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Rating of the book chapter The Unwilling Heir - Chap 18 by Begin Again
Chapter 18 of the book The Unwilling Heir

Maybe Esther and Madeline can help each other and bring some good out of this situation. No one knows who to trust, and even the characters themselves, being realistic and true to life even though they are (mostly) dead show inconsistencies just like the rest of us. A fine chapter.
Wendy


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Rating of the poem Winner, Winner, Chicken Dinner

I have no aversion to self-exploration. Your poem is an excellent example. I think a lot of people have imposter syndrome because they don't know how they know what they know. Answers are so freely accessible, there isn't much to learm.


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Rating of the story What are the odds ...?

I love these stories. Considering the small size of a ring, it's amazing that anyone can spot it when lost. Since these findings aren't one off events, it's even more amazing.

One of my sons lost his wedding ring diving on a honeymoon visit to the Bahamas. Never found it. So it was replaced.
Thanks for sharing, Wendy. You're a storyteller born. If anything, you're getting better.

Blessings, Julia


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Rating of the story Jake Swalls

Raul, This is a really great, six-star story. You should make it into a book. I bet you could make this into a best seller. Great descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri


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Rating of the poem Chopper
Chapter 15 of the book Damned

Well done. Your creepy graphic was a great start to this little thriller. Sold, soulless, stalling, skipping is lyrical. Stymie is in good company in his state of delusion. Thanks for a fun read.


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