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Mary, Mary, quite Contrary

ode to my late mother

3 total reviews 
Comment from nor84
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Please refer to the contest listing. It says write a 6-line poem and this poem has more than six lines. I wanted to give you a heads-up about that and probably you still have time to fix it.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    thanks for noticing
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I felt the words here of a son wondering how much his mother who probably gave him up.
The words are haunting and well written,.
Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed reading your words.

Mary

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
    thanks for the feedback
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed this. When I first saw the title my thought was - oh no. But you took this and spinned it in such a way to make it very personal and enjoyable. A creative approach on an old line. Great job.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
    glad you appreciated it