A Shadow On The Street
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Final Chapter and Epilogue"One man's blessing can be another's curse.
9 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
A great concluding chapter. The characters reactions, I thought, were very genuine in the face of this unusual death.
Congratulations on completing this project!
Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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A great concluding chapter. The characters reactions, I thought, were very genuine in the face of this unusual death.
Congratulations on completing this project!
Enjoyed.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
Super ending to this story. A really emotional last scene there, with Lew on his deathbed, struggling to articulate his love for his daughter, his desire to die naturally in the hands of Jesus instead of going to NY and being studied for his brain. I love how you did the voice of Lew struggling to articulate the words in his stroke. It was really bold cap in your face writing and it put us right there in the room with them all. We get all the roiling emotions of the daughter and her friends, her dying father. And that dream like figure of Jesus seeming to reach out from heaven to take his hand and whisper comfort in his ear, close his eyes for the last time. It was all very moving. Overall a strong book and I wish you well with it. Can't wait to read your next project. All the best, estory
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Super ending to this story. A really emotional last scene there, with Lew on his deathbed, struggling to articulate his love for his daughter, his desire to die naturally in the hands of Jesus instead of going to NY and being studied for his brain. I love how you did the voice of Lew struggling to articulate the words in his stroke. It was really bold cap in your face writing and it put us right there in the room with them all. We get all the roiling emotions of the daughter and her friends, her dying father. And that dream like figure of Jesus seeming to reach out from heaven to take his hand and whisper comfort in his ear, close his eyes for the last time. It was all very moving. Overall a strong book and I wish you well with it. Can't wait to read your next project. All the best, estory
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for all of your support for this project. It is deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
This was a beautiful story and I enjoyed reading it. You ended it a very nice way. I hope you are going to publish it because I think it would do well.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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This was a beautiful story and I enjoyed reading it. You ended it a very nice way. I hope you are going to publish it because I think it would do well.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words and your support for this project. It's deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
Always been a pleasure reading this most imaginative and profound of Christian, and displaying the love of God, that all of us must show for a lost world. We were born to selflessly display the love of God, who has displayed a love so amazing, to a world that's hurting for that love. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Always been a pleasure reading this most imaginative and profound of Christian, and displaying the love of God, that all of us must show for a lost world. We were born to selflessly display the love of God, who has displayed a love so amazing, to a world that's hurting for that love. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Hi, Roy. Many thanks for all of your help and support for this project!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Bless you Mike
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I am so sorry to see that it has ended. I loved the stories and the inspiration, and the love that Lew showed in every chapter. I cannot think of enough positive words for this review, Mike. It has been a treat. God Bless you, I think the story must reflect the man. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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I am so sorry to see that it has ended. I loved the stories and the inspiration, and the love that Lew showed in every chapter. I cannot think of enough positive words for this review, Mike. It has been a treat. God Bless you, I think the story must reflect the man. Nancy:)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Hi, Nancy. This one might be over, but I'm in the planning stage for the new Gabe Hope book. Many thanks for your help and support for this project!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Good! I really like Gabe Hope. Hurry, I can hardly wait. :<)
Comment from Ben B.
I'm glad you added that epilogue. If you ended the story with chapter 15 you would have left a lot of readers feeling sad and depressed. Honoring Lew's memory sure would help.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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I'm glad you added that epilogue. If you ended the story with chapter 15 you would have left a lot of readers feeling sad and depressed. Honoring Lew's memory sure would help.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend. Many thanks for your help and support for this project!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bill Pinder
Mike, great ending to your book that is very moving. I love that it is not only excellent writing but has a very practical message. Thanks so much for including me in the list of people you were thanking. It is an honor.
Bill
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Mike, great ending to your book that is very moving. I love that it is not only excellent writing but has a very practical message. Thanks so much for including me in the list of people you were thanking. It is an honor.
Bill
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Hi, Bill. Many thanks for your help and support for this project!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a lovely ending to a great book.I have enjoyed every moment spent reading chapter. I wish you both the very best with this book. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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What a lovely ending to a great book.I have enjoyed every moment spent reading chapter. I wish you both the very best with this book. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Hi, Rebecca. Many thanks for your help and support for this project!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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I wish the best for you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I think you did a good job wrapping things up with a positive note. I enjoyed reading this. I like the idea of a store existing to help those in need to stand as Lew's real influence. A suggestion for the last line:
Caleb smiles at Kathy. "Now, we can too."
I would punctuate it just slightly differently:
Caleb smiles at Kathy. "Now we can, too."
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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I think you did a good job wrapping things up with a positive note. I enjoyed reading this. I like the idea of a store existing to help those in need to stand as Lew's real influence. A suggestion for the last line:
Caleb smiles at Kathy. "Now, we can too."
I would punctuate it just slightly differently:
Caleb smiles at Kathy. "Now we can, too."
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Hi, Christie. Many thanks for your help and support for this project!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
