Stepping on Grace
I walked on grass, and felt like a child.37 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
yes, walking barefoot in the grass does bring back carefree days, and running through the sprinkler. Happy times of childhood - simple pleasures. Darling picture to go with a delightful poem.
Good luck in the contest.
pome lover
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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yes, walking barefoot in the grass does bring back carefree days, and running through the sprinkler. Happy times of childhood - simple pleasures. Darling picture to go with a delightful poem.
Good luck in the contest.
pome lover
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Nice to meet you, poetlover. Thank you for reading this nature haiku and for your wonderful review.
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you're most welcome!
Comment from Mia Twysted
It is when you are a child that you tend to enjoy things more. It is still new to us when we are young and we have to been harden by adulthood and can appreciate the world more.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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It is when you are a child that you tend to enjoy things more. It is still new to us when we are young and we have to been harden by adulthood and can appreciate the world more.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Mia, your comments about seeing like a child again are wonderful. Thank you for reading my haiku.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the haiku of nature contest
with very good connection and imagery if the first two lines
and a nice reflective satori thought.
The grass provides a seasonal reference.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the haiku of nature contest
with very good connection and imagery if the first two lines
and a nice reflective satori thought.
The grass provides a seasonal reference.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Robert. Your review for the nature haiku is highly professional. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
What attracted me to reading this is its simplicity in its image and thoughts of walking barefoot when I was a child in the only spot of grass we had in the public housing project. We called it Greenfields. It probably was only about 200 ft of grass.
Well written image in your words.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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What attracted me to reading this is its simplicity in its image and thoughts of walking barefoot when I was a child in the only spot of grass we had in the public housing project. We called it Greenfields. It probably was only about 200 ft of grass.
Well written image in your words.
Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank yoou Mary for reading this work and for the memories it brought to you. Greenland was a great name for those 200 feet of grass! I notice you gave me a 4 rating. Is this what youmeant?
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling and whimsical combo== joyful souls/toes! That earns your stars in itself. Nice alliteration wings/whims. Interesting title! An original metaphor for sure. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Startling and whimsical combo== joyful souls/toes! That earns your stars in itself. Nice alliteration wings/whims. Interesting title! An original metaphor for sure. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Liz, your comments are so nice...Wow!
Comment from equestrik
This is a sweet write giving in to the whims of a small child to enjoy the feel of bare feet on the grass. The picture is charming as is the overall feel of the piece.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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This is a sweet write giving in to the whims of a small child to enjoy the feel of bare feet on the grass. The picture is charming as is the overall feel of the piece.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reading my work and your beautiful comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 5-7-5, Stepping On Grace, has the proper formatting and takes the adult back to those most carefree days of youth, when shoes were optional.
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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This nature 5-7-5, Stepping On Grace, has the proper formatting and takes the adult back to those most carefree days of youth, when shoes were optional.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Bill. I always appreciate your support.
