Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

How wonderful, Jan!! Not only a happy wish but a reminder that she is special and has much to share... an opening and 'welcome' to many years yet to come without just 'saying it' - love it!! ;) :) Thanx so much for the reminder for all of us, my lady! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020

Thank you for your great review and comments, YM. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Exceptional

This poem is as beautiful as the roses. Wondering if this is your relative? or perhaps a friend? I have to rate this exceptional because a birthday is special and the poem brought treasured mementoes.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Rosy, for your excellent 6 star rating and great comments. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written birthday poem to Barbara on get birthday. No matter how old we are it stays our special day of honor we can share with our loved ones on our special day.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from joycetreasures

Exceptional

Hello Jan,

I pray you are welcome. I love the imagery of the beautiful birthday. The message in your poem is lovely and sweet. The rhyming is GREAT. It is well done. Nothing left to say:-)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Joyce, for your excellent 6 star rating and super comments. Both mean much to me as does your support.
Respectfully, Jan

reply by joycetreasures on 28-Sep-2020

You are welcome, Jan:-)

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Jan.

This is a nice card for Barbara's birthday. It is a well written poem for rhyme and meter. The message and the visual appearance are well suited.

Robert

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you for your great review & comments. Much appreciative of both.
Respectfully, Jan

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 27-Sep-2020

You're welcome.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is beautiful Jan. You did a superb job creating a verse that looks like a true birthday card. She will love it. Very thoughtful of you!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Melissa, for your great review. I appreciate your tme.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Beautiful artwork to accompany your poem. I can see you like monorhyme. You do a great job in each of your stanzas. Your words are encouraging. They emphasize the good things about the coming birthday. A person can bask in a life well lived and wisdom learned. It's a time to forget the gloom and celebrate. Go ahead and PARTY! judi

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Judi, for dropping by to read, review, and comment on my preentation. Much appreciative of all.
Respectfully, Jan

reply by judiverse on 27-Sep-2020

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Love the artwork and love your most uplifting poem to Barbara, Jan. I am confident she will read your uplifting words and smile for her happy birthday wishes from you.

Excellent addition to the book and a pleasure to read and review today. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Gloria, for stoppin by with a great review. Most appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Hi Jan, what a lucky lady Barbara is to have this beautiful poem written for her. The words would thrill anyone, they are truly fabulous. So warm and cheerful, and each stanza with its own monorhyme has made the rhythm and rhyme a pleasure to read. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Sandra, for dropping by to read, review, and comment. All are appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done, I think Barbara May wonder what hit her. An avalanche may hit, she's probably saying, "look at me, all these famous poets all over the world ate wishing me a happy birthday. Beautifully done friend Jan, you've done a good thing, blessing Roy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thank you, Roy, for your great review. I appreciate your comments, too.
Respectfully, Jan

reply by royowen on 26-Sep-2020

Bless you Jan