Stepping on Grace
I walked on grass, and felt like a child.37 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
Your poem meets the syllable count and is about nature. It also has has a spiritual message with giving wings and souls. The picture is perfect for you poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Your poem meets the syllable count and is about nature. It also has has a spiritual message with giving wings and souls. The picture is perfect for you poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your great comments, and for your well wishes in the contest.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Write a Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This lovely piece is a good match for the picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Write a Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This lovely piece is a good match for the picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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I appreciate your warm comments for this nature haiku. I also like your well wishes for the contest!
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, the only fault I find with this post, is that you could not find an illustration of a child with bare feet doing just what this one was doing, illustrating a wonderful nature themed 5-7-5.
I particularly admired your images in the second line.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Dear Author, the only fault I find with this post, is that you could not find an illustration of a child with bare feet doing just what this one was doing, illustrating a wonderful nature themed 5-7-5.
I particularly admired your images in the second line.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Thank you Suzanna, for your heart-felt comments to my 5-7-5 nature haiku.
Comment from Faith the Border collie
This is a beautiful description which bring so much joy and light. Thank you for sharing this.
It is so accurate for a child and put together in a clever way.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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This is a beautiful description which bring so much joy and light. Thank you for sharing this.
It is so accurate for a child and put together in a clever way.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Faith, your comments to my nature haiku are awesome, as well as your support.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt. Good poetry is a natural gift that has been perfected such as this writing. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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This is a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt. Good poetry is a natural gift that has been perfected such as this writing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your awesome comments, dear poet.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
This poem helps me see the importance of helping children experience nature. The bare feet on "green grass" brings joy to her toes and soles/soul. Like the word play, too. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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This poem helps me see the importance of helping children experience nature. The bare feet on "green grass" brings joy to her toes and soles/soul. Like the word play, too. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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I appreciate your support and your great comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is one beautiful nature short poem, if I ever saw one! You managed to fit volumes in these lines and I liked your descriptive imagery, visuals as well as artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest; with a poem like that you won't need it.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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That is one beautiful nature short poem, if I ever saw one! You managed to fit volumes in these lines and I liked your descriptive imagery, visuals as well as artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest; with a poem like that you won't need it.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Ha, ha...yes, i need all the help i can get. Thank you for your beautiful remarks to this nature haiku.
Comment from royowen
Children are divine, they bring so much joy into life, having 5 grandchildren revisits the joy they bring into one's life, their refreshing outlook on life is a revelation, a beautifully written contest entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Children are divine, they bring so much joy into life, having 5 grandchildren revisits the joy they bring into one's life, their refreshing outlook on life is a revelation, a beautifully written contest entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you Roy, your support and your words make my Sunday. Yes, children have a direct communication with God. I have great grandkids, I am blessed.
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Good job
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
thank you for this heart felted poem It warms my heat and soul
To bad we can't stay this way with peace and love in our soul
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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thank you for this heart felted poem It warms my heat and soul
To bad we can't stay this way with peace and love in our soul
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Cookie. Yoou can always read what it is not written; the raw essence of the words.
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your very welcome
Cookie
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Of course! Walking on grass barefoot would indeed bring back the nostalgia of childhood and the innocense of new discoveries with every step we took. The freshness of that era can never be forgotten. Your presentation reminds us well.
Ralf
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Of course! Walking on grass barefoot would indeed bring back the nostalgia of childhood and the innocense of new discoveries with every step we took. The freshness of that era can never be forgotten. Your presentation reminds us well.
Ralf
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Rafaelina for your awesome comments.
