Jesus As You Shine On Me
Short devotional poem.18 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Patricia,
This is a nice free verse poem/prayer that we all should wish for. May His light shine on those who are making a vaccine and let it come out safe and effect earlier than expected
I like how you formatted the poem into a cross and the sun in the picture shines hope down.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Patricia,
This is a nice free verse poem/prayer that we all should wish for. May His light shine on those who are making a vaccine and let it come out safe and effect earlier than expected
I like how you formatted the poem into a cross and the sun in the picture shines hope down.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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You for your review. I am visiting my daughter in Kansas at this time I will be back home on Saturday.
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You're welcome. Enjoy your visit.
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely shape poem - done to praise the Lord and His great Light and Love. I noticed I hadn't heard from you in a while so checked your profile. I hope your book is coming along well, Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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A lovely shape poem - done to praise the Lord and His great Light and Love. I noticed I hadn't heard from you in a while so checked your profile. I hope your book is coming along well, Patricia.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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My daughter is working on getting the manuscript ready for the publisher that she?s trying to put it together along with her duties as a CPA and tax season being on her schedule ahead of what she can do for my book. One of the reasons I haven?t been on much is because my eyes are bothering me a great deal. I don?t know how much longer I will be able to to write or do the things that I?ve done of light but hoping that the Lord will at least give me some vision for a while and maybe I can get some things that will help me along the way
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about Jesus light that shines on us with His great love and let it reflects on those close and around us to draw them also closer.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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A very well-written poem about Jesus light that shines on us with His great love and let it reflects on those close and around us to draw them also closer.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is great, Patricia. I love the image, the formatting of your words to form a cross, the color scheme, and your wonderful, and true, message. This is one of your best faith-based poems.
Thank you for sharing. God Bless.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Your presentation is great, Patricia. I love the image, the formatting of your words to form a cross, the color scheme, and your wonderful, and true, message. This is one of your best faith-based poems.
Thank you for sharing. God Bless.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from GE Parson
Sister Patrica,
I don't give many sixes but your poem really strummed my heart valve. My wife and I pray that basic prayer every morning
in our devotion. If I may give a personal testimony with out sounding like I bragging on myself. Every morning on my way to work I would pray that my life would impress my co-workers that I had been with Jesus. I never knew if that prayer was being answered until one day
one of them was introducing a new worker to us all. When I was introduced
she said , "And this Jerry and when ever we think of him we always think of Jesus." I say this to all praise and glory of the Lord Jesus Christ.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Sister Patrica,
I don't give many sixes but your poem really strummed my heart valve. My wife and I pray that basic prayer every morning
in our devotion. If I may give a personal testimony with out sounding like I bragging on myself. Every morning on my way to work I would pray that my life would impress my co-workers that I had been with Jesus. I never knew if that prayer was being answered until one day
one of them was introducing a new worker to us all. When I was introduced
she said , "And this Jerry and when ever we think of him we always think of Jesus." I say this to all praise and glory of the Lord Jesus Christ.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review. Also thanks for the six stars.
Comment from Joan E.
I was impressed with the parallel shinning picture and the shape of your poem. Thank you for your willingness to share the reflection and the love.
Big smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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I was impressed with the parallel shinning picture and the shape of your poem. Thank you for your willingness to share the reflection and the love.
Big smiles- Joan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from Mistydawn
What a lovely thought, prayer, poem. Asking the Lord to bless everyone around you. The way you formatted your poem into a cross adds to your message. Great job as always.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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What a lovely thought, prayer, poem. Asking the Lord to bless everyone around you. The way you formatted your poem into a cross adds to your message. Great job as always.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from judiverse
Lovely artwork. You present a beautiful thought about as Jesus shines his love on you, you ask that he shine it on others, your loved ones. The shape comes across beautifully. Gracefully worded. judi
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Lovely artwork. You present a beautiful thought about as Jesus shines his love on you, you ask that he shine it on others, your loved ones. The shape comes across beautifully. Gracefully worded. judi
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
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You're welcome. Haven't heard much from you recently. I hope you've been well. judi
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Judi, I am doing well, it is just my eyes are doing worse.
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You're welcome. Sorry to hear of the trouble with your eyes. Hope your vision improves. judi
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Oh, Patricia, this is so beautiful. I could look at the picture forever. Thank you for the lovely prayer which echoes the hearts cry of many writers, here on FS.
Well done!
Lucy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Oh, Patricia, this is so beautiful. I could look at the picture forever. Thank you for the lovely prayer which echoes the hearts cry of many writers, here on FS.
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from juliaSjames
We are taught to pray for others. You have done this in a simple and creative way. What greater blessing can there be for one's loved ones or friends than the grace of Jesus?
Thanks for sharing
Blessings and stay safe
Julia
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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We are taught to pray for others. You have done this in a simple and creative way. What greater blessing can there be for one's loved ones or friends than the grace of Jesus?
Thanks for sharing
Blessings and stay safe
Julia
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
