Comment from Kingsrookviii

Excellent

Absolutely gorgeous poem; very uplifting and happy. This is a cool format, too, with the incredible picture. The bit of pink really make this a visual treat. I love Fall so much. Great work. Bruce.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thanks for the review, Bruce. I appreciate your comments about the poem being uplifting and happy, along with the format and picture. I know you said you love Fall. I like the season, too. Don't forget Sun. or whatever day my next poem is up. Another autumn one.

Comment from Anissha Blackwell1

Excellent

Fantastic Cinquain. In a few words, you told a story that is beyond imagination. Not only is this an exciting read, but it's also reminiscent of frolicking in leaves.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review, Anissha. I appreciate your comments about the poem, and that it reminded you of "frolicking in leaves." Have a good day!

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

She will be so pleased with this special book. I like your addition of this lovely cinquain, Pam. Autumn is a wonderful time of the year with a multitude of vibrant colors.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review, Janet. I appreciate your comments about the cinquain and the vibrant colors of autumn. If you are interested in learning the purpose of this book, I can send it to you.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, Pam -- wonderful offering as it is big and bright and kindof 'hums' along as it's read aloud... fun! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady -- this one will be great!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review, Yvette. I appreciate your comments about my autumn poem being bright and "humming along." I do a lot of humming so that is an apt description:)

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

Hi Pam,

I'm not sure what the book is about, but I'm sure it is very supportive. Your poem is lovely and embodies the essence of Autumn. I love the imageries of a kaleidoscope and mural.

Well done,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Rhonda. I appreciate your comments about the project, poem, and the images of the kaleidoscope and mural.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your kaleidoscope simile and alliteration of "m's". The picture reinforces the theme very well. Thank you for paying tribute to Katherine's mother as well. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review, Joan. I appreciate your comments about the simile and alliteration, along with the picture and paying tribute to Katherine's mother. Have a great day!

Comment from Tessa Kay

Exceptional

Autumn /fall isn't my favourite time of year, but I do love the striking colors of the leaves. Like you say, a kaleidoscope, indeed. I love how you have shaped the poem into a shape of a leaf. Very clever. I think my FS subscription runs out tomorrow. Keep up the good work. :)

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Tessa. I appreciate your comments about the colors of leaves, and the shape of the poem. It actually comes from the syllable count and centering it. I am sorry your subscription will be running out. Take care and be well, and continued success!! If you are still on, I have another poem for Sun.

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Beautiful poem, Pam! The colours of little autumn leaves can really resemble a kaleidoscope, they are mesmerising! Hope you are keeping well, my friend!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review, Chloe. I am glad you liked the poem and colors of autumn. We are doing well, and hope you are, too!

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I think Barbara will really like this fine cinquain, Pam. Autumn definitely is a kaleidoscope of magical colours.

Your large print makes is much easier to see and enjoy.

Always a pleasure to review your work.

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review, Gloria. I appreciate your comments about the cinquain, autumn, and the print size, too. I enjoy your work, as well.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

With a pleasant alliteration on the M over the last two lines, this cinquain gives us a brilliant technicolour look at the season of mists and mellow fruitfulness.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the alliteration and the "technicolor look" of the season. That would have made a good line in the poem!