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Blessings for Barbara

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Happy Birthday from me too and what a wonderful way to celebrate this magic moment in a book. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    Thank you. We've sort of reached the stage of what can you give people who don't need anything, except... entertainment.
reply by Iza Deleanu on 23-Sep-2020
    Yes, you are so right and with this Covid is even harder:(
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a great idea to have folks contribute to your book for your mom -- just know it truly will be a blessing for her for always!! ;) Would love to contribute if you like.... :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reviewing, and with such a positive attitude. Yes of course, I would love to have a contribution from you. I really look forwards to it.
    Katherine
Comment from Alchera
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Two twinned raindrops on Earth, exchanging greetings and aged wishes to be remembered on a special family day: an unusual photo-book-gift, for a mother whose daughter is on its cover and surprisingly with so many written wishes of "Happy Birthday" by unknown reviewers. Fabulous and original idea of a different senryu structural format used as a birthday present for your lovable beloved mother Barbara. Thank you for the fun and making me smile.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you for this fine review and for feeling able to match your words to that special extra star. Maybe you will also feel able to contribute one of your so unusually formatted poems to this endeavour.
    Stay Safe
    Katherine
reply by Alchera on 21-Sep-2020
    I will with pleasure Katherine, but not tonight because I have already edited the second one before your reply. I have never taken part to any book before your asking. So it will be up to me in selecting? Any? has the lady any preference or grandchildren, may I ask? So I enter your multiauthor book and I pasted it. Right? Blessings! Tony
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    So, Yes I am so very happy. There is no rush, we have all of November. Yes you have free subject choice. She loves flowers and gardens, she has 6 much adored grandchildren, and two baby grandchildren. Her favourite seasons are the half ones, autumn and spring, she loves dogs and cats.
    (Input many of her likes in the notes to Covid-19Least of Your Worries?

    Technically you have to find the book 'blessings for Barbara' (at the moment that seems to be by opening up 'Happy Birthday Mummy') and you will find a tag 'add chapter'. Click on this, and post as usual.

    I am so grateful to all the people who have pledged an entry. I can't wait to read them. I have never created a mixed author book before so I guess this could be a major learning experience.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Katherine.

That is one of the happiest pictures I have seen on fan story and quite a while.

Your 5-4-5 poems certainly meets the style standard. That is a great birthday greeting for your Mum.

Robert

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reviewing. It seems a bit me, me, me to put such a picture up, but it makes her happy to see us. I'm hoping that quite a few people will put something in.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 21-Sep-2020
    You're welcome
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 21-Sep-2020
    You're welcome
Comment from Lobber
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Hi Katherine,
Congrats on the book...I hope it does well.
Last week I sent you a private FS message with a request for a reply. It appears you have not yet opened the message. I hope you find the time to read it.
I look forward to youtresponse.
- Lobber

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your good wishes.
    I am trying to wade through my message box, but life is the pits at the moment. I haven't found this message yet - I will look tonight
Comment from royowen
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Just loved this poem in a 5/4/5 poetic form, but yes, I think your mum probably has several photos of you, just to remember you're her daughter and it's her birthed, mums always appreciated being appreciated. Well done, Katherine, and happy birthday to your mum, very cute, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. The photo is a bit of a joke in the family.
reply by royowen on 20-Sep-2020
    I like it, you are a peach
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Happy Birthday Mummy
by Katherine M. Kean

Hello, Katherine,

I love your Senryu and the lovely picture. Is it you in the picture? It's beautiful. I'm sure your mom will love it.

I will add a chapter tomorrow.

Hugs,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reviewing. Yes the picture is me. Our family are all photo-orientated.
    You are so positive, I'm delighted.
    Thank you.
    Katherine
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, I see this is your multi-author book. I didn't see that your other post was included here. So now I know that we can put our posts to this book. Thank you for the lovely picture of you and the HUGE fonts!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you for this fine review. Yes, I think it should work. And yes, I may have gone somewhat over the top on the font size... I can always modify that in a couple of days when I am a bit less stressed (November is coming too fast.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This made me smile and you and your Mum look very much alike and your words are endearing and full of fun. A fine presentation Katherine, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you for this positive review. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Love Katherine
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Happy Birthday, Mummy, comes as a surprise to everyone I would think. The words suggest that this is the beginning of a tome dedicated to either a British mother, or a mummified being capable of receiving birthday greetings. Let's lean towards the first.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you for this very amusing review, it set my mouse (computer version) running all over the place, and my unanswered comments jumping. I'm with you in agreeing on the first.