Comment from John bailey

Excellent

Very good DoctorRick I really thought we had moved forward, but your pain goes on,I am touched deeply because I to have lost a son,and time stands still for nobody,if man could control time we would screw up everything,my prayers are with you9.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020

Grieving poetry is a form of journaling and journaling is used as a medication for things such as depression severe depression depression with psychotic syndrome.
The normal parent who loses a child will feel these things anymore is it parents worst nightmare as you well know

reply by John bailey on 14-Oct-2020

Thank you Doctor, Rick, you are still teaching me.

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020

You're welcome.
And, in my next piece?
That I just released.
"Until She Again Comes
Home?"
It simply amazing.
Ricky

reply by John bailey on 15-Oct-2020

Thanks Doc

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Very nicely done. Your poems are deep and do a wonderful job of sharing your thoughts. I love the way you turn things on us with each stanza. Great job.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020

I thank you very much Michael it's always a pleasure to see you reviewing my work!
And have a blessed rest of your week!
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Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I found your story very cleverly written, the Father time discussion is so real, also I like the expression the time run out of ticks. I am so sorry for your loss...no matter the time the wound stays open.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020

Thank you very much Iza and have a pleasant week!
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