Another Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Paul's Morning After"American Isekai
8 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
It is fun to wonder along with Paul what happened during the night. Also we are once again surprised as Paul with what certain actions carry subtle meanings. This is clever.
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It is fun to wonder along with Paul what happened during the night. Also we are once again surprised as Paul with what certain actions carry subtle meanings. This is clever.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
Comment from Ben B.
Don't you mean, "There are too many of us to use this medieval trash?" Well at least Crista is getting comfortable with her husband. Doesn't look like Paul feels the same way.
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Don't you mean, "There are too many of us to use this medieval trash?" Well at least Crista is getting comfortable with her husband. Doesn't look like Paul feels the same way.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
Comment from judiverse
The situation Paul finds himself in is due to the strange customs of this world that is a mystery to Paul. Paul seems totally unprepared to be a husband. Rosetta is entirely satisfied with the situation and accepts Crista as his wife. Age doesn't matter to her. Paul's father shows his scorn and seems to belittle Paul, but Derrick's part of this crazy system that's in place. Maybe Paul's mission will be try to change this society with its outmoded customs. Maybe bring about indoor plumbing? A great chapter. judi
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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The situation Paul finds himself in is due to the strange customs of this world that is a mystery to Paul. Paul seems totally unprepared to be a husband. Rosetta is entirely satisfied with the situation and accepts Crista as his wife. Age doesn't matter to her. Paul's father shows his scorn and seems to belittle Paul, but Derrick's part of this crazy system that's in place. Maybe Paul's mission will be try to change this society with its outmoded customs. Maybe bring about indoor plumbing? A great chapter. judi
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Judi.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am pretty sure I have missed a post. I will search it out and figure out exactly what's going on. I really like this story and can't wait to read more. You are doing a good job with it.
Smiling, Crista threw off the blanket and sat next to him. (sat beside him)
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I am pretty sure I have missed a post. I will search it out and figure out exactly what's going on. I really like this story and can't wait to read more. You are doing a good job with it.
Smiling, Crista threw off the blanket and sat next to him. (sat beside him)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Well done. Normally I pass on sex scenes but in the hands of a fine writer such as you I am confident that you can convey your scene without being gratuitously graphic. Cheers. LIZ
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Well done. Normally I pass on sex scenes but in the hands of a fine writer such as you I am confident that you can convey your scene without being gratuitously graphic. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
Comment from Sheila Golding
Just one thing, he tried hard not to "looked" at her, typo I think. Apart from that I really enjoyed your post which was interesting and well written, would definitely read more. Well done ð???
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Just one thing, he tried hard not to "looked" at her, typo I think. Apart from that I really enjoyed your post which was interesting and well written, would definitely read more. Well done ð???
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
Comment from juliaSjames
Reading this as a stand alone write, I don't have a grasp of the narrative. However I can say that this is a well written chapter with good flow that establishes a real sense of the period. Outdoor privy, simple meal, no running water in the house.
The author notes provided useful background to the characters for which I am grateful.
Intriguing.
Stay safe and healthy
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Reading this as a stand alone write, I don't have a grasp of the narrative. However I can say that this is a well written chapter with good flow that establishes a real sense of the period. Outdoor privy, simple meal, no running water in the house.
The author notes provided useful background to the characters for which I am grateful.
Intriguing.
Stay safe and healthy
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from wishawave
Just came across this novel. This is a middle chapter. It is written well. I wonder how is the development of the two characters Paul and Crista. Do they become real lovers? How is their fate. It is seems an interesting story.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Just came across this novel. This is a middle chapter. It is written well. I wonder how is the development of the two characters Paul and Crista. Do they become real lovers? How is their fate. It is seems an interesting story.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
