Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Lovely piece! Masterful narration and impressive depiction of person and place. Tasteful description of passion speaks to your skill. Fine work! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thanks so much, Liz. I appreciate this even more, because I struggled with this being a bridge from part one of the novel and had to try and convey critical information in a not so boring way.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Well, a I see these two were married. I can picture the times and the terrain. The wind blowing across the dells and the excitement a new step toward life is always a pleasant feeling.
Good One Stan.
I have preformed a few of these things and had no trouble understanding the moments.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thanks again, Ben.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a beautiful story and you've don't a great job of making it come alive. I am enjoying it each time your post. It seems the wedding when off beautifully and couple has found true love in each other.

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thanks so much, Beth. Your words are always important to me.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Stan,

What a fun and lively wedding scene. I had forgotten that he was a rich man - though he sure ain't living like one right now.

Only one note:
--> us to be sure our goods were b(r)ought to the market and storehouses filled.

Thanks!



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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

You right to point that out. Jane's the one who wants them to make it without his folks help from the ranch. Lot's of scary adventure to come.