Come On, Get Happy!
Laughter makes life better.17 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your theme is so true, laughter adds to our lives. If you search for something funny, it won't cost you any money" is a great line. It is true and has a smooth flow of words, an almost musical feel to it. Excellent poetic form here that adds strength to your theme.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Your theme is so true, laughter adds to our lives. If you search for something funny, it won't cost you any money" is a great line. It is true and has a smooth flow of words, an almost musical feel to it. Excellent poetic form here that adds strength to your theme.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review. I enjoyed reading your comments.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Great job!
This is an excellent entry for the Happy Poems poetry prompt. I love the exuberance that fills each crevice of this poem. Lovely job and perfect execution.
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Great job!
This is an excellent entry for the Happy Poems poetry prompt. I love the exuberance that fills each crevice of this poem. Lovely job and perfect execution.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the delightful review.
Comment from amada
Thank ou for postging tghis happy poem. My favorite line is this one "if you search for something funny,it won't cost you any money..." This is an added addition to the benefits of laughter. Cheap. We can even laugh at ourselves.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank ou for postging tghis happy poem. My favorite line is this one "if you search for something funny,it won't cost you any money..." This is an added addition to the benefits of laughter. Cheap. We can even laugh at ourselves.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reviewing this and for your comments. Laughing certainly helps me feel better. :-)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem in steps speaks the roots how to get happy and how to kiss your blues goodbye and how to give yourself a long life; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This poem in steps speaks the roots how to get happy and how to kiss your blues goodbye and how to give yourself a long life; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you Al, I appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome. You've captured a good recipe for happiness. Try a little taste of laughter if it's joy your after. If you search fir something funny it won't cost you any money. And it's been known to cure some dreaded ills. Like this. Well done. Great photo lots of smiles and laughter.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Awesome. You've captured a good recipe for happiness. Try a little taste of laughter if it's joy your after. If you search fir something funny it won't cost you any money. And it's been known to cure some dreaded ills. Like this. Well done. Great photo lots of smiles and laughter.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. :-)
Comment from Pantygynt
This has a good rhythm and an interesting rhyme scheme, an aabccb pattern for each stanza. I think you were right to choose rhyme for a happy poem. Free verse too easily can become serious.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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This has a good rhythm and an interesting rhyme scheme, an aabccb pattern for each stanza. I think you were right to choose rhyme for a happy poem. Free verse too easily can become serious.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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THank you. I really appreciate the review and comments. I thought a rhyme might make it sound more upbeat. Laughing makes me feel better.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written happy poem. Sometimes we only need to laugh within or for ourselves to make the world around us a little brighter and more enjoyable.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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A very well-written happy poem. Sometimes we only need to laugh within or for ourselves to make the world around us a little brighter and more enjoyable.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank for the review and comments. I can usually find something on this site to start my day off with a smile. It helps the day go smoother.
