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Alistair Katt

The power of a Twinkie.

33 total reviews 
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Smiles to you Sally for your cute poem about Alistair Katt. what is the power of a twinkie? And how clever you were with the way you told of how Alistair Katt sat behind me,
behind me sat Alistair Katt.
Gert

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you, dear Gert. I had fun with this contest entry. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...xo...
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh how fun!! Absolutely love this light-hearted look at friendship... and who doesn't like a Twinkie (lol!).... Gotta say, though, my favorite was always the Ding-Dongs... ;) :) ;) ;) A great one for the contest, Lady Sal, and just perfect for a break in the 'bad news doldrums'!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

Big as circus --> Big as a circus


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the wonderful review and helpful critique. It is so appreciated, dear Yvette. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal :)) XOs....
Comment from Ric Myworld
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It's always easy to accomplish a little trickery when you know how to sweeten the pot. A little cake or cookies will fatten the deal every time. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the sweet review. Sal :))
Comment from Shirley McLain
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A very nice poem, that I enjoyed reading very much. I didn't find a single thing wrong. I really liked the bright presentation that just made it pop. Have a great weekend. Shirley

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Sal XOs.....
Comment from country ranch writer
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This is really cute! grandpa used to say where there is a will there is a way. On sometimes have to improve like with twinkles to convince him.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review! Sal XOs...
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Now I know what to do next time someone sits in front of me with a big fat hat. I'll bribe him with Twinkies! Do they still make those? I don't think I've seen them around recently. Oh well, I'm sure I can find something good to bribe him with.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the excellent review and comments, dear Cindy.
    Sal xo
Comment from Sugarray77
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Sally,

This is an excellent entry for the Rhyming poetry prompt. I love the repetition and great dialogue that fills each crevice of this poem. Lovely job and perfect execution.

Melissa

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the wonderful review and generous compliments.
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Louise Michelle
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How cute is this! Ironic that just yesterday I bought a box of Twinkies when I went grocery shopping. I had been looking for them. Because of the virus, it's been hit or miss as to what we'll find on the shelves.

This was a fun-to-read poem. Had appeal for kids and adults as well. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments, dear Lou. Enjoy those Twinkies! Sending you my best today as always
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I so wish i had a six for this absolutely adorable piece that reminds me of a Dr. Seuss piece. He would be proud. LOL Very well done in the repititions and the imagination

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    I've read a lot of Dr. Seuss in my lifetime. It's bound to erupt sooner or later. I'm delighted you enjoyed my contest entry. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Sally a happy Thursday to you. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing. I liked the rhythm and rhyme of the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments, dear poet. I appreciate you stopping by. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo