cscalia99: I'd like to sincerely apologize to everyone for my first post of chapter 5 of "Buried Unger-neath". I rushed through it and am sorry, not only for writing a poor chapter but, for having people actually read it. Thank you to those who pointed out my errors and faults. They were abundently obvious and hideous. One thing I will say is that I am not sorry for the type of story I'm telling. I'm not writing this to do things vicariously through the characters I've created. (This would be for the people who think I'm a psychopath, myself) It's fiction. It's a brutal, no holds barred horror story about a brother and sister who kill people. That's a plain summary but, a summary nonetheless. I started writing one day and this is what became of my it. I'm doing this for fun, because I love it, and most of all, because I want to become the best writer I can possibly be. This most recent post did not showcase any of my talents, except maybe that to describing the macabre. Again, I apologize to those who read it and were displeased, not with the content but, with how it was written. I am fresh minded and when I feel I am ready to put the REAL chapter 5 up, it will be much better. A word to the wise. Take your time with what you're writing. If you're not in a contest, you have no deadlines. Eveyone wants to be recognized and move up the food chain as fast as possible but, it wont happen if you rush through your writing just to post it...like I did. Wish me luck on the re-write! |
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cscalia99: "A fun, new twist to the modern classic tale of the sociopath serial killer. Scalia vigorously pushes that "society labeled" red button on many levels, leaving you with little hope of relieving the pressure. He repeatedly puts the reader in uncomfortable situations, yet simultaneously luring them back for more with vivid, gut wrenching description. His unorthodox format and style gives the reader a look inside all characters, (including those of the killers and victims) forcing you to see the good, the bad, and in Scalia's case, the down right sick and twisted. Most importantly, he left THIS reader yearning for more. You've met Dexter Morgan and Patrick Bateman. This is far from the normal run of things you've become accustomed to in the recent past. You're surely missing out if you fail to allow this fresh, new talent to introduce you to Alex Unger and his equally demented sister, Mary." |
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cscalia99: enjoy chapter 3! this is where it gets rough...lol |
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cscalia99: Just posted chapter 2! |
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cscalia99: here i am, stuck in the middle with you. This is a story not for the weak of heart. A lot of people out there like to be shocked and amazed, while being disgusted and appauled at the same time. I feel I provide that here with the first chapter of "Buried Unger-neath". |
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cscalia99: I don't know how I started this story or book or where the idea came from. I'm a big Stephen King fan and have watched, probabaly way too many, horror movies my whole life. I first created Alex Unger on a dark, foggy night about a month ago ;) and a week later, he had a sister, Mary. I'll be the first to admit, I'm a novice. I also know that I will not get any better at writing if I'm not judged by a more neutral crowd. I hope you enjoy what I have written and keep coming back for more. Thank you. |
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