Master Builders
A tribute to blue-collar workers8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Construction workers a part of the backbone of our economy... ;) :) A great offering for the septolet contest here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
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Construction workers a part of the backbone of our economy... ;) :) A great offering for the septolet contest here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Though this was a good thought with a great message, I believe this "Septolet Poem" prompt entry required 14 words. The seven lines were met. Best of luck with your entry. That's my reasoning for the 4. If I am incorrect I would be happy to re-evaluate my rating.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Though this was a good thought with a great message, I believe this "Septolet Poem" prompt entry required 14 words. The seven lines were met. Best of luck with your entry. That's my reasoning for the 4. If I am incorrect I would be happy to re-evaluate my rating.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Kermit,
Thank you for your review. I noted your comment regarding the requirements of a Septolet poem.
In response I revised the last line as follows "attains all dreams."
Cheers
Eugene
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Very good tribute to those professionals. I have always admired the janitors, the garbage men, the lawn cutters, the list goes on and on. Now we are thankful for the nurses, techs, of course, doctors, truck drivers. And we will be thankful for a vaccine, hopefully soon.
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Very good tribute to those professionals. I have always admired the janitors, the garbage men, the lawn cutters, the list goes on and on. Now we are thankful for the nurses, techs, of course, doctors, truck drivers. And we will be thankful for a vaccine, hopefully soon.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from oliver818
I think you captured the hands and life of a master builder very well here. It's indeed true that they work hard and have tough hands. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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I think you captured the hands and life of a master builder very well here. It's indeed true that they work hard and have tough hands. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from donette1914
very as hard work pays off
very well written as your words flow so smoothly
very believable as it draws reader's in
nice photo to compliment your work
thank you for sharing it was pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
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very as hard work pays off
very well written as your words flow so smoothly
very believable as it draws reader's in
nice photo to compliment your work
thank you for sharing it was pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very good and well written entry for the Septolet contest. I liked your theme and appreciated the use of the words.. inferred, and implied... wonderful juxtaposition of meaning. Well done.
Melissa
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This is a very good and well written entry for the Septolet contest. I liked your theme and appreciated the use of the words.. inferred, and implied... wonderful juxtaposition of meaning. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This septuplet, Master Builders, has the proper formatting and sends up a hail for the hard-working arson, carpenters and assorted specialists who take a pile of lumber and build a home.
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This septuplet, Master Builders, has the proper formatting and sends up a hail for the hard-working arson, carpenters and assorted specialists who take a pile of lumber and build a home.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
Comment from equestrik
Thank goodness for these people who work so hard to ensure that societies lives work. I am grateful for all they do. A good poem and pictures to go with it.
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Thank goodness for these people who work so hard to ensure that societies lives work. I am grateful for all they do. A good poem and pictures to go with it.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
