Scene at a Diner 2
Pons and Ned at a diner15 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
Please stop, my head hurts. This group of nuts has my head in a swirl. I may never eat another doughnut in my life and God knows I love doughnuts. Where on earth did you find these very special people?
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Please stop, my head hurts. This group of nuts has my head in a swirl. I may never eat another doughnut in my life and God knows I love doughnuts. Where on earth did you find these very special people?
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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They just came in and sat down.
Comment from Mastery
Hi Bill. I enjoyed this diner scene. The humor flows as always. This line is bound to stop any donut freak:
"Server: The special is fried cow tongue with peas and carrots."
Bob
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hi Bill. I enjoyed this diner scene. The humor flows as always. This line is bound to stop any donut freak:
"Server: The special is fried cow tongue with peas and carrots."
Bob
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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It?s probably a cut above the dung. Thanks for checking this out, Bob
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yes LOL Bob
Comment from Poetic Friend
Yay, Pons and Ned! I love those guys. After reading several of script reading about this guys, I am well-aware of their characters. You have done such a great with these guys.
As usual, these guys placed on smile on face while reading the script.
Great job, Bill.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Yay, Pons and Ned! I love those guys. After reading several of script reading about this guys, I am well-aware of their characters. You have done such a great with these guys.
As usual, these guys placed on smile on face while reading the script.
Great job, Bill.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you, PF, for following fellows.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh I liked your "geophagy" - naturally, odd words are my thing. And I also liked that Pons gave us a preview of the Baker's Dozen movie!
It;s me that (It's)
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Oh I liked your "geophagy" - naturally, odd words are my thing. And I also liked that Pons gave us a preview of the Baker's Dozen movie!
It;s me that (It's)
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thanks for giving this a look, lyenochka.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I am pleased to hear Ned and Pons in a context where they are with other friends, rather than just the two of them. Ned doesn't seem as dim in this situation, and rather it is Pons that comes across as being quirky. It widens your approach.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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I am pleased to hear Ned and Pons in a context where they are with other friends, rather than just the two of them. Ned doesn't seem as dim in this situation, and rather it is Pons that comes across as being quirky. It widens your approach.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Katherine. I think the order of conversation didn?t allow me to throw all the stooge lines to Ned.
