Goodbye Is Not Forever
True love sees beyond farewell...36 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Goodbye Is Not Forever, has the proper formatting and brings one's heart to pause a moment as we observe how loss is mitigated by hope and faith.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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This 5-7-5, Goodbye Is Not Forever, has the proper formatting and brings one's heart to pause a moment as we observe how loss is mitigated by hope and faith.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Good morning, Sir Bill!! ;) Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, and you have a bright Fall weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Yvette, this is a moving three line poem. An old photo held in ' 'tween gnarled fingertips~' and the line three is very moving. Resigned to the loss but hopeful 'see you later love'. Lovely. Good luck and regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Hello Yvette, this is a moving three line poem. An old photo held in ' 'tween gnarled fingertips~' and the line three is very moving. Resigned to the loss but hopeful 'see you later love'. Lovely. Good luck and regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Good morning, Dorothy! ;) Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, my lady -- you have a bright Fall weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from juliaSjames
Old photos have power. Perhaps the notion that the camera can steal one's soul is grounded in some truth. I like the inclusion of the tender unvoiced words to the departed.
A poem of love and faith.
Beautifully written, Yvette.
Best of luck in the contest and stay well
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Old photos have power. Perhaps the notion that the camera can steal one's soul is grounded in some truth. I like the inclusion of the tender unvoiced words to the departed.
A poem of love and faith.
Beautifully written, Yvette.
Best of luck in the contest and stay well
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Good morning, Julia!! :) Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, my lady -- you have a bright Fall weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
I can see the sentiment in a picture of ages past, Yvette. The love that was and still is living in the heart of the age and beautiful. You can take the broken heart, but never the memories. This is a good offering for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing a memory of your own.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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I can see the sentiment in a picture of ages past, Yvette. The love that was and still is living in the heart of the age and beautiful. You can take the broken heart, but never the memories. This is a good offering for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing a memory of your own.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Good Morning, Jose!! ;) Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, sir -- you have a bright Fall weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
Yes, you're absolutely correct, love sees beyond the mountains and the valleys, it always hopes, believes, thinks like a two year old toddler, with eternity in front of it, well done Yvette, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Yes, you're absolutely correct, love sees beyond the mountains and the valleys, it always hopes, believes, thinks like a two year old toddler, with eternity in front of it, well done Yvette, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Good morning, Roy!! ;) Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, sir -- you have a bright Fall weekend! ;) Yvette
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Good job
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Yevette - this is an excellent three line poem accompanied by a perfectly appropriate picture. Good luck in the contest and stay well and stay safe. - Jerry
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Yevette - this is an excellent three line poem accompanied by a perfectly appropriate picture. Good luck in the contest and stay well and stay safe. - Jerry
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Good morning, Jerry!! ;) Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, sir -- you have a bright Fall weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent three line poem that expresses well your sentimental feelings. That is great when people are bonded in sincere love and cherish the good memories. Bill
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Excellent three line poem that expresses well your sentimental feelings. That is great when people are bonded in sincere love and cherish the good memories. Bill
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, Bill -- you have a bright Fall weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Minglement
as always, an amazing entry for this contest. From the title to your final poignant line, your tender message flows. I found your image resonates and pe r vector sets the mood. Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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as always, an amazing entry for this contest. From the title to your final poignant line, your tender message flows. I found your image resonates and pe r vector sets the mood. Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Oh, Marcia, thank you so very much - what a lovely, bright surprise!! ;) Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Take care out there and have a bright Fall weekend! :) Yvette
Comment from Sugarray77
Your verse for the 3 line prompt is very good and evokes the memories of the loved ones we want to see when it our turn to pass. Good job on pulling emotional heartstrings with this one Yvette!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Your verse for the 3 line prompt is very good and evokes the memories of the loved ones we want to see when it our turn to pass. Good job on pulling emotional heartstrings with this one Yvette!!
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
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Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, Melissa -- you have a bright Fall weekend! :) Yvette
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely, endearing 3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry. I've seen those hands holding a beloved's picture and looking longingly at the photo.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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This is a lovely, endearing 3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry. I've seen those hands holding a beloved's picture and looking longingly at the photo.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Was just one of those FEW times that the more 'reflective' muse took hold of the pen... I don't turn the ink over to her very often. ;) Thanx for the review, Rebecca -- you have an upbeat and wonderful Wednesday! ;) Yvette
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I did! It is 9:00 p.m. now.
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And a stupendous Thursday! :) ;)
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ha ha Thank you!
