Blessings for Barbara
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow what a wonderful collection of thoughts that no one thinks about, it will truly make her day in this collection of wonderful pieces. What a wonderfully done piece with excellent rhyme and flow
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Oh wow what a wonderful collection of thoughts that no one thinks about, it will truly make her day in this collection of wonderful pieces. What a wonderfully done piece with excellent rhyme and flow
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Barb, for the encouraging review on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today, my friend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
What a beautiful inspiration birthday wish. Barbara is so lucky to have such a talented poet writing her such an amazing piece. Thank you so much for sharing. This piece make me happy I decided to check in today. Beauty and laughter to you.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful inspiration birthday wish. Barbara is so lucky to have such a talented poet writing her such an amazing piece. Thank you so much for sharing. This piece make me happy I decided to check in today. Beauty and laughter to you.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Sandra, for the encouraging review on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;) Yvette
Comment from Colin John
Hi Yvette, this is a lovely birthday card/wish/poem for Barbara, she must be over the moon with it as sure most will be on here, kind regards Colin xx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Hi Yvette, this is a lovely birthday card/wish/poem for Barbara, she must be over the moon with it as sure most will be on here, kind regards Colin xx
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review here, Colin -- feels good to be getting back into the swing... ;) ;) Yvette
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no problem, welcome back.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written birthday wishes and poem for Katherine's mom . I think she will feel extremely special when sg
she reads all the wonderful greetings from the FanStory family.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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A very well-written birthday wishes and poem for Katherine's mom . I think she will feel extremely special when sg
she reads all the wonderful greetings from the FanStory family.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your encouraging review here, Sandra -- feels good to be getting back into the swing... ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful tribute here for a birthday celebration Yvette and your joyous words will be most welcome. A fine uplifting presentation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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A beautiful tribute here for a birthday celebration Yvette and your joyous words will be most welcome. A fine uplifting presentation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review here, Dolly -- feels good to be getting back into the swing... ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely! Whimsical and fresh: pockets full of sunshine ... alliteration: dribbled drops ... whispers whistles. A fine entry for the B-Dat book. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Lovely! Whimsical and fresh: pockets full of sunshine ... alliteration: dribbled drops ... whispers whistles. A fine entry for the B-Dat book. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, LIZ!! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Ah ha, original greeting card verse! I like the second stanza, since music is definitely a powerful element. Nice job including the birthday girl, er lady and feelings we'd all like to have on every birthday, such as love and thankfulness. And those 'friendships dear' are a bonus on a birthday.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Ah ha, original greeting card verse! I like the second stanza, since music is definitely a powerful element. Nice job including the birthday girl, er lady and feelings we'd all like to have on every birthday, such as love and thankfulness. And those 'friendships dear' are a bonus on a birthday.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Crystie, for the encouraging review on this one -- Hallmark I am not, but I tried to focus on the small things that really bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;)
Comment from Stephen Force
An excellent birthday card. Well versed and illustrated I like the last stanza the best. "Of friendships dear, both here, and gone..." An excellent birthday wish. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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An excellent birthday card. Well versed and illustrated I like the last stanza the best. "Of friendships dear, both here, and gone..." An excellent birthday wish. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Steve, for the review on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Yvette, this tribute to Katherine's mother is so well done and vibrantly presented. I really enjoyed it and I am sure the recipient did too. Such lovely thoughts conveyed. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Hi Yvette, this tribute to Katherine's mother is so well done and vibrantly presented. I really enjoyed it and I am sure the recipient did too. Such lovely thoughts conveyed. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Melissa, for the eview on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;)
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for letting us join in to the celebration of Barbara's birthday. The colorful image and presentation are very appealing. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and "pockets full of sunshine". Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanks for letting us join in to the celebration of Barbara's birthday. The colorful image and presentation are very appealing. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and "pockets full of sunshine". Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Joan, for the encouraging review on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;)
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Thank you for focusing on the "small things" that bring "gentleness to the day" and make us smile. More smiles- Joan
