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Goats Veer Left and Right

5/7/5 Summer Haiku

9 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! Okay, I really laughed out loud on this one, Gypsy -- you had on your true satire hat with this one - love it!! ;) Thanx for that needed 'sunshine' today! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much, Yvette. LoL it's silly. I figured we can all use a smile.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Given the existing political dysfunction between left and right or Dem vs. GOP, they are both in deep doo-doo. "equal pooping rights" is a terrific summary of this dislocation and the fractious relationship our country is now exhibiting.

Mark

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Today's national voter registration day!

    Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from amada
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Oh dear, oh dear, poet. I think your position is very strong and I applaud your for that. Your words resonate very well. I am thinking in no matter what side we are, or what color we are, we all share a poop.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    LoL yes, thank you very much, you are right :)
Comment from Joan E.
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Oh, to be a goat and "ignorant of politics"! I enjoyed your 5-7-5 haiku and accenting picture. To poop or not to poop--that is the question. Big smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    LoL I'm glad you enjoyed the humor in this goat politically incorrect haiku thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm laughing at your social commentary in your poem! It's good that goats and sheep and every other animal have more sense about their right and left and their "rights" than humans.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    LoL I'm glad you enjoyed the humor in this goat politically incorrect haiku thank you!
Comment from Mark Schardine
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goats veer left and right
ignorant of politics
equal pooping rights

I like this clever commentary on how our political leaders show less intelligence than goats.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    LoL I'm glad you enjoyed the humor in this goat politically incorrect haiku thank you!
Comment from royowen
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I very rarely vote for a major party, I don't like party politics, which limits members, I tend to vote for the cross benches, (independents) beautifully written my friend Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Roy :)
reply by royowen on 20-Sep-2020
    Welcome Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Roy :)
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--voting, pooping, both give you a glop of shit? I sure hope EVERYBODY votes--this election will decide whether people have a country to tune out

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Mike :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Mike :)
Comment from AnnieDawn
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This really is a good fit for the Haiku rules and the syllable count is right on. I have trouble composing this type of poetry. I am amazed at the variety of poems that come from some of the contests that are set for this type of poetry. Great job and well done.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Annie, I love haiku. Contact me any time you like for help with haiku and other Japanese poetry....I love to help
reply by AnnieDawn on 20-Sep-2020
    What a gracious offer. I thank you. I plan on writing more when I am able to retire again and I may take you up on the offer. Hailku is interesting. Short and so stimulating.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Annie, I love haiku. Contact me any time you like for help with haiku and other Japanese poetry....I love to help