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Senryu (with gentleness)

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Comment from Dawn Munro
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Yes, your senryu is exactly as I was taught the form is used, and in this case, 'gentleness' works well in replacing any touch of humor--beautiful. It reminds me of my own mother.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much Dawn!!

    Melissa
reply by Dawn Munro on 29-Sep-2020
    You're most welcome. :)
Comment from palmart
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It is definitively a treasure to have the capacity to show and express kindness. It will for sure open many doors that have been shut by other negative feelings. And the word "gentleness" brings another dimension to the way she taught: it means correction and teaching with love!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you!!!

Comment from RodG
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Mothers teach their children in so many ways. You allow the reader to imagine all the ways this mother taught KINDNESS--likely through her actions like the mother in the picture.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you Rod!!
Comment from equestrik
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This is sweet and tender and lovely. I love the picture as well as your words. They are wise and beautiful and what a beautiful thing to gently teach kindness to your children.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you.