FanStory wrote to Sefiros: Mercenaries & Mysteries finished second in the contest "Bounty Hunter"


Sefiros: I write fantasy with a dash of science fiction. I play a lot of Role-Playing Games where the advanced people/race have died out and are forgotten by "modern" people . . . except for one guy and his mysterious organization bent on unleashing that power over all. I've seen it a thousand times. Hopefully I can add something new to the mix. I am looking for feedback. I hope that by reading others' entries I will encourage those selfsame people to read my work -- old and new.
    Earl of Oxford: Re: your 'profile fave quote' - Did 'the mop' say yes, or turn you down? I've been dumped by several mops, and it does hurt, especially as I still have to do my own floor-washing. ;-) xx -
    Glenn Paul: I was a bit confused by all the characters because I didn't have reference points as to who they are. But I like where the story is going. -