My Wedding Ring
Worth more than gold29 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a great story told through verse! I have heard of rings being passed down the generations but yours is such a sweet story of love overcoming difficulties and family memories. Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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What a great story told through verse! I have heard of rings being passed down the generations but yours is such a sweet story of love overcoming difficulties and family memories. Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much. It's the true story of my mom and how she came to America. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem.
Comment from Alchera
Beautifully written throughout it storylines content lies and how they could be really the jointers a well beloved family. I loved it! A very Good work indeed!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written throughout it storylines content lies and how they could be really the jointers a well beloved family. I loved it! A very Good work indeed!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Thank you for this great review. It's my moms true story, I really appreciate you reading it.. :)
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I did like it all! Blessings and take care! From Italy Tony
Comment from Mia Twysted
It is wonderful when you have something from your family to pass down. I didn't have rings, but I have an old toybox and nickle slot machine that have been with my family for ages and they are getting passed on to my grandson when the time comes.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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It is wonderful when you have something from your family to pass down. I didn't have rings, but I have an old toybox and nickle slot machine that have been with my family for ages and they are getting passed on to my grandson when the time comes.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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He is a very lucky boy! I'm so glad you liked my poem, I really appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Your poem sent chill bumps chasing down my arms where they landed in my heart. What a beautiful poem, and such a special subject. Like you, I wear my mother's wedding rings, and it makes me think of how much they meant to her every time I look at them. Thank you for making the sacrifice so beautiful with your words.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Your poem sent chill bumps chasing down my arms where they landed in my heart. What a beautiful poem, and such a special subject. Like you, I wear my mother's wedding rings, and it makes me think of how much they meant to her every time I look at them. Thank you for making the sacrifice so beautiful with your words.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this lovely review. I miss my mom so much, this is my tribute to her. I think it's wonderful that you wear your mom's rings, thats really a tribute to her. Thank you again.
Comment from palmart
INCREDIBLE!! You squeezed the ring, as you extracted every single part of it in this poem! Good to know that there was a lot of poetry inside! You covered everything: from its history to distances and from feelings to situations...
Many fingers inside this same ring!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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INCREDIBLE!! You squeezed the ring, as you extracted every single part of it in this poem! Good to know that there was a lot of poetry inside! You covered everything: from its history to distances and from feelings to situations...
Many fingers inside this same ring!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks for reading. It is the true story of how my parents met. The ring pictured is my moms ring that I now wear. Thanks again.
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You are welcome!
Comment from Lorianne Palinkas
I loved this poem! You really captured the passing of the years as the ring passed through the generations. Made me think of my family too! Thank you!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I loved this poem! You really captured the passing of the years as the ring passed through the generations. Made me think of my family too! Thank you!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this stellar review, it really means a lot to me. :)
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You?re welcome!
Comment from Barbara Zapson
This is one of the sweetest, most touching poems that I've read. You must have had a very close bond with your mother, and that is something to cherish, along with her gold wedding band.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is one of the sweetest, most touching poems that I've read. You must have had a very close bond with your mother, and that is something to cherish, along with her gold wedding band.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the great review. I'm always looking to lmprove my writing with the help of fellow writers like your self. I just wondered if there is anyway you think I can make it better, since you gave me a good. Any suggestions are welcome. Thanks again.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I really enjoy reading this poem. It is full of history, conflict and family connection. The ring is like a bind that holds the family together through the thick and thin.
Well done.
Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I really enjoy reading this poem. It is full of history, conflict and family connection. The ring is like a bind that holds the family together through the thick and thin.
Well done.
Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, it's the true story of how my parents met. I appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from Rashanna Popoola
This poem is beautifully written. I love how the writer allowed us to know who, when, & where the ring originated from,& when the time comes who will have the ring next. Wonderful Job Writer!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This poem is beautifully written. I love how the writer allowed us to know who, when, & where the ring originated from,& when the time comes who will have the ring next. Wonderful Job Writer!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My Wedding Ring
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the An object writing prompt contest.i love the presentation. The heartfelt story of your mother's wedding ring is moving. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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My Wedding Ring
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the An object writing prompt contest.i love the presentation. The heartfelt story of your mother's wedding ring is moving. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this great review and taking time to read my poem.
