Lingering Memories
All so precious54 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
I hear you, I feel you. Happily for me, my wife is still here with me, I do not know what I would do without her. One of my favorite blues songs has a lyric that says, if you pack one bag to leave me, you had better pack two, because you are not leaving without me.
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I hear you, I feel you. Happily for me, my wife is still here with me, I do not know what I would do without her. One of my favorite blues songs has a lyric that says, if you pack one bag to leave me, you had better pack two, because you are not leaving without me.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
Comment from Sanku
It is a touching tribute to your late wife .Loneliness sets in when one's partner departs. But the sweet memories linger and they will the void.Well written
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It is a touching tribute to your late wife .Loneliness sets in when one's partner departs. But the sweet memories linger and they will the void.Well written
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I am glad your poems help
comfort you, jaybird.
-I am sure it gives you
a connection to your wife.
-It is a very nice tribute to
the love your shared.
-The concluding lines
reinforce that very well.
-Have a good day.
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-I am glad your poems help
comfort you, jaybird.
-I am sure it gives you
a connection to your wife.
-It is a very nice tribute to
the love your shared.
-The concluding lines
reinforce that very well.
-Have a good day.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
Comment from oliver818
This is a beautiful and touching poem and I enjoyed reading it. It's so sad to know it's based on something that really happened. I'm glad it helps to write about it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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This is a beautiful and touching poem and I enjoyed reading it. It's so sad to know it's based on something that really happened. I'm glad it helps to write about it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a gorgeous poem for your departed spouse. She would have been proud.
It flows beautifully, with a great rhymes, meter and flow.
Loved these:
Now you must go, you must depart
and leave me with a broken heart.
Your time on earth was much too brief,
as I hang on, amid my grief.
Oh, how sad. Please accept my condolences. Those wounds never really heal, time makes them better but they open up and bleed easily. But every day brings new hope and relief.
My mother died 13 years ago, but it feels like yesterday. I feel her presence every day, she guides and protects me. Let us hope out loved ones are in heaven, with no pain, and there are beautiful gardens and there is always spring.
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What a gorgeous poem for your departed spouse. She would have been proud.
It flows beautifully, with a great rhymes, meter and flow.
Loved these:
Now you must go, you must depart
and leave me with a broken heart.
Your time on earth was much too brief,
as I hang on, amid my grief.
Oh, how sad. Please accept my condolences. Those wounds never really heal, time makes them better but they open up and bleed easily. But every day brings new hope and relief.
My mother died 13 years ago, but it feels like yesterday. I feel her presence every day, she guides and protects me. Let us hope out loved ones are in heaven, with no pain, and there are beautiful gardens and there is always spring.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is such a beautiful, sweet, touching love poem. Having read the notes, I know that writing about your beloved wife is therapeutic. What a wonderful way to look at poetry.
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This is such a beautiful, sweet, touching love poem. Having read the notes, I know that writing about your beloved wife is therapeutic. What a wonderful way to look at poetry.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sometimes we need to do the write. I haven't wanted to do it so I've been away. I'm glad you're able to write about her and that it brings you comfort. No need to explain yourself. I think we all understand. Great job.
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Sometimes we need to do the write. I haven't wanted to do it so I've been away. I'm glad you're able to write about her and that it brings you comfort. No need to explain yourself. I think we all understand. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from Poetofheart2013
A very sweet and touching
Poem full of really powerful feeling
and emotions. I really flow and
feeling to it. I really enjoyed it
Just keep up the good work.
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A very sweet and touching
Poem full of really powerful feeling
and emotions. I really flow and
feeling to it. I really enjoyed it
Just keep up the good work.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
That kind of love never dies and it is so prevalent in this poem, as well as others that you write. Sad but true and yet you never let it go. True blue.
Ralf
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That kind of love never dies and it is so prevalent in this poem, as well as others that you write. Sad but true and yet you never let it go. True blue.
Ralf
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, beautiful, descriptive and creative. This
is such a beautiful memory - many never experience this kind of love -
you are blessed. The poem flows and connects well. Hope you are
having a great day!
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The author's words are heartfelt, beautiful, descriptive and creative. This
is such a beautiful memory - many never experience this kind of love -
you are blessed. The poem flows and connects well. Hope you are
having a great day!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
