No penance \no penalty.
So many leave this place without punishment...it seems.2 total reviews
Comment from Stephen Force
TG2 Haven't heard from you in awhile. This is heavy, You open this with an admission that I think fits most of us "we haven't got a clue" I like the rhyme and meter of this poem. and I think the message is profound. Two lines stand out for me the last lines of each stanza I think are great "The weightlessness of sin" and "Of all the years we wait..." I don't get the use of the parenthesis but this is a well done piece. Nice job Steve
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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TG2 Haven't heard from you in awhile. This is heavy, You open this with an admission that I think fits most of us "we haven't got a clue" I like the rhyme and meter of this poem. and I think the message is profound. Two lines stand out for me the last lines of each stanza I think are great "The weightlessness of sin" and "Of all the years we wait..." I don't get the use of the parenthesis but this is a well done piece. Nice job Steve
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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thank you
Comment from equestrik
Good and important questions. I think that no, we do not want to go. We want to liv and to bask in the beauty of all that is here. Unfortunately, we also like to bellyache. :)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Good and important questions. I think that no, we do not want to go. We want to liv and to bask in the beauty of all that is here. Unfortunately, we also like to bellyache. :)
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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thank you
