Requiem For Autumn Love
septolet contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This septolet, Requiem for Autumn Love, has the proper formatting and notes the passing of two seasons. Love and summer both end with a whimper.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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This septolet, Requiem for Autumn Love, has the proper formatting and notes the passing of two seasons. Love and summer both end with a whimper.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Dear Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Isn't it amazing how we seem to 'spot' things that perfectly reflect our mood (good or bad)? ;) :) A great offering for the septolet contest here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Isn't it amazing how we seem to 'spot' things that perfectly reflect our mood (good or bad)? ;) :) A great offering for the septolet contest here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your comments and review and good luck wishes.
Comment from zanya
Oh this Septolet emphatically exudes a deep sense of sadness as triggered by the sight of a fading rose as Autumn approaches - well portrayed and a lovely pic
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Oh this Septolet emphatically exudes a deep sense of sadness as triggered by the sight of a fading rose as Autumn approaches - well portrayed and a lovely pic
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Dear zanya, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image and
presentation.
-A good topic and imagery.
-You describe the drooping
flower well and follow up
with "raindrop tears."
-Good job with both parts
of the poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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-A good image and
presentation.
-A good topic and imagery.
-You describe the drooping
flower well and follow up
with "raindrop tears."
-Good job with both parts
of the poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Dear Pam, thanks for your comments and review, thanks for telling me about the 7 lines. I went in and edited.
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You are quite welcome; I changed the review for you, too.
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Dear Pam, thanks!
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice poem, I really enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed your use of passing at the beginning and end, and even if it wasn't intentional, it's very clever. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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This is a very nice poem, I really enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed your use of passing at the beginning and end, and even if it wasn't intentional, it's very clever. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Dear Oliver, thanks for your comments and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient write and seeing the ross droop always made me sad about the forthcoming seasonal transitions, as I much prefer spring and summer, but you captured the essence of change here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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An ambient write and seeing the ross droop always made me sad about the forthcoming seasonal transitions, as I much prefer spring and summer, but you captured the essence of change here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review.
