Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Well, you have certainly got a lot of lovely alliteration in this poem, and it's such a fun poem, too! I enjoyed the names, Willy Wong, lol, perfect alliteration there. Well done, this is a good contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thank you Sandra, I really appreciate the review. I'm glad you found it a fun poem.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed the alliteration and the sentiments here! You made this poem much fun with your sense of humour and it is a joy to read, I was entertained, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm so glad you found my little poem fun to read.
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Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

Ha, ha, ha funny little one. I laugh from the first until the last line. I think this can be the fond for a very good song. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thank you Isa. I really appreciate the review and comments and especially for the six stars.
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Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very talented and such a cute story of brainy braggarts don't belong
very creative and your words came to life
you worked hard on this and it shows, very enjoyable piece
thank you for sharing
it was a pleasure
I hope for best in the contest

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thank you so much for the great review. I'm so glad you liked it.
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Comment from Veenbee

Excellent

This was very cute. I can see you doing a longer version of this. This made me think of other I met in my past who had similar characteristics. They made it very challenging to be around. LOL Veenbee

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you for the review and comments. I did have a longer version of something singular, but it was several years ago ant this is different in structure and wording.

Comment from palmart

Excellent

Fully agree! It is hard to be close to a braggart person but, well, humanity and fate mix us in social interdependence. It is definitively hard to be with a person "always ready" to fight as Willie Wong. Your description is good and picture helps to imagine the character described.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review and the comments. I've known a few Willies. and they aren't my favorite people to be around. :-)

reply by palmart on 26-Sep-2020

Wow! You probably have to deal with "difficult" situations very often... Good luck! And have a great time... away from Willies! Haha

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is creative and clever both the writing and the picture. It is often so true that no-one likes a braggart but..sometimes, those self assured people do know their stuff!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you for the review and for the the comments. I'm pleased you you like this. It is so true that all those smarts are not so smart at all. They often have a lack of common sense.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! ;) Oh my goodness ... don't we all know a 'know it all'! :) :) An awesome offering for the contest that is not only mechanically correct with fun rhythm but engages your reader in a delightfully playful manner -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you found it amusing.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I got a laugh from your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the requirements of the contest. The image is a good fit, too. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
May I suggest:

Willie Wong could do no wrong,
and his stuborn (stubborn) streak was stong. (strong)

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you so much for the review and for noticing my typos. I glad you got a laugh. :-)