value of say 50 cents?
Those two cent poems whether they are exceptional or not can be overlooked for the sake of member cent pumps to make that pot of gold or treasure chest
It's sad really because I have reviewed many 2 cent poems that are exceptionally good but can be overlooked by many because of this reason.
this is the main reason why i am a staunch advocate for having more than 2 complimentary reviews each posting

respectfully dip
    Jannypan (Jan) : . . . but you are the one who complained about receiving a low rating. Now this makes it seem as though you are saying that is ok. Reviewers should rate as they see fit, right? I am confused by your post here & the ones from Tuesday--they seem contradictory. I believe more 2 cent poems are reviewed than you think. Jan -
    DR DIP: My complaint was representative for everyone who experienced the wrath of Joseph as I call it. I am not knocking the ratings system per say. It has to be there but its when people like joseph tries to justify a one star rating with so called expertise dribble Jannypan you obviously weren't a victim of his wrath.
    I don't know how you find my post confusing
    with respect Dip

    It wasn't the ratings points received that was the issue with me it didn't worry me it was his pathetic reasons accusing me of not writing poetry but propaganda? oh please my poetry is simple and heartfelt not propaganda
    Ok I took it rather personal but I was only speaking on behalf of every other one of his victims. If you had read his comments to the other 12 and his reasons you would understand surely/
    my gripe is NOT with the star system although on saying that there are flaws in it that could easily be addressed

    xdip
    -


DR DIP: I notice there are many Fanstorians who have experienced the rath of dear Joseph
Joseph has credibility issues he must be trying to address I wrote this to him just now
Joseph, with respect. I have just been to your comments page
You have commented on 10 poets and gave them all a one star rating? and you want credibility as a reviewer. I do notice nearly all your reviews could be cut and pasted with the same theme content
Just what is your go here?
Fanstory is not a site of professional poets we are all just amateurs with a passion to write poetry
NOT FKG PROPAGANDA! as you call it

You have pissed many people off in the short and I mean very short time you have been here
What is your intent on being on a site like fanstory if you are just going to put shit on everyone's works You are not only hurtful to many just trying to get a grasp but also demeaning.
You are lucky I have the skin of a rhino.
And here's me thinking it was just my PROPAGANDA writes as you call them
Look if that is how you truly feel about peoples writes and you are genuinely critiqueing your sentiments then maybe Fanstory isn't the site for you

dip

Joseph, with respect. I have just been to your comments page
You have commented on 10 poets and gave them all a one star rating? and you want credibility as a reviewer. I do notice nearly all your reviews could be cut and pasted with the same theme content
Just what is your go here?
Fanstory is not a site of professional poets we are all just amateurs with a passion to write poetry
NOT FKG PROPAGANDA! as you call it

You have pissed many people off in the short and I mean very short time you have been here
What is your intent on being on a site like fanstory if you are just going to put shit on everyone's works You are not only hurtful to many just trying to get a grasp but also demeaning.
You are lucky I have the skin of a rhino.
And here's me thinking it was just my PROPAGANDA writes as you call them
Look if that is how you truly feel about peoples writes and you are genuinely critiquing your sentiments then maybe Fanstory isn't the site for you

dip
    damommy: Did you get an answer? Probably won't. Good for you, standing up to him. 8-) -
    nor84: FOR ALL YOU PEOPLE READING THIS, the reviewer in question is a STANDARD. Simply require reviews by premium members when you post, and this can't happen. The default setting on the posting screen is to allow Standards - change the setting. -
    DR DIP: what and take away the fun? lol -
    DR DIP: nor with respect, he gave 10 poets the one star its just not my gripe. he has issues the guy needs help not mutation that will only confuse him -
    nor84: That isn't 'muting.' Standards don't pay dues, and although many review fairly, some of them are just drive-bys who give one-star reviews. Those folks are just trying to annoy us - and they succeed. Waste of time to try to educate or help them. Just block standards. I'm not even sure you can 'mute' him. -
    DR DIP: JOSEPH HAS SOME REAL PERSONAL ISSUES SINCE HIS FRONTAL LOBOTOMY
    Don't be hard on him he is an expert in the art of poetry and its reflected in his wonderful supportive reviews.
    Welcome him with open arms he hasn't got a friend only an ego -
    Dean Kuch: Oh yes, Nor.
    You're damn right you can mute him.
    I did! -
    DR DIP: Iloved reading your banter /retorts with him Dean you are a real pro with this
    his review on Fanstoria and your response was beautiful to read I give you a 6 and needs no improvement lol -


DR DIP: This was a review I just received from a brand new member who has not yet posted anything of his own work.
I can accept the one star ratings but his reasons that this is not poetry but propaganda is that far off rhe mark and disrespectful I feel what do you guys feel. I was quite taken aback actually. And nothing usually phases me.
But this guy irked me for his reasons

Review For Arms of many colours

ARMS OF MANY COLOURS

We are arms of many colours
From different race and creeds
But we're still like all others
We have our hopes, we have our needs

For we are ALL HERE HUMANS
We make up mankind
The problem isn't with us
It's with the ignorant and the blind

Don't judge people on the colour of skin
The pigment of our birth
Don't judge us for we are next of kin
We are people, we have our worth

Never differentiate,
politicize or degrade
We are all humans you must appreciate
Our skin will never fade

dip


Poor

This is not poetry; it is propaganda. I wish people could see the difference. It is not poetry's job to tell us how to behave or to fix us or dictate how we should act. That is the province of politics or religion, not of poetry! It is all well and good to treat people as equals, and I say hurray to that, but I do not say hurray to a poem that tells me what I should do. Chekhov said that the writer's job is not to solve problems but to show them, to put them on display. What you have here, however, is instruction, not poetry. Comment Written 06-Dec-2016 by Joseph Pedulla
    DR DIP: This review has upset me deeply not the one star rating but the accusations in his reasons.
    I am seriously thinking of reassessing my worth on Fanstory -
    brenda bickers: Hi DR DIP,
    I do not see this poem as propaganda, in fact the complete opposite. You have not singled out any one individual on colour, creed or gender, and I see no suggestion on your part on how other people should feel. You have merely expressed your own wishes on how you would prefer to see the world.
    Perhaps this person has a guilty conscience. As for the suggestion on when someone has earned the right to view, I think you have hit the nail on the head. I was on her for a few weeks before I started to review. You need to understand what is required in reviewing before attempting to do so. Please don't let this person put you off.
    Brenda:))x -
    michaelcahill: Typical of one without their own thoughts to misquote the thoughts of another:


    Chekov:
    The task of a writer is not to solve the problem but to state the problem correctly.

    Not quite what he said is it?

    Another Chekov quote comes to mind:
    There is nothing more awful, insulting, and depressing than banality.

    One should always be suspicious when an individual is unable to express their own thoughts and must attempt to use the thoughts of others to make whatever point they are attempting to make. Red flags should fly when the interpretation of those thoughts are erroneous.

    While I think Chekov was a fine member of the Enterprise crew, he was a junior officer.

    I prefer Spock and his superior Vulcan intellect:
    It is illogical to pay heed to the wisdom of an imbecile.

    Or the down home smarts of Dr. McCoy:
    Good Lord, Jim. He's not a reviewer, he's an idiot!

    I'd be inclined to take the words of the hundreds of writers here who love your work, Dip. :)) -
    Jannypan (Jan) : Standard members can be blocked by selecting Premier members when posting, right? That way if you have muted your measly 6, then you can still keep those from trashing your work. Help me out FS members. This is correct, right? One has to make sure that this is selected for Premier when posting each time as it sometimes reverts back to standard. Jan -
    michaelcahill: Yes. Usually when you block standards it remains like that, but once in a while it reverts back. So you should check and make sure they remain blocked. This isn't a Standard member though. It's a sub-standard member. LOL I just crack myself up.... -
    Susanjohn: Who the heck is picking on you Dip!!...LOL I need to take care of this..hmmm lol.I just reviewed the poem...then saw all this. I love the poem dip, don't you let this person get to you. Giant hug dipster. :-) -
    Irish Rain: I don't think anyone should have the right to tell anyone else what 'poetry' is, or isn't. I enjoyed your poem. If your writing is not 'poetry', we're all in trouble. Let it go...not EVEN worth it. Blessings... -


DR DIP: Can I suggest one thing that would would give some of the new members more credibility in their reviewing?
I think a premier member must have posted at least 5 of his own poems on his profile to be assessed and reviewed before allowing them the privilege of reviewing others.
The reason I say this is I find a lot of the new members who give rather scathing unsubstantiated reviews with very low ratings tend to have 'no runs on the board" ie have no postings at all which in my eyes gives them no credibility to review with any valid reasoning.
This is just an observation i have noticed over the three and a half years I have been coming to Fanstory and I am sure many fellow fanstorians have experienced this.
Don't get me wrong, I embrace and welcome new members but feel in the context of credibility of reviewing, runs on the board" is essential.
I don't think 5 poems or posts is too much to ask before they can review
What are your thoughts?
    closetpoetjester: I agree whole heartedly Dip. Either that or we have to take what they say with a grain of salt...like a three review I got LOL -
    closetpoetjester: I agree whole heartedly Dip...but until something like that is in place we just have to take those unsubstantiated opinions with a grain of salt, right? Like a three review I got recently LOL -
    mrsmajor: I don't think its the number of poems that makes the difference, its simply the expertise of the reviewer..yes I've observed what you have mentioned over the past twelve years, and I really don't think anything can be done about it...In the past I have often said not every writer is a good reviewer...but if such a idea becomes part of the site's rules, that should be clearly stated before the member joins...but of course I agree some reviews are most certainly without any merit whatsoever... -
    nor84: Copy the site's reviewing guidelines and send it to them, but never argue back. Can't 'defend' your writing. -
    Gloria ....: Ha, yep, I've seen that first hand, dip. We had one new reviewer in particular who was handing out one star reviews at a rate of 40% for beyond unreasonable excuses. But according to them, they were just being "honest". Yer right. It was surprising how much support for outright lies that disgraceful reviewer received. -


DR DIP: Ok, please don't take this as a whinge because I genuinely love this site.
I review or try to review everyone that comes up on my message page as "new writing on line"..whether its worth 2 cents (which is quite disgusting) to the dollar entries who have obviously spent many hours reviewing others works to get the member cent pumps to promote it.
It costs 6.55 dollars to promote your work to "treasure chest" status which gives you 2 whole days on the welcome pages.

To review enough to make the face page and all time best status you would have to review on average 20 to 25 poems a day .
And I commend those that have the time to review so many and even more to get the 2 complimentary poems to the face page.

I read many beautiful poems by these "Dollar plus" poets who have gone to the trouble to review so much.
I greatly admire those poets who have made their way to top rankings on Fanstory purely through long and laborious reviewing To attain the member cent pumps.

Personally I try to review as many as time allows me but sometimes I have to sleep.
I can see how Fanstory can take over one's life, you become a slave to the system so to speak.
Obviously to save time and to have enough words in a comment to allow the comment to be accepted and the time frames one has when they have to answer 70 to 90 reviews every time they post it must be very hard to individually answer every reviewer who has gone to the trouble to review you.
Cut and paste replies becomes quite evident and I find this rather impersonal. But be that as it may i admire those who do get that many reviews.
But when our no 1 poet at the moment can spend the time and personally give responses to every reviewer who has gone to the trouble to review them it reflects on the cut and pasters.

As I said at the start, this is not a gripe but merely an observation.
What probably started out as a sight for passionate poets and was supported with a nominal fee has become a lucrative business and good on fanstory administration for making it so. Just not too impressed that every time you open the site you are plastered with advertisement more and more and its not that cheap considering the page reaches a specific audience of writers and poets so unless you open fanstory you would never see the add anyway..just curious
Yours in poetry

dip
ps I will get back off my soap box now

xxdip
    Jannypan (Jan) : I see very few ads & they are waaay at the top of the page--hardly noticeable. Jan -
    nor84: Some of those are Google ads - notice the little blue triangle they have attached. It isn't Fanstory's fault. I have a program called Adguard that eliminates nearly all of them. -
    Gloria ....: What ads? I don't see any ads. Mind you I have a built-in ad-blocker. The only product I ever fell for from advertisement seduction was Swiffer. -
    closetpoetjester: Dippety Do, I totally agree...what's with those freaking ads...Surely Tommy boy doesn't need advertising when he's making a big old bunch bucks out of his poor su...oops I mean members...
    I do agree, FS becomes so ingrained you start ditching everything else for it...no fair. You have to come up for air and when you are sucked dry with the reviewing and promotion system, you feel like you are in a continual vortex. I found a small hiatus helped me become guilt free. I can only devote the amount of time I have spare which at the moment is 4/5's of F**all. With that said, I have a poetry venture so I'm at least being productive and trying to MAKE some money out of it now. There IS a limit. We all just have to work out where we fit here and quit dumping on people because they don't review you. People that promote at the top all the time have to be prepared to get the fluff reviews as at times that's what they are attracting. If there was a slightly fairer system or maybe a HALF PRICE certificate. Did ya hear that Tom? Tom?!

    Anyway I say, give FS the level of committment it honestly deserves in your eyes and you'll benefit more and suffer less. They rely on the guilt trip here. Well I was guilty as charged for awhile and then broke free of the shackles and by God it feels good. Good luck with whatever you do but a GREAT vent. Wish I could review it haha... -


DR DIP: Why are adds starting to appear more often on Fanstory. We pay to be financial members. Do we have to have adds plastered across the screen when you open it on Fanstory?

just curious

dip
    Kingsland: It's a business, the site was created to make a profit. I see nothing wrong with those ads... -
    nor84: Most of the ads come from Google, not from the site. Adguard software can stop those. -


DR DIP: Rami Devi just a question?..what's the point in writing about something and posting if you can't view and review it? or is it that you've blocked me for some reason. Did I give you a bad critique or something? I am puzzled


DR DIP: Can someone explain to me how on 'advanced editor' you can make audio recordings I love what Dean and RG star do and many others I would like to add music audio to my poems.

thanks Dip
    I am Cat: Dip,
    When I do it, I record my voice on my iphone, (in the app called "Voice Memos" that comes on every iphone), email it to myself, put it in iTunes, and convert it to an mp3 file. Once that is done, it's a matter of posting as you always do, but go to Show Advanced Options, and choose, "reading", (click 'select', and browse your computer for the file, then upload)
    It's that easy. The size of your reading MUST be smaller than 3 mb.--choose low quality when saving, if necessary--

    I hope that helps.
    Cat -


DR DIP: IT's all about runs on the board
crawl before you walk
If you are going to be only a standard author just to put shit on premier poets than scamper off into your computer find another site
one and two stars for a review without a valid explanation is just a waste of everybody's time

just sayin

dip
    Dean Kuch: Sick 'em, boy!
    Good boy, yasssss, Dip...
    Heh-heh-heh...
    photo cooltext216701859969693_zpsmew3bxjp.png -


DR DIP: I have just received a message saying I cannot post anymore poems in 24 hrs..its been 24 hrs since my last 2 what gives?


DR DIP: What is the difference between a 'premier' and 'standard' author?

dip
    michaelcahill: Premier members are the paying members like us who can post, review, enter contests and enjoy all the features of the site.

    Standard members have a free membership and they are restricted to reviewing up to five stars, can't enter contests or do much else. They are noted for bombing us with one and two star reviews and rumour has it that some Premier members have opened up Standard accounts just to get back at their enemies on site. LOL More info than you wanted, yes? -
    Gloria ....: There is now a third category of membership: Premier Shield -
    Hayley Solomon: Hello dip, Hayley here. I recently became a premiere member and all it is is money. I paid $100 so all my work could be saved remotely on the fs site n case my computer crashes, Thats all premier is! -
    Hayley Solomon: Hello dip, Hayley here. I recently became a premiere member and all it is is money. I paid $100 so all my work could be saved remotely on the fs site n case my computer crashes, Thats all premier is! -


DR DIP: I have never heard of mono stitch poetry before?
I thought it was just cryptic one liners?
Can you call it poetry?
if so haven't the "one liners" got to be original to submit to fanstory?
just curious, dip


DR DIP: You know in all this time coming to fanstory it has taken me all this time for it to sink in You won't get to know whether someone has posted something new unless you become a fan and it has opened up a whole new fanstory world for me. There are so many beautiful and wonderful poets out there who I have been missing out on.
thankyou
    Susanjohn: So true!!!! So glad I found you!! -
    Jannypan (Jan) : You will not be notified in the case
    of a BLIND contest until it is over. -


DR DIP: Just a question does everyone that I am following get a message prompt on my profile page saying they have a new work posted?
    Susanjohn: ? I'm following you...I always get a message when you post...that what you mean? -


DR DIP: Just a question thatb has intrigued me for over three years now.

Once you have your 2 complimentary reviews unless you boost it or someone bothers to open your profile page can anyone still see your new postings?

no one has given me the definitive answer
I have boosted a poem using review dollars but still only get one if lucky 2 more reviews
I can't work out how someone can freshly post something and in the same day be on the front page if not the top

as i said just curious as I really don't give a rats but get rather frustrated to spend hours reviewing only to pick up a couple of extra reviews
    Jannypan (Jan) : They pay major $$$$ to be in the top 10 Featured poems in the first group. The well received poems come from the positive reviews the work receives in a specified time [5s or 6s] This is my understanding. Those with a large fan base will probably have so many reviews in a short time. Those without seldom get to the well received listing. You have to put some kind of certificate on your work when first posting or you get only 2 free ones. Where that work goes after that, I have no clue. Good question. -
    michaelcahill: You can always view any work, but if it isn't promoted you have to go find it in someone's profile.
    To be well received it has to be in the first twenty-four hours I believe and it's only promoted pieces with eight reviews for poems or five reviews for prose minimum. It's the top ten percentage wise for the day, most sixes by percentage.
    If your piece is promoted, it's on the list when you click "read" that keeps repeating over and over. Yours stays on the list until the promotion runs out.
    Anything not promoted is just sitting in your portfolio. I've gone to peoples profile and reviewed things out of people's portfolios before, so it does happen. :)) -
    giraffmang: Never use your own money. I don't. I earn all the funny money on site to promote mine. My wallet stays intact... in my wife's handbag I think!

    Having a fan base helps as does promotion but it will stay on the circuit for 2 - 5 days depending on what base certificate is used. the problem is that not many people circle the lower rewarded pieces unless strapped for funny money. -
    kiwisteveh: I have (in theory) a couple of hundred fans, but only about 10 - 15 of those regularly review my work.

    The only way to get lots of reviews is to promote. You get to choose whether that is worth real money to you or whether to review like cray or try to win contests.

    I have never spent a cent of my own on promoting, but know I can make it to the front page if I really want to. -
    Mary Wakeford: When I receive a review from someone, I go to their profile and choose one of their works and give it a review, even if it's a two center. I think it helps to get your name out there and people appreciate the sentiment. On the other hand, I have reviewed several times one writer, and never get a single review from them in kind. So I eventually stop reviewing them. It's a two way street and a little goes a long way. I was told when I first joined by a high ranked author they would not review my work unless it was promoted to at least 60 cents...but I've promoted over a dollar and sometimes it doesn't help. I don't know what to tell you. -


DR DIP: We have a new member who is obviously super anal about the use of the English language. I won't say her name but for those who have experienced her insightful and thorough comments with average and poor star ratings on nearly ALL her reviews you will easily guess who I am talking about. The thing is she has no runs on the board bar one rather lame short story but I am too polite to rubbish as I fear she is lost in her own self importance. So this may sound harsh? Well I suppose it is, I just get pissed off when a reviewer hasn't posted any of her own works other than one to critique. Just my thoughts

respectfully, dip
    Jannypan (Jan) : Hey, there's more than one lurking about. One stopped by me. Jan -
    Lynn27: Newbies don't understand. The site let's them without any guidance. I had to pay me visit. -
    LisaD123: I agree that you should have to post regularly to review regularly. I have not received less than four stars from the regular posting crew (except for the times when previewed work had snuck out with being completed ... But that's another thread in itself!). I think that at the end of the day you just have to rise above it and alienate people you respect giving you great reviews. At least the person is giving everyone the same kind of reviews ... what sends me over the edge is when someone hasn't posted and then gives me ONLY a poor review! Hang in there! :-) -
    LisaD123: Sorry .. 'Without being completed'... see it's happened again! -
    LisaD123: And 'accept' rather than 'alienate' -
    Cumbrianlass: A good reviewer isn't necessarily a good writer. A good writer isn't necessarily a good reviewer. It's responses like this that scare away members with the potential to really contribute something of merit to this site. -
    Mary Wakeford: 'Jane Doe' was on a roll yesterday... I got "nicked" too. Three stars and not a single suggestion on how I could improve the piece. I responded to her while suggesting she school herself by reading Gloria's tutorials. I may have been a little harsh wjth her, but for Heaven sakes...her reviews were ridiculous! -
    Dean Kuch: photo cursor-block-button-55521591_zpsuvstvhav.jpg...Usually works for me, Dipster.
    ~Deano :)     -


DR DIP: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DEAN KUCH WHO TURNS 21 TODAY!! lol

he wishes!

dip
    damommy: Happy Birthday, Dean. May it be the best birthday yet. 8-) -


DR DIP: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DEAN KUCH WHO TURNS 21 TODAY!! lol

he wishes!

dip


DR DIP: I noticed my thoughts were removed from this posts..dare to whinge lol
    Jannypan (Jan) : This page is only
    1 page in length.
    As new 'stuff' is
    entered, old 'stuff'
    falls off. Could that
    be the reason yours is gone? -
    brenda bickers: Yes I have noticed that DR DIP.
    It was posted after Dawn's cute doggy posting so must have been removed. -


DR DIP: I will not be promoting my work any more its just not worth the hours on end to get member cent pumps and the reviews I get
I will still review others when I get the time and I thank those that always go to the trouble to review mine

I have always said @ complimentary review certificates is not enough exposure for what you put in
this might sound like a whinge but its just my thought on the review system I have spent hours promoting my work for minimal reviews back so I am a bit disappointed but that's life so I will accept it. Obviously everyone will review those 0ne dollar poems first to get quick member dollars and after the first 20 once they get down to 50 cents no one is interested for the rewards returned
    brenda bickers: Hi DR DIP,
    I am so sorry to hear of this sad news. I do know what you mean, it has taken me a while to get my reviews up to a reasonable amount that makes posting it worth while but I still fall short sometimes.
    Brenda:))x -


DR DIP: Thank you all for your support over the last 2 and a half years I have come to Facebook
In that time I have posted close to 2000 poems
I have decided to have a bit of a break to pursue other passions but rest assured i know i will be lured back by the wonderful wordsmiths on this site who i now consider to be poetic friends and i really appreciate your comments and reviews.

dip
    Unspoken94: My email address: williamrbs@aol.com.
    Bill Stephenson -
    RGstar: I am here DIP.
    Always been a loyal friend, fan and person with a smile to life. Together we will battle through. I am right here
    RGstar

    Check your inbox.
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DR DIP: With respect nor i know how the system works
just think it could have other options to cater for those who do not have the time or patience to promote

thanks for your replies much apprecated

dip
    nor84: The only alternative I know of would be to review enough to buy a $10 certificate, then purchase member cent pumps with real cash. I don't recommend that, because there's no advantage. Another way might be to purchase and use a Lock and Key Certificate (see certificates in your "My" list) and invite people to a lock and key. There's also the Seal of Quality committee, which will give feedback. Neither lock and key nor Seal of Quality require you to promote, or at least not as I recall. -


DR DIP: I reALLY THINK IF PEOPLE AREWILLING TO COME A FAN OF YOUR WORK THEY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE ACCESS TO YOUR POSTS TO COMMENT EVEN IF THE 2 COMPLIMENTARY REVIEW CERTIFICATEs HAVE EXPIRED. JUST MY THOUGHT
DIP
    nor84: If someone becomes your fan, they are notified every time you post. It has nothing to do with the two complimentary reviews. Also, anyone on the site has the ability to check your portfolio at any time and review your work.

    However, many of the best reviewers would hesitate to critique for two cents, because reviewing is how they earn member money to promote their own work. In the half-hour it may take to review a piece for two cents, they could be reviewing several other posts. -
    DR DIP: Takes me 3 mins to review someone nor84.
    They might be able to see your work but they can't comment if there has already been two comments about your specific post.

    The money bit means diddly shit and if they are so hell bent on only reviewing works with dollar value well they aren't true fans.

    Sorry nor, just my opinion, not everyone has the time to sit and review for hours just to get their work ranked higher up the brownie point piss in your pocket tree.

    The true poets are the ones who review and comment because they like your work not that its worth a dollar.

    Personally, the whole clique club ratings "favourites" game is a joke, like why bother having a star ratings system from 1 to 6 if everyone gets an excellent like where can one go but down if the bench mark is set that high? do you see what I am saying with the greatest respect.

    I have said this many times if Fan story is purely based on them making money from people buying member pump dollars to promote their own work I would rather have a higher yearly subscription fee knowing that anyone at any time regardless of these 2 complimentary certificates can review

    Look, I love this site and I love my fellow poets and the diversity of styles my agenda might be totally different to everyone else's that come here I don't need my ego stroked as a poet because i don't rate my poetry at all compared to the many wonderful wordsmiths on this site.

    If people like my posts its purely because they genuinely like them hence I only get on average 4 to 5 reviews each post and I post 2 every night for the last 2 and a half years I have been coming to this wonderful site.

    That's over 1500 poems posted and they might not be everyone's 'cup of tea' but its my style and my passion to write in 4 line rhyme pattern.

    Sure, I can write non rhyming prose all day with beautiful metaphoric flowery words in a sonnet with perfect syllabic count and Iambic techno meter or whatever but it just doesn't interest me and I admire the poets on this site that choose to write in this style.

    Sadly, I am a rhyming tragic and always will be

    Once again, with the the greatest respect

    dip -
    nor84: I'm not a poet, at least not usually, although I have won poetry contests. To review prose, it does take 20 to 30 minutes. To review a short poem, much less.

    If you review others, they will often return the favor. Reviewing the items on the home page pays best, and reviewing newly-posted work in "Up Next" pays about 50 member cents, with a chance of winning a member cent pump. Nobody has to spend real coin of the realm to participate. Most of us get our member dollars from reviewing and/or entering contests. If you see someone's work that you like, become their fan. they may reciprocate, and review all your work as it comes into their inbox. -
    mvbrooks: They do have this option by becoming a fan--then they get an email every time you post and a link to what you have posted. When you get a review you like, consider asking them to be a fan. -


DR DIP: Seriously if you are going to review someone's work and give a 2 star rating(needs improvement) please have the courtesy of suggesting how this can be done.

plus get a few runs on the board and have a few poems on your profile before becoming a credible reviewer.

nothing irks one more than being critically reviewed by someone who hasn't submitted on post

just saying
    nor84: You'll save yourself from receiving a lot of these reviews if you simply block Standard members from reviewing your work. Some of them are good; many others are drive-bys. When you post your work, there's a place where you're asked if you want to accept nonwriter reviews, or some such wording. The default is to accept them. Many of us just say "no", but you need to check that section every time because sometimes it switches back to the default. -
    Linda Engel: agree 100% they should not review unless are members and have posted at lease two or three themselves. You do not deserve a 2 on anything -


DR DIP: IF anyone is remotely interested in reading more of my humble works, I have a Facebook page called "diptales poems from the heart" where you can archive any of my 2748 poems I have written. I would love to have you on board

xxdip


DR DIP: I am being interviewed on California blog talk radio RATED G RADIO WITH GARRET MILLER.

Garret has his own radio blog show and is giving me an hour on his effervescent show
He wants me to talk about my town, my life and read a few of my poems on air.
you can stream it live on the link below:



This is just an opportunity to recite and chew the fat on American radio so I am so appreciative that garret is willing to give me A WHOLE HOUR on his show

It will be live, RAW and uncut..JUST LIKE ME hAHA . sO IF ANYONE IS AT ALL INTERESTED, ESPECIALLY MY FACEBOOK FRIENDS IN America PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS.I would be so appreciative.

PS Garrett put together the promo SO IT'S a bit PRETENTIOUS?..who gives a rats its going to be fun!

**TUESDAT THE 17TH FEB at 2 pm Sydney AEST time""

which equates to 7 pm on Monday 16th Feb CALI TIME

PS no throwing old rotten tomatoes ok?

here is the link:http://www.blogtalkradio.com/garrettmiller/2015/02/17/mark-de-pena-australian-writer-author-poet
    Veeb: How exciting, Dip! All the best to you. -
    DR DIP: thanks Veeb should be a bit of fun I'm sure I don't take things too seriously lol -
    michaelcahill: As we say here in California, that sounds Bitchin' dude! My backyard. -


DR DIP: do you know what REALLY pisses me off? when you get someone review you and give you a one star rating and when you go visit their work to see what a perfect poet writes..alas! they have not posted anything on fanstory

go figure in the 18 months of coming to this wonderful site I have never been given a one star rating actually I am somewhat bemused and embarrassed that someone feels that a post is only worth one star.

Just to piss them off I am going to promote this piece of shit in their eyes the poem is called "No words required" so I would be really interested to see if you feel that it warrants a one star rating which at the end of the day means diddly shit in the scheme of things.
I don't promote my work that often but on principal alone I am going to sit here tonight and promote the shit out of this one poem just piss this reviewer off I am somewhat disgusted. Normally I wouldn't give 2 fks but this has me riled because I feel it isn't too bad a poem and I refuse to have a poor on my portfolio

dip
    Kingsland: This person is not a premier member , but a standard member. Standard members are not allowed to post writing, as they haven't paid their dues. i don't let standards review my posts because i run into this kind of problem every time. When you write a post there is an option of not letting standards review what you write, you should take advantage of that option... -
    Emily George: It's a good well rhymed poem, being creative is a blessing don't take that one review to heart -
    Emily George: I think the poem is well rhymed. Don't let one review get to you. -
    FREEFEE: Dude, dont tell me this is like youtube music where everybody has an asshole thats thier opinion....please dont tell me that. Have you gotten some reviews polite, relevant to your potential...and respectfull? -
    FREEFEE: Trying to catch on to the rules i meant A-hole's..thats not a curse word. -


DR DIP: My anti virus protection has just blocked a POP UP from Fanstory .com

I have just spent hundreds of dollars and a lot of grief having my computer completely cleaned out costing me a lot of wasted time.

There are a lot of questions to be answered here I'm afraid because I had taken my issues directly to Tom several weeks ago when I could not upload any accompanying photos.

I am a trusting man, I love this site. I love the interaction and contribution from amazing wordsmiths out there.

What I don't like is the bullshit given to me when I asked the question that you were sending pop ups and adverts via fanstory after I pay a subscription each year to protect me from this shit.

I am not the first to complain about this.
I took it on the chin and assumed the problem was my end but I am continually getting pop up ads every time I post a poem with "keywords" highlighted in a different colour that send me a link to an add .

If I am denied access to this site after this you'll know why

I am a truthful and fair person I am very patient. but I have come to the end of my tether.

Sorry if my rant upsets some of the "clique club" but enough is enough.

A simple apology would be a good way to start.. because the grief has affected me to the point that I am finding it hard to enjoy the site whilst these pop ups continually come up. I have had computer nerds check out my machine and my programmes and everything is sweet my end my anti virus is just doing its job

sincerely and regretfully, dip
    gypsycaravan: I have this problem on every site now on my iMac but not on my MacAir so it is definitely something on the computer, not the FS site. It is some new viral adware I'm told by Apple that doesn't show up or get cleaned up by most anti-virus programs. -
    nor84: I have two programs I swear by: Adguard, which stops popups (a lot of them are from Google) and Malwarebytes, which cleans out things that slip by Norton Antivirus. I heartily recommend both. Check them out online. -
    DR DIP: thanks for your help guys
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DR DIP: HAVE A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE WHO CELEBRATES TONIGHT..SEEYA ON THE OTHER SIDE!

xxxdr dip


DR DIP: This week I have been really struggling withe the some very significant occurrences in my life

I am very vulnerable at the moment and it makes me realize just how precious life is

Life goes on I know but it goes on with 3 less people in my life
    adewpearl: I'm so sorry to hear of your struggles, Dip. -
    mrsmajor: I sincerely hope things will get better for you...yes life can be difficult at times, but we all struggle through it, and so will you...sending big hugs, knowing we wish you well! -


DR DIP: TOM and fellow members
with the greatest respect to this wonderful site and to the benefit of those members who aren't in the clique club. I would dearly love to see ones work be available for more than just 2 complimentary reviews.

Everyone has a different agenda and motivation for coming here...mine seems to be slightly different than many.

Personally, I do not profess to be a wordsmith by any stretch of the imagination but more a humble rhymer with a passion to write in verse be it poetic warts and all.

There are so many amazing wordsmiths on this site that inspire me so and without naming, for fear of favouritism of omitting someone for being remiss I think everyone has their favourites and sadly those favourites, through no fault of their own other than time constraints, do not have the luxury to review 24 hours a day to gain the required review dollars to promote their work.

In my eyes, it sort of reminds me of the aeroplane club, whereby everyone reviews those $1.20 poets because it only takes 6 reviews on average to attain another review dollars to at least promote ONE of your works for 24 hrs at least giving others a chance to physically comment on your work.

You see, I really don't give a rats about the star system because personally it breeds haters and jealousy amongst fellow poets who simply want egos stroked.

like lets be serious here we have a star system from one to six stars yet no one uses the full range without fear of getting muted for honest opinion.

the problem is when people give 5 AND 6'S EVERY TIME, THE BENCH MARK IS SET THAT HIGH that there is physically no where else to go but down.

it really just promotes everyone to just 'piss in each others pockets' so to speak.

I am a firm believer in pissing off the 'certificate expired' and make it unlimited reviews over a 24 hour period.
I am seriously willing to pay tommy boy and his cohorts, 100 dollars subscription per year (that's 2 meals at the local bistro) for this 'luxury of having no 'certificate expired' and unlimited reviews for 24 hrs the extra subscription money is the money for loss of revenue to the 'pilot' of the fanstory aeroplane club and I think is duly compensated.

I for one, hate the 'certificate expired' message, it shits me to tears and if I sound like a pompous little aussie whinger be it because I hardly ever whinge except of course for the 2 week fiasco where one could not upload pictures with their poem but surprise surprise could all of a sudden havethis reinstated with the new format costing one heaps of grief changing windows versions and removing programmes.

Ok about the new format. Personally I don't think it's far from user friendly.
There are still many glitches to solve, but the fact I can upload pictures again makes me tolerate those glitches.

ok I have had my whinge so come down under and spit ya venom lol

dr dip
    Imogen JH: I feel your pain. I agree with you.
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    Veeb: I like your idea of a 24-hour viewing period; sounds reasonable. I also think 'newbies' should get more than two reviews just so they can learn the ropes and get some diverse reviews. I'm afraid I gave a 'newbie' a not-so--good review recently, which I apologized for. Now I ck. the profile if it's not someone I know. So, I learned something, too. -


DR DIP: So Fanstory has the new format going and now all of a sudden I can upload pictures after telling me for a week the problem is my end.
I will be revisiting my previous posts and addiding the image that inspired the poem .
So if any one is remotely interested they can revisit and if Fan Story in any way had a conscience they would allow anyone to review these again with the relevant photos being gradually attached without this CERTIFICATE EXPIRED MESSAGE COMING UP..that is the least they can do to comopensate for the grief they have put me through over the last week or two saying the problem is my end and spending hours removing programmes, running special virus scans, To those people who so thanklessly make the effort to visit my 2 cent poems I am forever grateful.

dip
    Nosha17: Hi, will take a look later, glad you are now sorted with your image uploading. I have reverted to classic format as I couldn't review for a day, none of the links were functioning. I also thought the sea of purple was horrendous, hard on my eyes. Enough moan for today, bye for now, Faye -


DR DIP: 60 years young TODAY! been the funnest and most rewarding 18 months of coming here thanks everyone who have supported my humble musings and wonderful supportive comments its you guys that give me the incentive and impetus to continue


DR DIP: IS ANYONE ELSE EXPERIECING PROBLEMS WITH DOWNLOADING IMAGES ACCOMPANYING YOUR POSTS? I have a prompt that comes up when I try to add a picture from my computer files that says 'PAGE CANNOT BE DISPLAYED" it is very frustrating
    rosehill (Wendy): Hey Doc,

    I am a total techno twit, so I do have plenty of experience with that message. Check to make sure that it is a .jpg not .jpeg. That usually gums up the works. Also, if it has too much pixel size it will be rejected. So, try downsizing or alphabet check and I'm sure you can get things up and working. -
    DR DIP: rose thanks i will look at those -
    angelajfrank: it's a copy right image that you were trying to use. -
    DR DIP: angela with respect.. it was nothing to do with the image as I never got a chance to SELECT an image when I hit the prompt on edit mode to download image from computer on my picture file it just says PAGE CANNOT BE DISPLAYED..I have been going to the same file page on my computer with this image since coming to fanstory so why would it suddenly change..I am not the only one experiencing this problem
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DR DIP: Can someone tell me how someone can physically get the time to review enough fellow poets to earn enough review dollars that allows you to be in the top 12 front page consistently with sometimes even two poems and be there for a few days? is there enough hours in the day or review dollars available to be earnt to make this possible?

just curious that's all
thanks ,dip
    adewpearl: good answer, Shelley - those of us who do it are retired, and there are obviously that many hours in the day since I find them and still spend quite a few hours doing other things like teaching classes here and editing from home and grading papers from home and doing volunteer work, etc. -
    DR DIP: WELL LUCKY YOUS!! lol
    -
    DR DIP: and you guys have all the time in the world to be anal spag chasers lol
    -
    michaelcahill: Then there are those that neglect every aspect of their life to do this yet, still manage to receive a paycheck and have a loving spouse! -
    Imogen JH: I did wonder about this myself. How do they do it? Two reviews a day and I'm knackered. -
    adewpearl: believe me, when I visit my daughter and grandson for ten days next month, there won't be a single poem or review. When I have something better to do, I fly the coop :-) -
    Dean Kuch: If you're serious about writing, getting published, and making this your career after retirement, then this is the place to be. In addition, the people here become just as close a friend to you as any other -- much like yourself, Dip -- and you enjoy your interactions with them on a daily basis. Those are the reasons that I do it, personally. -


DR DIP: Tonight was my 1003 rd poem submitted since joining Fanstory in May 2013.

I only discovered the passion to write poems 4 years ago before then I had never picked up a poetic pen in anger.

Although I write in simple rhyme, they are ALWAYS written from the heart on many varied subjects.

My passion to write only gets stronger and I just want to thank you guys and gals out there in Fanstory land for supporting me and my humble rhymes and its only your support and encouragement that gives me the impetus to write many more it certainly is a passion.

To those wonderful poets out there who have so thanklessly and gracefully reviewed my work I sincerely thank you.

To those who felt my reviews "abrasive" or unfair I again sincerely apologise for my honesty

I know rhyming verse does not appeal to everyone and I fully appreciate this and conversely various forms of poetry do not appeal to me but I will always admire the skills and "wordsmithmanship" of my fellow Fanstorians.

May our friendships here continue for many more years to come and those friendships forged outside of this site as a result of this site, last forever

AS ALWAYS, dip
    Nosha17: Congratulations, I don't know how you write so many, but it's great that you do. I am glad you decided to write a few years ago, the world of poetry is blessed to have old-fashioned rhyming poets like you (and me?!) to keep the art afloat! Best wishes, Faye -
    DR DIP: thankyou Faye your reply certainly means a lot to me

    A loyal fan xxdip -
    Dr. Nad: Am I allowed to suggest your reading my poem entitled : "Let it Rhyme"? -


DR DIP: I am somewhat puzzled and bemused that some poets here have made the decision to mute me.
If I have ever made a derogatory or displeasing comment so offensive that you feel strong enough to block me from reading your poems and commenting, well I can't do much about it..just would like a reason that's all the courtesy I ask.. And I will totally respect your reason.I am not here to lose friends over honesty I assure you.

thanks

dip
    mrsmajor: I have not muted you, but I have muted others, and most times it was not for the specific review comments on my post...In my experience I have found that some reviewers add to their review of a piece some unnecessary personal comments, sometimes unpleasant, thought to be cute, or funny.....I'm not saying that about you, as I can only speak for myself...
    To me it was best simply to mute the reviewer, rather than have a written discourse....reviews are important to me
    and I look forward to them as regards the
    work I have posted...I have been on this site for 10 years, (10/04) and the help I have received to make me a better writer, has been tremendous, and much appreciated...I don't believe some realize when they are being harsh, or unkind....we must remember we are all people, some more sensitive then others...
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    William Walz: I'd comment, but I'm afraid I'm no longer speaking to you. -
    Dean Kuch: I've been muted by a few too, Dipster. But I'll bet that doesn't come as a surprise to you, LOL. Hey, look at it this way. It's their loss, not yours, my friend. :}

    Deano~ -


DR DIP: Just a question? When you go to review a post and it says work is unavailable does this mean the author has muted you?
if this is the case to the two people who have decidedc to do this have the gumption and conviction to tell me why and not hide behind this little facade of prohibition. that is just so weak.
just sayin, fk i have never cast a bad opinion about anyone I have reviewed..if you want to go off sulking over an opinion have the balls to tell me so i can defend myself!!

so pissed off!
    IndianaIrish: Before you get too pissed, the member may have left the site, been suspended for doing something against the rules, or been removed from the site by Tom. Or they muted you. You can PM someone to ask them to see if their profile opens up for them. If yes, then you can be pissed. -
    LadyCosgrove: Of course, they may have simply amended the title of the piece and the original link simply becomes void. -
    adewpearl: Yes, there are a few receiving that message. Indy's advice is the method I use. Ask a friend to see if the person's page opens for him. If that person gets the same unavailable message, then you haven't been singled out for muting. -
    granny goes viral: Yes, I did that. Found out I was muted. Never knew why. By accident another poem came through and I asked. Was unmuted with no reason offered. Hey, so what. Tom removed someone who was really evil to me. Really nasty. Someone else muted me and I don't even know who it is. I am proud to be muted. My kids would love to mute me. -
    Acquired Taste: ...and some people are muted because they are simply rude and unpleasant to deal with on any level...I have muted people previously because they lack the sense of self and a writer/poet's heart to even be allowed to review. I try to give the benefit of the doubt, open up a discussion with
    them - and if they simply cannot get past their own ego - well, it is there loss. -


DR DIP: Just spent over 6 hours reviewing to promote one of my humble poems..got to 1 place out of getting it to the fearture page and was just about to buy the appropriate membership pumps to take it to the fearture page when the 3 day time limit Expired right in front of me..SO DISAPPOINTED and disallusioned with the system at the same time oh well thems the poetic breaks I have sorta lost the impetus to post right now I will revaluate my worth of coming here over the next day or so for I can see how you can get totally obsessed with this site and the review process

my little whinge for the day and believe me it hardly ever happens so I feel I have every right to have a gripe! lol

xxdip
    shelley kaye: umm.... i don't understand. why wait to put the pumps on it? use the cert and pumps on the same day....

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    ravenblack: It would also probably be easier to post in the top twelve without people posting multiple poems at ever-increasing amounts. -
    DR DIP: yeah well isn't that what fanstory is all about? posting your work? totally misunderstood how this clique club works raven
    my main gripe was we were talking about 5 mins here and for the life of me i reviewed bloody hard to achieve this position lol

    "multiple poems at ever increasing amounts" hmm don't worry that won't be happening anymore so don't worry
    shelley i did not wait this was a test and I obviuously failed still can't see how anyone could review enough people to attain the required points unless they are buying member dollars i just reviewed for 6 hours straight at the end of the day it mattters not people either come here because they like what you write or they are brownie point hunters personally the review ratings system breeds spitefulness and pissing in one's pocket syndrome like why have aq ratings system that goes fcrom 1 to 6 if everyone gives everyone 5 or higher? like that leaves no where else to go but down to you see my point?
    with respect dip -
    ravenblack: I was not referring to you with multiple poems posted at once. When things are posted for upwards of 1.50 and one person has 3 or 4 poems posted at once in the top twelve, it makes it nigh impossible to review enough to place a poem in the top twelve. Unless you use your credit card which the vast majority of us cannot afford to do. -
    Erik McGinley: If you are in the top half of the second page you get almost as many reviews as you do if you are in the top twelve, which doesn't mean that I don't put something into the top twelve when I want the attention on something.

    Bumping something right up to number one with an ott reward really doesn't do you any good, though maybe it's good for reviewers.

    People who earn their cents from reviewing review just about everything so their is no real point in worrying too much about your placement.

    Top twelve anywhere works if you just want a little extra exposure. -
    Samuel Dickens: I understand. You can work your tail off doing reviews and get very little in return. Last year I was #25 in short works, but now am somewhere below whale poop. -


DR DIP: I READ TOO MANY BEAUTIFUL POETS ON HERE WHO HAVE NOT THE TIME OR THE IMPETUS To promote their beautiful works and as I delve into their profiles I find many beautiful poems unread all because they are only worth 2 cents to the hungry brownie points hungry poets whose works although very good would pale into mediocrity compared, Look! please do not take me the wrong way on this point it is just a personal observation..that some of fanstory's most brilliant poets and wordsmiths( and the list is huge) works do not see the light of day other than the two complimentary reviews before the are lost into the archives of anonymity. Its sad but unfortunatel if fanstory is to survive financially I suppose the monetary side of the business has to be.
personally I would rather pay a flat fee of 100 dollars that's an extra 52 dollars per yearly subscription ( 2 meals at the bistro) and have our works seen by and reviewed by all as many times as they like.
is this opinion shared by anyone else or am I just being whatever?
please share your view here for I know there are some beautiful wordsmiths out there whose works will be unseen by the majority I suppose at the end of the day its depends on your agenda and impetus to come to this wonderful site hey if its for the love of it and the passion just to write well I'm with you

xxdip
    adewpearl: I agree that many fine writers receive little notice because they do not promote their work. As for the solution, I never would have signed up on the site for $100. That extra $52 is quite significant for many of us. I don't go to a bistro twice a year unless someone else is paying because I can't afford it, and I know from talking with many people who can't afford to take my classes that lots of folks are on fixed incomes and don't see that kind of money as something they can part with. Many of us have more time than money and earn our promotional dollars by reviewing others. For those without the time to review and without the funds to buy promotional dollars, I wish I had a solution. -
    mrsmajor: DR DIP, I agree with you, I often look at the work of writers way down on the listings, and find beautiful work, (at least to me)...but the only way we can get our work posted is by reviewing, or buy member cents....I just hope the poets would review more, so that their work would be read..Also the more one writes, there's the chance of being included in fan lists....That also helps to get one's work read, it's a matter of sharing each other's poetry...I must say I would not pay $100 at sign-up time....That's a bit much, but I do wish all the poets on this site, the very best.. -
    michaelcahill: A lot of truth in what you say. But, remember that those of us that scrape up the 9.95 to promote and get reviews get that sum by reviewing several pieces ourselves. Participation is the name of the game. 100 bucks is a lot for me as well. The individual that settles for the two reviews is doing just that, settling for that. No one is preventing that person from reviewing the pieces on the front page and promoting that piece. You are correct though, I've read some great work that slips through the cracks. But, if the artist doesn't care enough to promote it what can we do? -
    DR DIP: with respect to all you guys I really do make the effort to review others and they are NOT your one dollar twenty poets all the time I review ya 2 cent poets as well as for the extra 52 dollars for a year..that equates to putting away one dollar a week? oh please we are not talking thousands of dollars here just relinquish a cup of coffee or a donut a few times a year and you have the money aside. really, 100 bucks sounds pricey in the scheme of things but to get your works reviewed by any body and every body endlessly is a small price to pay. look I love this site and I know it cost money to run it..I don't smoke, I don't drink I surf and that cost money so to pursue my passion I work and put a little aside for that trip same could be for my second passion these days and that is to write and visit this sire and believe me I really make an effort when I have the time to review as many as possible but the incentive unfortunately is to continue to review the poets worth the most dollars to get to the 995 the quickest way possible so I too an guilty of being a slave to the system if my comments irk people be it but I am sticking with my stance on increasing the subscription to allow for unlimited reviews like lets put it out there and see what the other 2 cent poets think? -
    DR DIP: With respect Brooke you of all people should see the point I am making you mist be fanstory's most diligent eviewre putting in MANY hours to get your review points up and that's fine as you say you have the time I suppose its like the analogy of handwashing your car yourself or taking it to the car wash and letting others do it for you lol
    let's just agree to disagree ok!!

    xxdip -
    michaelcahill: I'm not sure that there is an actual disagreement. Perhaps two ideas that are compatible are being stated. What if there was an option for a more expensive membership that would garner more reviews. A 100 dollar deluxe membership that would get you four or five reviews instead of two? I've reviewed many 2cent pieces and encouraged the authors to do some reviewing and promote their work. Some have done so and become fairly prominent. I don't think there is one answer. Perhaps the answer is a combination of all that we are discussing. -
    Dean Kuch: I read everything that comes into my inbox, for the most part, and time permitting. It matters very little to me if it is worth two cents, or one dollar in "pretend money". Something can be learned and garnered from everything we read, regardless of the blood money being offered to read it. But, sadly, I too find I have to promote my own work to astronomical proportions monetarily if I want that particular piece of poetry or prose to be reviewed adequately. Perhaps it is the genre in which I write. Not too many fairies or butterflies live in the dark corners of my world. -
    DR DIP: Good debate by all and I can see merit on both sides of the equation lets see what comes out of the wash I am sure fanstory admin. are aware of this argument that has raised its head more than once at least we have stirred the pot which is a good thing I feel -
    angelajfrank: you write so well how did you get started? I'm
    having a problem with putting my work in order. and finding the right publisher. I'm on facebook angela pavlovsky. -
    DR DIP: angela which one ARE YOUON FACEBOOK SEVERAL COME UP? ITS PROBABLY EASIER YOU PUT IN A FRIEND REQUEST TOMY ACCOUNT NAME OF:
    Mark De Pena(DIP)

    also you can openly visit my page of poems only called Diptales poems from the heart -


DR DIP: Well,I have now been coming to fan story for over 9 months now and in that time I have managed to publish over 500 poems as of the other day.
to all my good friends that I have made since coming to this wonderful site I thankyou sincerely for you continuous positive and encouraging reviews of my posts. I am so appreciative of your continued support

xxdip
    Dean Kuch: You are always welcome, Dipster! I wouldn't have it any other way... -


DR DIP: I just want to takr this opportunity to wish everyone a very merry Christmas. and hope our fanstory friendship continues into the new year and beyond. AS off tonight I would have posted 400 of my original works on this wonderful site. To that end, I would like to sincerely thank all my fellow poets who have found the time to review and comment both positively and negatively..but always with conviction
MERRY XMAS AND THAN YOU!

XXXDIP


DR DIP: WELL on Tuesday last, was my 59th birthday and my 8th month of being on fanstory.
I continue to read and be amazed at so many beautiful and talented poets on this site and your continued very valued critique and comment. As I have said on several occasion in reply and message, it has been a huge learning curve for me and I sincerely appreciate advice and suggestions given to my humble posts . I have now posted over 370 poems on this wonderful site and beside the politics and bullshit on a few things I still enjoy it.. I have no interst what so ever in the value OF THE RATINGS SYSTEM OR THE POINTS GIVEN IT MEANS DIDDLY SHIT TO ME BUT Rather the positive and constructive critique..not some piss in ya pocket bullshit just because you want brownie points stuff..to my 'fans' which I know sounds so pretentious! lol
I am indebted to your continued support of my work
and to that I am forever grateful

I hope our fanstory friendship continues for a long time to come!

xxxdr dip


DR DIP: tonight i submitted my 300th poem on fanstory probably means nothing in the scheme of things but to me its a bit of a milestone. I only joined fanstory in may and although time does not allow me to review all the works of fellow poets that i would like i have thoroughly enjoyed the site and the beautiful poets i have continually had the pleasure of reviewing when given the chance through time constraints. i have learnt so much and have gained a lot of great fanstory friends. to the people that continually review my humble simple works i sincerely thank you.the last 4 years since i discovered the passion to write, have been some of the most enjoyable and satisfying days of my life and i sincerely thankyou for this and hope our fanstory friendships continue

xxxdip
    Selina Stambi: Happy anniversary, Dr. Dip! I read Sheryn's beautifully romantic poem dedicated to you both and thought I'd pop in with my wishes.

    Many, many more happy years to you both!

    Cheers!! :) -
    DR DIP: thankyou for your well wishes and kind thoughts REACHING! much appreciated

    dip -


DR DIP: It wopuld be remiss of me not to personallly thank all of my fellow poets and especially people that "fanned" me. I have really appreciated this site for the shear brilliance of my fellow writers who continually leave me in awe of the ability with the written word.I am greatly honoured and humbled by the many warm reviews I had received over the 4 months of coming to fanstory. I really do value and rate this site..poetic politics and all and as I have said many times, it has been a real learning curve for me since coming and contributing here. The quality of works I have reviewed and read blows me away. For i am just a hack compared to some of the beautiful works.
unfortunately time and dedication to this site to what it deserves is untenable for me at the moment so it was either 100 % or not at all..so i have had to unfortunately give it a break for a while, while I pursue other projects..I have some 4 books in the woodwork to peublish. I have written enought poems for 10 books with 150 poems in each. but obviously would cull down to what I feel is 4. I have al;ready self published "poems from the heart" and have been overwhelmed by the response i have received..I am hoping to have my next book poems from the sea published before xmas..time management is my biggest problem at the moment..between writing , operating and keeping a wife happy..there are only so many hours in the day I'm afraid!
if anyone who is remotely interested in following my poetry i actually have a facebook page its: Mark De Pena (dip)..which allows you to have access to every poem i have ever written in the last 3 years that i only started to write.
once again..thankyou so much for your support
an time to review much appreciated
"this is just farewell..its not goodbye"
    Dean Kuch: photo tumblr_ms1i4liXxa1syl3yro1_4001.gif
    Bye-bye...bye-bye...bye-bye...bye-bye...

    (Well, I couldn't very well send you off without saying a creepy so long, farewell, and I'll see you on facey, now, could I dip? Take care, my friend...

    ~Deano~ -


DR DIP: "Pays 1 point and 2 member cents"....I've said this many times before,what is the incentive for a reviewer to want to even review your work for a couple of cents?
Oh PLEASE!!
How is your worth determined here? It has certainly got ME stuffed I tell you..in 6 more posts I would have submitted 200 poems in just over 3 months coming here....after 200?..I'm out of here!!
I tell ya, I'd rather pay a hundred dollars a year subscription fee and piss this silly review ratings system off completely if it meant that Everybody can review your works as many times as they want to, then to see this bloody "Certificate Expired" after two reviews come up..Sorry, but as much as I have really enjoyed this site and the beautiful talented poets on here.
I am completely over the clique club I'm afraid.
The pyramid selling, aeroplane club might suit some...but I am done. To all my friends that I have made on here....Thanks for your very generous reviews and critiques over the short time I have been coming here, and even though I might have pissed off a few people with HONEST reviews and scores below 5 or 6 I have still enjoyed this site immensely.

TO all my fellow "Poets" thanks for your enjoyable contributions.

yours in fun and writing

dip
    Torrence Winter: Good bye! See you later! Don't write us a postcard. ^_^ -
    DR DIP: no post cards from where I'm going to Torrence.."one swallow don't make a winter!"

    xxdip -
    rhonny: Really sorry to see you go dip. It's been nice seeing familiar names on here, and waiting for reviews of those who are being honest as well as friendly. Am going to miss you! rhonny :( -
    DR DIP: i'll be back one day for sure

    xxxdip -


DR DIP: I have to make an admission which I am very ashamed of. The other day after I raised enough brownie points to go further up in the seats in the fanstory aeroplane club,I actually found I received more than two reviews for my rather inane rhyming work lol and as I usually personally respond to EVERY review that I receive when I was asked about certain lines in one of my 180 poems I had decided to re promote I admit to becoming lazy and Cut and pasted an explanation on to the 6 or so reviewers I received! I was utterly disgusted with myself and I promise it will not happen again!!
can I get out of the confession box now before returning to the back of the plane with the plebs? lol


cattle class passenger dip


DR DIP: As of tonight I have now posted 180 poems on fanstory and in that time I have reviewed many other poet's work with enthusiasm and honesty. but what is the incentive for people to review your work if its only worth 32 membership cents to the reviewer? just asking.
as much as i love this site i am a bit bewildered by the scaling and rating of some of the poets that I review who's work is fantastic only to find their work is only worth 2 membership cents! go figure..yeah, yeah i know all the stuff about there been there a long time and thats why they are worth more member dollars..but its natural that you would be favouring the more "noted" poets in the fanstory aeroplane club whose worksare constantly worth above $1.20.. that means it would only take on average seven revies to gain $10 membership dollars to by 3 days of review time..I'm sorry if i sound like i am whinging but i am whinging on behalf of all fanstory poets whose works deserve a whole lot better tyhan 3 review points!! just my opinion...if i have completely missed the point of how this amway style acknowledgement works i a pologise and refute my whinge!!

yours in writing and reviewing
dr Dip
    nor84: If you review someone's work and it's only paying two cents, blame the poet for not promoting. It may be that he or she did promote and the certificate expired before you read the poem. Work reverts to two cents once the certificate expires. Some members don't promote at all, and in that case only the first few to read the work get the basic, which is about 50 cents. After that, the work is at two cents. As far as review points go, forget about it. They have nothing to do with how much a work pays the reviewer or how high the poet rises in the rankings. The only thing that matters so far as rankings are concerned is the number of reviews the poem receives, and if it isn't promoted, it doesn't get very many. -
    DR DIP: fully understand this nor you are missing my point i'm afraid maybe i didn't explain it well enough whether they promote it or not and the complimentary two reviews expires i don't agree with this whole principal as i have said the incentive to gain review dollars is to look at the top 12 poets because they obviously draw the highest reviews because of exposure..if one wants to promote the less significant poet and they are only worth 2 cents, you hav3e to review an awful lot of so called insignificant poets and unfortunately thats the criteria of the system. i would love and do try and promote the less exposed poet..but for me to gain points to promote my own work by buying review time requires a hell of a lot of reviews and that can be very time consuming. i'd rather pay 100 dollars peryear to fanstory admin than 48 dollars a year if it means more review exposure time,,just my opinion and viewpoint

    with respect ,dip -
    ann marie mazz: dear Dr DIP

    allow me to say
    I agree with you
    yesterday alone
    I reviewed 40 entries

    as of right now I have two entries worth 47 each to the reviewer

    I can not raise them because I do not have the member dollars

    I spent hours on the computer yesterday and did not achieve much

    however
    it was a pleasure to read
    I was never a fan of rankings

    I only read and comment on the entries that interest me

    if there is something that does not I just pass and move on

    my point is this
    yes the system is off balance

    the writer can not raise because of lack of member dollars

    it doesn't mean for me that the writer is being offensive or has no regard to the reviewer

    I have seen and commented on many 2 cent entries

    but that's just me

    so what is the solution

    I can not speak for anyone else
    I however do not want to buy member dollars with my credit card

    I thank you for raising this issue
    it always has a way of being ever present and before us

    I also hope my comment does not offend anyone

    my intent DR DIP is to agree with you and your post

    my best to all
    ann marie

    -
    DR DIP: EXACTLY!! and well put ann marie!
    thanks for concurring in my puzzlement and inbalance

    dip -
    Arnhem: Write on Dr Dip.......It's a scam, no money no honey. These people set up these ventures to make money, not to support aspiring writers. Have a read of some of the higher rated writers works and you will see that the quality of their work is sometimes poor and all the ratings stars are bought with cold hard cash, not well worked words? I thought this site was about genuine appraisals from like minded wordsmiths but it appears to be just another rort. Scamstory suckered me in too, I refuse to add insult to injury by forking out my hard earned cash after having already paid forty something dollars to register. -
    Arnhem: It's all about pissing in your own pocket I'm afraid.
    -


DR DIP: Just realised tonight I have now posted over 160 poems in the 3 months coming here!...Thanks so much to all who go to the trouble of reviewing my work much appreciated even when its only worth 2 member points to you!..why would bother hey?
I'd rather see the star system pissed off all together, have unlimited reviews or views to my work and pay an extra 50 bucks joining fee then to have these so called "certificate expired" prompts come up after only 2 views..not everyone has the time for a start, to sit down and review hundreds of poems only to get 2 cents for it..no wonder fan story are losing good poets on this site because of this exact reason..sad really?
    seren james: That's nearly two a day, every day, are you going to keep up the pace? -
    DR DIP: I have 1500 poems seren..the pace isn't an issue..its the acceptance and my credibility that worries me more lol -
    Sueellen11: It is very hard for poets like me who have just joined your site, and have no idea let alone the so called points or dollars to buy the certificates, I knew nothing about the certificates and I got a message they expired it says you can post poems free but I try and I have to upgrade to a member, that fine I more then likely will but I can't afford to pay just yet, so I can't post I can only read others works, it says free contest too but when I try to enter it says I can't till I buy a membership, that's a bit deceiving, but dr Dip I agree with you, I have noticed the difference in the points and dollar thiny just want to say my peice and sorry if anyone read my poem I did get to post in not getting enought credits for their reviews I cant get certificates yet sorry sueellen -


DR DIP: I wanna share the love!... that's what!
    William Walz: If you do, don't forget to use protection! -
    DR DIP: I have an iambic techrometer inserted! -
    DanielEkine: I know the feeling. Absolutely. My writing is now darker and more beautiful DR DIP. -


DR DIP: Just realised I have posted 106 poems in the 2 months I have been coming here.
Thankyou so much to everyone who has taken the time to read my posts. If I have been remiss in not thanking or getting to respond and review your work it has only been for lack of time as i really enjoy all facets and styles of poetry that i have now been exposed to here on fanstory

Again, thank you so much for being a fanstory friend and reviewer and critique of my work. As i have said before, it has been a real learning curve for me

dip
    Poetic Visionary: I found your comment in the forums and have never seen your work. So setting my eyes on your screen name, I now must see what kind of dipping dr. you are. -
    DR DIP: go for it! lol

    dip away
    -


DR DIP: So here I am over a month down the track into my new obsession..coming on fanstory.
I'm loving the diversity and the sheer brilliance of fellow poets .and I really appreciate both positive and negative critique and advice to improve. As i have said, It is a real learning curve for me and I have really enjoyed this curve I am on.
sadly i do suffer from severe short term memory loss and my concentration span to read short stories and novels is zilch! lol so i apologise that i have never critiqued this genre on fanstory but believe me i deeply appreciate how well some people can write and I am in awe.For those who have enjoyed my posts of my romantic style poems i am deeply honoured that you have received them with such positive reviews. i still have so much to learn about the rules of poetry because really i didn't realise there were any before coming here? lol
still i will endeavour to grammatically and poetically improve my writings as time progresses

xxdip
    Taffspride: Welcome, and enjoy the journey through the realms of some wonderful poetry on the site. -


DR DIP: Is there actually any stage where you become eligible to publish more poems than the allocated two in 24 hrs? Its just that I have so much to offer
just asking

dip
    adewpearl: nope, members who have been here five years or five days are all limited to two posts a day -
    Sally Carter: And that's enough! More than that and you're likely to struggle for readers. We all have only so many hours...
    :~) -
    DR DIP: Sweet..I'm pacin! lol

    WELCOME TO FANSTORY..AND HAVE A NICE DAY! lol -


DR DIP: Can someone tell me what the term to be "muted"..in the context of fan story..does that happen if you don't give someone 5 stars or above?..just wondering for I have been muted by someone who obviously didn't appreciate me giving below 5 and this was someone who I had admired greatly as a contributor and poet on this site..oh well..a bit stupid having stars below 5 if you can't use them..its a bit like a surfing judge..if you give a 10 on their first wave..you have no where else to go but down I'm afraid. What happened to personal opinion?
just saying..I'm really starting to learn and understand how this nepotistic system works sadly.Am I being too cynical..please share your thoughts..DO we all score too high and set a bench mark that leaves you no where else to go but down? please comment and tell me I have it all wrong
thanks
dip
    nor84: People mute you for various reasons, one of them being if you give less than five stars. It's THEIR loss, not yours. There are plenty who, on the other hand, appreciate a four-star review, and even lower, as long as it's delivered politely, with an intention to help. The site has a reviewing system and everyone is told when they join to expect tough critiques. Tough doesn't mean unkind, it just means thorough and telling the writer if there's a problem he or she should overcome.

    Some people are chasing the meaningless rankings when they should be trying to polish their craft. -
    DR DIP: thanks nor ,understood

    dip -
    Dean Kuch: When an author on this site 'mutes' you, it because they no longer have any desire to have correspondence with you, whether it be the writings you post, or comments and reviews you wish to give them. Typically, this rarely happens here, but, it has happened to me. Sometimes, the poets our authors who consider themselves to be above everyone else would rather mute you for a scathing, yet honest, review you've given them. Their work, in their eyes, is beyond reproach, criticism, or editing. If they post it, you'd better like it...OR ELSE! As said earlier, it is their loss, not yours. If we close our collective minds to opinions from the very people we are trying to entertain? We may as well hang up our writing tools and go our separate ways. After all, even Stephen King has an editor... -
    DR DIP: I'm gradually understanding the term "pissing in one's pocket!" lol
    the clique club runs rife..its nearly on par with pyramid selling sadly or amway lol
    or the aeroplane club
    continue to fly the flag of sincerity in comment and review Dean..even if it only flutters,I will always salute it!! lol
    dip -
    Selina Stambi: I just discovered that I've been muted by someone too - have no idea why - as I very rarely hand our lower stars and then always make sure I explain why!

    Welcome to Fanstory, sir - nice to meet you! :) -
    Gert sherwood: Hello Dr dip I have been on FS since 2006 and here is a thought I would like to pass on--

    Yes, I know
    there are writers
    on Fanstory
    that are unknown,
    I see their poetry and stories
    just sitting around
    day by day.

    How would you feel
    if you were a nobody
    and waiting to be found?
    They have a name
    and would like
    a bite of fame.

    Gert -


DR DIP: Really enjoying this site and the critique, be it positive or negative. To all fellow poets and writers thanks for you heartwarming support you have given me in my very short time visiting this site

dip


DR DIP: Hi my name is Dr dip..I only discovered the passion to write about 3 years ago.,when i opened a facebook account to check out a friends posts of old surfing photos. I started to answer in rhyming comments which then progressed to writing ditties then finally writing poems..i have written close on 1200 poems. I have recently published a book called POEMS FROM THE HEART and i have set up a facebook page to promote my book called "Diptales,Poems from the heart"
    SueZen: Hi Doc,

    Thank you so much for elaborate message concerning my poem & Brooke xxx Totally agree with all you mention, say...my 'dip' was short-lived, more by 'guilty' feelings than anything else actually, as really don't care...all so petty, egotistic need/desire to judge, etc...find one's 'worth', essential truth/value outside oneself in whatever way, through whatever means & for whatever personal reason ??? Fair enough, I grant, accept & am happy I have transformed, evolved to another state of being...I write & create much more for its own sake, for the pure joy, pleasure of & passion for sharing, inspiring, etc...for the sake & welbeing of the HEART & Soul haha !
    My happiness does not depend on, is in no way determined by ambitious goals, performance, winning prizes, etc. Hope many will dip into your Poems From The Heart !!! I am not a regular 'facebookie', but shall see if can find ? Love, Light & Laughter, Salut, Namaste 'n Hug Sue xxx -