Second Chance
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Chapter 4: Second Chance"The tribulations of a Nashville street urchin
8 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
An interesting chapter I missed again. Write me at sankey48@yahoo.com.au as I cannot for the life of me find you on Facebook. My departure is at hand outta here.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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An interesting chapter I missed again. Write me at sankey48@yahoo.com.au as I cannot for the life of me find you on Facebook. My departure is at hand outta here.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Just tried to email you at that address and it came back undeliverable. Send me your Facebook one more time and I will again try that method.
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I don't know why that e-mail rejected I wonder if you did it correctly as it is my main e-mail. Facebook is Geoffrey Moore Australia went to Ryde High School living in Penrith NSW.
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Try gmoo9830@bigpond.net.au
Comment from barbara.wilkey
HMMM, this post has me wondering about what is to come. I enjoyed reading and you added some good details that the reader will need to keep up with this story. This is very good writing and I can't wait to read the next installment.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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HMMM, this post has me wondering about what is to come. I enjoyed reading and you added some good details that the reader will need to keep up with this story. This is very good writing and I can't wait to read the next installment.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed o he'd this chapter. Your insights and review appreciated.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another well written chapter that I found no errors in. You did a great job as usual. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Have a great evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Another well written chapter that I found no errors in. You did a great job as usual. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from BethShelby
I guess Chance it the character we are supposed to sympathize with and hope he is somehow smart enough not to allow himself to get killed by the others who want to keep all the money they manage to steal for themselves. I'm interesting in seeing where this story is going. Chance is by far the more interesting character.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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I guess Chance it the character we are supposed to sympathize with and hope he is somehow smart enough not to allow himself to get killed by the others who want to keep all the money they manage to steal for themselves. I'm interesting in seeing where this story is going. Chance is by far the more interesting character.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed o he'd this chapter. Your much appreciated reviews are always spot on.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I guess he has no clue what's up with the rest of his band of misfits, but I'm sure he's about to find out. Of course, I'm betting they figure a way to mess things up. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Well, I guess he has no clue what's up with the rest of his band of misfits, but I'm sure he's about to find out. Of course, I'm betting they figure a way to mess things up. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Appreciate your comments. The wished for sixer is nice. Thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 4 Mystery and Crime Fiction of the Book has a brief but nice taletelling promoted by balanced plot development backed by a real like character Chance Macallister, an urchin, as narrated, and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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This Chapter 4 Mystery and Crime Fiction of the Book has a brief but nice taletelling promoted by balanced plot development backed by a real like character Chance Macallister, an urchin, as narrated, and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Review received.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
MMM, this chapter makes your novel look so classic. I like the subtle description of situations and people that places your character firm in the narration.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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MMM, this chapter makes your novel look so classic. I like the subtle description of situations and people that places your character firm in the narration.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
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Thanks f o r your kind review. Much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Of course there things in our lives that mark the last straw, and they will determine our behaviour as to the way we choose to go forward...or backward. I love your choice of characters Brett, from what I recall, you have vast experience of life on the streets, which gives you a "feel" for them. Well done, great post my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Of course there things in our lives that mark the last straw, and they will determine our behaviour as to the way we choose to go forward...or backward. I love your choice of characters Brett, from what I recall, you have vast experience of life on the streets, which gives you a "feel" for them. Well done, great post my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Most welcome Brett
