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Sam and Tina P1 script

Sam on his bender

2 total reviews 
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent
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(trail s/b trial; mind off (omit of) Paige)

Conversation rings true, characters seem real--indeed, as you state, Sam comes across as needy, depressed, demoralized. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020

Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent
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Kind of childish, I am showing mine you show me yours scene:"SAM
What you wearing right now?


TINA
Tank top and leggings.


SAM
So you'll be 19 next February. Do you have any thong panties?


TINA
I don't. But I can get some when the money hits." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.


 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020