The Daily Dogwalker
An exercise in stamina...12 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose fr your poem, they are a perfect match. no matter how much you complain You love your friends just the same,
Take care
Cookie
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I like the artwork you choose fr your poem, they are a perfect match. no matter how much you complain You love your friends just the same,
Take care
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous poem about the job if a dog walker that is not always an easy task when each fog had its own personality and you need to know how to handle them in any situation that us not normal.
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A very well-written humorous poem about the job if a dog walker that is not always an easy task when each fog had its own personality and you need to know how to handle them in any situation that us not normal.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Now that's a job that pays well in large cities where the owners can't get out much. I was surprised at what dog walkers make! Enjoyed your fun poem loaded with internal rhymes and the unique charms of different breeds. Best wishes in the contest!
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Now that's a job that pays well in large cities where the owners can't get out much. I was surprised at what dog walkers make! Enjoyed your fun poem loaded with internal rhymes and the unique charms of different breeds. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Thank you for the meeting of these menagerie and each of their personalities.
One suggestion from a non poet not criticism just a suggestion. But she nearly pulled etc seems long. Would this be better? she dashed like a rocket, nearly pulling my arm out of socket.
Enjoyed the read
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Thank you for the meeting of these menagerie and each of their personalities.
One suggestion from a non poet not criticism just a suggestion. But she nearly pulled etc seems long. Would this be better? she dashed like a rocket, nearly pulling my arm out of socket.
Enjoyed the read
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from Loren .
This is hilarious and something I can very easily identify with. And the look that they can give you if for some reason we can't go right now, and we get the blame if it's raining and lightning outside. Oh my, but their love more than makes up for it. Loren
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This is hilarious and something I can very easily identify with. And the look that they can give you if for some reason we can't go right now, and we get the blame if it's raining and lightning outside. Oh my, but their love more than makes up for it. Loren
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I really enjoyed reading it. It flows well and is funny. The rhytmes with the dogs names work
Really well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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Nice poem, I really enjoyed reading it. It flows well and is funny. The rhytmes with the dogs names work
Really well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer, a terrific day to you. I enjoyed your poem, it had a nice flow to it and the rhymes were good. I think you did a great job on the writing prompt.
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Hello fellow writer, a terrific day to you. I enjoyed your poem, it had a nice flow to it and the rhymes were good. I think you did a great job on the writing prompt.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet, -wink-
This is so fun! Makes me consider, for a moment, a job I hadn't really thought about. Where I live, we can let the dogs roam free - we have a bit of property and are off the road.
In the city, I'm sure folks who work must deal with this. On cartoons and such, I've seen those dog-walkers who have ten leashes in their hands and ten straining dogs. But I hadn't really THOUGHT about it. haha
Favorite lines:
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There's Meg, the mutt bitch (her fleas make me itch),
and frankfurter Fritz (he's so full of shitz),
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Thanks for the smile!
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Dear Mystery Poet, -wink-
This is so fun! Makes me consider, for a moment, a job I hadn't really thought about. Where I live, we can let the dogs roam free - we have a bit of property and are off the road.
In the city, I'm sure folks who work must deal with this. On cartoons and such, I've seen those dog-walkers who have ten leashes in their hands and ten straining dogs. But I hadn't really THOUGHT about it. haha
Favorite lines:
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There's Meg, the mutt bitch (her fleas make me itch),
and frankfurter Fritz (he's so full of shitz),
*
Thanks for the smile!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from zanya
A most enjoyable read about doing a job, raises a chuckle for the reader - a much-needed chuckle - and a superb pic to illustrate - thanks for sharing
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A most enjoyable read about doing a job, raises a chuckle for the reader - a much-needed chuckle - and a superb pic to illustrate - thanks for sharing
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from TommyWrites
This is a wonderful poem!
It's filled with humor to the brim. You paint a picture with your words that allows me to see you being dragged along by these dogs.
Your whole poem flows very nicely, and such as with a picture, you told a funny story too. I really like the last four lines. I can almost feel the exhaustion in them. Just to think I got tired after walking my sister's dog across the yard....
Thank you for sharing this great poem! And good luck,
TommyWrites~
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This is a wonderful poem!
It's filled with humor to the brim. You paint a picture with your words that allows me to see you being dragged along by these dogs.
Your whole poem flows very nicely, and such as with a picture, you told a funny story too. I really like the last four lines. I can almost feel the exhaustion in them. Just to think I got tired after walking my sister's dog across the yard....
Thank you for sharing this great poem! And good luck,
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
