DR DIP

You have your reasons I've been muted
Petty reasons I've refuted
Well now that I've been executed
I still sit and wonder why

Should have been here in the clique
Guess I wasn't very quick
Suppose my wounds I have to lick
I say this with a sigh

Been on here for 5 years now
Fellow Fanstorians take a bow
Don't take me serious, don't have a cow
If your ego has been dented

Fanstory is a lot of fun
Even when you're on the run
Full of banter and a bit of pun
Not something I've resented

Love to call in when there's time
Dropping in my simple rhyme
Rhyming verse is not a crime
And have different pronunciation

So I'll continue to post right here
Just those times when I am near
But getting muted is not very clear
You've caught my fascination

Suppose we are all shapes and sizes
Sometimes we make some compromises
And rate other's work in what comprises
A truthful explanation

Keep them coming and keep them strong
Write them like you should belong
Let others tell you right from wrong
About your written creation

dip

In the nearly 5 years of coming to Fanstory, I have and had met many amazing people/wordsmiths who I have actually become friends with outside of Fanstory. I suppose that's what it's all about hey, meeting people with a common passion.
To those loyal fanstory friends who still go to the trouble to review my un promoted work I am very grateful
I don't post so prolifically anymore but still like to call in and read my fanstory friends' writes.
Unfortunately, I just don't have the time to review at the moment but will endeavour to get back to reviewing in due course.

Keep writing

dip

l.raven: Hi Waves, FanStory is not a life...and a lot who finally get their books written leave...you do the important things you need to do done...I fall off and on myself...but I do love reading the posts on here...some wonderful people...you are one...and some wonderful writings...poetry...your doing fine...now keep that smile on your face...just take care...love Linda xxoo

March 24, 2018 at 2:32PM

DR DIP: It's a pity that we all come "slaves to the system" It got to the point where I was feeling guilty for not posting or reviewing. Sometimes time must be spread across all passions.

March 24, 2018 at 9:36PM

flylikeaneagle: Dr. Dip: We had ten inches of white powder snow on Saturday. Some of us have to shovel, do chores, and cook. Yes, I'm flying in to say hi. I've seen some robins and heard some birds sing. So...I'm inspired! flylikeaneagle

March 26, 2018 at 5:20PM

Is getting muted the same as getting one's poetic balls cut off? lol

closetpoetjester: Are you missing your poetic gonads, dip? haha now THAT is a poetic vision indeed! Pxx

March 14, 2018 at 1:47AM

DR DIP: I am a Fanstory Unich! lol

March 14, 2018 at 4:14AM

Dean Kuch: Yes. It's even worse when you aren't told why you were muted.

March 17, 2018 at 2:05PM

To those wonderful Fanstorian friends who continue to go to the trouble of reviewing my sporadic, fleeting posts these days I really do appreciate it and I deeply apologize again that I am not reciprocating reviews in kind of your wonderful writes.
Sadly I just don't have the time at the moment to fairly put in the hours anymore on reviewing everyone equally with the thoroughness you all deserve.
After I finish my present commitments I will endeavour to make the time to everyone review again.

Sincerely Dip

Missing that little touch of ghoul and horror already.
Hurry back Deano

susanjohn: Me too :-(

March 5, 2018 at 6:29PM

closetpoetjester: The only little horror I'm missing...is you dip LOL

March 14, 2018 at 1:48AM

Tom thanks for removing my profile thought I suppose the word 'bullshit' was a bit to harsh for some sensitive egos and that might have offended I apologize..I spend for whole life doing that lol

F. Wehr3: You do realize there are children on this site as well, don't you?

January 5, 2018 at 4:45PM

DR DIP: yeah I apologize you won't have to worry about that anymore

January 5, 2018 at 4:52PM

F. Wehr3: I doesn't offend me, and you can put whatever expletive you want in your thoughts. I would only ask that you consider it in further posts. The reason Tom removed the post would most likely be the argument between the three of you this morning. Getting personal with another member is not allowed. Just FYI.

January 5, 2018 at 5:00PM

DR DIP: I never saw the comments F. I was fast asleep down under and by morning it was gone. As I said you won't have to worry about me any more.

January 5, 2018 at 11:13PM

Dean Kuch: It was I who opened my big mouth, dipster. But, hey, last time I checked this is still a free country.

January 6, 2018 at 2:24AM

It's sad but I am getting tired. I am struggling with motivation.
I have made many great friends on Fanstory and read many great poems from many talented poets. I just can't keep up with reviewing any more and get so caught behind.
I feel like I am a slave to the system sometimes.
It is a great place to store and archive my poems.
If I miss reviewing you I apologise I just have to review reciprocal reviewers. I think I'll be winding down.
Seriously I cannot see the advantage in posting two poems per night any more.
I don't chase rankings and never have.
If anyone who likes my poetry for what it is I really haven't the time to promote them anymore. and I think it totally unfair that I expect people to review my simple rhyme if I cannot return the favour.
I have been here for four and half years now and have posted over 3700 poems in that time.
I have been forever grateful for your support over this period.
I'll just see how things pan out with other things in my life.
I don't think I have actually sat with my wife at night and simply watch telly with her. I've let Fanstory become an obsession I'm afraid I cannot stay up to all hours of the morning reviewing anymore. So if I post its purely to store my poems.

love dip

Brett Matthew West: The problem with the last sentence, "So if I post its purely to store my poems" is that once something is posted it goes to whatever fans there are. The only way they can clear the posting off their account is to review it. What happens at that point is up to the writer as far as whether they reply to the review or not. The only known way around this situation is not to post at all.

January 5, 2018 at 6:31AM

DR DIP: That's total bullshit Brett. If you don't want to read something irrespective if you are a fan or not you just don't bother opening it and why should you give a shit? Or am I giving you a condescending, snide comment again? If I want to store my poems on here I will I have paid for the privilege just mute me and that will save all your problems love dip

January 5, 2018 at 6:44AM

Dean Kuch: Don't let him get to you, Doc. Just ignore him. I do.

January 5, 2018 at 6:48AM

Jannypan (Jan) : Dr Dip, Go ahead post as you will when you have time. Don't mind what others think. Don't let them make up your mind to leave, stay, write, or not. You can go to your list of fans & mark 'stop getting notifications'. You will keep your fans just not get THEIR messages in your inbox. Everyone has their own style of writing. Don't apologize for yours. I hate to see people [fans] leave. Maybe aim for 2 posts per week. Jan

January 5, 2018 at 10:32AM

mrsmajor: dip, don't let anyone change you...don't let ANYONE! do that...Post when you can, and those that enjoy your work will always read what you write...be who you're always...don't leave those of us that enjoy your work...write whenever you can... Victoria

January 5, 2018 at 6:57PM

kiwigirl2821: Hi Mark. Look no matter where you are those of us who are your friends will know and still enjoy who you are and what you contribute. The other thing is I will almost guarantee you that your wife will LOVE spending a few evenings with her and not FS. You are awesome mate, don't let this kind of thing rule you. Just do what you need to do. Promise to still respect you in the morning! xx d

January 9, 2018 at 8:26PM

What if there were 30 hours in a day?
Would you spend any more time reviewing on Fanstory? lol

tired dip
goodnight from 'down under' it's 2 am in the morning down here!

Dean Kuch: U-h-h-mmm...Nope!

January 4, 2018 at 10:30AM

flylikeaneagle: I would have more time to sleep...zzz. flylikeaneagle - nancy

January 4, 2018 at 4:17PM

"That'll do Pig..that'll do"...from the movie, BABE

THERE ARE NO RULES IN POETRY...just people who want to make them!

Rebel dip

Dean Kuch: It's always been about expressing yourself in a way that is uniquely you, hasn't it? That's what I thought... ~Deano

January 4, 2018 at 9:34AM

DR DIP: well I certainly THOUGHT that when I discovered the passion to write lol

January 4, 2018 at 9:58AM

mrsmajor: dip, I've been writing using my own voice all the time...and I enjoy it...some like what I write, and some do not...but when you change your voice to suit anyone, you have lost yourself...Hugs,

January 5, 2018 at 7:02PM

OH I been muted! woopiddy do
Well executed I think I know who
Must have been something I said
That's pretty mean have you got any cred?

I've been muted for a chicken shit reason
Wasn't disputed but it wasn't too pleasin
Seems to me it's about egos so sensitive
It's hard to see if its a fanstory representative

I've been muted! Naughty old me
I'm such a nice guy, how can this be?(lol)
Plenty of fish in this FanStory sea
I'm not too selfish, my mutes are for free!

Dean Kuch: Yeah, Dipster. I know exactly how you feel, mate.

January 4, 2018 at 9:32AM

mrsmajor: Once people allow their ego to take over, that's when we see a lot of negativity...dip, your writing is welcomed by those that appreciate you...that's all that counts...personally there a few that read my work, and I'm pleased with that...its all about their ego for some here...

January 4, 2018 at 12:43PM

susanjohn: Mute you!?? and miss out on all the fun?? Their loss.

January 4, 2018 at 3:45PM

To celebrate the start of the new year and the obvious rankings chase there has been an inundation of posts. Personally, I will endeavour to review everyone of you but I am sorry if I don't get to you straight away. At the moment my priorities will have to be those who go to the trouble consistently reviewing my poetry and reciprocate my reviews of their wonderful works.
To all poets and writers and newcomers in 2018 may I wish you all the best in your endeavours.
Remember it's the passion to write not the result. Never lose the passion.
If people like your writes they will follow your work even if not promoted above 2 cents.
I read people's poetry on this site because I like their style and subject matter not their promoted dollar value. I would like to think that that is the reasons others read mine too.

Dean Kuch: I'm with you there, mate!

January 4, 2018 at 9:43AM

Congratulations to all top 5 trophy winners in all categories great effort. and well deserved

dip

Kerry Robinson: Congratulations. Dip!!!

January 3, 2018 at 1:11PM

HEY! fellow fanstorians and Fanstory friends I have made throughout the year Its New years eve day in Australia its 6: 30 am Sunday morning.
May I wish you all a very happy New year and wonderful and very fruitful 2018
Cya in the new Year

xxdip

l.raven: HI Waves, it's about 6:15pm Sunday night here...and we are still waiting...and yes we made another year...A very Happy New Year to you my friend...I'm trying to post...but the grandkids are driving me crazy....LOL...so it will have to wait...LOL...time for dinner...have a wonderful evening...you and the misses...God Bless...love Linda xxoo

December 31, 2017 at 6:23PM

To all out there in wonderful fanstory land Hope you have a Merry Christmas. I am so grateful for all who supported and reviewed my humble but heartfelt writes throughout the year and may 2018 bring us all much Joy as did 2018
For those that have lost loved ones throughout 2017 my heart goes out to you.

sincerely Dip

DR DIP: I meant 2017 lol

December 25, 2017 at 9:44AM

mrsmajor: Thanks, dip, for those kind words, your work has been a pleasure for me, and I wish you all the best in 2018...

December 25, 2017 at 2:15PM

closetpoetjester: Hope you had a great Chrissy dip...have a great New Year and congrats on finishing in the top 10.

December 27, 2017 at 11:30PM

I really hate the expression 'fluff reviews".
The fact that someone has gone to the time and trouble to review one's work is great effort within itself.
We have over 400 plus supposedly active writers on FanStory so there are a lot of posts to read.
Sometimes small poems such as haiku and 2-4-2 and 4 line poems make it hard to reach the minimum words that are allowed as a review. Obviously there are many methods and techniques used by reviewers to reach that minimum allowable word count for short writes:
Repeating/ rewriting the verse in your comments
Summarizing the read with other words meaning the same thing
Embellishing with big metaphorical words
Explain to the author what poetic techniques have been used

There is only so much one can say on poems with 3 lines
no matter how hard one tries
Please don't be offended with reviews and reviewers that might use these techniques to 'fatten' or lengthen the review.
Everyone tries very hard to give credible reviews with all works but sometimes it is hard to reach the minimum allowable limit of text.

Have a great Christmas

Dean Kuch: If you do a bit of research there's a LOT of things you can address where haiku and many other short forms are concerned. You can mention how well lines one and two grammatically connect. You can mention the syllabic count and how Japanese "onji" and English syllables are nothing alike. You can address the kigo, or seasonal reference, the satori, or that 'Ah-ha!' line of enlightenment (and what it meant to you), which usually comes in the last line. You can discuss similar spiritual experiences in nature you've had. You're a surfer, right? Surely you've had a few. So, I respectfully agree to disgreee with you, dipster. You simply do not care for the form and choose not to do your research. That's fine, not everyone enjoys or understands haiku. Just, please, don't try to sugar coat your dislike. Phyllis Stewart certainly doesn't, We who write haiku can take it, heh-heh.

December 18, 2017 at 2:36AM

DR DIP: ooh I hit a nerve Dean and maybe I shouldn't have used haiku as an example and just stuck to other 3 line and one line poems. I haven't a dislike for haiku at all on the contrary I find some quite skilful as I had become more accustomed to the form Admittedly I am not a big fan of it on the whole just like I'm not a big fan of several other forms of poetry and yes if one has a format of tick boxes for reviewing haiku you can fill the space. My point was, sometimes it's hard to write a review of a very short poem to fill the minimum word requirement that was my whole point of the post. As for the topic of fluff reviews I was trying to reason why some may appear like that. I am sure you have been in a position where you were struggling to fill the required comment word count lets be honest. There is no need to go all defensive about the fact I mentioned haiku and yes I would admit I haven't studied the form and admit I am ignorant of the reviewing points you brought up I am sure you will not be the only one who disagrees with me about reviewing short works that is a given and I totally accept that Lets agree to disagree like I said just remove the sugar coating bit. who is Phyllis Stewart pardon my ignorance respectfully dip

December 18, 2017 at 4:22AM

Brett Matthew West: Can somebody out there in FanStory Land tell me who the very wise man was who once said something along the lines of "Zip thy lips. Misinformation can come back to haunt a person." I found this the other day online, and would like to include the quote in something I am writing, but can't remember who the person was. Of course, when you do that, one needs to also attribute the quote to its rightful owner.

December 18, 2017 at 6:10AM

Jannypan (Jan) : Well said. I agree, Dr D. With FS being an international site, one never knows the level of ability of the reviewers. To condemn a review & call it 'fluff' is unacceptable. Everyone needs to be more accepting of others' reviews. Only if they are attacking or written as a revenge should one be upset & take action. To those who desire 'perfect' reviews, it ain't gonna happen here. Not all on this site are 'professional' writers. If one desires those kind of reviews that professional writers produce, then look elsewhere--maybe your editor. Congratulations if you have an editor. If so, then maybe you can respect that ALL had to start somewhere--yes, even you! As the song goes, "Don't worry, be happy."

December 18, 2017 at 9:44AM

giraffmang: Fluff reviews do exist. They are different from supportive, positive, or padded reviews.

December 18, 2017 at 12:53PM

Jannypan (Jan) : Yes, I know 'fluff' reviews exist. I am speaking of those who really try.

December 18, 2017 at 1:55PM

closetpoetjester: I agree with the G...fluff is definitely way different to padding. Padding is bulk Fluff is light and airy and well...nuff said hahaha

December 18, 2017 at 6:39PM

DR DIP: I think you might find that wise man on google Brett or ask the question on the forum I'm sure someone will know Helpfully dip

December 19, 2017 at 10:21PM

Tier V. King: Yes, I believe you are all right. DIP, I do agree with you though. It does take a lot of effort to write some of these reviews. Sometimes I review for seven hours a night but it's not always easy to find something to say about some of the poetry. We must use 150 characters for each review and sometimes I find myself at a loss for words. I do believe also that we should avoid being rude. I also believe that we should stay polite and helpful. I usually try to find something in the post that I could relate to and then I go from there. If I cannot find something nice to say or if I can not say enough, then I just skip the post completely and move on to the next. When I encounter a rude reviewer or one who wants to argue, I may respond or I may not but either way I will not review their work anymore and I ask them nicely "Please do not review my work." Some of the reviews do feel like an attack and it's hard to ignore that kind of (excuse me but yes I will call it) abuse.

December 23, 2017 at 2:48AM

Just to clarify when reviewing. As we are all aware there are some pretty sensitive egos on this site who don't take too kindly to unfavourable comment or suggestion about their work no matter how valid your point may be and promptly want to mute you.
Let's clarify again and I am not being condescending. Some rhyming words in different countries phonetically work depending on pronunciation and accent.
I think we all must accept this fact and appreciate different rhyming words that totally don't phonetically rhyme in another country.
Just sayin

Have a very happy Christmas all my fellow fanstorians

dip

Brett Matthew West: Some times it is snide comments and cheap shots that create these types of issues. Every story has two sides. Both of which should be told, not just one. If you would consult Daniel's famous book believe you would discover that the word is spelled s-a-y-I-n-g. Just saying.

December 15, 2017 at 8:08PM

Amy Rowell: I believe comments should be nice, friendly and helpful. There is no room for rude. Someone left me a review that was so rude I felt under attack. All other comments have been very helpful. And you are correct! Words have different meaning depending where you live.

December 15, 2017 at 10:03PM

DR DIP: Brett with respect please read my private message

December 16, 2017 at 12:07AM

mrsmajor: I learned long ago, about the different spelling, syllable counts, and even meaning...can be different... and I don't think anyone should demand that any specific country's work be questioned...I have seen it, and it can often be explained if one checks the writers profile..and see where they came from...it can also add to one's own knowledge and that's always a good thing...

December 16, 2017 at 12:41AM

Do you know what? I am sure a Fanstorian wishes there were more hours in the day! lol
A FanStorian's work is never done
It's so hard pleasing everyone
Forget about being number one
Just enjoy and have some fun

Post' s and reviews and posts again
critical retorts from those who complain
Sometimes you wonder is it worth the pain
On your parade there's always rain

But still we all here soldier on
knowing that the day has gone
reading works of those who've shone
A wonderful place when you feel forlorn

The life of a fanstorian is never dull
There are so many reviews to cull
Make decisions there on the whole
Trying not to be an arsehole

This is the beauty of this place
You can never be in disgrace
Critical acclaim we all will face
I'm just writing words to fill this space

dipshit

Can you believe it? there is only 18 days to Christmas! this year has gone so fast.

I really don't like 'cut and paste' reviews or replies.. just a simple 'thankyou' would mean more to me.

dip

Jannypan (Jan) : A town here in Texas is called Cut N Shoot.

December 4, 2017 at 9:17AM

rama devi: I know some people think I cut and paste replies, but I actually type them out fresh each time - and mean each word each time, too. Some of use just have ways of expressing our thanks that resonate with us. Some do cut and paste, true...but on occasion there are decent reasons for doing so (health issues, or time issue - for example, if someone is a caretaking for the sick or elderly and cannot spare extra time and energy. Just some thoughts on the matter... :)

December 4, 2017 at 5:29PM

CD Richards: Dr Dip, I have read your comments, and have found them to contain words. Best of luck in the contest!

December 7, 2017 at 1:30AM

63 today! 7 years off 70! Now I feel old lol

mrsmajor: A big Happy Birthday, dip, enjoy yourself, I'm more than 20 years older than you are, but I still look forward to getting "Older"...lol

December 3, 2017 at 8:37AM

Jannypan (Jan) : HAPPY BIRTHDAY !

December 3, 2017 at 10:08AM

Joy Graham: Happy Birthday to you!

December 3, 2017 at 1:55PM

MissMerri: A very happy birthday DR DIP! You are far from old. I just learned you have a book out. If there are only four left, I think it's time for a reprinting, don't you? MM

December 3, 2017 at 8:06PM

Dean Kuch:

December 5, 2017 at 12:52AM

damommy: I don't know how I missed your birthday. I hope you had a great one. What do you mean old at 63? I'm 74 and I don't feel old. lol

December 6, 2017 at 9:10PM

If I haven't reviewed your work lately and I am a fan of yours or you of me I have 15 days of messages to catch up on and 28 poems I missed posting
Please bear with me, I only got back from my holiday yesterday after 2 weeks

susanjohn: Welcome back! :-)

November 29, 2017 at 9:30AM

closetpoetjester: Nice to see you made it back Mr. Chillaxed!

November 29, 2017 at 4:13PM

I am currently on a surfing holiday in the middle of the Indian Ocean where the internet is hit and miss Thus I won't be posting much at all or reviewing for 10 days

dip

jenintorre: Enjoy🏂

November 20, 2017 at 2:52AM

closetpoetjester: Good move dip. You need to be catching waves not words LOL Enjoy your break! P

November 20, 2017 at 7:21AM

robyn corum: haha! What a horrible problem to have! Have fun!

November 22, 2017 at 9:23AM

Poetic Friend: I was wondering where you were. Have fun, my friend!

November 22, 2017 at 3:45PM

Tier V. King: I think you did tell me this in one of your responses to one of my reviews. I missed you so I decided to come to your portfolio to check. I was so happy to see that you did leave this note. Have fun, enjoy yourself. You deserve it. We all know you will make up for lost time when you return. I will look forward to your pictures and poetry about your surfing adventures. Much love...

November 24, 2017 at 3:48AM

I am going away for 10 days on surfing trip in the middle of the Indian ocean on a group of islands that more than likely will have no internet access. So I will not be able to post each day for 10 days or more.
For those who enjoy my posts and go to the trouble to review them, I am always grateful
xdip

mrsmajor: We'll surely miss you, dip, but have a wonderful and safe trip...I bet you'll have many poems to post about your trip...be looking forward to your return...stay well!

November 14, 2017 at 8:13AM

Jannypan (Jan) : Have a great time. Be safe!

November 14, 2017 at 10:04AM

TAB_that's me: Enjoy dip. What a trip - sounds wonderful!

November 14, 2017 at 1:17PM

susanjohn: Have a great time!!!

November 14, 2017 at 1:29PM

DR DIP: thank you all I'll get to post today at least lol

November 14, 2017 at 5:53PM

I don't want to flog a dead horse and I have heard all the arguments against doing this but I am going to say it again.
On a site that has over a thousand members and 435 of them being supposedly active members.
Surely in a week of reviewing there is in one's eyes, more than 6 exceptional poems.
Yeah I have heard the argument you have to be more picky with who you award your 6's to. But personally I read more than 6 exceptional poems in a week and feel guilty later in the scoring week where I cannot award a justifiable 6 and this happens consistently every week.
The argument is do those given a six deserve it.?
You have to ask the question what is your benchmark for
an'exceptional' rating in one's eyes. The vast majority of fanstorians are purely fun loving amateurs with a passion to write they are not seasoned professionals so in this light, giving a 6 star rating in the broad context of what fanstory is all about
is not overly exorbitant.
Just my opinion..what's yours?

mrsmajor: The question becomes what works are worthy of the 6 stars...and what bothers me most is this: if a poem meets the requirements, according to the site standard shown, and more!! with meaningful thoughts, messages, and I am totally impressed with all of that...why must I be limited to just the 6 in a week if more than that number deserves such a rating....Franky, I think its a insult to the writers to have some beautiful work ignored simply because one is not allowed to rate Exceptional as often as they wish...there are some writers that use difficult forms, and do so well, with messages, themes, that are so appropriate for this day and age...and to rate 5 stars is just not enough... I don't know the answer, but I do feel that there is enough work presented here that does deserve the top rating, in my estimation, and who is to tell me it is not...whose opinion counts, and whose doesn't...is mine as meaningful as some others, who decides that.

November 8, 2017 at 12:30AM

Dean Kuch: Allow the top 25 reviewers to have ten stars Allow 26-50 to have seven Everyone else remains at six, as is. This not only creates incentive to be a more active reviewer, it also alleviates the lack of a sufficient amount of sixes for the top 50 reviewers.

November 8, 2017 at 9:21AM

Jannypan (Jan) : To Dean, Many reviewers NEVER reach the top reviewers place. So to allow them those extra stars will just keep them there since no one else will be able to attain that level over them. I know I have written decent reviews & NEVER receive many nominations--which is ok. But I see your idea as a way to keep only those already there in place with no chance of others reaching that level. Also some reviewers review for quantity rather than quality. So how would your idea stop that? But I do agree that more than 6 stars per reviewer is needed.

November 8, 2017 at 10:07AM

closetpoetjester: If more than six sixers are allowed to be awarded, it could well diminish the rating of OUTSTANDING. Dip, you just need to hang on to them a bit longer and be very select about who you award them to...see? NOW they're special haha

November 9, 2017 at 3:42PM

closetpoetjester: BTW If the horse was any more flogged it would be c...ah never mind LOL

November 9, 2017 at 3:50PM

fluffnstuff: Ya, and while we are bitching...it just infuriates me when we don't have enough words in the comment section and have to go back to say more. Does anyone else get peeved at that? How does one change or adjust these things?? Fluff

November 12, 2017 at 3:52AM

FanStory and life have one thing in common... They are both one big learning curve.

This is just a profile thought
Before all my dreams add up to naught
Meeting others is the buzz to me
Showing others what they can't see

In your head and in your minds
Profile thoughts always reminds
Me of a place to pour out your heart
When you think your world's apart

So come on here and spread your love
Share you thoughts of what you're thinking of
We are a family with the same aspiration
To write down those thoughts with inspiration

closetpoetjester: You are writing poetry on your profile page again dip. You will have Tommy doing a back flip haha Nothin' like stickin' it to the man LOL

November 5, 2017 at 9:28PM

When talking about the old pesky foot of a rhyming verse. is it spelled 'meter' or 'metre'?
I have just read the answer in the dictionary Metre is the correct term in poetry though it can be spelled meter in America.

Jannypan (Jan) : Of course it matters what dictionary you choose, what country you live in, & how you learned it in school. You can always add a note in your author notes about words that may cause confusion in spelling [or rhyme].

October 29, 2017 at 6:22PM

I WAS THINKING OF STANDING SIDEWAYS......but it was just another profile thought

Kerry Robinson: Heh-heh, that was funny, Dip:)

October 4, 2017 at 1:34PM

susanjohn: silly ;-)

October 5, 2017 at 9:58AM

closetpoetjester: Well I believe it's permissable so long as nothing is sticking out too far. Keep it clean, I mean the nose, duh!

October 7, 2017 at 12:18AM

Linda Engel: Too funny. cute. :)

October 9, 2017 at 3:47PM

This time that comes up on these posts represents Fanstory headquarters time in America I am in Australia and it appears you are 8 hrs ahead and a day behind on the west coast of the US where is fanstory headquarters again?

DR DIP: actually 10 hrs ahead

September 30, 2017 at 5:25AM

Mustangpatty1029: FanStory time is Eastern Standard Time USA

September 30, 2017 at 4:37PM

DR DIP: but where is fanstory located exactly america is a pretty wide country so the longitude of stand american time is quite different from the east to the west coast. its more to do with time difference for when i'm posting or can post which is 3pm AEST (australia) relative to fanstory headquarter time which is where?

October 15, 2017 at 6:56PM

TIME TO WAKE UP AND GET OUT OF BED AMERICA!
Its 1230 am in Sydney Town

Don't you reckon the word 'stink' has a certain smell about it?

mrsmajor: Yep, it seems to have a special odor...

September 26, 2017 at 11:49AM

DR DIP: I stink you're right!

September 26, 2017 at 10:32PM

closetpoetjester: Nup. It's "stench" for me. Still, been with the other half a long funken time haha

September 27, 2017 at 1:47AM

I would dearly love to be able to post more than 2 poems a night
but totally understand the reason Tom doesn't allow it for pesky, prolific posters that hog the fanstory airwaves lol

Jannypan (Jan) : Who you callin' pesky, prolific posters? The posting police know where you live!

September 25, 2017 at 1:14PM

DR DIP: hehe I was obviously referring to myself only anyone else is just feeling guilty lol

September 25, 2017 at 5:14PM

nor84: So post 4. Post two before midnight Eastern, and two more after midnight.

September 26, 2017 at 1:41AM

DR DIP: doesn't work that way Nor you can only post 2 every 24 hr period In Australia it's 2pm AEST. and not a minute before believe me I have been posting 2 for 4 years lol

September 26, 2017 at 3:47AM

I don't care what anyone says we need to have access to more than six sixes. We start with a new week and see many exceptional poems and we have to hold off with awarding a 6 just in case we read one that deserves it better later in the week
I would love to have a consensus whether anyone agrees.
I think my argument is a sound one.

dip

michaelcahill: EVERYONE agrees, Dip. Convincing Tom is the rub. I think the drawback is that some of us don't review as much as others. So you end up having folks who review six poems a week, all sixes. If we had ten, then they'd review ten, all sixes. The best idea I've heard of was Brooke Baldwin's ... award sixes based on the number of reviews. The more you review the more sixes you get. Of course, that might cause a bunch of lame reviews. But nothings perfect, we already have people doing that to rack up fake money. HA! Were you looking for "yes" or "no". LOL

September 19, 2017 at 3:37AM

DR DIP: Michael there is no definitive solution to this I know whatever you do someone will cry unfair. The ratings system needs an overall because it has become a source of paranoia no one dares to give below a 5 because then it will just go tit for tat I don't really know what the solution is. As I have said before, we are slaves to the system. I love this site but it sucks you in and consumes you whole. There's not enough hours in the day without sacrificing other interests.

September 19, 2017 at 4:20AM

Mustangpatty1029: I'm with you, dip. As Michael says, we all are. I've had my share of 'virtual' sixes, as has everyone else. Who knows? Maybe, January 1st will bring something new? (ever hopeful)

September 19, 2017 at 8:43AM

giraffmang: Not everyone agrees. I disagree. Until the system is used properly, the change would be pointless. I've seen a lot of sixes given out for poorly formatted, badly punctuated pieces, full of spags and not meeting contest requirements. there is no quality control and people see things differently. there will always be a glut of people rewarding each other. If an accumulation thing, it means more rewards for more reviews and that will generally mean it based on volume, not quality which short of defies the purpose of being given more six stars to play around with. Also, where do you draw the line 10, 20, more. The issue will still be the same and the chance to manipulate things even more prevalent. it would better to encourage people to use the rating system properly and this would be more beneficial than increased gold. I, for one, don't worry about the 'tit for tat' of reviewing although I have been hit by it recently in a roundabout way, but that's the chance you take for having integrity. I can live with that.

September 19, 2017 at 10:44AM

michaelcahill: That's true as well, Gman. I doubt the system will ever be used properly though whatever it is. There's too diverse a group and there will always be people like you describe whether we are a large group or small. I know where to go for REAL advice or help and any serious writer here can find out quick enough. That aside, I like to be able to reward excellence even if it means others might at the same time honour mediocrity ... they already do, as you point out. :))

September 19, 2017 at 1:03PM

closetpoetjester: While there's a system based on monetary reward the majority of reviews will be fluff and the star system skewed. The good poets know who they are. The crap ones quite simply don't because most are too polite to give constructive crit. I'm with G-Man...use the current system properly and don't give out your darn sixes so quick dipster. I'm sure most writers here appreciate the feedback more than the stars.

September 20, 2017 at 5:43AM

Dean Kuch: The stickler here, at least according to Gareth, is that sixes are awarded too nonchalantly for sub-par work. Is that about the gist of your argument, Gareth? So, if that were in fact true, it would do no good for those who review more to have more. Here's my proposal. Allow the sixes we retain at the end of the week to be rolled over into the following week. That might encourage less sixes being awarded. In other words if someone only awards four sixes on any given week the two they have remaining will be added to their total for the following week. They would then have eight available. If they use just five of those eight, the remaining three will be rolled over and they'll have nine ... and so on. As it is now if we don't use them we lose them. ~Dean

September 22, 2017 at 12:17AM

kiwigirl2821: I rather like Dean's approach and P's too. I am stingy with my sixes but, lately the writing has been truly exceptional and I feel like I want to give out the sixes. Seems like the writing is much better than it used to be that's for sure.

September 23, 2017 at 5:48AM

I have been asked several times why I post so much. I have no agenda or reason other than I love to write everyday and I just love to share my thoughts and feelings whether it be about love and romance or my love of my hometown, the ocean or family.
I cannot always afford to promote my work past 32 cent value So I am forever grateful to those that still enjoy reading my humble works when still only 2 cents. It tells me you purely enjoy reading my words which I am forever grateful.

respectfully and sincerely Dip

Jannypan (Jan) : Dr D, Write as much as you wish. You do not have to defend your actions here to anyone. I would like to see writers having more than 2 posts in a 24 hour period.

September 12, 2017 at 12:53PM

Amy Rowell: I especially like, Hope's Shining Light"

September 16, 2017 at 6:09PM

I so want to give more than 6 sixes in the rating review week but alas there are so many wonderful poets That I run out of 6's very quickly.

What reason can there be why we can't have more to offer our fellow Fanstorians They deserve this incentive.

Just saying

dip

nor84: for years, a five-star review was as high as you could go.. It meant the work was publishable. Now it has become a habit to give everyone five stars and they have come to mean nothing. Six stars are supposed to mean really exceptional work, and therefore they are given to only a few. If they were plentiful, then everybody would expect six stars and they would lose their value just as five stars has done.

September 8, 2017 at 4:59AM

DR DIP: fair enough I see your point

September 8, 2017 at 5:32PM

DR DIP: the rating of one's poems becomes irrelevant for that very reason. Its true a 4 star rating has everyone up in the air. No matter what one says no one likes to give lower than 5 stars. There was an excellent write the other day by G man on this very subject, worth a read. There are some wonderful talented poets on this site who don't get the recognition they deserve whose ranking for what rankings are worth is way down. Personally I like to read a poets work because I like it not if it is just because it might have been promoted to dollar value. Funnily dollar value is the last thing I see or look at its the poem itself whether it be a dollar or 2 cents. respectfully dip

September 8, 2017 at 5:39PM

WHY CHANGE SOMETHING THAT WASN'T EVEN BROKEN?
There was nothing wrong with the old method to upload your photos!
Tom please explain why you even changed it.

dip

damommy: I quite like this new way. It seems easier to me. (Sorry) 8-)

August 29, 2017 at 11:54AM

Barb Hensongispsaca: I am having trouble also had to keep choosing different pictures to get them to download.

August 31, 2017 at 2:05AM

Thinking seriously about thinking seriously...nah the thought just went away! lol

dip

FxstsLisa : I seriously wonder why you seriously considered thinking seriously. Seriously!

August 18, 2017 at 10:53PM

DR DIP: seriously?

August 19, 2017 at 4:10AM

closetpoetjester: Why so sirrius?

August 24, 2017 at 6:23AM

Out of all the spices you can use in the recipe of life, variety is the strongest.

F. Wehr3: Nope, it's oregano.

August 12, 2017 at 12:20PM

giraffmang: No it's definitely Sporty... girl power...

August 13, 2017 at 11:03AM

To all the wonderful people who continue to review and enjoy my simple rhymes, I am forever grateful.
To those who I continually review but never seem to find the time to reciprocate...hmmm

Examples of Meter in Poetry
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Meter is a unit of rhythm in poetry, the pattern of the beats. It is also called a foot. Each foot has a certain number of syllables in it, usually two or three syllables. The difference in types of meter is which syllables are accented and which are not.

Iamb Meter
Iamb meter has the first syllable unaccented and the second accented. Here are examples:

That time l of year l thou mayst l in me l behold
Shall I l com pare l thee to l a sum l mer?s day? - Shakespeare?s ?Sonnet 18"

Come live | with me | and be | my love
And we | will all | the plea|sures prove - Christopher Marlowe?s ?Come live with me and be my love?

All I could see from where I stood
Was three long mountains and a wood; - Edna St. Vincent Millay?s "Renascence"

To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells - John Keats? ?To Autumn?
Trochee Meter
Trochee meter has the first syllable accented and the second unaccented. Here are examples:

Tell me | not in l mournful l numbers
By the | shores of | Gitche | Gumee,

By the | shining | Big-Sea-|Water - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow?s ?Song of Hiawatha?

(I could) wait forever, Face a thousand lifetimes, Ponder your embraces, Just to live in your time.
Why so pale and wan, fond Lover?

Prithee why so pale?

Will, when looking well can't move her,

Looking ill prevail?

Prithee why so pale? - Sir John Suckling's "Song"

The Grizzly Bear is huge and wild;
He has devoured an infant child.

The infant child is not aware

It has been eaten by the bear. - A. E. Housman?s ?Infant Innocence?

Earth, receive an honoured guest;
William Yeats is laid to rest:

Let this Irish vessel lie

Emptied of its poetry. - W. H. Auden's "In Memory of W. B. Yeats"

Dactyl Meter
Dactyl meter has the first syllable accented and the second and third unaccented. Here are examples:

This is the forest pri meval, the murmuring pines and the hemlock - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow?s ?Evangeline?
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,

Cannon in front of them

Volley'd and thunder'd; - Alfred Lord Tennyson?s ?The Charge of the Light Brigade?

We that had Loved him so, Followed him Honoured him, - Robert Browning?s ?The Lost Leader?
Half a league, half a league
Half a league onward, - Alfred Lord Tennyson?s ?The Charge of the Light Brigade?

Just for a handful of silver he left us
Just for a riband to stick in his coat - Robert Browning's ?The Lost Leader?

Anapest Meter
Anapest meter has the first two syllables unaccented and the third syllable accented. Here are examples:

And the sound l of a voice l that is still
The Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold

And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold Lord Byron?s ?The Destruction of Sennacherib?

In the midst of the word he was trying to say,
In the midst of his laughter and glee,

He had softly and suddenly vanished away?

For the Snark was a Boojum, you see. Lewis Carroll, ?The Hunting of the Snark?

Oh, Potter, you rotter, oh, what have you done,
You?re killing off students, you think it?s good fun. - Peeves?s Song from Harry Potter

His eyes are as green as a fresh pickled toad - Harry?s valentine from Harry Potter
And the sheen| of their spears | was like stars | on the sea, - Lord Byron?s ?The Destruction of Sennacherib?
From the centre all round to the sea,
I am lord of the fowl and the brute. - Will Cowper's "Verses Supposed To Be Written By Alexander Selkirk, During His Solitary Abode In The Island Of San Fernandez"

Now you've learned a lot about the types of meter in poetry. For more examples check out


Read more at http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-meter-in-poetry.html#HkhdGwdxxUFARjx4.99

artemis53: You're kidding me?

August 11, 2017 at 8:29PM

It's not a crime to disagree That's what makes the world go round
Differing and diverse opinions should be embraced on a site like this. Never be offended by one's opinion and interpretation especially on a site like fanstory.
It would be a pretty boring old place if we all had the same opinions , tastes and viewpoints.
It's certainly not worth losing friends over I know that much.
I hate the word used so often these days "offended"
Grows some balls and take it on the chin opinions are the spice of life.

just saying

I really wish that we had more 6's to give. Like how many times at the start of the week do you give out 6's for exceptional work only to find that further posts also deserve 6's but alas you have used those 6 all up. It just gives the poster the impetus to post more often. I know for a fact there are people out there who will not post any new work to Sunday morning when a new batch of 6's are available. whoa talk about keen!

dip

giraffmang: I must be missing something...

July 12, 2017 at 7:49AM

Meia (MESAYERS): I would like more sixes to give too but I have never seriously thought about waiting to post my work on a sunday :) xMeia

July 12, 2017 at 4:07PM

Mustangpatty1029: You know, I still run out of stuff to read on Sunday, too. And, I don't wait til Sunday to post - I just put them up as I write them,

July 12, 2017 at 4:36PM

Had a profile thought the other day
From the side I wanted to say
Just how much I enjoy the site
getting reviewed is such a delight

I'll always try to reciprocate
Then sit back and await my fate
Take in the suggestions and advice
Sometimes unpleasant, sometimes nice

Fanstorians are a specific breed
Flowing words is what we bleed
Up all night to the wee hours
Looking for words that one empowers

So hang in there my fanstory friends
See you tomorrow well that depends!

dip

Kerry Robinson: That was wonderfully written, Dip A perfect little poem to describe us Fanstorians.:)))

June 28, 2017 at 11:06AM

damommy: A great poem describing our habits. I guess a lot of us are up late. It's a great place to be, is Fan Story. I've made lots of terrific friends here.

June 28, 2017 at 11:22AM

Ideasaregems-Dawn: Surf's up - Dip's disappeared...LOL.

July 1, 2017 at 6:10AM

I now have 100 people I have fanned so I can be prompted by message to enjoy their work when they post. I have fanned these 100 people because I genuinely like their poetry. Unfortunately and disappointingly many don't seem to be active members anymore or are simply not posting as they are not coming up as prompt messages.
I encourage everyone who have been reciprocally fanned to actively continue to post your work so we can all review and enjoy.

sincerely and respectfully

dr dip

trimple: I have just returned to FS after taking a long 'writer's block' break only to find that half of my fans are either dead or are afk mostly :)

June 24, 2017 at 5:35PM

rosehill (Wendy): I am a devoted fan, yet running my own business interferes with my writing and reviewing on an "on demand" basis. I always clear my box of reviews, it just might be a week or so before I can get to them. Be patient with your stalkers and those you stalk because life often gets in the way of our love of words.

June 26, 2017 at 7:42AM

You know I always try to make the effort to review everyone of those I have fanned every time they put up a new post, and I am notified of this on my messages like everyone who has fanned someone does as well.
I don't think it's too hard to once in a while to review and I don't mean every time because if one posts so prolifically it IS asking a bit much to review every one I totally understand
But on saying that those who have reciprocated and fanned me would get my notification of a new post..I would really think it fair that just once or twice they may go to the effort to review one's work in kind I don't think that too much to ask.
To that end I sincerely appreciate the support and friendship of those who consistently review my humble writes even though a lot are only 2 cent poems they still go to the trouble. You all know who you are.They don't see it as a chore we just genuinely like each other's poetry..that is why one fans each other I thought in the first place.

Not a whinge just an observation of human nature

closetpoetjester: I dunno. Sounds like shit on liver to me LOL

June 8, 2017 at 9:11PM

DR DIP: hmm sounds tasty P lol

June 9, 2017 at 6:35PM

closetpoetjester:

June 10, 2017 at 4:07AM

closetpoetjester: Nope, you'd be thinking of liverwurst mate! LOL

June 10, 2017 at 4:07AM

Ideasaregems-Dawn: ROFLMAO at you two... Liverwurst - yum!

June 18, 2017 at 7:18AM

Tier V. King: I agree totally DIP, sometimes it takes me all night long to read and review all of my friends and Fan's posts. It would be nice if they all did the same thing but I do realize that sometimes we all get busy in life. I'm just saying, I really get where you are coming from with the above statements.

July 13, 2017 at 5:23AM

If you see me thinking from the side have you captured me in a profile thought?

damommy: Hahahahaha. You're a nut! I always enjoy your thoughts. 8-)

May 29, 2017 at 1:36PM

Dean Kuch:

May 30, 2017 at 12:07AM

I have learnt a valuable lesson in reviewing...Don't review a post of someone's poetry if you have nothing nice or constructive to say.
Best leave it un reviewed.

damommy: Absolutely!

May 21, 2017 at 12:30AM

Sankey: AMEN have had some nonsensical reviews that way. Best move on and leave it to someone who will get some pleasure out of it.

May 21, 2017 at 2:32AM

Kerry Robinson: I totally agree, best to just skip it.:)

May 21, 2017 at 10:36AM

Tier V. King: Yep...

July 13, 2017 at 5:20AM

Your mind and thoughts are only limited by your imagination

dip

Jannypan (Jan) : Your imagination is only limited by your mind and thoughts.

May 19, 2017 at 10:54PM

DR DIP: whatever lol

May 20, 2017 at 1:58AM

giraffmang: ... and of course the boundary of your skull, otherwise it would just ooze out everywhere and the world would be flooded with wondrous imagery and creativity - can't think of anything worse... yuck!

May 20, 2017 at 2:41AM

I AM NOT LETTING FANSTORY TAKE OVER MY LIFE!!!!.....I lied! lol

damommy: Just like the rest of us. 8-)

May 16, 2017 at 10:06PM

Jannypan (Jan) : If one has to write this comment, then FS already has taken over one's life.

May 16, 2017 at 11:31PM

DR DIP: Exactly! that's why I said I lied! haha

May 17, 2017 at 3:40AM

Mustangpatty1029: tee hee I cannot relate to this at all!

May 17, 2017 at 10:32AM

What does it mean when they say "a post is revived"?

Mustangpatty1029: If a post is over two years old, and you wish to promote it, you need to get a special certificate and put it back on the listings

May 8, 2017 at 12:01PM

DR DIP: thankyou

May 8, 2017 at 5:50PM

closetpoetjester: Some one gives it mouth to mouth?

May 12, 2017 at 7:29AM

closetpoetjester: Come on mate, you were a doctor once...or WERE you ? hahaha

May 12, 2017 at 7:29AM

Thinking about having a sex change...what's it like being a woman?

closetpoetjester: What about having sex for a change?! hahaha

May 7, 2017 at 11:46PM

Dean Kuch: Phillippa sneaked one in on ya there, dipster...

May 8, 2017 at 1:56AM

DR DIP: I love it when she sneaks one in on me Dean lol

May 10, 2017 at 7:59AM

A PROFILE THOUGHT

Just a profile thought is all I have
So I want to share it with you
Really don't have much to say
But all I say is true

I really enjoy these Fanstory times
Been coming here four years
Just been writing simple rhymes
things about love and tears

Met a lot of friends on here
who share a common love
It's all about the written word it's clear
Of Things you're thinking of

thanks for every comment and review
It means so much to me
This friendship between me and you
It's what poetry supposed to be

dip

Kerry Robinson: That was absolutely beautiful, Thank you for sharing that lovely poem. ~Kerry

May 4, 2017 at 1:56AM

closetpoetjester: I see you been writing poetry again on your profile page dip. I believe that's a spankable offence LOL. Tom?

May 6, 2017 at 8:45AM

Is a Fluff review the same as pissing in someone's pocket?

I hadn't heard of this term until recently it makes me laugh.

dip

giraffmang: It is, without a doubt, the same thing. It's also a great saying...lol

April 28, 2017 at 4:24AM

DR DIP: There sure are some great sayings and cliche's in the world hey

April 28, 2017 at 4:40AM

closetpoetjester: Piss is heavier than fluff but they basically equate to the same... LOL

April 28, 2017 at 5:21AM

nor84: A fluff five-star review is excessive praise for mediocre writing without pointing out obvious errors or helping the writer improve his/her craft.

April 28, 2017 at 7:08AM

DR DIP: thanks Nor...so it IS pissing in someone's pocket lol

April 28, 2017 at 9:52PM

strandregs: A fluff review for two cents is appreciation. a fluff review for 100 cents is an insult. pissing in pocket for two cents is stupid. Pissing for a dollar being a wet yellow rag. Soffokles

April 29, 2017 at 9:38AM

DR DIP: hehe that's funny strandy. It's just most people get totally offended if not receiving a 5 star rating or more. As for reviewing 2 cent poems, the funny thing is when my messages come up a FanStory friend has a new posting I just review without even looking at the dollar value. The member cent pump is irrelevant If I have fanned a poet because I like their work I review accordingly no matter the value as I said. I am sure many on here would do the same. dip

April 29, 2017 at 7:16PM

P. G. Simpkins: That just made me laugh! Ooh how harsh 😂

May 2, 2017 at 2:22AM

AH FANSTORY!!...when something totally takes over your life! lol

damommy: It certainly does. 8-)

April 21, 2017 at 1:41PM

giraffmang: here, here, I concur

April 21, 2017 at 1:46PM

rosehill (Wendy): So, does sitting here at 4:38 am qualify as taking over? If so, then send me my club decoder ring. . . and some more coffee.

April 22, 2017 at 4:39AM

Mustangpatty1029: I agree whole heartedly~

April 23, 2017 at 6:45PM

Had nothing to do tonight, so I decided to go and count all my poems since coming here on May 6th 2013.
There are 35 poems per page
I have 72 pages
35x72 = 2520 poems up until today.
I knew I was prolific at 2 poems per night but I still got a shock
to all who have commented and reviewed my humble works over the last 4 years, I sincerely thank you

dip

Selina Stambi: I'm in shock too. Oh, my goodness ... I wonder if I've posted 50 poems ...

April 17, 2017 at 8:30PM

closetpoetjester: You have FAR too much time on your hands LMAO

April 20, 2017 at 10:05PM

country ranch writer: You go dippy my son

April 23, 2017 at 7:22PM

A PROFILE THOUGHT

A profile thought for all to see
I like to spread the word
This is a place for all to see
Nothing too absurd

See the fun that we have here
reviewing and suggesting
Comments on which I always adhere
Those words I am ingesting

A profile though is all it is
Something on your mind
Something that you can easily miss
If you don't seek and find

So add a thought for all to read
It's not very hard
A couple of lines to plant the seed
It's fun in this regard

dip

closetpoetjester: Dip, you are a very naughty boy to write poetry on your profile page... Hasn't Thomas told you it's against the rules? LOL

April 14, 2017 at 2:30AM

DR DIP: well smack my arse lol It was a profile thought so it was relevant lol

April 14, 2017 at 6:32AM

closetpoetjester: and it just happened to rhyme LOL

April 17, 2017 at 2:46AM

WHAT SORT OF WORLD

What sort of world are we heading for?
Is it coming to an end?
Are we on the brink of war?
I just can't comprehend

What sort of life for our kin
It really is a worry
When is peace and freedom to begin
We better bloody hurry

Trigger happy uneasy leaders
Their fingers getting itchy
The world is full of bottom feeders
With glowing egos and bitchy

Who knows what we're heading for
We need to work it out
Nuclear war, just count the score
world destruction there's no doubt

Worrying times

The correct usage of "You're", "Your", "There", "Their" and "They're"

Grammar is important! Capitalization is the difference between helping your Uncle Jack off a horse and helping your Uncle jack off a horse.

William Ross: hahaha good example

April 4, 2017 at 6:33AM

strandregs: But if you don't know jack how can you hack?

April 4, 2017 at 5:21PM

closetpoetjester: Woman, without her man, is nothing. Woman, without her, man is nothing. I REST MY CASE

April 6, 2017 at 9:23PM

In Two months time I would have been coming to FanStory for 4 years. I have learnt so much in this time from many wonderful poets who have guided, suggested, and advised me with my humble rhymes. To that I am forever grateful.
I have always written from the heart in simple verse.
Rhyming verse is not "everyone's cup of tea" but that is the beauty of this site...The diversity of taste and interpretation of poetry. I would be a boring old place if we all wrote the same way. That's the beauty of different styles. There is poetry here that caters for everyone's taste, be it love and romance political, religious philosophical, nature, humour poems and many other topics to write about.
So to those who enjoy my humble writes I deeply appreciate your loyalty to follow and review and I try hard to reciprocate.

Sincerely dip

country ranch writer: Love ya for you being you

April 23, 2017 at 7:24PM

FANSTORY: Where people open up their heart and minds and put them into words

dip

Dean Kuch: Well said, Doc...

March 28, 2017 at 12:26AM

RGstar: As I have told you, you write the way that suits the moment for the aspect, thought and idea whose artistic reference suits relays your theme, whether song poem or any other form with definite rules. Write from the heart and elaborate what you want to say, find its soul, and deliver your thesis or theme... all will listen for words are as diverse and as colourful as flowers in the field and no one form dominates any other, it is just a matter of choice and the flower you like to relate to , for the occasion best. Have a good day, author.

April 1, 2017 at 4:12AM

TOM, why fix something that's not broken?

FanStory: What did I do now? :) - Tom

March 24, 2017 at 5:22PM

DR DIP: Hahaha What didn't you do!! lol

March 30, 2017 at 5:52AM

Just confirming.
If you put up a new post does this come up with "new writing on line" in private message to everyone who has fanned you and visa versa?

Jannypan (Jan) : Yes, unless it is for a blind contest. Then no announcement is sent.

March 15, 2017 at 9:29AM

"TWAS BRILLIG AND THE SLIVEY TOVES
DID GYRE AND GYMBLE IN THE WABE
ALL MIMSY WERE THE BORROGROVES
AND THE MOMERATHS OUTGRABE"

SPELL CHECK..EAT YA BLOODY HEART OUT!

It's no secret that poetry can find love. Finding love through words is a beautiful thing. Fanstory has brought good people together with a common love.

All the best You two

You know who you are? lol

Unspoken94: Congratulations for One Last Kiss. -Bill

March 10, 2017 at 10:07PM

OH MY GOD!!! I can't believe this! I have just won poem of the Month!! for my poem ONE LAST KISS.
Words cannot express how I feel, this means so much to me. To all my fellow nominees I thank you Your entries were all superb so I feel so humbled and honoured to receive this in your company. This is so special to me.

Thank you, Thank you for voting for this poem my fellow fanstory poets

l.raven: CONGRATULATIONS Waves...you deserved it...I told you...it was one of your best...xxoo love Linda

March 6, 2017 at 1:57AM

Thal1959: I just noticed you win for this, D. Congratulations, Mazel Tov, and all that jazz! (No, I'm not Jewish.)

March 6, 2017 at 2:12AM

DR DIP: I dedicate this win to my Fanstory friend Luna RIP Jeni

March 6, 2017 at 2:25AM

Ideasaregems-Dawn: Congratulations. Wonderful news, Dip.

March 6, 2017 at 2:25AM

Ideasaregems-Dawn: You were writing your dedication at the same time as I was writing my congratulations to you - I think she would love your sweet gesture, and be very proud.

March 6, 2017 at 2:29AM

~Dovey: Congrats, Dr. D. :)

March 6, 2017 at 2:37AM

robyn corum: HUZZAH! Congrats!

March 6, 2017 at 9:25AM

susanjohn: Congratulations!!! Dipster!!

March 6, 2017 at 11:53AM

Dean Kuch: I was more than happy to cast my vote your way, Dip. Your unyielding dedication and prolific writing of poetry everyday to entertain us all warrants such an honor. Congratulations, Cobber!

March 6, 2017 at 12:15PM

country ranch writer: Way to go Dippy!

March 6, 2017 at 1:18PM

Maureen's Pen: Congrats my dear friend, a beautiful poem well deserved. Big hugs.:)

March 6, 2017 at 2:26PM

Jannypan (Jan) : Well-deserved. CONGRATULATIONS!

March 6, 2017 at 2:39PM

Poetic Friend: Congratulations, Dip, my friend! I am so happy for you!!!

March 6, 2017 at 3:36PM

RGstar: Well done Dip, My second cogratulations to you. I couldn't have been happier to come second. Well done.

March 6, 2017 at 3:58PM

judiverse: Congratulations on your Poem of the Month honors. judiverse

March 6, 2017 at 4:00PM

closetpoetjester: Well done dip. 'Bout time you got some recognition. P

March 6, 2017 at 5:47PM

Selina Stambi: Congratulations, Dip. That was a beautiful poem. The best you've written. Hurrah for you!!

March 6, 2017 at 8:05PM

DR DIP: Thankyou so much all your congrats mean a lot. You know I always thought there was a verse missing so I thought about the intent of the whole poem and have now added a second verse at the start . Verse two is new and I feel it completes the love story. It all makes better sense in the early part. sincerely and thankfully Dip

March 7, 2017 at 2:22AM

mrsmajor: A big Congratulations, Dip, this was a joy to read...

March 7, 2017 at 7:32PM

moonsunrise: I am so happy for you! well deserved!

March 11, 2017 at 7:57PM

moonsunrise: I am so happy for you! well deserved!

March 11, 2017 at 7:57PM

moonsunrise: I am so happy for you! well deserved!

March 11, 2017 at 7:57PM

Irish Rain:

April 20, 2017 at 1:38AM

Irish Rain: congratulations!!!

April 20, 2017 at 1:39AM

Congratulations! One last kiss is the new Poem of the Month!

Ric Myworld: There sure was an outstanding group of poets and entries in the field for this honor. Congratulations, on your well deserved win!

March 6, 2017 at 9:06AM

Irish Rain: Congratulations!!! Awesome!!!

March 6, 2017 at 9:34AM

Dean Kuch:

March 6, 2017 at 12:13PM

krys123: CONGRATS TO YOU DIP ALEX

March 10, 2017 at 3:58PM

DR DIP: I am still over the moon! thankyou again and for making it "all time best as well" This means so much to me sincerely dip

March 11, 2017 at 8:45AM

Wow I am over the moon! I have been considered for "poem of the month"with my poem 'One last kiss' with the other 9 nominees. It's the first time in the 4 years I have been coming to Fanstory I have been nominated.

The quality of the other poems is excellent I can't believe I have even been considered. It's made my week!

Thankyou fanstory

Irish Rain: Good for you Mr. Dip!!! Whoo Hoo!!!!

March 5, 2017 at 1:18AM

damommy: That's great. I'm happy for you.

March 5, 2017 at 3:54AM

Ideasaregems-Dawn: Way to go! That's wonderful, Dr. Dip. !!!

March 5, 2017 at 11:24AM

Mary Wakeford: Congrats Dip!

March 5, 2017 at 12:33PM

Dean Kuch: It was such a tight race, Doc, but you managed to pull it off! Congratulations, my friend, I am so very happy for you! ~Deano

March 6, 2017 at 12:18AM

WHEN did the site of fanstory originate?
just curious

dip

mrsmajor: This site was established in 2000...

March 2, 2017 at 8:28AM

DR DIP: Wow I didn't realize it was so early. So for 13 years it was going for before I found out about this wonderful site. Although I only discovered the passion to write in 2010 so I was 3 years in the wilderness lol dipster

March 2, 2017 at 11:59PM

Does anybody else find this happening? If you put your poem in the 'family' category it reverts or defaults back to the default category of general

damommy: Yep, it just happened to me. What's that all about?

March 1, 2017 at 8:52PM

So the change of season is officially here. In Australia we go from summer to autumn (fall) In America winter to spring.

I love the way we all write of season's change when these come about.

dip

damommy: As a child, I was fascinated with the difference in our mutual seasons. I thought when it was spring here, it was spring everywhere, and when it rained where I was, I thought the whole world had rain. Silly child. LOL

March 1, 2017 at 12:43PM

DR DIP: not too silly with these weird weather patterns Mom Nothing surprises me with climate change dip

March 1, 2017 at 3:14PM

FANSTORY...Creating a community of like mindedness and passion with a common agenda...The passion to write

dip

Do you know that frogs have the highest mortality rate of any other animal.......There is always one that croaks every day

Ideasaregems-Dawn: LOL.

February 26, 2017 at 11:33AM

damommy: Oh, you! LOL

February 26, 2017 at 12:37PM

evilynne: Not if they keep a jump ahead! Evi

February 26, 2017 at 3:45PM

AGE IS JUST A STATE OF MIND......AND I LOVE THE STATE I'M IN!

Tomorrow is 'International poet's kindness day"
Be kind to your humble poet

"Twas brillig and the slivy toves
Did gyre and gymble in the wabe
All mimsy were the borrogroves
And the momeraths outgrabe"

Lewis Carroll

HaHA spell check has gone berserk

You grammar poet Nazis would have a ball lol

Tom, how many current members of FanStory are there, active or not?

nor84: Tom doesn't always read the forum threads. If you want an answer, you can send him a PM. I know for a fact the site gets an average of 15 new members per week, so there's a bunch. Many, of course aren't active and there are people are still on the list of members who are long gone.

February 16, 2017 at 11:57AM

Dean Kuch: Maybe Dip doesn't wanna bother Tom with trivialities, Norma, as he realizes that Tom is a very busy man. Let him ask who he wants to ask.

February 17, 2017 at 7:33AM

DR DIP: maybe Tom gives one word answers like 'NO IDEA" I bet he could go to his computer and easily look up paid members and would no them to the last person..not that hard and how busy can he be except answering chicken shit questions like this hey lol

February 18, 2017 at 1:44AM

Badger_29: Valid query, but one that I, for one, do not expect any response to . . .

February 21, 2017 at 6:47PM

Just want to see what time it is in America where fanstory headquarters is It's just after 6 pm in Sydney Australia on valentines day

DR DIP: ah 2;12 am, I day behind and 8 hrs ahead dip

February 14, 2017 at 2:14AM

Jannypan (Jan) : Look at the bottom of the Forum page before you select a thread. FS time is given there.

February 14, 2017 at 2:23AM

DR DIP: ah I see Thankyou Jan, much appreciated

February 14, 2017 at 8:15AM

Isn't it funny. I have been posting here everyday, 2 poems a day since coming to Fanstory back in May 2013.
In all that time I have never promoted my work more than two pumps past pot of gold.
Last week for the first time, I made no 1 on the front page with 73 reviews! Yes I was pretty chuffed considering I never promoted this review past 37 cents! lol
I average 10 reviews a night if I'm lucky, usually promoting one of my poems with pot of gold status.
For some strange reason this was taken up by the members and they ran with it
To that I am forever grateful.

I have now ticked my fanstory bucket list. I am a happy poet

lol

thanks everyone! dip

I really enjoy reading the diversity of opinion each member puts forward on many Fanstory subjects and the diverse responses.
I really think this is healthy to have varying opinions on a site that caters for so many different styles and egos in both poetry and writing.
It's great that we take the time (when available) to review each other's work.
I think it is healthy that we all have varying tastes and opinions,
"what's one person's trash is another's treasure" so to speak.
Always remember to stay true to yourself and what feels right in your heart..stay true to yourself and just accept these diversities of positive and negative reviews.
Fanstory is a great site to boost one's ego and self esteem in one review or shatter that ego and self esteem in another review.
That is the beauty of this site...diversity of taste and interpretation, what is one's goals and aspirations compared to others.
In the nearly 4 years of coming to Fanstory I have experienced many wonderful emotions and conversely disappointments, but it is all a learning curve. You never stop learning and developing and to that I am forever grateful.

dip

I really try and make the effort to review everyone I have fanned sometimes I am remiss but i really do try and I thank everyone who reciprocates for I thought that is what its all about reviewing and commenting on each others work thats why you fan each other so they are aware when either has posted something new. To some its one sided and they never review your work Oh well each to their own I suppose

dip

damommy: I don't think anyone means to be rude. Some have so many fans that it takes them a while to get through all of them. Also, so many of us have health issues (as I do) and there are days we simply don't feel well enough. I don't worry too much about not being answered or reviewed. I know how every day life can get in the way. Rest assured that we're all glad you're here and look forward to your postings. 8-)

February 6, 2017 at 3:07PM

Linda Engel: Hey Dip, just a few words to let you know that I will not be renewing my membership this year. Take care and I'll catch you on Face Book. Love ya, Linda

February 9, 2017 at 11:47AM

Haha from top to bottom in one foul swoop..Thanks for my 15 mins of fame! from $1.30 to 2 cents in the push of a key on the keyboard
oh well I enjoyed it while it was there.

Thanks Guys and Gals

xxdip

WOW I am totally rapt I have never made the front page before little lone number one be it ever so fleeting You guys pushed it for me with you wonderful reviews I sincerely thankyou
YOU ARE MY STRENGTH!!

xxdip

Irish Rain: You deserve it Mr. Dip!!!

February 3, 2017 at 11:10AM

damommy: You're welcome. 8-)

February 3, 2017 at 11:16AM

Jannypan (Jan) : I saw it & was so happy for you. Jan

February 3, 2017 at 1:10PM

susanjohn: :-)))))

February 3, 2017 at 5:54PM

Just curious Do people read one's poetry because they genuinely like it? or that you have promoted it to 37 cents for 24hrs? lol

I hope it is the former .....that makes it all worthwhile if it is.
To all those who genuinely enjoy reading my humble simple rhyming posts I sincerely appreciate you finding the time to read and comment. It gives me the impetus to continue to write and post. Thankyou
respectfully Dip

NEWS FLASH! NEWSFLASH!...Star system and rankings to be eliminated plus unlimited entries each day!

In an unprecented Move Tommy boy has decided to abolish the star system and rankings and just let everyone enjoy each others poetry.
When asked "well it's only a trial period" tom said Just want to see if it actually affects the popularity of Fanstory and negates squabbling and pressure to perform.
"I want to see if everyone can just enjoy each others poetry without that pressure to promote it.
"Look I have made enough money from fanstory to retire " he added.

"And I am tired of the continual squabbling over rankings and unfair play"

If only this was true

lol dip

damommy: You had me going for a while. I thought It had really happened. I'd hate to see the star system done away with. I was on another writing site without ratings, and it was bor-ing.

February 1, 2017 at 6:24PM

THE WORLD IS SLOWLY GOING MAD!!

What future do our kids have if we are setting the example?

Gloria ....: I guess we could change our ways, right?

January 31, 2017 at 10:51AM

damommy: Dr Dip, you're so right.

January 31, 2017 at 11:51AM

Just want to take this opportunity to sincerely thank all my fanstory fellow poets who have "fanned" me over the last three and a half years of coming to fanstory.
My time has been very enjoyable and to all those who regular review my humble rhymes I sincerely appreciate it.

Have a great 2017 all... keep the typing finger sharp and the poem light on!

damommy: This sounds like you might be leaving. I hope not.

January 26, 2017 at 12:00PM

DR DIP: haha Not at all i wouln't leave this joint if you paid me its too much fun Where else can you get egos, backstabbing, false accusations, pissing in pockets, grammar Nazis , poet Nazis and drama Queens? haha And it only cost 99dollars for 2 years of this shit lol seriously, I'm not going anywhere! though I just read my post and it sure does read like I could be leaving hey Sorry about that I'm sure some would like to see the back of me lol

January 26, 2017 at 10:20PM

damommy: Oh, good. No one would want to see you leave. It IS fun, but it's true what you said about the controversy. I try to stay away from it all and enjoy my friends here. 8-)

January 27, 2017 at 12:55PM

FANSTORY IS SUCH A TIME WASTER!!!...I love it! lol

damommy: You're right, and I love it, too! 8-)

January 21, 2017 at 11:03PM

Linda Engel: count me in....

January 22, 2017 at 7:00PM

IT IS NOW 10 MINS AFTER MIDNIGHT IN AUSTRALIA ON THE 1ST JAN. 2017
HAPPY NEW YEAR

damommy: Happy New Year. I wasn't aware of the such a time difference. You're way ahead of us. Does that mean I'm writing you yesterday? LOL

December 31, 2016 at 1:29PM

What's the difference between a complimentary reviews have been made?

dip curious?

Jannypan (Jan) : I believe the 2 complimentary reviews are 'freebies.' If you want more reviews, then you have to promote, right? Jan

December 31, 2016 at 1:23AM

DR DIP: this not all I wrote they have left out half my question

December 31, 2016 at 2:08AM

Let me take this opportunity in wishing you all a very happy new year and a fruitful 2017 and may our poetry still touch an emotion
happy writing now and always

dip

closetpoetjester: Same to you dip...may your 2017 be filled with love and good times...Pxx

December 30, 2016 at 7:27PM

damommy: Happy New Year. May it be the best ever.

December 30, 2016 at 8:48PM

Ideasaregems-Dawn:

December 31, 2016 at 12:56AM

A TIME
A time to love, a time to live
A time to share, a time to give
A time to think about your lover
Mum, Dad, sister and brother

A time to reminisce, a time to reflect
A time to remember not to forget
Just what Christmas is all about
Not just religious for there's no doubt

Time to get into a sharing spirit
Time for forgiveness and never fear it
A time when loved ones, come together
For we are all family, never let that sever
We all have the time, we all have the love
Please take the time to heed what's above
For time together is always ours
Make it forever, for as long as love allows
A time to laugh, a time to smile
A time to savour, to reconcile
What is really, important to me
We are all in love so let us be!

dip

Ideasaregems-Dawn: Lovely, Dr.Dip - Merry Christmas!

December 24, 2016 at 9:12AM

susanjohn: Merry Christmas Dip!!

December 24, 2016 at 1:27PM

Merry Christmas everyone. I know it's Christmas and all and red is traditionally representative of Christmas BUT that RED background here on Fanstory is driving me Crazy lol

sincerely Dip

damommy: I like it. 8-)

December 19, 2016 at 10:11PM

michaelcahill: I'd like to take this opportunity and join Dip in blaming my mental state on the new colour scheme here at Fanstory. Whatever I've done ... the RED made me do it!

December 20, 2016 at 12:10AM

Gloria ....: I think it reveals Tom's true colours. :))

December 20, 2016 at 12:22AM

TheWriteTeach: The red is driving me batty, as well. I hope it is changed back after Christmas. . .

December 20, 2016 at 5:41AM

Dean Kuch: Red? What red?? Have I missed something? "Read", as in, "I READ a great book last week?" That kinda' red? Do I need a psychiatrist? Does anyone here know a good one they can refer me to? Red...blood red...REDRUM... **manical laughter ensues...** Heh-heh-heh-heh...! **manical laughter ends...** Just kidding, y'all. ~Dean ;)

December 23, 2016 at 4:26AM

JUST LET ME TAKE THIS OPPORTUNITY TO WISH ALL MY FANSTORIANS A VERY MERRY XMAS !!
Hope Santa brings you the muse you wanted! lol

xxdip

damommy: I wish you and yours the same. 8-)

December 13, 2016 at 9:14PM

Linda Engel: thanks. Merry Christmas to you, too. hugs.....

December 13, 2016 at 11:36PM

Irish Rain: Merry Christmas!!! Ho Ho Ho!!!

December 14, 2016 at 7:04PM

Do you know what this whole fiasco with this one reviewer has done?
it has brought to the surface the whole farce of the ratings system. Now lets be honest.
the whole ratings system 1 to 6 described from poor, needs improvement, good, excellent, exceptional. The words describing each star rating can give a misinterpretation.

Lets face it the bench mark has been set now virtually the only stars that are used are 5 and 6 as everyone is paranoid to give as low as a good rating which is still great but carries a certain inadequate stigma with it.
lets face it we are all amateurs here following a passion and everyone wants to please and encourage .
So how do we define excellent and exceptional poetry
its so personal in taste and individual interpretation but for want of not hurting someones feelings we tend to give 5 stars
This benchmark has been well and truly set now.
How many people will not review a poem below the value of say 50 cents?
Those two cent poems whether they are exceptional or not can be overlooked for the sake of member cent pumps to make that pot of gold or treasure chest
It's sad really because I have reviewed many 2 cent poems that are exceptionally good but can be overlooked by many because of this reason.
this is the main reason why i am a staunch advocate for having more than 2 complimentary reviews each posting

respectfully dip

Jannypan (Jan) : . . . but you are the one who complained about receiving a low rating. Now this makes it seem as though you are saying that is ok. Reviewers should rate as they see fit, right? I am confused by your post here & the ones from Tuesday--they seem contradictory. I believe more 2 cent poems are reviewed than you think. Jan

December 7, 2016 at 9:39AM

DR DIP: My complaint was representative for everyone who experienced the wrath of Joseph as I call it. I am not knocking the ratings system per say. It has to be there but its when people like joseph tries to justify a one star rating with so called expertise dribble Jannypan you obviously weren't a victim of his wrath. I don't know how you find my post confusing with respect Dip It wasn't the ratings points received that was the issue with me it didn't worry me it was his pathetic reasons accusing me of not writing poetry but propaganda? oh please my poetry is simple and heartfelt not propaganda Ok I took it rather personal but I was only speaking on behalf of every other one of his victims. If you had read his comments to the other 12 and his reasons you would understand surely/ my gripe is NOT with the star system although on saying that there are flaws in it that could easily be addressed xdip

December 7, 2016 at 3:51PM

I notice there are many Fanstorians who have experienced the rath of dear Joseph
Joseph has credibility issues he must be trying to address I wrote this to him just now
Joseph, with respect. I have just been to your comments page
You have commented on 10 poets and gave them all a one star rating? and you want credibility as a reviewer. I do notice nearly all your reviews could be cut and pasted with the same theme content
Just what is your go here?
Fanstory is not a site of professional poets we are all just amateurs with a passion to write poetry
NOT FKG PROPAGANDA! as you call it

You have pissed many people off in the short and I mean very short time you have been here
What is your intent on being on a site like fanstory if you are just going to put shit on everyone's works You are not only hurtful to many just trying to get a grasp but also demeaning.
You are lucky I have the skin of a rhino.
And here's me thinking it was just my PROPAGANDA writes as you call them
Look if that is how you truly feel about peoples writes and you are genuinely critiqueing your sentiments then maybe Fanstory isn't the site for you

dip

Joseph, with respect. I have just been to your comments page
You have commented on 10 poets and gave them all a one star rating? and you want credibility as a reviewer. I do notice nearly all your reviews could be cut and pasted with the same theme content
Just what is your go here?
Fanstory is not a site of professional poets we are all just amateurs with a passion to write poetry
NOT FKG PROPAGANDA! as you call it

You have pissed many people off in the short and I mean very short time you have been here
What is your intent on being on a site like fanstory if you are just going to put shit on everyone's works You are not only hurtful to many just trying to get a grasp but also demeaning.
You are lucky I have the skin of a rhino.
And here's me thinking it was just my PROPAGANDA writes as you call them
Look if that is how you truly feel about peoples writes and you are genuinely critiquing your sentiments then maybe Fanstory isn't the site for you

dip

damommy: Did you get an answer? Probably won't. Good for you, standing up to him. 8-)

December 6, 2016 at 5:38PM

nor84: FOR ALL YOU PEOPLE READING THIS, the reviewer in question is a STANDARD. Simply require reviews by premium members when you post, and this can't happen. The default setting on the posting screen is to allow Standards - change the setting.

December 6, 2016 at 7:33PM

DR DIP: what and take away the fun? lol

December 6, 2016 at 9:59PM

DR DIP: nor with respect, he gave 10 poets the one star its just not my gripe. he has issues the guy needs help not mutation that will only confuse him

December 6, 2016 at 10:01PM

nor84: That isn't 'muting.' Standards don't pay dues, and although many review fairly, some of them are just drive-bys who give one-star reviews. Those folks are just trying to annoy us - and they succeed. Waste of time to try to educate or help them. Just block standards. I'm not even sure you can 'mute' him.

December 6, 2016 at 11:19PM

DR DIP: JOSEPH HAS SOME REAL PERSONAL ISSUES SINCE HIS FRONTAL LOBOTOMY Don't be hard on him he is an expert in the art of poetry and its reflected in his wonderful supportive reviews. Welcome him with open arms he hasn't got a friend only an ego

December 7, 2016 at 2:33AM

Dean Kuch: Oh yes, Nor. You're damn right you can mute him. I did!

December 7, 2016 at 3:38AM

DR DIP: Iloved reading your banter /retorts with him Dean you are a real pro with this his review on Fanstoria and your response was beautiful to read I give you a 6 and needs no improvement lol

December 7, 2016 at 3:58AM

This was a review I just received from a brand new member who has not yet posted anything of his own work.
I can accept the one star ratings but his reasons that this is not poetry but propaganda is that far off rhe mark and disrespectful I feel what do you guys feel. I was quite taken aback actually. And nothing usually phases me.
But this guy irked me for his reasons

Review For Arms of many colours

ARMS OF MANY COLOURS

We are arms of many colours
From different race and creeds
But we're still like all others
We have our hopes, we have our needs

For we are ALL HERE HUMANS
We make up mankind
The problem isn't with us
It's with the ignorant and the blind

Don't judge people on the colour of skin
The pigment of our birth
Don't judge us for we are next of kin
We are people, we have our worth

Never differentiate,
politicize or degrade
We are all humans you must appreciate
Our skin will never fade

dip


Poor

This is not poetry; it is propaganda. I wish people could see the difference. It is not poetry's job to tell us how to behave or to fix us or dictate how we should act. That is the province of politics or religion, not of poetry! It is all well and good to treat people as equals, and I say hurray to that, but I do not say hurray to a poem that tells me what I should do. Chekhov said that the writer's job is not to solve problems but to show them, to put them on display. What you have here, however, is instruction, not poetry. Comment Written 06-Dec-2016 by Joseph Pedulla

DR DIP: This review has upset me deeply not the one star rating but the accusations in his reasons. I am seriously thinking of reassessing my worth on Fanstory

December 6, 2016 at 6:31AM

brenda bickers: Hi DR DIP, I do not see this poem as propaganda, in fact the complete opposite. You have not singled out any one individual on colour, creed or gender, and I see no suggestion on your part on how other people should feel. You have merely expressed your own wishes on how you would prefer to see the world. Perhaps this person has a guilty conscience. As for the suggestion on when someone has earned the right to view, I think you have hit the nail on the head. I was on her for a few weeks before I started to review. You need to understand what is required in reviewing before attempting to do so. Please don't let this person put you off. Brenda:))x

December 6, 2016 at 6:49AM

michaelcahill: Typical of one without their own thoughts to misquote the thoughts of another: Chekov: The task of a writer is not to solve the problem but to state the problem correctly. Not quite what he said is it? Another Chekov quote comes to mind: There is nothing more awful, insulting, and depressing than banality. One should always be suspicious when an individual is unable to express their own thoughts and must attempt to use the thoughts of others to make whatever point they are attempting to make. Red flags should fly when the interpretation of those thoughts are erroneous. While I think Chekov was a fine member of the Enterprise crew, he was a junior officer. I prefer Spock and his superior Vulcan intellect: It is illogical to pay heed to the wisdom of an imbecile. Or the down home smarts of Dr. McCoy: Good Lord, Jim. He's not a reviewer, he's an idiot! I'd be inclined to take the words of the hundreds of writers here who love your work, Dip. :))

December 6, 2016 at 7:23AM

Jannypan (Jan) : Standard members can be blocked by selecting Premier members when posting, right? That way if you have muted your measly 6, then you can still keep those from trashing your work. Help me out FS members. This is correct, right? One has to make sure that this is selected for Premier when posting each time as it sometimes reverts back to standard. Jan

December 6, 2016 at 8:26AM

michaelcahill: Yes. Usually when you block standards it remains like that, but once in a while it reverts back. So you should check and make sure they remain blocked. This isn't a Standard member though. It's a sub-standard member. LOL I just crack myself up....

December 6, 2016 at 8:34AM

susanjohn: Who the heck is picking on you Dip!!...LOL I need to take care of this..hmmm lol.I just reviewed the poem...then saw all this. I love the poem dip, don't you let this person get to you. Giant hug dipster. :-)

December 6, 2016 at 10:16AM

Irish Rain: I don't think anyone should have the right to tell anyone else what 'poetry' is, or isn't. I enjoyed your poem. If your writing is not 'poetry', we're all in trouble. Let it go...not EVEN worth it. Blessings...

December 6, 2016 at 11:32AM

Can I suggest one thing that would would give some of the new members more credibility in their reviewing?
I think a premier member must have posted at least 5 of his own poems on his profile to be assessed and reviewed before allowing them the privilege of reviewing others.
The reason I say this is I find a lot of the new members who give rather scathing unsubstantiated reviews with very low ratings tend to have 'no runs on the board" ie have no postings at all which in my eyes gives them no credibility to review with any valid reasoning.
This is just an observation i have noticed over the three and a half years I have been coming to Fanstory and I am sure many fellow fanstorians have experienced this.
Don't get me wrong, I embrace and welcome new members but feel in the context of credibility of reviewing, runs on the board" is essential.
I don't think 5 poems or posts is too much to ask before they can review
What are your thoughts?

closetpoetjester: I agree whole heartedly Dip. Either that or we have to take what they say with a grain of salt...like a three review I got LOL

December 5, 2016 at 8:17AM

closetpoetjester: I agree whole heartedly Dip...but until something like that is in place we just have to take those unsubstantiated opinions with a grain of salt, right? Like a three review I got recently LOL

December 5, 2016 at 8:21AM

mrsmajor: I don't think its the number of poems that makes the difference, its simply the expertise of the reviewer..yes I've observed what you have mentioned over the past twelve years, and I really don't think anything can be done about it...In the past I have often said not every writer is a good reviewer...but if such a idea becomes part of the site's rules, that should be clearly stated before the member joins...but of course I agree some reviews are most certainly without any merit whatsoever...

December 5, 2016 at 11:25AM

nor84: Copy the site's reviewing guidelines and send it to them, but never argue back. Can't 'defend' your writing.

December 5, 2016 at 11:34AM

Gloria ....: Ha, yep, I've seen that first hand, dip. We had one new reviewer in particular who was handing out one star reviews at a rate of 40% for beyond unreasonable excuses. But according to them, they were just being "honest". Yer right. It was surprising how much support for outright lies that disgraceful reviewer received.

December 6, 2016 at 2:13AM

Ok, please don't take this as a whinge because I genuinely love this site.
I review or try to review everyone that comes up on my message page as "new writing on line"..whether its worth 2 cents (which is quite disgusting) to the dollar entries who have obviously spent many hours reviewing others works to get the member cent pumps to promote it.
It costs 6.55 dollars to promote your work to "treasure chest" status which gives you 2 whole days on the welcome pages.

To review enough to make the face page and all time best status you would have to review on average 20 to 25 poems a day .
And I commend those that have the time to review so many and even more to get the 2 complimentary poems to the face page.

I read many beautiful poems by these "Dollar plus" poets who have gone to the trouble to review so much.
I greatly admire those poets who have made their way to top rankings on Fanstory purely through long and laborious reviewing To attain the member cent pumps.

Personally I try to review as many as time allows me but sometimes I have to sleep.
I can see how Fanstory can take over one's life, you become a slave to the system so to speak.
Obviously to save time and to have enough words in a comment to allow the comment to be accepted and the time frames one has when they have to answer 70 to 90 reviews every time they post it must be very hard to individually answer every reviewer who has gone to the trouble to review you.
Cut and paste replies becomes quite evident and I find this rather impersonal. But be that as it may i admire those who do get that many reviews.
But when our no 1 poet at the moment can spend the time and personally give responses to every reviewer who has gone to the trouble to review them it reflects on the cut and pasters.

As I said at the start, this is not a gripe but merely an observation.
What probably started out as a sight for passionate poets and was supported with a nominal fee has become a lucrative business and good on fanstory administration for making it so. Just not too impressed that every time you open the site you are plastered with advertisement more and more and its not that cheap considering the page reaches a specific audience of writers and poets so unless you open fanstory you would never see the add anyway..just curious
Yours in poetry

dip
ps I will get back off my soap box now

xxdip

Jannypan (Jan) : I see very few ads & they are waaay at the top of the page--hardly noticeable. Jan

December 1, 2016 at 5:20PM

DR DIP: fair enough

December 1, 2016 at 9:33PM

nor84: Some of those are Google ads - notice the little blue triangle they have attached. It isn't Fanstory's fault. I have a program called Adguard that eliminates nearly all of them.

December 2, 2016 at 2:22AM

Gloria ....: What ads? I don't see any ads. Mind you I have a built-in ad-blocker. The only product I ever fell for from advertisement seduction was Swiffer.

December 2, 2016 at 2:53AM

closetpoetjester: Dippety Do, I totally agree...what's with those freaking ads...Surely Tommy boy doesn't need advertising when he's making a big old bunch bucks out of his poor su...oops I mean members... I do agree, FS becomes so ingrained you start ditching everything else for it...no fair. You have to come up for air and when you are sucked dry with the reviewing and promotion system, you feel like you are in a continual vortex. I found a small hiatus helped me become guilt free. I can only devote the amount of time I have spare which at the moment is 4/5's of F**all. With that said, I have a poetry venture so I'm at least being productive and trying to MAKE some money out of it now. There IS a limit. We all just have to work out where we fit here and quit dumping on people because they don't review you. People that promote at the top all the time have to be prepared to get the fluff reviews as at times that's what they are attracting. If there was a slightly fairer system or maybe a HALF PRICE certificate. Did ya hear that Tom? Tom?! Anyway I say, give FS the level of committment it honestly deserves in your eyes and you'll benefit more and suffer less. They rely on the guilt trip here. Well I was guilty as charged for awhile and then broke free of the shackles and by God it feels good. Good luck with whatever you do but a GREAT vent. Wish I could review it haha...

December 2, 2016 at 3:55AM

Why are adds starting to appear more often on Fanstory. We pay to be financial members. Do we have to have adds plastered across the screen when you open it on Fanstory?

just curious

dip

Kingsland: It's a business, the site was created to make a profit. I see nothing wrong with those ads...

November 30, 2016 at 8:29AM

nor84: Most of the ads come from Google, not from the site. Adguard software can stop those.

November 30, 2016 at 2:04PM

Rami Devi just a question?..what's the point in writing about something and posting if you can't view and review it? or is it that you've blocked me for some reason. Did I give you a bad critique or something? I am puzzled

Can someone explain to me how on 'advanced editor' you can make audio recordings I love what Dean and RG star do and many others I would like to add music audio to my poems.

thanks Dip

I am Cat: Dip, When I do it, I record my voice on my iphone, (in the app called "Voice Memos" that comes on every iphone), email it to myself, put it in iTunes, and convert it to an mp3 file. Once that is done, it's a matter of posting as you always do, but go to Show Advanced Options, and choose, "reading", (click 'select', and browse your computer for the file, then upload) It's that easy. The size of your reading MUST be smaller than 3 mb.--choose low quality when saving, if necessary-- I hope that helps. Cat

November 21, 2016 at 11:28AM

IT's all about runs on the board
crawl before you walk
If you are going to be only a standard author just to put shit on premier poets than scamper off into your computer find another site
one and two stars for a review without a valid explanation is just a waste of everybody's time

just sayin

dip

Dean Kuch: Sick 'em, boy! Good boy, yasssss, Dip... Heh-heh-heh...

November 19, 2016 at 11:44AM

I have just received a message saying I cannot post anymore poems in 24 hrs..its been 24 hrs since my last 2 what gives?

Jannypan (Jan) : Are you using the FS New York time as your clock?

November 6, 2016 at 11:46PM

What is the difference between a 'premier' and 'standard' author?

dip

michaelcahill: Premier members are the paying members like us who can post, review, enter contests and enjoy all the features of the site. Standard members have a free membership and they are restricted to reviewing up to five stars, can't enter contests or do much else. They are noted for bombing us with one and two star reviews and rumour has it that some Premier members have opened up Standard accounts just to get back at their enemies on site. LOL More info than you wanted, yes?

August 24, 2016 at 5:22AM

Gloria ....: There is now a third category of membership: Premier Shield

August 24, 2016 at 6:01PM

Selina Stambi: And what's that?

August 30, 2016 at 1:09PM

Hayley Solomon: Hello dip, Hayley here. I recently became a premiere member and all it is is money. I paid $100 so all my work could be saved remotely on the fs site n case my computer crashes, Thats all premier is!

September 7, 2016 at 5:23AM

Hayley Solomon: Hello dip, Hayley here. I recently became a premiere member and all it is is money. I paid $100 so all my work could be saved remotely on the fs site n case my computer crashes, Thats all premier is!

September 7, 2016 at 5:26AM

I have never heard of mono stitch poetry before?
I thought it was just cryptic one liners?
Can you call it poetry?
if so haven't the "one liners" got to be original to submit to fanstory?
just curious, dip

You know in all this time coming to fanstory it has taken me all this time for it to sink in You won't get to know whether someone has posted something new unless you become a fan and it has opened up a whole new fanstory world for me. There are so many beautiful and wonderful poets out there who I have been missing out on.
thankyou

susanjohn: So true!!!! So glad I found you!!

August 17, 2016 at 6:15PM

Jannypan (Jan) : You will not be notified in the case of a BLIND contest until it is over.

August 17, 2016 at 10:22PM

Just a question does everyone that I am following get a message prompt on my profile page saying they have a new work posted?

susanjohn: ? I'm following you...I always get a message when you post...that what you mean?

August 17, 2016 at 7:36AM

Just a question thatb has intrigued me for over three years now.

Once you have your 2 complimentary reviews unless you boost it or someone bothers to open your profile page can anyone still see your new postings?

no one has given me the definitive answer
I have boosted a poem using review dollars but still only get one if lucky 2 more reviews
I can't work out how someone can freshly post something and in the same day be on the front page if not the top

as i said just curious as I really don't give a rats but get rather frustrated to spend hours reviewing only to pick up a couple of extra reviews

Jannypan (Jan) : They pay major $$$$ to be in the top 10 Featured poems in the first group. The well received poems come from the positive reviews the work receives in a specified time [5s or 6s] This is my understanding. Those with a large fan base will probably have so many reviews in a short time. Those without seldom get to the well received listing. You have to put some kind of certificate on your work when first posting or you get only 2 free ones. Where that work goes after that, I have no clue. Good question.

August 10, 2016 at 2:34AM

michaelcahill: You can always view any work, but if it isn't promoted you have to go find it in someone's profile. To be well received it has to be in the first twenty-four hours I believe and it's only promoted pieces with eight reviews for poems or five reviews for prose minimum. It's the top ten percentage wise for the day, most sixes by percentage. If your piece is promoted, it's on the list when you click "read" that keeps repeating over and over. Yours stays on the list until the promotion runs out. Anything not promoted is just sitting in your portfolio. I've gone to peoples profile and reviewed things out of people's portfolios before, so it does happen. :))

August 10, 2016 at 2:48AM

giraffmang: Never use your own money. I don't. I earn all the funny money on site to promote mine. My wallet stays intact... in my wife's handbag I think! Having a fan base helps as does promotion but it will stay on the circuit for 2 - 5 days depending on what base certificate is used. the problem is that not many people circle the lower rewarded pieces unless strapped for funny money.

August 10, 2016 at 4:34AM

kiwisteveh: I have (in theory) a couple of hundred fans, but only about 10 - 15 of those regularly review my work. The only way to get lots of reviews is to promote. You get to choose whether that is worth real money to you or whether to review like cray or try to win contests. I have never spent a cent of my own on promoting, but know I can make it to the front page if I really want to.

August 10, 2016 at 11:52PM

Mary Wakeford: When I receive a review from someone, I go to their profile and choose one of their works and give it a review, even if it's a two center. I think it helps to get your name out there and people appreciate the sentiment. On the other hand, I have reviewed several times one writer, and never get a single review from them in kind. So I eventually stop reviewing them. It's a two way street and a little goes a long way. I was told when I first joined by a high ranked author they would not review my work unless it was promoted to at least 60 cents...but I've promoted over a dollar and sometimes it doesn't help. I don't know what to tell you.

August 12, 2016 at 12:04AM

We have a new member who is obviously super anal about the use of the English language. I won't say her name but for those who have experienced her insightful and thorough comments with average and poor star ratings on nearly ALL her reviews you will easily guess who I am talking about. The thing is she has no runs on the board bar one rather lame short story but I am too polite to rubbish as I fear she is lost in her own self importance. So this may sound harsh? Well I suppose it is, I just get pissed off when a reviewer hasn't posted any of her own works other than one to critique. Just my thoughts

respectfully, dip

Jannypan (Jan) : Hey, there's more than one lurking about. One stopped by me. Jan

August 1, 2016 at 10:30PM

Lynn27: Newbies don't understand. The site let's them without any guidance. I had to pay me visit.

August 2, 2016 at 1:32AM

LisaD123: I agree that you should have to post regularly to review regularly. I have not received less than four stars from the regular posting crew (except for the times when previewed work had snuck out with being completed ... But that's another thread in itself!). I think that at the end of the day you just have to rise above it and alienate people you respect giving you great reviews. At least the person is giving everyone the same kind of reviews ... what sends me over the edge is when someone hasn't posted and then gives me ONLY a poor review! Hang in there! :-)

August 2, 2016 at 5:01AM

LisaD123: Sorry .. 'Without being completed'... see it's happened again!

August 2, 2016 at 5:02AM

LisaD123: And 'accept' rather than 'alienate'

August 2, 2016 at 10:12AM

Cumbrianlass: A good reviewer isn't necessarily a good writer. A good writer isn't necessarily a good reviewer. It's responses like this that scare away members with the potential to really contribute something of merit to this site.

August 2, 2016 at 1:34PM

Mary Wakeford: 'Jane Doe' was on a roll yesterday... I got "nicked" too. Three stars and not a single suggestion on how I could improve the piece. I responded to her while suggesting she school herself by reading Gloria's tutorials. I may have been a little harsh wjth her, but for Heaven sakes...her reviews were ridiculous!

August 3, 2016 at 4:15AM

Dean Kuch: ...Usually works for me, Dipster. ~Deano :)

August 4, 2016 at 5:25PM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DEAN KUCH WHO TURNS 21 TODAY!! lol

he wishes!

dip

damommy: Happy Birthday, Dean. May it be the best birthday yet. 8-)

June 21, 2016 at 5:09PM

evilynne: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DEAN! Evi

June 21, 2016 at 8:57PM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DEAN KUCH WHO TURNS 21 TODAY!! lol

he wishes!

dip

I noticed my thoughts were removed from this posts..dare to whinge lol

Jannypan (Jan) : This page is only 1 page in length. As new 'stuff' is entered, old 'stuff' falls off. Could that be the reason yours is gone?

May 13, 2016 at 7:45PM

brenda bickers: Yes I have noticed that DR DIP. It was posted after Dawn's cute doggy posting so must have been removed.

May 13, 2016 at 8:21PM

I will not be promoting my work any more its just not worth the hours on end to get member cent pumps and the reviews I get
I will still review others when I get the time and I thank those that always go to the trouble to review mine

I have always said @ complimentary review certificates is not enough exposure for what you put in
this might sound like a whinge but its just my thought on the review system I have spent hours promoting my work for minimal reviews back so I am a bit disappointed but that's life so I will accept it. Obviously everyone will review those 0ne dollar poems first to get quick member dollars and after the first 20 once they get down to 50 cents no one is interested for the rewards returned

brenda bickers: Hi DR DIP, I am so sorry to hear of this sad news. I do know what you mean, it has taken me a while to get my reviews up to a reasonable amount that makes posting it worth while but I still fall short sometimes. Brenda:))x

May 13, 2016 at 5:36PM

Thank you all for your support over the last 2 and a half years I have come to Facebook
In that time I have posted close to 2000 poems
I have decided to have a bit of a break to pursue other passions but rest assured i know i will be lured back by the wonderful wordsmiths on this site who i now consider to be poetic friends and i really appreciate your comments and reviews.

dip

I am Cat: (((((DIP)))))

September 29, 2015 at 1:20PM

Unspoken94: My email address: williamrbs@aol.com. Bill Stephenson

October 5, 2015 at 4:58PM

RGstar: I am here DIP. Always been a loyal friend, fan and person with a smile to life. Together we will battle through. I am right here RGstar Check your inbox.

January 5, 2016 at 10:26AM

With respect nor i know how the system works
just think it could have other options to cater for those who do not have the time or patience to promote

thanks for your replies much apprecated

dip

nor84: The only alternative I know of would be to review enough to buy a $10 certificate, then purchase member cent pumps with real cash. I don't recommend that, because there's no advantage. Another way might be to purchase and use a Lock and Key Certificate (see certificates in your "My" list) and invite people to a lock and key. There's also the Seal of Quality committee, which will give feedback. Neither lock and key nor Seal of Quality require you to promote, or at least not as I recall.

July 14, 2015 at 4:20PM

I reALLY THINK IF PEOPLE AREWILLING TO COME A FAN OF YOUR WORK THEY SHOULD ALWAYS HAVE ACCESS TO YOUR POSTS TO COMMENT EVEN IF THE 2 COMPLIMENTARY REVIEW CERTIFICATEs HAVE EXPIRED. JUST MY THOUGHT
DIP

nor84: If someone becomes your fan, they are notified every time you post. It has nothing to do with the two complimentary reviews. Also, anyone on the site has the ability to check your portfolio at any time and review your work. However, many of the best reviewers would hesitate to critique for two cents, because reviewing is how they earn member money to promote their own work. In the half-hour it may take to review a piece for two cents, they could be reviewing several other posts.

July 12, 2015 at 12:53PM

DR DIP: Takes me 3 mins to review someone nor84. They might be able to see your work but they can't comment if there has already been two comments about your specific post. The money bit means diddly shit and if they are so hell bent on only reviewing works with dollar value well they aren't true fans. Sorry nor, just my opinion, not everyone has the time to sit and review for hours just to get their work ranked higher up the brownie point piss in your pocket tree. The true poets are the ones who review and comment because they like your work not that its worth a dollar. Personally, the whole clique club ratings "favourites" game is a joke, like why bother having a star ratings system from 1 to 6 if everyone gets an excellent like where can one go but down if the bench mark is set that high? do you see what I am saying with the greatest respect. I have said this many times if Fan story is purely based on them making money from people buying member pump dollars to promote their own work I would rather have a higher yearly subscription fee knowing that anyone at any time regardless of these 2 complimentary certificates can review Look, I love this site and I love my fellow poets and the diversity of styles my agenda might be totally different to everyone else's that come here I don't need my ego stroked as a poet because i don't rate my poetry at all compared to the many wonderful wordsmiths on this site. If people like my posts its purely because they genuinely like them hence I only get on average 4 to 5 reviews each post and I post 2 every night for the last 2 and a half years I have been coming to this wonderful site. That's over 1500 poems posted and they might not be everyone's 'cup of tea' but its my style and my passion to write in 4 line rhyme pattern. Sure, I can write non rhyming prose all day with beautiful metaphoric flowery words in a sonnet with perfect syllabic count and Iambic techno meter or whatever but it just doesn't interest me and I admire the poets on this site that choose to write in this style. Sadly, I am a rhyming tragic and always will be Once again, with the the greatest respect dip

July 12, 2015 at 5:15PM

nor84: I'm not a poet, at least not usually, although I have won poetry contests. To review prose, it does take 20 to 30 minutes. To review a short poem, much less. If you review others, they will often return the favor. Reviewing the items on the home page pays best, and reviewing newly-posted work in "Up Next" pays about 50 member cents, with a chance of winning a member cent pump. Nobody has to spend real coin of the realm to participate. Most of us get our member dollars from reviewing and/or entering contests. If you see someone's work that you like, become their fan. they may reciprocate, and review all your work as it comes into their inbox.

July 12, 2015 at 10:01PM

mvbrooks: They do have this option by becoming a fan--then they get an email every time you post and a link to what you have posted. When you get a review you like, consider asking them to be a fan.

September 21, 2015 at 5:48PM

Seriously if you are going to review someone's work and give a 2 star rating(needs improvement) please have the courtesy of suggesting how this can be done.

plus get a few runs on the board and have a few poems on your profile before becoming a credible reviewer.

nothing irks one more than being critically reviewed by someone who hasn't submitted on post

just saying

nor84: You'll save yourself from receiving a lot of these reviews if you simply block Standard members from reviewing your work. Some of them are good; many others are drive-bys. When you post your work, there's a place where you're asked if you want to accept nonwriter reviews, or some such wording. The default is to accept them. Many of us just say "no", but you need to check that section every time because sometimes it switches back to the default.

April 6, 2015 at 6:32AM

Linda Engel: agree 100% they should not review unless are members and have posted at lease two or three themselves. You do not deserve a 2 on anything

June 10, 2015 at 3:10PM

IF anyone is remotely interested in reading more of my humble works, I have a Facebook page called "diptales poems from the heart" where you can archive any of my 2748 poems I have written. I would love to have you on board

xxdip

I am being interviewed on California blog talk radio RATED G RADIO WITH GARRET MILLER.

Garret has his own radio blog show and is giving me an hour on his effervescent show
He wants me to talk about my town, my life and read a few of my poems on air.
you can stream it live on the link below:



This is just an opportunity to recite and chew the fat on American radio so I am so appreciative that garret is willing to give me A WHOLE HOUR on his show

It will be live, RAW and uncut..JUST LIKE ME hAHA . sO IF ANYONE IS AT ALL INTERESTED, ESPECIALLY MY FACEBOOK FRIENDS IN America PLEASE TELL YOUR FRIENDS.I would be so appreciative.

PS Garrett put together the promo SO IT'S a bit PRETENTIOUS?..who gives a rats its going to be fun!

**TUESDAT THE 17TH FEB at 2 pm Sydney AEST time""

which equates to 7 pm on Monday 16th Feb CALI TIME

PS no throwing old rotten tomatoes ok?

here is the link:http://www.blogtalkradio.com/garrettmiller/2015/02/17/mark-de-pena-australian-writer-author-poet

Veeb: How exciting, Dip! All the best to you.

February 11, 2015 at 9:04AM

DR DIP: thanks Veeb should be a bit of fun I'm sure I don't take things too seriously lol

February 11, 2015 at 2:21PM

michaelcahill: As we say here in California, that sounds Bitchin' dude! My backyard.

February 11, 2015 at 10:44PM

do you know what REALLY pisses me off? when you get someone review you and give you a one star rating and when you go visit their work to see what a perfect poet writes..alas! they have not posted anything on fanstory

go figure in the 18 months of coming to this wonderful site I have never been given a one star rating actually I am somewhat bemused and embarrassed that someone feels that a post is only worth one star.

Just to piss them off I am going to promote this piece of shit in their eyes the poem is called "No words required" so I would be really interested to see if you feel that it warrants a one star rating which at the end of the day means diddly shit in the scheme of things.
I don't promote my work that often but on principal alone I am going to sit here tonight and promote the shit out of this one poem just piss this reviewer off I am somewhat disgusted. Normally I wouldn't give 2 fks but this has me riled because I feel it isn't too bad a poem and I refuse to have a poor on my portfolio

dip

Kingsland: This person is not a premier member , but a standard member. Standard members are not allowed to post writing, as they haven't paid their dues. i don't let standards review my posts because i run into this kind of problem every time. When you write a post there is an option of not letting standards review what you write, you should take advantage of that option...

February 4, 2015 at 8:52AM

Emily George: It's a good well rhymed poem, being creative is a blessing don't take that one review to heart

February 4, 2015 at 3:15PM

Emily George: I think the poem is well rhymed. Don't let one review get to you.

February 4, 2015 at 3:18PM

FREEFEE: Dude, dont tell me this is like youtube music where everybody has an asshole thats thier opinion....please dont tell me that. Have you gotten some reviews polite, relevant to your potential...and respectfull?

February 9, 2015 at 12:47PM

FREEFEE: Trying to catch on to the rules i meant A-hole's..thats not a curse word.

February 9, 2015 at 12:54PM

My anti virus protection has just blocked a POP UP from Fanstory .com

I have just spent hundreds of dollars and a lot of grief having my computer completely cleaned out costing me a lot of wasted time.

There are a lot of questions to be answered here I'm afraid because I had taken my issues directly to Tom several weeks ago when I could not upload any accompanying photos.

I am a trusting man, I love this site. I love the interaction and contribution from amazing wordsmiths out there.

What I don't like is the bullshit given to me when I asked the question that you were sending pop ups and adverts via fanstory after I pay a subscription each year to protect me from this shit.

I am not the first to complain about this.
I took it on the chin and assumed the problem was my end but I am continually getting pop up ads every time I post a poem with "keywords" highlighted in a different colour that send me a link to an add .

If I am denied access to this site after this you'll know why

I am a truthful and fair person I am very patient. but I have come to the end of my tether.

Sorry if my rant upsets some of the "clique club" but enough is enough.

A simple apology would be a good way to start.. because the grief has affected me to the point that I am finding it hard to enjoy the site whilst these pop ups continually come up. I have had computer nerds check out my machine and my programmes and everything is sweet my end my anti virus is just doing its job

sincerely and regretfully, dip

gypsycaravan: I have this problem on every site now on my iMac but not on my MacAir so it is definitely something on the computer, not the FS site. It is some new viral adware I'm told by Apple that doesn't show up or get cleaned up by most anti-virus programs.

January 2, 2015 at 12:17PM

nor84: I have two programs I swear by: Adguard, which stops popups (a lot of them are from Google) and Malwarebytes, which cleans out things that slip by Norton Antivirus. I heartily recommend both. Check them out online.

January 2, 2015 at 1:58PM

DR DIP: thanks for your help guys

January 2, 2015 at 3:38PM

HAVE A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE WHO CELEBRATES TONIGHT..SEEYA ON THE OTHER SIDE!

xxxdr dip

This week I have been really struggling withe the some very significant occurrences in my life

I am very vulnerable at the moment and it makes me realize just how precious life is

Life goes on I know but it goes on with 3 less people in my life

adewpearl: I'm so sorry to hear of your struggles, Dip.

December 20, 2014 at 9:05AM

mrsmajor: I sincerely hope things will get better for you...yes life can be difficult at times, but we all struggle through it, and so will you...sending big hugs, knowing we wish you well!

December 20, 2014 at 10:25AM

DIS-illusioned: My sincere condolences and best wishes.

December 20, 2014 at 2:02PM

TOM and fellow members
with the greatest respect to this wonderful site and to the benefit of those members who aren't in the clique club. I would dearly love to see ones work be available for more than just 2 complimentary reviews.

Everyone has a different agenda and motivation for coming here...mine seems to be slightly different than many.

Personally, I do not profess to be a wordsmith by any stretch of the imagination but more a humble rhymer with a passion to write in verse be it poetic warts and all.

There are so many amazing wordsmiths on this site that inspire me so and without naming, for fear of favouritism of omitting someone for being remiss I think everyone has their favourites and sadly those favourites, through no fault of their own other than time constraints, do not have the luxury to review 24 hours a day to gain the required review dollars to promote their work.

In my eyes, it sort of reminds me of the aeroplane club, whereby everyone reviews those $1.20 poets because it only takes 6 reviews on average to attain another review dollars to at least promote ONE of your works for 24 hrs at least giving others a chance to physically comment on your work.

You see, I really don't give a rats about the star system because personally it breeds haters and jealousy amongst fellow poets who simply want egos stroked.

like lets be serious here we have a star system from one to six stars yet no one uses the full range without fear of getting muted for honest opinion.

the problem is when people give 5 AND 6'S EVERY TIME, THE BENCH MARK IS SET THAT HIGH that there is physically no where else to go but down.

it really just promotes everyone to just 'piss in each others pockets' so to speak.

I am a firm believer in pissing off the 'certificate expired' and make it unlimited reviews over a 24 hour period.
I am seriously willing to pay tommy boy and his cohorts, 100 dollars subscription per year (that's 2 meals at the local bistro) for this 'luxury of having no 'certificate expired' and unlimited reviews for 24 hrs the extra subscription money is the money for loss of revenue to the 'pilot' of the fanstory aeroplane club and I think is duly compensated.

I for one, hate the 'certificate expired' message, it shits me to tears and if I sound like a pompous little aussie whinger be it because I hardly ever whinge except of course for the 2 week fiasco where one could not upload pictures with their poem but surprise surprise could all of a sudden havethis reinstated with the new format costing one heaps of grief changing windows versions and removing programmes.

Ok about the new format. Personally I don't think it's far from user friendly.
There are still many glitches to solve, but the fact I can upload pictures again makes me tolerate those glitches.

ok I have had my whinge so come down under and spit ya venom lol

dr dip

Imogen JH: I feel your pain. I agree with you.

December 8, 2014 at 10:22AM

Veeb: I like your idea of a 24-hour viewing period; sounds reasonable. I also think 'newbies' should get more than two reviews just so they can learn the ropes and get some diverse reviews. I'm afraid I gave a 'newbie' a not-so--good review recently, which I apologized for. Now I ck. the profile if it's not someone I know. So, I learned something, too.

December 23, 2014 at 1:22PM