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Fido and Milo

a 5-7-5

25 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the
Write a Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Cute pets.good luck.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thanks, GBR
Comment from Mia Twysted
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What a cute picture. It makes me think about my animals. This piece speaks to the relationship between dogs and cats. It is often always on the verge neither wanting to give up control.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Mia
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

Welll... one can't expect miracles! And, besides, it is lots of fun to romp and chase and bite (gently). haha

This was a fun entry -- good luck!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Robyn
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a humorous, easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Write a Humorous 5-7-5 contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, TT
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 27-Sep-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and cats and dogs can sometimes fight and often become friends as they have completely different personalities, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Dolly
Comment from lyenochka
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That picture is just so cute! Thanks for the fun poem about these two furry frenemies who chose to be "civilized on alternate days." Pretty smart to know which day it is. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, lyenochka
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is cute. The reader will be drawn in to identify with this situation. My cat's foster mom would love that arrangement. She'd get to have a few days off from breaking up fights. That's one of the reasons I have him living with me.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Liz
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is cute. The reader will be drawn in to identify with this situation. My cat's foster mom would love that arrangement. She'd get to have a few days off from breaking up fights. That's one of the reasons I have him living with me.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Liz
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written humorous 5-7-5. The cat and the dog seem to have a perfect plan to annoy their owner. Only one behave while the other runs havoc and they get away with it.lol.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Sandra
Comment from palmart
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Very funny short poem!!! You describe them to be friends and have a good relationship, but as they have their instincts, they may behave but alternatively!! Very imaginative! Picture definitively is a key part of this poem and helps to give a natural side. Great choice!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you, palmart
reply by palmart on 27-Sep-2020
    You`re welcome!