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2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a strong chapter. I really enjoyed the story. Your pacing is excellent (this doesn't feel rushed) and the story is interesting. Great use of dialogue as well. Wonderful story.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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This is a strong chapter. I really enjoyed the story. Your pacing is excellent (this doesn't feel rushed) and the story is interesting. Great use of dialogue as well. Wonderful story.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you Michael for stopping by to review chapter 8. I do appreciate your review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You have a little bit of everything in this chapter: medical advice, army strategy, realignment of the goals, and hope. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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You have a little bit of everything in this chapter: medical advice, army strategy, realignment of the goals, and hope. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Thank you for stopping by and for your kind review.
