I Love Winter
Icy nice9 total reviews
Comment from palmart
Nice poem! It emphasizes the temperature difference between weather and home! And how cold atmosphere helps to bring people closer to share nice moments. Nice picture that puts an image to your ode!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Nice poem! It emphasizes the temperature difference between weather and home! And how cold atmosphere helps to bring people closer to share nice moments. Nice picture that puts an image to your ode!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you! I love winter, I like chilling at home w people I love while it's old outside
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You`re welcome Author! You`ll have a nice time in coming Winter!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Interesting entry for the Ode To Winter writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the alliteration of W and G. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Interesting entry for the Ode To Winter writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the alliteration of W and G. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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thank you very much
Comment from Mark D. R.
This contest entry is icy nice! A few words coupled with your artwork sets the scene. Should you capitalize 'get'?
IMHO, your presentation value to FS reviewers will be improved if you increase the font size for this short verse.
P.S. Coincidentally, I have used the same artwork in my own previous FS post.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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This contest entry is icy nice! A few words coupled with your artwork sets the scene. Should you capitalize 'get'?
IMHO, your presentation value to FS reviewers will be improved if you increase the font size for this short verse.
P.S. Coincidentally, I have used the same artwork in my own previous FS post.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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i shall follow your advice, Mark., thank you!
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dear reviewer I finally got back to you w a question: where do I find the option to change font size?
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Go to edit
Then toggle the bottom left corner of the text box to ?advanced editor mode?
Then highlight text.
Then select font size, color and style (I prefer bold, B)
You can choose how to align: left, center, right here too
Voila!
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cool
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Sad but true I could not follow your direction..i am rather daft at word processing.
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Ok, give it a try by toggling to the 'advanced editor mode' option at the bottom left corner below the text box. Then you can modify your text to achieve added flexibility in your posts.
You will be surprised how easy it is.
Mark
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thank you mark,
carlos' girl
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to winter. The cold weather outside is keeping us close I side in front of the chimney fire to stay warm with someone you love to be with.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to winter. The cold weather outside is keeping us close I side in front of the chimney fire to stay warm with someone you love to be with.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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thank you kindly
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not many people love winter, but if we have good food and shelter and we can stay warm then winter can be cosy and ambient, I adore the silence winter brings, I enjoyed your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Not many people love winter, but if we have good food and shelter and we can stay warm then winter can be cosy and ambient, I adore the silence winter brings, I enjoyed your uplifting words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thank you. Yes the silence of winter is special.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. It pairs perfectly with the chosen art. Your syllables are correct per line. Your message is strong.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. It pairs perfectly with the chosen art. Your syllables are correct per line. Your message is strong.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you Jan
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
I'm not a fan of winter. Looks nice for a day or two,
but the ice and slush follow.
I like the idea of staying in to keep warm.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
I'm not a fan of winter. Looks nice for a day or two,
but the ice and slush follow.
I like the idea of staying in to keep warm.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Winter is best when inside, yes. Thank you for your review
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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thank you 13
Comment from roof35
This is a nice tribute to winter. Your illustration, of course, pairs well and sets the stage for your words. It is hard to say more about three lines except it is nicely done.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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This is a nice tribute to winter. Your illustration, of course, pairs well and sets the stage for your words. It is hard to say more about three lines except it is nicely done.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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I am glad you liked it
