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    We Came

    Free form verse
    from 38 reviews.
    General  Poetry

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    Papas Don't Leave

    For Father's Day - Song Lyrics with Subtle Rhyme
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    General  Poetry

  • Lying in the Crosshairs

    Lying in the Crosshairs

    Free form poem without rhyme
    from 32 reviews.
    Commentary and Philosophy  Poetry


Seraphim Delphinium: A review I treasure:
The string is on the meat suggests a roast ready for the oven to me. All trussed up, and ready for the spit.
I assume this is your take on the shut down mirage of the normally bustling city. Great word choices and imagery (even if a few flew over my head). I hear a little Ferlinghetti, even some Bukowski, minus the profanity. I enjoyed thoroughly.

Comment by humpwhistle for "Urban Desert's Mirage" 3.23.2020


Seraphim Delphinium: A review I treasure:
Super poem, one of your best, I think. this is just beautiful, the music of the language here, the repetitions of words from line to line create a wonderful dripping, cascading effect, the phrases inverted make for some wonderful philosophy and music. loved the images, of dust to dust, of heart to heart, breathe to breath, and the classic romantic sentiment expressed. love that carries on, after death, into eternity, love in one and at the same time, in the other. wonderful. Comment by EKPoet for "Till Death, Sweet Valentine".


Seraphim Delphinium: Bravo! Bravo! Another brilliantly written poem that is so smooth and captivating it whisks the reader off their feet taking them for a ride surrounded by hypnotic prose. Perfect rhythm, so well written. I am searching for the right words to describe the feelings I sense when I read this poem, but I can find no words to accurately describe it. Hypnotic, smooth, a feeling of being carried into the air and flying, musical, dreamlike, and soft spoken are some of the sensations though. You are a poet among poets.

Comment by NightWriter for "I Begin (Part II)


Seraphim Delphinium: Thinking about publishing my poetry. Any thoughts or suggestions?
    DR DIP: There is a fellow poet on here who could greatly assist you in the whole process of self publishing she would be excellent and would assist you greatly and save you a lot of money and I am sure avail you to getting your total cut.
    Message me if would like to seek her guidance and expertise and you can privately speak to her. -


Seraphim Delphinium: You sling around so many metaphoric images that it is pure agony to keep up. It's like a picture show with flashing images and a vocabulary to match ... fabulous writing, solid, challenging, soul searching, vivid, lasting and many more to go with these words. Loved it! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017 for The Mephistophilina


Seraphim Delphinium: "Your words are meant to live forever."

Review from a "Simple Love Poem"


Seraphim Delphinium: Review:

"Never in my life have I seen such a quality in poetry. I have been a lover, reader and writer of poetry since I can remember, but this resembles no one I have ever been in contact with. Your precision, timing and images are profound and leave me in a sense of awe."

Comment Written by: MAMONIA for "Ribbons of Plastic and Needles"